必修二unit3--Writing讲解学习课件

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,必修二unit3-Writing,必修二unit3-Writing,Read the passage carefully and fill in,the file for Andy,Name:_ Appearance:_,Size:_ Character:,_,Ability:_ Job:_,_,Andy,looks like a human,as big as a human,competitive,co-operative,can move and,think like a human,a striker,Pre-writing,Read the passage carefully and,Create your own android,Name:_Appearance:_,Size:_ Character:_,Ability:_(what can he/she do?),some useful phases:,looks like a/be like,as tall/big as a,humorous,friendly,good-tempered,clean the house,mop the floor,cook,the dinner,deal with telephone calls,watch over and look after the children,Create your own android,You need to imagine what your android might have to do.,play guitar,can sing,like a real bird,has 5 arms to,hold all the tools,can do all,the work,around the,house,You need to imagine what yo,A composition:,My android,A composition:,必修二unit3-Writing讲解学习课件,写作分析,本文是一篇说明文。题目要求同学们描述理想中的机器人，属于开放性作文。你需要发挥想象描述自己心目中的机器人的名字、外表、大小、性格、功能等。这是同学们发挥自己想象力的好机会。,写作分析,1.确定文体：这是一篇说明文。,2.主体时态：一般现在时。,3.主体人称：第一人称为主。,4.内容要点：填写上面的表格，并说明自己的,机器人有什么特征和作用。（可以适当发挥）,5.注意恰当使用连接词，使各个要点之间逻辑,连贯、行文通顺。,写作时应注意以下几点：,1.确定文体：这是一篇说明文。写作时应注意,首先，根据表格用简单句描述机器人的基本特征。,其次，把简单句中的逻辑关系理顺，然后试着变换成高级句式。,最后，用适当的连接词把句子组合，形成一篇短文，并检查、改正文中的语法和拼写错误。,首先，根据表格用简单句描述机器人的基本,1.My robot is called.,2.It is the same size as./It is as large as.,3.It looks like a.,4.Its job is to do./It can do.,and,5.It is designed for/to do.,6.It does all the work around the house.,7.It is very patient and never complains.,8.It is humorous and good-tempered.,Writing,1.My robot is called.Writi,9.It can be with me whenever I feel lonely.,10.or perhaps it will help me.,11.Robots are supposed to do boring and difficult jobs that humans can not do or dont want to do.,12.We can imagine robots will care for our children and develop friendship with us in the future.,9.It can be with me wheneve,Post-writing:,Evaluate the passage,评价内容,标准,得分,书写,整洁，美观,4分,词汇,拼写正确选词得当，语句通顺流畅,6分,Post-writing:拼写正确选词得当，语句通顺流畅,My Android,My android is called Jack.It is as tall as a real man.It can do all my jobs around the house.This means that it should clean the house,mop the floors,cook the dinner and deal with telephone calls.It should also watch over my naught,My Android,niece,who comes to my house very often.Whenever she comes,I have to look after her,and sometimes help her with her homework.I hope my android will be programmed to do homework and not make mistakes.In that way,my niece will not spoil my free time and I can go out with my,niece,who comes to my,friends.I dont mind what my android,looks like,but it must be able to talk and tell funny stories to my niece.,friends.I dont mind what,Summing up,I have learned how to write a composition,about androids in this class.I can write,something about androids:,Phrases:look/be like _,Sentences:It is named(My androids name,is.)_,Summing up,Have you learned to write a passage about your android in this,writing?Please write a passage about your ideal android.,Have you learned to write a pa,必修二unit3-Writing讲解学习课件,此课件下载可自行编辑修改，仅供参考！感谢您的支持，我们努力做得更好！谢谢,此课件下载可自行编辑修改，仅供参考！感谢您的支持，我们努力,