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单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,Revision,Topic-based writing,Revision Topic-based writing,If you want to be skilled in writing,first of all,you need to be an,efficient,thoughtful and wise,learner,.,My advice,写作是综合能力的体现，要想成中考中的写作达人，应该在总复习的过程中成为一个高效，善思，智慧的学习者。,If you want to be,Initially(=Firstly),be a sharp observer（观察者）.,-There must be thought behind phenomenon.（看透现象后的问题）,Initially(=Firstly),What,topics,can you find out from these pictures?,What topics can you find out f,Topics that are concerned with the pictures,A.Students are under too much pressure.,B.Students have no free time to do what they like.,C.Parents fit as much as they want into their childrens lives.,D.Parents are always trying to plan their childrens lives.,Topics that are concerned with,初三的学生即将面临(be around the corner)中考，学习的压力很大，最近取消初三学生晚自习(evening self-study)的消息在学生和家长当中引发了很大反响。请根据此内容，按照如下提示写一篇不少于80词的小短文。,1.谈谈你对此话题的个人观点。,2.为什么你觉得应该保留或者取消晚自习。,3.你觉得应该如何更有效地合理地计划安排自己的时间。,长春市第45中学,英语模拟考试书面表达（B）,初三的学生即将面临(be around,Related units in our textbooks,Grade 8 II,Unit 2,Reading,Maybe you should learn to relax.,Topic:causes of problems,Grade 9,Unit 1,Reading,How do you deal with problems?,Topic:how to do things,Unit 3,Reading,Should I be allowed to make my own decisions?,Topic:agree and disagree,Related units in our textbooks,What is more,be an open-minded learner.,-I can make full use of any leanring resources(学习资源)，especially our textbooks.,What is more,Useful words&expressions about target topics,try to fit as much as possible into.,under too much pressure,tired kids,join after-school clubs,push.a lot,send.to kinds of classes,agree(with.),find it hard to think for oneself,plan.for sb.,on the one hand,on the other hand,need time and freedom to relax,need time to do things by themselves,So how do we deal with.?,with the help of.,worry about.,practice ones hobbies as much as sb.want,spend time on.,be allowed to make decisions for oneself,achieve ones dream,Useful words&expressions abou,Useful words&expressions about target topics,complain v.,complaint n.,busy adj.,pushy adj.,compare v.,crazy adj.,freedom n.,solution n.,realize v.,opportunity n.,syn.=chance n.,volunteer v.,achieve v.,importance n.,succeed v.,Useful words&expressions abou,Last but not least,be a critical and flexible(有主见的和善于变通的)learner.,-Ive been a crash(速成的)writing expert.,Last but not least,Since the entrance exam is around the corner,we students are supposed to make full use of every possible,_,of which self-study is a,_,one.,Therefore,I,_,the idea that evening self-study should,be kept,.,To tell the truth,its not easy to,_,s,tudy at home,no matter how much Im interested in getting knowledge.However,studying is efficient when the whole class are learning quietly.Such good learning environment,_,me to do my best to keep up with those hard-working guys.Besides,whenever I meet a problem,I have my teachers to,_.,This cant happen when Im alone in my study and probably I will,_,more tries.,As for my afterschool time,I,_,keep a good balance of work and play.On the one hand,Ill finish all my school tasks as soon as possible.On the other hand,relaxing activities like practicing hobbies or hanging out with friends also help me to be,_,in studies.,crucial,chance,agree with,concentrate on,encourages,help me out,give up,prefer to,active,be useful to,crucial,chance,concentrate on,encourage,help.out,give up,prefer to do,agree with,active,Since the entrance,Imitate(模仿)and rewrite(改写),Since the entrance exam is around the corner,we students are supposed to make full use of every possible chance,_.,Therefore,I agree with the idea that evening self-study should be,_.,-beginning,of which self-study is a crucial one,kept,But it doesnt mean we dont need time and freedom to do things by ourselves.,canceled,.,Imitate(模仿)and rewrite(改写),初三的学生即将面临(be in the corner)中考，学习的压力很大，最近取消初三学生晚自习(evening self-study)的消息在学生和家长当中引发了很大反响。请根据此内容，按照如下提示写一篇不少于80词的小短文。,1.从你的角度你非常赞成取消晚自习。,2.为什么你觉得取消晚自习对你有利。,3.你会如何合理地计划安排自己的时间。,长春市第45中学英语模拟考试书面表达（B）,初三的学生即将面临(be in the,聪明的你一定发现了，我们把可以利用的那篇小文章中开头部分的观点倒置，最后一段保留或做简单修改，完成了开头和结尾部分。,一篇高端大气上档次的作文就新鲜出炉了。中考作文怎能难倒我们。,The second paragraph about why you think it should be canceled is actually a piece of cake.,如果再利用从教材中总结归纳的单词，短语，句型结构完成对于观点的说明和支持，(Dont forget the useful words and expressions collected from the textbooks.),The second paragraph about wh,As for,how to,plan my after-school time,I prefer to,keep a good balance of,work and play.,On the one hand,Ill finish all my school tasks,as soon as possible,.,On the other hand,relaxing activities like,practicing hobbies,or,hanging out,with friends also help me to,be active in,study.,-ending,Take full advantage(充分利用）of our textbooks,A,Useful words,&,expressions we can use,try to fit as much as possible into.,under too much pressure,tired kids,join after-school cl
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