专题10-2021新高考英语读后续写典例分析10-My-Own-Violin

Click to edit Master title style,Click to edit Master text styles,Second level,Third level,Fourth level,Fifth level,11/7/2009,#,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,专题10-2021新高考英语读后续写典例分析10-My-Own-Violin,专题10-2021新高考英语读后续写典例分析10-My-Ow,目录,01,表达积累,02,原文分析,03,续写扩展,04,续写赏析,目录01表达积累02原文分析03续写扩展04续写赏析,01,表达积累,01表达积累,表达积累,1.,分类广告,2.,把报纸放在我腿上,3.,大,萧条,4.,谋生,5.,爸爸哼,着小曲,the classified advertisements,laid the paper on my lap,the Great Depression,make a living,Daddy hummed,表达积累1.分类广告the classified adver,表达积累,6.,妈妈,吹着口哨,7.,这是不可能的,8.,学校,管弦乐队,9.,紧紧地闭上,眼睛,10.,这幅画面牢牢地,记在脑海里,Mother whistled,it was out of the question,the school orchestra,closed my eyes tight,capture the picture firmly in my mind,表达积累6.妈妈吹着口哨Mother whistledit,表达积累,11.,我默默地,发誓,12.,尽管日子,不好过,13.,随后的许多,夜晚,14.,围着桌子坐着,15.,热情地握手,I vowed silently,Yet even though times were hard,many following nights,sit,round the table,heartily shook hands,表达积累11.我默默地发誓I vowed silentlyY,表达积累,16.,两人同时,交谈,17.,拿起一个箱子，打开,，,18.,拿出,小提琴,19.,旋律,汹涌澎湃,20.,如瀑布般流畅,both talking at once,picked up a case,opened it,lifted out a violin,The melody surged,spoke like waterfalls,表达积累16.两人同时交谈both talking at o,02,原文分析,02原文分析,My Own Violin,“Wanted:Violin.Cant pay much.Contact”,I rarely read,the classified advertisements,so why did I notice that one?I,laid the paper on my lap,and closed my eyes,remembering what had happened many years before,during,the Great Depression,when my family struggled to,make a living,on our farm.I,too,had wanted a violin,.,原文分析,注意细节表达的积累,My Own Violin原文分析注意细节表达的积累,When my older twin sisters began showing an interest in music,Harriet Anne learned to play Grandmas piano,while Suzanne turned to Daddys violin.Simple tunes became lovely melodies.My baby brother danced;,Daddy hummed and Mother whistled.,I just listened,.,When my arms grew long enough,I tried to play Suzannes violin.Oh,how I wanted one!But I knew,it was out of the question.,原文分析,我太想要一把属于自己的小提琴了。,While,表示对比,When my older twin sisters beg,One evening as the twins played,in the school orchestra,.I closed my eyes tight to,capture the picture firmly in my mind,.Someday,Ill sit up there,I vowed silently.,It was not a good year.At harvest the crops didnt bring as much as we had hoped.,Yet even though times were hard,I couldnt wait any longer to ask,“Daddy,may I have a violin of my own?”,“Cant you use Suzannes?”,原文分析,日子在艰难，我还是骨气勇气问爸爸要了小提琴。,One evening as the twins playe,“Id like to be in the orchestra too,and we cant both use the same violin at the same time.”,Daddys face looked sad.,That night,and many following nights,I heard him remind God in our family prayers,“and Lord,Mary Lou wants her own violin.”,One evening we all,sat round the table,.The twins and I studied.Mother sewed and Daddy wrote a letter to his friend,George Finkle,in Columbus,Ohio.Mr Finkle,Daddy said,was a fine violinist.,原文分析,父亲写信给朋友,“Id like to be in the orchest,When Daddy received a letter from Columbus a few weeks later,he asked me,“Mary Lou,do you want to go with me to visit Mr Finkle?”,He drove us to Columbus and we came to a fine,old house.A tall man opened the door.He and Daddy,heartily shook hands,both talking at once.,原文分析,父亲带我见了他的小提琴家的那位朋友。,When Daddy received a letter f,“Mary Lou,Ive been hearing things about you.Your Daddy has arranged a surprise for you!”,He picked up a case,opened it,lifted out a violin and started to play.,The melody surged and spoke like waterfalls.,Oh,to play like him,I thought.,Finishing the piece,he turned to Daddy.“I found it in a pawnshop,（当铺）,for seven dollars.Its a good violin.Mary Lou should be able to make a beautiful music with it.”Then he handed the violin to me.,原文分析,我见到了新的小提琴。,“Mary Lou,Ive been hearing t,Paragraph,1,：,I noticed the tears in Daddys eyes as I finally comprehended.It was mine,!,_,Paragraph,2,：,I forced my thoughts to the present and read again the advertisement,.,_,原文分析,父亲的朋友吧小提琴送给了我，后面续写应该是我很感动，也很努力练习，也参加了梦寐以求的校园演奏会。,我回到了现实，结局应该是正能量。所以后面续写应该是我把我的小提琴卖给了这个人。,Paragraph 1：原文分析父亲的朋友吧小提琴送给了,03,续写扩展,03续写扩展,Paragraph 1,Paragraph 1,：,I noticed the tears in Daddys eyes as I finally comprehended.It was mine!,I liked it very much,I practice playing with violin,And take part in,the school,orchestra,Paragraph 1Paragraph 1：I lik,Paragraph,2,Paragraph 2,：,I forced my thoughts to the present and read again the advertisement.,I decide to sell my violin,The advertiser and I met,The father bought the violin for her daughter,Paragraph 2Paragraph 2：I dec,句子润色,“真漂亮。”我说，几乎喘不过气来。,“Its beautiful.”I said,barely breathing.,barely breathing,句子润色“真漂亮。”我说，几乎喘不过气来。“Its bea,句子润色,我知道爸爸和我的祈祷都得到了回应。,had been answered,I knew Daddys prayer,and mine,had been answered.,I knew Daddys,and my prayer,had,been answered.,句式提升,句子润色我知道爸爸和我的祈祷都得到了回应。had been,句子润色,回到家里，我每天都在练习，一点也不累。,Back home,I practiced daily,feeling,no tiredness.,句式的提升,feel,no tiredness,When I was back,home,I practiced daily,and felt,no tiredness.,句子润色回到家里，我每天都在练习，一点也不累。Back ho,句子润色,当我准备加入学校管弦乐队时，我激动得浑身发抖。,When I was ready to j