介绍家乡变化(教育精品)

,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,介绍家乡变化,审题,假如你叫李华。你的网友,Susan,五年前曾经在你的家乡担任外教，最近发来邮件询问你的家乡这些年的变化。请你给,Susan,回复一封邮件，要点如下：,1.,介绍家乡巨变（住、行等方面）；,2.,存在的问题（污染等）。,注意：,1.,词数,100,左右。,2.,可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,3.,邮件开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。,Dear Susan,Glad to hear from you and Im more than willing to tell you what you are concentrated about.,_,I hope that youll be back to have a look at the new town soon.,Yours,Li Hua,体裁：,人称：,时态：,邮件,/,介绍家乡变化,第一、三人称,现在完成时、一般现在时、一般将来时,Dear Susan,Glad to hear from you and Im more than willing to tell you what you are concentrated about.,I hope that youll be back to have a look at the new town soon.,Yours,Li Hua,列提纲,1.,介绍家乡巨变（住、行等方面）,2.,存在的问题（污染等）,（,1,）家乡近年来发生了巨大的变化。,（,2,）居住条件改善了很多。许多人搬进了大房子,（,3,）很多人家里买了车。,（,4,）整个城市的道路宽阔了，高楼大厦多了。,（,1,）随着城市发展，污染问题也出现了。,（,2,）但是我相信政府会解决的。,成文,Dear Susan,Glad to hear from you and Im more than willing to tell you what you are concentrated about.,The last few years have witnessed great changes,taking place,in my hometown.Our,living conditions,have improved greatly and many people have moved into large and comfortable houses,which,are equipped with,modern,facilities,.,Believe it or not,many families now have cars of their own.Wide roads,have been built,and tall buildings,can be seen,everywhere.,Hand in hand with,the rapid development of the economy,however,many problems have arisen,especially,the serious air and water pollution.,Hopefully,the government will,take effective measures,to solve the problems,so that,our hometown can,enjoy healthy and steady development,in the years to come,.,I hope that youll be back to have a look at the new town soon.,Yours,Li Hua,