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Click to edit Master title style,Click to edit Master text styles,Second level,Third level,Fourth level,Fifth level,*,Writing 1,(2018浙江),假定你是李华,你校英语协会招聘志愿者,接待来访的国外中学生。请你写信应聘,内容包括:,1.口语能力;,2.相关经验;,3.应聘目的。,注意:,1.词数80左右;,2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。,五年高考,A,组,2016,2018,年浙江高考题组,答案,写作提示,1.,本文是一封求职信,以第一人称为主,时态主要用一般现在时。,2.,内容要点,:(1),口语能力,; (2),相关经验,;(3),此次应聘的目的。,One possible version:,Dear Sir/Madam,On seeing your notice on the bulletin board, I feel excited to write this letter for the position.,Owing to studying in the English department, I can talk in English fluently. To be honest, I have,just won first prize in the Spoken English Competition, so there is no doubt that there is not any,problem for me to communicate with foreigners.,What,s more, I have ever served as a receptionist in our school,s 70th anniversary celebration,making myself more confident.,In order to practise my speaking skills and get more experience, I,m eager to be taken on for this,job.,Looking forward to your early reply.,Yours sincerely,Li Hua,精彩语句,1.精美词汇,owing to因为fluently,adv,. 流利地to be honest老实说communicate,v,.沟通;交流what,s,more而且confident,adj,.有信心的be eager to do sth.渴望做某事look forward to sth.期盼某事,2.出彩结构,On seeing your notice on the bulletin board, I feel excited to write this letter for the position.(on,doing sth.表示“一做某事”),.there is no doubt that there is not any problem for me to communicate with foreigners.(There,is no doubt that.句式),What,s more, I have ever served as a receptionist in our school,s 70th anniversary celebration,making myself more confident.(making.为非谓语动词短语作状语,表示自然而然的结果),Writing 2,(2017浙江11月),假定你是李华,得知外教Mr. Hall寒假不回国,想邀请他到你家过春节。请给他写一封信,内容,包括:,1.时间;,2.一同过节的家人;,3.活动。,注意:,1.词数80左右;,2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。,答案,写作提示,1.题目要求三个要点,但是,要注意其在叙述部分“暗含”的要点:外教寒假不回国;邀请他到家,过春节。,2.本文属于邀请信,因此时态要用现在时或将来时。,3.要注意语言的礼貌、客气,并且尊重对方的文化习俗。,One possible version:,Dear Mr. Hall,Knowing that you will not go home in the winter holiday, I,d like to invite you to my home to cel-,ebrate the Spring Festival, which falls on January 19. It,s traditionally a time for family reunion,so all my family will be there. We will have a big Chinese-style dinner first, followed by chatting,and some interesting games. At 8 in the evening we can watch the Spring Festival Gala on TV to-,gether. All my family will be happy if you can come.,Yours,Li Hua,精彩语句,1.精美词汇,celebrate,v,.庆祝,2.出彩结构,Knowing that you.I,d like to., which falls.(现在分词短语作状语,which引导非限制性定语从句),Writing 3,(2017浙江6月),假定你是李华,计划组织一次郊游,请给你的英国朋友Chris写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括:,1.参加者;,2.时间、地点;,3.活动:登山、野餐等。,注意:,1.词数80左右;,2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。,答案,写作提示,1.本文是一封邀请英国朋友参加郊游的邮件,因此,时态要用一般现在时和一般将来时。,2.注意本文的要点:时间、地点、参加者和活动,不可以遗漏要点。在表述的时候不可逐字翻,译,可以将一些信息包含在从句、分词结构中。,3.注意句子之间的顺畅连接以及高级句式的使用。,One possible version:,Dear Chris,How is everything going these days? I am writing to invite you to join my class in an outing orga-,nized by me this Saturday, June 10th. We will start at 6 o,clock early in the morning from the,school gate, and then take a bus to Yinling Mountain, where we will climb the mountain in the,morning and then have a picnic at noon. If you could come, there is no need for you to take food,but you,d better wear sports shoes and suitable clothes.,We will be really glad if you can come. Looking forward to your reply.,Yours,Li Hua,精彩语句,1.精美词汇,suitable,adj,.合适的,2.出彩结构,If you could come, there is no need.clothes.(if引导状语从句),Writing 4,(2016浙江10月),假定你是李华。下学期你将作为交换生(exchange student)去加拿大一所高中学习,住在Lynn,家里。请给Lynn写一封邮件,内容包括:,1.介绍自己;,2.告知到达时间;,3.询问应做何准备。,注意:,1.