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Click to edit Master title style,Click to edit Master text styles,Second level,Third level,Fourth level,Fifth level,11/7/2009,#,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,分类写作,五、建议信,全国高考英语二轮突破,分类写作五、建议信 全国高考英语二轮突破,a global village,地球村,master English,掌握英语,be aware of,意识到,have a good command of sth.,某事掌握得很好,two aspects,两个方面,keep sth.in mind,记住,English composition,英语作文,memorize English words,记忆英语单词,control ones temper,控制某人的脾气,let out ones anger,释放怒气,an effective way,一个有效的方式,get rid of,摆脱,remain optimistic about sth.,保持乐观,【必备词语】,a global village 地球村【必备词语】,lift ones spirits,振奋某人的精神,improve ones reading ability,提高阅读能力,be alarmingly shocking,十分令人震惊的,ironically,讽刺地,get used to the phenomenon,习惯于这个现象,have a bad effect on,对,有坏影响,dustbin,垃圾箱,set up specific rules,制定具体的制度,develop good habits,培养好的习惯,with the joint efforts of sb.,有了某人的共同努力,cover a wide variety of,涵括各种各样的,broaden our horizon,开阔我们的视野,【必备词语】,lift ones spirits 振奋某人的精神【必备,1.I like it very much mainly for the following two reasons.,我十分喜欢它，主要有以下两个原因。,2.Almost perfect as it is,it should make more improvement in some area.,尽管它近乎完美，它在一些方面仍需要改进。,3.And Ive found that my problem lies chiefly in two aspects.For one thing,.For another thing,.,我发现我的问题主要在于两个方面。一方面，,另一方面，,4.Therefore,its my hope that you can give us some practical tips on how to.,因此，我希望你能就,给我们一些实用的建议。,【好句朗诵】,1.I like it very much mainly,5.Here are some suggestions which I hope will be of some help to you.,这里是一些建议，希望会对你有帮助。,6.I wonder if the school could place more dustbins around.,我想学校是否能够在周围多放些垃圾桶。,7.I believe that,with the joint efforts of both teachers and students,our school will become a more enjoyable place in the near future.,我相信，有了老师和学生的共同努力，我们学校会在不久的将来成为一个更令人快乐的地方。,【好句朗诵】,5.Here are some suggestions w,1.Id like to give you some suggestions that may help you learn your math good.,1.good,改为,well,2.If you will need to buy a good smart phone at a low price,I will suggest a Hongmi Mi3.,2.,删掉第一个,will,【单句改错】,3.We all know that it is always very hard to starting in a new school.,3.starting,改为,start,1.Id like to give you some s,4.I found it difficult to express myself in English,and my English teacher advised me that I practiced more.,4.practiced,改为,practice,5.As for your future major,I think most suitable thing for you is teaching Chinese as a foreign language.,5.most,前面加,the,【单句改错】,6.I sorry to learn that you havent adapted to the new life there.,6.,在,I,后加,am,4.I found it difficult to exp,7.Playing football not only make us grow tall and strong but also gives us a sense of team spirit.,7.make,改为,makes,8.I hope everything will be OK and you will soon make some friend in the new city.,8.friend,改为,friends,【单句改错】,7.Playing football not only m,9.Why not ask him to give a explanation for his being absent from the meeting yesterday,？,9.a,改为,an,10.I think you should grasp the opportunity and go to abroad for further studies.,10.,删掉,to,【单句改错】,9.Why not ask him to give a e,【,2011,全国,卷：读者给报刊建议,】,假定你是李华，你所喜爱的,Global Mirror,周报正于创刊五周年之际征集读者意见。请你依据以下内容给主编写封信，内容主要包括：,1.,说明你是该报的忠实读者；,2.,赞赏该报优点：,1),兼顾国内外新闻,2),介绍名人成功故事；,3.,提出建议：刊登指导英语学习的文章。,【真题满分佳作赏析】,【2011全国卷：读者给报刊建议】【真题满分佳作赏析】,满分佳作（一）,Dear Editor-in-Chief,Congratulations on the 5,th,anniversary of,Global Mirror,!,Im a regular reader of your newspaper.I like it very much mainly for the following two reasons.First,it covers both national and international news so that,by simply turning the pages,I can learn all important things that have happened during the week.Equally attractive are the success stories of world-famous people,which help me understand how a person can work hard to make the world a better place.,As a young student,I suggest that,Global Mirror,carry articles to guide us in our English learning,and I hope that it will become even more popular.,Sincerely yours,Li Hua,满分佳作（一）,满分赏析,用到,mainly for the following two reasons,解释原因的总起句，体现了对写作句型的熟练掌握。,cover(,覆盖,范围、包括,),一词用得地道；还用上了,so that,引导的结果状语从句。,Equally attractive are(,同样吸引人的还有,),这是地道、不同于一般模板的连接手段，表示与上面,First,提到的内容并列；本句还有,which,引导的定语从句和,to make the world a better place,这样地道自然的表达；这样的句子是提分的句子。,用到,suggest,加宾语从句，从句动词用,do,或者,should do,。,满分赏析,满分佳作（二）,Dear Editor-in-Chief,Congratulations on the 5,th,anniversary of,Global Mirror,!,As a loyal reader,I have learnt much from your newspaper,including reading daily news.It is obvious that,Global Mirror,enjoys high popularity for a series of advantages.First,it not only includes domestic and foreign news but also makes a detailed analysis full of remarkable insights.Besides,it introduces different celebrities success which motivates readers not to give up but to pursue their dreams whatever happens.Of course,they can avoid the detours in their progress.,Almost perfect as it is,it should make more improvement in some area.For example,considering many readers thirst for English study,it will be a good idea to publish some articles dealing with approaches to English learning.,Sincerely yours,Li Hua,满分佳作（二）,满分赏析,a loyal reader(,一位忠实的读者,),，这个短语体现了作者的词汇能力。,用到,It is obvious that.,加主语
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