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英语,返回,谢谢观看,内容包括,:,(1),你想向谁表达你的关爱,?,为什么,?,(2),你打算做些什么来表达你的关爱,?,作文要求,:,(1),不能照抄原文,;,不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。,(2),语句连贯,词数,80,个左右。作文的开头已经给出,不计入总词数,也不必抄写在答题卡上。,We are growing up in love and care from people around.It is important to love and care for others.,内容包括:,【写作指导】,1.,审题。,本题为材料作文,要求根据题目所给要点提示表达对某个人或群体的关爱。时态可用过去时、现在时、将来时,人称用第一人称。,【写作指导】,2.,确定写作内容和提纲。,开头,:,开篇点题,引出,“,表达对某个人或群体的关爱,”,这一文章主题,引出你想表达关爱的对象并简明扼要说明原因。,主体,:,描述表达关爱的具体行动。可用,first,second,third,then,等连接词,使文章更连贯。,结尾,:,表达感谢或祝愿。参考句型,:,I hope/I willforever.,2.确定写作内容和提纲。,3.,高分亮点,:,短语,:in order to,buy sth.for sb.,make sb.,adj,.,do the housework,have a good rest,have a good time,。,句型,:,(1)I know he/she likes/is interested in(,宾语从句,),(2)It will make him/her very happy.(make,作使役动词,),(3)I willand let him/her(and,连接的并列句,),3.高分亮点:,4.,仔细检查,认真修改。,(1),查时态、人称,;,(2),查题目要求的要点是否齐全,;,(3),查连接,:,检查连接词是否使用适当,文章是否连贯通顺,;,(4),查语法,:,包括单词的拼写、大小写、标点符号、时态、语态、单复数、主谓一致、冠词、代词和固定搭配等。,4.仔细检查,认真修改。,5.,认真书写,讲究规范。,参考范文,:,We are growing up in love and care from people around.It is important to love and care for others.,I would like to give my love and care to the COVID-19 patients because they are having a hard time now.I admire their strong will very much.,5.认真书写,讲究规范。,In order to cheer them up,I decide to make beautiful heart-shaped cards with words of best wishes and kind advice on them.Then I will take a photo of the cards and post it onto the website,The,Link,of,Love,.I hope they will receive more care from others and get better soon.,In order to cheer them up,I d,附,:,评分标准,1.,评分原则与方法,从内容与语言两方面予以分档给分。内容方面要求考生能完整地按写作要点进行表述,要点详略得当、表述合理,词数符合写作要求。,语言方面要求学生表达准确连贯、符合逻辑。允许学生合理运用原文句式结构,但不可以照抄原文。如考生把文章所给出的开头部分抄写在答题卡上,不扣分,(,即使抄写有错误,),。,附:评分标准,2.,内容分与语言分的分配,内容分,:,7,分,(1),你想向谁表达你的关爱,1,分,(2),为什么,2,分,(3),你打算做些什么来表达你的关爱,4,分,内容要点完整且词数符合写作要求的作文可以得,7,分,词数在,70,个以下的作文在内容分上酌情扣分。,2.内容分与语言分的分配,语言分,:,8,分,第一档,:8,分,要求,:,内容涵盖所有的要点,表达准确,意思连贯,符合逻辑,只有个别不影响交际的语言错误。,第二档,:67,分,要求,:,内容涵盖绝大部分要点,表达清楚,意思连贯,符合逻辑,但有少量语言错误。,第三档,:45,分,要求,:,内容涵盖大部分要点,表达较为清楚、连贯,基本符合逻辑,但有一些语言错误,。,语言分:8分,第四档,:13,分,要求,:,内容涵盖部分要点,能写出少数正确句子,但整体表达不太连贯,且语言错误较多。,第五档,:0,分空白卷或完全没有相关内容。,确定语言分档次时要考虑内容的涵盖,每少一个要点,语言分降一个档次给分。,注,:,以上评分标准仅供参考。,第四档:13分要求:内容涵盖部分要点,能写出少数正确句,中考链接,(,一,),(,根据,2019,年广东中考,“,信息归纳,”,改编,),请阅读一篇有关,2019,亚洲文明对话大会之亚洲美食节广州站,(The Asian Cuisine Festival,Guangzhou),的短文,根据所提供的信息,回答,5,个问题。要求所写答案语法正确、语义完整。