词数80左右;,2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。,答案,写作提示,这是一篇非常符合考试说明要求的应用文写作题目。文章是以邮件为载体交流信息。解题,时注意以下几点:,(1)因为本文涉及的都是现在和将来的信息,因此时态要用一般时和将来时。,(2)文章必须包括三个要点:自我介绍,到达时间和咨询如何准备。,(3)要注意三个信息之间的顺畅连接,同时要注意使用较好的句子结构,如从句、非谓语动词等。,(4)注意句子一定要高级且精炼,字数不要太少或太多,一般以70至90字为宜。,(5)浙江新高考的应用文和以往的题目以及目前其他省份的应用文有一定的不同之处,要特别,留意。除了字数不同,在格式上也稍有不同。其他省份的应用文会在原题中提供了应用文的,格式,但是浙江新题型中没有提供格式,因此要特别注意这一点。在写作时要加上正确的应用,文格式。,One possible version:,Dear Lynn,I,m Li Hua, an exchange student from China. I,m happy to know that I,ll be staying with your,family in the next few months while I,m studying at the local high school. Thank you for having,me! I will arrive in Toronto on August 20th and get to your place late that afternoon. I wonder if,you could give me some advice so that I can get myself better prepared for my stay in Canada.,Looking forward to seeing you!,Best wishes,Li Hua,Writing 1,(2018,课标全国,改编,),假定你是李华,你的新西兰朋友,Terry,将去中国朋友家做客,发邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你回,复邮件,内容包括,:,1.,到达时间,;,2.,合适的礼物,;,3.,餐桌礼仪。,注意,:,1.,词数,80,左右,;,2.,可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。,B,组,2014,2018,年全国高考题组,答案,写作提示,1.,本文是回复一封邮件,主要人称为第二人称,写作主体时态为一般现在时。,2.,文章要点,:,到达时间,;,合适的礼物,;,餐桌礼仪。,One possible version:,Dear Terry,I am delighted when receiving your letter asking what customs you should pay attention to when,visiting a friend. Here are my tips for you.,First of all, bear in mind that you had better arrive punctually or some time earlier than the ap-,pointed time, which is of great significance to show your politeness. Additionally, to be respectful,you might as well bring an appropriate gift, like some fruits. Most importantly, it,s vital that you,should mind your table manners. For instance, never speak with your mouth full of food, which,may be similar to your own custom.,In brief, do as the Chinese do when in China. I do hope you will have great fun at your friend,s,home.,Yours sincerely,Li Hua,精彩语句,1.,精美词汇,punctually,adv,.,准时地,be of great significance,很重要,appropriate,adj,.,合适的,2.,出彩结构,First of all, bear in mind that you had better arrive punctually or some time earlier than the ap-,pointed time,which is of great significance to show your politeness.(that,引导宾语从句,which,引导,非限制性定语从句,),Writing 2,(2018,课标全国,改编,),你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知,请大家观看一部英文短片,Growing,To-,gether,内容包括,:,1.,短片内容,:,学校的发展,;,2.,放映时间、地点,;,3.,欢迎对短片提出意见。,注意,:,1.,词数,80,左右,;,2.,可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。,答案,写作提示,本文为提纲式作文,属于应用文中的书面通知。可采用三段三步写作法写作。,第一步审题立意,布局谋篇“启”:审题确定主题、体裁、主要人称和主体时态。主题:,在学校宣传栏“英语天地”发布邀请大家观看短片的书面通知;体裁:书面通知;人称和时态:,以第一、二人称为主要人称,以一般现在时或一般将来时为主体时态。,第二步确定、提炼和理顺要点,顺势承上启下,巧妙转折过渡巧“承”妙“转”,即注意,段落之间、句子之间的衔接与过渡。结合要点文章可分三段来写。第一段:介绍短片内容,学校的发展;第二段:说明放映的时间和地点;第三段:表达愿望希望大家对短片提意见。,第三步紧扣主题,遣词造句,“,合”,:,照应开头和主题的完美的结尾,是画龙点睛之笔。紧,扣主题组词成句,做到语言得体、准确无误,避免重复,;,遣词造句时,注意高级词汇、短语或句,式的使用。,One possible version:,Notice,Dear schoolmates,It is a great honor to be on behalf of our school to inform you that we,ll invite you to see an Eng-,lish short film named,Growing,Together,which is about the development of our school.,We have arranged that the short film will be on show from 16:00 to 17:00 at our school theater to-,morrow. Don,t miss the chance of taking part in this collective activity.,I do hope you can give us some valuable suggestions about the short film. Please give your feed-,back in time and contact us at your convenience.,Students,Union,精彩语句,1.精美词汇,on behalf of代表take part in参加;参与feedback,n,. 反馈at one,s convenience在某人方便,的时候,2.出彩结构,It is a great honor to be on behalf of our school to inform you that we,ll invite you to see an Eng-,lish short film named,Growing,Together,which is about the development of our school.