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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,*,写作,题目：,How I have changed!,Unit 4I used to be afraid of the dark.,写作题目：How I have changed!Unit,1,Learning aim,Write about changes of yourself.,Learning aim Write about ch,2,Watch and tell difference.,She is Sun Yanzi.She used to wear glasses.,Watch and tell difference.She,3,Watch and tell difference.,He is a boy.,He is Han Geng.,He used to have short hair.He used to be like a girl.,Watch and tell difference.He,4,appearance,（外貌）,personality,(,性格,),hobby,habit,learning,lifestyle,short hair long hair,strong,slim/thin,How people have changed!,appearancep,5,Think about your changes!,.used to,now,Think about your changes!.us,6,.used to,now,Think about your changes!,.used tonowThink about your,7,Discuss in groups and write down as many phrases/words,as possible about the following aspects:,changes,appearance,personality,hobbies,habit,learning,lifestyle,lets PK!,changesappearancepersonalityho,8,How I have changed!,I,have changed a lot in the last few years.My life is different!,When I was,young,I used to be shy,but now Im outgoing and I enjoy talking with others.,In the past,I used to be interested in Chinese,however,now I like English.I think English is useful and important.And I am an English teacher now.I often went fishing with my friends,now I m used to going shopping in free time.,Whats more,I used to ride the bike to school,now I walk there instead.,What great changes I have.,beginning,ending,How I ha,9,How many changes?,How many changes?,10,How I have changed!,I,have changed a lot in the last few years.My life is different!,When I was young,I used to be shy,but now Im outgoing and I enjoy talking with others.In the past,I used to be interested in Chinese,however,now I like English.I think English is useful and important.And I am an English teacher now.I often went fishing with my friends,now I m used to going shopping in free time.Whats more,I used to ride the bike to school,now I walk there instead.,What great changes I have.,How I ha,11,So many changes,you can do it this way:,So many changesyou can do i,12,How Ive Changed!,My life has changed a lot in the past few years.,I used to,_.,Now Im,_.,The,biggest change,in my life was_.,This is,the most import change,because_.,How Ive Changed!,13,过去与现在的生活情况,I used to.,but now.,In the past,I often.Now.,In the past,I used to be.but now I am.,总结观点,My life has changed a lot in the past few years.,自我感受,It seems that.I really miss the old days.,outline,过去与现在的生活情况I used to.,but n,14,Writing,现在你已经是一位九年级的学生了，你感觉自己和以前有变化吗？请根据自己的体会，多角度，多方面谈谈自己的变化。请以,“,How I have changed!”,为题写一篇文章,。,要求：,1.,至少谈,3,个方面的变化,;,2.,语句通顺、连贯,;,3.,词数约,80,左右。,Writing 现在你已经是一位九年级的学生了，,15,自评标准,：,大声朗读自己的文章，从结构、人称、时态、字数、拼写、大小写、标点符号等方面进行自我修正。,Task 1,自我欣赏与修正,Task 1 自我欣赏与修正,16,我欣赏，我快乐,欣赏角度,：,1.,写作基本要求,:,人称,时态,2,.,要点齐全,3.,结构,:,开头，正文，结尾,4.,好词好句。,注意：,（作文通用修改字符：优美句子；漏词；错处：；去掉，语法错误,G,人称错误,P,，时态错误,T,）,Task 2,我欣赏，我快乐欣赏角度：注意：（作文通用修改字符：优美句,17,集体赏析，共同进步,Task 3,Task 3,18,Summary,How to write an article about,changes.,Summary How to write an art,19,Be the person you want to be!,Be the person you want to be!,20,Homework,Rewrite your article and hand it in.,二次修改作文,Homework Rewrite your arti,21,Thank you!,Thank you!,22,
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