教育专题：基础写作上课1(1)

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,高考专题,：,基础写作,1,、写作题材贴近学生的学习和生活。,2,、信息点多，,必须用,5,句话表达。,3,、信息呈现方式多为文字、表格、图表等。,4,、以翻译为基础、注重考察表达能力。,一、题型特点：,二、能力要求,:,1,、审题能力,2,、处理信息的能力：,信息组合、排列合理,3,、表达能力,语法正确,句式灵活,（可用各种从句，并列句，强调句）,信息内容表达准确、完整 ,语篇连贯,Ex:,改正下列病句。,My favourite subjects including English and Chinese.,Last week we hold a discussion about this topic.,The future life will become more and more better.,The fire,destroied,their houses.,5.He spends two hours to study English every night.,_,应改为,include,_,应改为,held,_,_,应改为,better and better,_,应改为,destroyed,_,应改为,studying,6.Although we missed the film,but we felt very happy.,7.We should do some exercise every day,it is good for our health.,8.The girl is my good friend.,She is standing under the tree.,合并成,定语从句,删去,but,it,前加,and,_,_,The girl who is standing under the tree is my good friend.,1,、写作题材贴近学生的学习和生活。,2,、信息点多，,必须用,5,句话表达。,3,、信息呈现方式多为文字、表格、图表等。,4,、以翻译为基础、注重考察表达能力。,一、题型特点：,三、表达能力训练,1.,写好简单句,简单句的五种基本句型：,1,）主语,+,不及物动词,(,S+V),2,）主语,+,及物动词,+,宾语,(,S+V+O),3,）主语,+,系动词,+,表语,(,S+V+P),4,）主语,+,及物动词,+,双宾语,(,S+V+O+O),5,）主语,+,及物动词,+,宾语,+,宾补,(,S+V+O+C),四、如何使文章连贯？,(,过渡词的使用,),1),时间：,then,suddenly,meanwhile,before,after,2),空间,:,around,inside,outside,opposite to,next to,3),列举：,for example,such as,first(ly,),besides,for,one thingfor another thing,4),比较,:,on the one handon the other hand,as,as,while,the former,the latter,someothers,other,compared with,5),逻辑关系：,a.,并列：,and,as well as,also,b.,转折：,but,however,yet,c.,递进：,besides,apart from,in addition,whats more,furthermore,d.,原因：,because,because of,as,since,for,that reason,e.,结果：,so,therefore,thus,as a result,f.,让步：,though,although,in spite of,2,、如何做到句式灵活？,1),并列句,2),复合句,(,定语从句、状语从句、名词性从句,),3),强调句型,4),非谓语动词,5),其他句型及结构,须注意的要点,加强基础词汇和基本句子结构的学习,提高综合运用复合句的能力,注意句子间的过渡与衔接（连词）,仿写、背诵、熟读一些话题范文,须注意的要点,一、句子结构必须正确。,单句,:,主语,+,谓语,+,其他成分。,复合句：从句中须有主语、谓语，主句有主,语、谓语。,二、人称、时态必须一致。当主语是单数时，谓语要一致。,三、有一些自己熟练掌握的句型、短语、过渡词。,四、避免花费太多无用功，掌握规律，稳定发挥,。,在表达过程中，应选用自己熟悉的和有把握的词汇及句型，千万,不能,自己去,创造或生搬硬套汉语式的句子,。如果遇到确实难以回避的内容，一时又想不起确切的表达法，那就要“拐弯抹角”地去表达，,尽量找同义或近义的词语或句型来代替,，英语有句谚语：“,All roads lead to Rome.”,这样既可节约时 间又可避免犯大的错误。,写作要求：假如你是李华，请就本校食堂食堂服务的状况给校长写一封信。,内容包括：,、优点：食堂干净，饭菜可口，服务态度好,、不足：价格偏高，种类偏少，等候时间较长,、建议：尽快解决问题,Dear Mr.Principal,I am a student of our school and Id like to say something about the canteen service in our,school.,In general,we are satisfied with the clean and tidy dining,hall.,However,the price of the food is a little high and we can only have a limited variety of dishes to choose,from.,In addition,we often have to wait a long time for buying,food.,you could understand how precious time is to us students,so may I suggest that the problem be solved as soon as possible so that we can all enjoy our meals at,school?,Thanks for your consideration.,Dear Mr.Principal,I am a student of our school and Id like to say something about the canteen service in our,school.,In general,we are satisfied with the clean and tidy dining,hall.,However,the price of the food is a little high and we can only have a limited variety of dishes to choose,from.,In addition,we often have to wait a long time for buying,food.,You could understand how precious time is to us students,so may I suggest that the problem be solved as soon as possible so that we can all enjoy our meals at,school?,Thanks for your consideration.,第一种：要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。,1,有一些人认为,2,另一些人认为,3,我的看法,如何写好正反观点的文章？,Writing structure-,How to write an essay(,议论短文,),(In my opinion，I think-,/,As for me,I think-/,Personally,I think-,.,),(There are different opinions,about whether-,.,),(Some people think that-,.,Whats more/Moreover-,.,However,other people hold,the opposite opinion that-,.,and worse still-,.,),The theme of the essay,(,陈述议论的主题,),Opinion 1,Opinion 2,Reasons 1,2,Reasons 1,2,Personal opinion,注意事项：,条理要清晰，观点明确；,文章必须包括所有提示要点，同时切记用,5,句连篇；,运用适当的连词，副词，短语等来衔接句子；,注意时态，,议论文形式还是以现在时为主,.,对立观点式议论短文的基础,写作模板,：,There are different opinions about whether_.Some people think that _.Whats more/Moreover/Furthermore _.However,others hold the opposite opinion that_,and worse still,，,_.,As for me/In my opinion/Personally,I think that_.,Task:Writing,人们对网上购物持有不同意见。请你用英语写一篇关于网上购物的短文，介绍人们的不同观点，并表达你的看法。,赞成的理由,反对的理由,自己的看法,1,网上购物更方便，省时,2,人们可以在网上买到各种各样的东西，而且价格也较便宜,.,3,是一种时尚而新潮的购物方式,1,无法预先体验商品,2,人们容易上当受骗，因为很难确保商品的质量,写作内容,1,文章必须包括所有提示要点,但不要逐条译成英语,;,2,请根据以上提示，最后谈谈你的观点；,写作要求,只能用,5,个句子表达全部的内容。,词汇,:,商品,:,goods,体验,:,experience,预先：,in advance,上当受骗,:be cheated,人们对是否应该网上购物持有不同意见。,一些人认为,网上购物更方便，省时，,人们可以在网上买到各种各样的东西，而且价格也较便宜,.,而且这是一种时尚而新潮的购物方式。,另一些人相反的观点，认为人们,无法预先体验商品，他们容易上当受骗，因为很难确保商品的质量。,依我看来，,Correct the mistakes,There are different opinions about whether,go shopping online.,people should,Some people think that,buy goods is very easy on the Internet,and need little time.,Some people think that,shopping online is more convenient and it can help people to save much time,people can shop for a variety of things at lower price on the Internet.,buying,it can help people to save much time,Whats more,people are not only can buy kinds of things,but also the price is more