(that引导宾,语从句;which引导非限制性定语从句),Writing 3,(2018北京,第一节),假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文化感兴,趣,计划明年来北京上大学。他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回邮件,内容包括:,1.表示欢迎;,2.推荐他上哪所大学;,3.建议他做哪些准备工作。,注意,:1.,词数不少于,50;,2.,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。,Dear,Jim,Yours,Li,Hua,答案,写作提示,1.,仔细审题,注意交际用语,;,2.,要点齐全,合理添加细节,;,3.,注意词句的使用,关注文章的整体性。,One possible version:,Dear,Jim,I,m happy to hear from you. Welcome to Beijing for your study!,Since you have long been interested in Chinese culture, I think Beijing Language and Culture Uni-,versity is an ideal place for you. The university is known for its language and culture courses in-,tended for international students. I believe you will have a rewarding experience there.,To be frank, studying for a degree in a different culture is never easy. You,d better learn some ba-,sic Chinese before you come. That way, you may adjust yourself to the life here in Beijing soon.,If you have any other questions, do let me know.,Yours,Li,Hua,精彩语句,1.精美词汇,ideal,adj,.理想的rewarding,adj,.值得做的,2.出彩结构,The university is known for its language and culture courses intended for international students.(非,谓语动词作定语),Writing 4(2018北京,第二节),假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,写一篇英文周记,记述你们上,周接待外国学生,带领他们体验中国茶文化的全过程。,注意:词数不少于60。,答案,写作提示,1.,介绍、参观,;,2.,演示、观看,;,3.,指导、体验,;,4.,合影。,One possible version:,Last week, a group of international students visited our school. To help them better understand our,tea-drinking culture, we took them to the tea room in our school, where I introduced the history of,tea-making and different kinds of tea and so on. All the international students were quite interested,in my introduction.,Then I showed them how to make tea. I sat at a table, explaining every step of the process while,making tea. All of them were amazed. They couldn,t wait to have a try for themselves.,Soon the tea room became lively with every international student trying to make their own tea. We,had a lot of fun, practicing, and enjoying the tea.,In the end, we took a group photo, with cups or tea in our hands, to record this unforgettable expe-,rience.,精彩语句,1.精美词汇,tea-drinking culture饮茶文化have a try尝试一下,试试看lively,adj,.生气勃勃的;活跃热情的,2.出彩结构,(1)To help them better understand our tea-drinking culture, we took them to the tea room in our,school, where I introduced the history of tea-making and different kinds of tea and so on.(where引,导定语从句),(2)I sat at a table, explaining every step of the process while making tea.(现在分词短语作状语),(3)In the end, we took a group photo, with cups or tea in our hands, to record this unforgettable ex-,perience.(with cups or tea in our hands,为插入语,),Writing 5,(2018天津改编),假设你是晨光中学的机器人兴趣小组组长李津,你的美国朋友Chris就读于天津某国际学校,他,曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖。你打算邀请他加入你的团队,参加即将于7月底在天津举行的世,界青少年机器人技能竞赛。请根据以下提示代表兴趣小组给他写一封电子邮件。,(1)比赛的时间、地点;,(2)邀请他的原因;,(3)训练计划将发送其邮箱,请他提出建议。,注意:,(1)词数不少于80;,(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;,(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。,参考词汇:,世界青少年机器人技能竞赛the World Adolescent Robotics Competition,Dear Chris,I have good news to tell you.,I,m looking forward to your reply.,Yours,Li Jin,答案,写作提示,1.,本文是一封电子邮件,主要人称为第一人称和第二人称,主体时态为一般现在时和一般将来时。,2.,文章要点,:,说明写邮件的目的,;,介绍比赛的时间和地点,;,邀请他的原因,;,告知,Chris,训练计划将发,送到他的邮箱并请他提出自己的建议。,One possible version:,Dear Chris,I have good news to tell you.,The World Adolescent Robotics Competition is scheduled to be held,at the end of July in Tianjin. I,m writing to invite you to join our team to prepare for it.,As far as I know, you once won a prize in a robotics competition. Therefore, I think not only will it,be a golden opportunity for you to show your great talent, but also you can offer us guidance,which is of great significance for us to perform well in the coming competition. Our training plan,is to be sent to your e-mail box. I would appreciate it if you could give us your personal advice af-,ter reading it.,I,m looking forward to your reply.,Yours,Li Jin,精彩语句,1.