书面表达专项突破12.投诉信

单击此处编辑母版标题样式,单击此处编辑母版文本样式,第二级,第三级,第四级,第五级,*,*,12.投诉信,1,文体概述,投诉信是人们在遇到一些不文明现象、所购商品质量差、售后服务不满意等情况下解决问题的一个方法。在语言方面，要注意把握分寸，要公平、公正。投诉信应包括三个方面的内容：,1. 表明写信目的，投诉的内容。,2. 投诉的具体原因。,3. 希望得到的结果。,2,常用语块,1. 抱怨 _,2. 表达不满 _,3. 忍受 _,4. 对满意 _,5. 糟糕的服务 _,poor service,complain about,convey/express ones dissatisfaction,put up with/bear,be content/satisfied with,3,6. 采取措施 _,7. 解决问题 _,8. 预防发生 _,9. 调查此次事件,_,10. 以粗鲁的方式 _,in a rude manner,take measures,deal with/solve the problem,preventfrom happening,investigate/look into the matter/incident,4,11. 向道歉 _,12. 出乎意料 _,13. 不用说 _,14. 尽快 _,15. 把某事牢记在心 _,make an apology to/apologize to,out of ones expectation,needless to say,as soon as possible,bear sth. in mind,5,套用句式,我写信是投诉关于,2.,这几年我对你们的服务都很满意，但是我写信是表达关于,的不满。,2. I have been content/satisfied with your service for years but I am writing to express my dissatisfaction about,1. I am writing to complain about,6,3. 我对不满意有一些主要原因。首先，更糟糕的是，最后，,3. There are some main reasons why I am not content with At first, Whats worse, Eventually, ,7,4. 我真诚地希望你能认真调查这件事情，以及采取恰当的措施防止类似事件再次发生。,5. 你若能尽快采取措施处理这个问题，我将感激不尽。,4. I sincerely hope that/It is my sincere hope that you will look into/investigate the matter/incident seriously and proper measures should be taken to prevent such an incident happening again.,5. I would appreciate it very much if you could take measures to deal with/solve the problem as soon as possible.,8,习作修改(做短文改错，背经典范文),Dear Sir,Im writing to express my dissatisfaction about the mobile phone of Dephone-S250 I bought in 20,th,Apr. 2015 at Teemall. Ten days before that, it,didnt ring or sent text messages. Then I took them,to the seller, but was told that the model had been sold out and I had to wait at least three month for a,new one. Later I went to the repairman.,on,after,send,it,months,9,He said since it was a new model in China, it was impossibly to fix it without the right spare parts. I,was so desperate on hear that. What can I wait that,long? Therefore, I sincerely hope you can send to me a new one of same model. I would greatly,appreciate it if you could take measures to solve the problem as soon as possible.,Sincerely yours,Bu Manyi,impossible,hearing,How,the,10,课堂练习,假定你是李华，上周六，你有一次不愉快的就餐经历，对餐厅的服务员态度非常不满意。于是你给该餐厅老板写一封投诉信。要点如下：,1. 问题：牛肉面有苍蝇，服务员态度粗鲁。,2. 要求：餐厅赔礼道歉。,注意：,1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。,11,Dear Sir,I am Li Hua, a frequent customer in your restaurant.,I have,been pleased with,your excellent service for years but now Im writing to,express my dissatisfaction about the poor service,of your waiters.,Last Saturday, I went to your restaurant to have lunch but I had an awful experience. When having beef noodles, I suddenly found there were two flies in them, which,disgusted me a lot.,12,So I asked the waiter to change another dish.,Out of my expectation, he didnt change it but said,in a rude manner,that he was,too busy to solve,the problem.,Needless to say, such a way of treating customers is,unacceptable,.,Its my sincere hope that,you can,investigate the matter seriously,and,make a formal apology to,me.,I look forward to a better service next time.,Sincerely yours,Li Hua,13,课外作业,假定你是李华，你在上周日搭坐102号公交车，该公交车司机的不文明行为让乘客很愤怒。于是你向公交车公司写一封投诉信。要点如下：,1. 司机的不文明行为(大声讲话、紧急刹车、态度粗鲁等)。,2. 希望尽快查清此事。,注意：,1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。,14,Dear Sir,I am Li Hua. I am writing to complain about,one of your bus-drivers,improper,and rude behaviors.,Last Sunday, I was taking the No. 102 bus whose driver,not only kept on talking,with a man loudly,but also,drove very fast. So some passengers advised him to,concentrate on,driving, but he didnt,pay any attention,.,Whats worse, he drove even faster. Then another passenger couldnt,bear,it, asking the driver to,keep the passengers safety in mind,.,15,But the driver stopped the bus,so suddenly that,all the passengers nearly,lost their balance,. However, he didnt apologize but said rudely “Its none of your business.”,I sincerely hope you can investigate this incident and proper measures should be taken to prevent such an incident happening again.,Sincerely yours,Li Hua,16,