如何取得作文高分-四级CET-4作文写作精讲(二)ppt课件

,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,如何取得作文高分,-,CET4作文精讲（二）,DAI H,ui,English Dept.,SFL,GDUT,如何取得作文高分-CET4作文精讲（二）DAI Hui,1,Fear can hold you prisoner;,Hope will set you free.,-“Andy”from Shawshanks Redemption,Fear can hold you prisoner;,2,考试大纲,p1-2,一般性写作任务,两个“一般性”,一般性话题,290-710,500,均值,+,70,425,，,550,考试大纲 p1-2,3,第二课 TYPE 1的写法和作文使用技巧（上）,第二课 TYPE 1的写法和作文使用技巧（上）,4,一,、TYPE 1的写作手法（正反我型）,题目：,Reading Selectively Or Extensively?,提纲：,1）有人认为读书要有选择,2）也有人认为应当博览群书,3）我的想法,一、TYPE 1的写作手法（正反我型）题目：Reading,5,The issue over how to read is heatedly discussed.Some people claim that we should read selectively.They argue that,with the evolution of society,books in growing numbers are published.It is impossible for us to read all of them.Moreover,there are countless bad books which are poisonous to our mind,and we shouldnt read them,at all.,But others may not agree.They emphasize that todays society is not what it was.If one man has many kinds of knowledge,he will have more chances to succeed,of course.If a man knows much in one field but knows nothing in others,he is not likely to succeed.,So far as I could understand,both of them have something sensible.And I think we should read extensively first and read selectively in one particular field afterwards.(142 words),The issue over how to read is,6,TYPE1 大模板分析,P1-第一段,S1：XX问题已经变成了我们讨论的热点。,S2:有人认为我们应该。,S3:他们强调说。比如。,TYPE1 大模板分析P1-第一段,7,TYPE1 大模板分析,P2-第二段,S1：然而，另有一些人并不同意。,S2：他们坚持认为XX是合理的做法。,S3：举例来说，。,TYPE1 大模板分析P2-第二段,8,TYPE1 大模板分析,P3第三段,S1：关于以上问题，我认为,S2：因为。,S3：总的来说，如果能很好的结合两种观点，XX将会更加完善、有效。,TYPE1 大模板分析P3第三段,9,P1,The,issue,over()is heatedly,discussed.,Some people,claim,that 选择A,is a,preferable,choice.,They,emphasize,that todays world is not what it was before.,With the,evolution,of society it is,sensible,to,3,分钟，自己写一个,P2,模板,P1The issue over()is heat,10,P2,S1：,Other,s,however,may not,accede,to such,idea,.,S2:They,hold on to the belief,that we should (,选择,B),S3:Take YY for example,P2S1：Others,however,may not,11,P3,S1:,So far I am concerned,I,agree,to the former/latter,viewpoint,because.,S2:,Judging from the two sides of the story,if we can achieve a,balance,between A and B,XX will function more appropriately for us.,P3S1:So far I am concerned,I,12,总结,T1(,正反我型,),的命题有什么特点？,1.,选择性疑问句,Should we.Or should we.?,2.,提纲中出现“有些人，另一些人”“赞成，反对”，“好处，弊端”“正面，反面”。,有“我的看法”不一定是,T1,。,总结T1(正反我型)的命题有什么特点？,13,反模板训练,临摹训练,滴水穿石,点石成金,反模板训练临摹训练,14,写作技巧（上）,1.词汇多样性：,(详见所有词汇替换词表),观点 idea-opinion-viewpoint-notion,认为 think-argue-claim-maintain-,insist-adhere to the belief that,写作技巧（上）1.词汇多样性：(详见所有词汇替换词表),15,练习 词汇,M,any people _ it and _ that.,applaud,argue,It has become _ for college students to,Fashionable,Recently,there has been a _ over the issue.,dispute,_ has not been reached among people as to the issue of,consensus,练习 词汇Many people _ it and,16,写作技巧（上）,2句子结构,长短句,（必）,被动语态,（必）,倒装（选）,插入语,（必）,问句（选）,写作技巧（上）2句子结构,17,长短句,Our college is completely overcrowded.The lack of space is apparently in all parts of the campus.With thirty students sit in only forty-odd square meters,the classrooms are so jammed that students look like sardines.,短长长、短长、短长短,长短句Our college is completely o,18,Nowadays people tend to buy more things online.They simply squander their money on the Internet ranging from books to cosmetics,from clothes to bags.This is called cyber shopping or E commerce.,Nowadays people tend to buy mo,19,被动语态,From the above mentioned,a conclusion can be easily drawned.,Consensus among people can not be reached when it comes to the problem of,From what has been discussed above,Disagreement was incurred when we talk about the issue of,被动语态From the above mentioned,20,倒装,位置？,Only by striking a balance between the two can we have a more objective idea of,Only through joint efforts can people really have a sound and efficient future.,Solely by energy from the two parties can human race forever prosper.,倒装位置？,21,插入语,Others,however,do not agree.,They argue that,with the progress of human society,integrity is becoming increasingly important.,插入语Others,however,do not agr,22,练习 插入语,The issue of building a green university,_,calls for more attention than any age in human history.,presently,The conclusion,_,can be naturally worked out.,therefore,练习 插入语The issue of building a,23,问句,位置？,What is happiness?Apparently,peoples agreement can not be reached.,How shall we look at the problem of reading books?,What is the reason for such phenomenon?,But,do lucky numbers really bring good fortune?,问句位置？,24,写作技巧（上）,3 亮点,修辞,M,y love is a red,red rose.,My love is like a beautiful red rose.,Robert Burns,警句名言,Practice,makes perfect.,Even Homer nods.,写作技巧（上）3 亮点,25,练习 句子结构,There are countless reasons accounting for such noticeable phenomenon,according to my humble understanding.First,recreational activities are important.Second,they bring us a lot of fun.Finally,we can get a lot from them.,句子间的平衡感,练习 句子结构There are countless rea,26,如何取得作文高分-四级CET-4作文写作精讲(二)ppt课件,27,如何取得作文高分-四级CET-4作文写作精讲(二)ppt课件,28,如何取得作文高分-四级CET-4作文写作精讲(二)ppt课件,29,写作技巧（上）,4.修改注意事项,四