,中考链接(一),2021年英语中考第五节-读写综合-B,1.Why was the Asian Cuisine Festival,Guangzhou held?,It,was,held,to,encourage,communication,among,Asian,countries.,2.How many top restaurants were there on the list?,There,were,24/twenty-four,top,restaurants,on,the,list.,3.What was the hand-painted picture about?,It,was,about,the,cuisine,choices,along,the,Pearl,River.,1.Why was the Asian Cuisine Fe,4.How was traditional food made in this festival?,Traditional,food/It,was,made,by,using,modern,technology.,5.Whats Guangzhou well-known for?,Guangzhou/It,is,well-known,for,its,rich,food,and,its,culture.,4.How was traditional food mad,(,二,),(,根据,2018,年广东中考,“,信息归纳,”,改编,),请阅读一张,“,共享小图,”(,一种新型社区图书馆,),的海报,根据所提供的信息,回答,5,个问题。要求所写答案语法正确、语义完整。,(二),2021年英语中考第五节-读写综合-B,2021年英语中考第五节-读写综合-B,1.Who was the director of the Little Free Library for neighbors in Sunshine Park Community?,Bryan,Lim,was,the,director,of,the,Little,Free,Library,for,neighbors,in,Sunshine,Park,Community.,2.When was the opening date of the Little Free Library in 2018?,It,was,on,March,25th.,1.Who was the director of the,3.Where did Todd Bol place his first wooden box?,He,placed,it,in,his,front,yard.,4.What did Todd Bols mother do?,She,was,a,teacher.,5.How many countries had Little Free Libraries in 2017?,More,than/over,eighty/80,countries,had,Little,Free,Libraries,in,2017.,3.Where did Todd Bol place his,(,三,),(,根据,2017,年广东中考,“,信息归纳,”,改编,),请阅读,Jason,在他的个人主页上写的一篇文章,根据所提供的信息,回答,5,个问题。要求所写答案语法正确、语义完整。,(三),2021年英语中考第五节-读写综合-B,1.Do words carry huge weight?,Yes,they,do.,2.What did Jason feel when he entered the dining hall?,He/Jason,felt,lonely,when,he,entered,the,dining,hall.,3.Why was Jason laughed at by other kids?,Because,he,had,a,big,nose.,1.Do words carry huge weight?,4.How long did it take Jason to grow out of the influence?,It,took,him,20/twenty,years,to,grow,out,of,the,influence.,5.Who gave Jason courage and confidence?,Jasons,dad,gave,him,courage,and,confidence.,4.How long did it take Jason t,(,四,),(,根据,2016,年广东中考,“,信息归纳,”,改编,),请阅读,BBC,网站上的一篇文章,根据所提供的信息,回答,5,个问题。要求所写答案语法正确、语义完整。,(四),2021年英语中考第五节-读写综合-B,1.Whats the name of Dr.Rowan Pellings article?,Its,Can,You,Manage,Your,Time,Well,.,2.When did Caroline move into her house?,She,moved,into,her,house,in,2006.,3.Who wanted to put away the Christmas tree used last December?,Polly,wanted,to,put,away,the,Christmas,tree,used,last,December.,1.Whats the name of Dr.Rowan,4.Where does Craig come from?,Craig/He,comes,from,Toronto.,5.Why was Ted Roseland embarrassed?,Because,he,couldnt,send,the,furniture,to,his,customer,on,time.,4.Where does Craig come from?,(,五,),(,根据,2015,年广东中考,“,信息归纳,”,改编,),请阅读网络上的两则关于溺水事件的报道,根据所提供的信息,回答,5,个问题。要求所写答案语法正确、语义完整。,(五),2021年英语中考第五节-读写综合-B,1.Which websi
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