精美词汇,schedule,v,. 安排;计划a golden opportunity 良机significance,n,. 重要性,2.出彩结构,Therefore, I think not only will it be a golden opportunity for you to show your great talent, but al-,so you can offer us guidance, which is of great significance for us to perform well in the coming,competition. (倒装句+非限制性定语从句),Writing 6,(2017,课标全国,改编,),假定你是李华,正在教你的英国朋友,Leslie,学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内,容包括,:,1.,时间和地点,;,2.,内容,:,学习唐诗,;,3.课前准备:简要了解唐朝的历史。,注意:,1.词数80左右;,2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。,答案,写作提示,1.,本文为电子邮件,属于书信类。人称为第一人称,写作时态以一般将来时为主体时态。,2.,内容要点,:,上课的时间和地点,; ,上课的内容,:,学习唐诗,;,课前要求,:,简要了解唐朝的历史。,One possible version:,Dear Leslie,I am writing to inform you of our course schedule of our next class, which is about poetry of the,Tang Dynasty. We will have it this Friday, in Classroom 602, Building 6. In order to learn it better,you need to do some preparations before the next class.,At first, please read some materials about poetry of the Tang Dynasty, which plays a significant,role in our literature. Besides, you,d better read about the history of Tang Dynasty, since it will be,of great benefit for you to understand the background of the poems.,You are so diligent and I am glad to teach you. I sincerely look forward to our next class and your reply.,Yours,Li Hua,精彩语句,1.精美词汇,extremely,adv,.极其play a role in在,起作用,2.出彩结构,At first, please read some materials about poetry of the Tang Dynasty, which plays an extremely,significant role in our literature.(which引导非限制性定语从句),Writing 7,(2017,课标全国,改编,),假定你是李华,想邀请外教,Henry,一起参观中国剪纸,(paper-cutting),艺术展。请给他写封邮件,内容包括,:,1.,展览时间、地点,;,2.展览内容。,注意:1.词数80左右;,2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。,答案,写作提示,1.,本文为提纲式作文,体裁为书信。人称以第一人称和第三人称为主,以一般现在时和一般将,来时为主体时态。,2.,文章要点,:,1),展览时间、地点,;,2),展览内容,:,中国传统剪纸艺术的历史和作品。,One possible version:,Dear Henry,I,m Li Hua, one of your students. I,m writing to invite you to visit the paper-cutting exhibition.,Paper-cutting is one of Chinese traditions and I,m sure you will like it.,The exhibition will be held in the local museum next Saturday. Some famous Chinese artists will,perform on that day. Meanwhile, some beautiful paper-cutting works, collected from all over the,country, will be exhibited there. It will be a feast. If you like, you can also join in paper-cutting. I,m sure it will be an unforgettable experience for you.,I,m looking forward to hearing from you.,Yours,Li Hua,精彩语句,1.精美词汇,exhibition,n,.展览unforgettable,adj,.难忘的,2.出彩结构,If you like, you can also join in.(if引导条件状语从句),Writing 8,(2017,课标全国,改编,),假定你是李华。你所在的校乒乓球队正在招收新队员。请给你的留学生朋友,Eric,写封邮件邀,请他加入,内容包括,:,1.,球队活动,;,2.,报名方式及截止日期。,注意,:,1.,词数,80,左右,;,2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。,答案,写作提示,1.,本文为提纲类作文。人称应以第一、二人称为主,时态以一般现在时、一般将来时为主。,2.,写作要点,:,导入话题,:,鉴于,Eric,对乒乓球运动的兴趣,特告知他校乒乓球队招收新队员的消,息,;,介绍球队活动,可从日常训练安排以及比赛活动入手,;,告知,Eric,报名方式,提醒他务必在,截止日期前完成报名。,One possible version:,Dear Eric,I,m writing to invite you to join our school table tennis team. I have been told that our school team,is recruiting new members. Knowing that you are keen on playing table tennis, I wonder if you,d,like to join.,Team members need to receive training after school every day and are often offered opportunities,to watch table tennis competitions, which will benefit us most. If you are interested in it, you can,visit the school website to sign up. The closing date is 15th June.,I hope to meet you in the school team.,Yours,Li Hua,精彩语句,1.精美词汇,recruit,v,.吸收;招募be keen on酷爱,对,着迷,2.出彩结构,Knowing that you are.I wonder if.(现在分词短语中that引导宾语从句;wonder后的if引导宾语,从句),Writing 9(2017北京,第一节改编),你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行,有两条线路可以选择:“长江之行”或,者“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信,内容包括:,1.你建议的线路;,2.你的理由;,3.你的祝愿。,注意:1.词数80左右;,2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。,Dear,Jim,Yours,Li,Hua,答案,写作提示,1.本文为提纲类作文。体裁为应用文中的书信。时态以一般现在时为主。,2.先介绍建议的旅游线路,再陈述理由,最后表达祝愿。,One possible version:,Dear,Jim,I,m happy to receive your letter and know you,re coming to China.,Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai, both are highly recommended. Personally, I,prefer the tour along the Yangtze, the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civi-,lization, from which you can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people. Moreover,the scenery along the river is amazing, with many well-known sightseeing spots. That,s why I,think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.,Hope you,ll have a good time in China.,Yours,Li,Hua,精彩语句,1.精美词汇,recommend,v,.推荐civilization,n,.文明,2.出彩结构,That,s why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.(why引导表语从句),Writing 10,(2017天津改编),假设你是李津,与你以前的外籍教师Mrs. Green一直保持联系。近日她来信询问你的近况,请,根据以下提示给她回复一封邮件。,(1)简要介绍自己的学习和生活;,(2)告知你已成为八月底在津举办的第十三届全运会的志愿者,并介绍为此所做的准备(如深入,了解天津等);,(3)希望她有机会重访天津。,注意:,(1)词数80左右;,(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;,(3)开头已给出,不计入总词数。,参考词汇:第十三届全运会the 13th National Games,Dear Mrs. Green,I,m so glad to hear from you.,Yours,Li Jin,答案,写作提示,1.,本文为提纲式作文,体裁为应用文。人称以第一人称为主,时态以一般现在时为主。,2.,写作要点,:,(1),介绍自己的学习和生活,;,(2),告诉,Mrs. Green,你已成为第十三届全运会的志愿者,并介绍你为此所做的准备,;,(3),希望,Mrs. Green,重访天津。,One possible version:,Dear Mrs. Green,I,m so glad to hear from you.,With the college entrance examination drawing near, I am engaged,in preparing for it. Meanwhile, I pay close attention to the 13th National Games to be held in Tian-,jin at the end of August. I,m glad to tell you that I have become a volunteer for it and I have made,a lot of preparations for it. After class, I often surf the Internet to get more information about the,history and culture of Tianjin. Practicing my oral English is also becoming my schedule.,I do hope you can return to Tianjin as soon as possible.,Yours,Li Jin,精彩语句,1.,精美词汇,performance,n,.,成绩,be engaged in,忙于,2.,出彩结构,With the college entrance examination drawing near, I am engaged in preparing for it.(with,复合结构,),Writing 11,(2017,北京,第二节改编,),假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,写一篇英文周记,记录毕业,前夕你们制作以“感恩母校”为主题的毕业纪念视频的全过程。,注意,:,词数,80,左右。,提示词,:,视频,video,答案,写作提示,1.,本文应以第一人称为主,时态以一般过去时为主。,2.,制作毕业纪念视频的全过程应该包括讨论分工、收集素材、编辑制作以及放映视频四个方面。,One possible version:,Graduation finally came. My classmates and I decided to do something. After a heated discus-,sion, we agreed on making a video to record our experiences at school.,Material collecting took us a whole week, during which we interviewed our teachers and took pic-,tures of every aspect of school life. The editing part after that was tough. We debated over what to,put into the video. Some compromises were unavoidable, but the video turned out perfect. Several,days later, when the video was played on the graduation ceremony, it was well received. The stu-,dents and teachers shared a great time. That surely gave us a great sense of achievement.,精彩语句,1.,精美词汇,experience,n,.,经历,aspect,n,.,方面,2.,出彩结构,We debated over what to put into the video.(,疑问词,+,不定式结构,),2.展览时间;,3.投稿邮箱:,intlphotoshow,。,注意:,1.词数80左右;,2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。,Writing 12,(2016,课标全国,改编,),假定你是李华,你校摄影俱乐部,(photography club),将举办国际中学生摄影展。请给你的英国,朋友,Peter,写封信,请他提供作品。信的内容包括,:,1.,主题,:,环境保护,;,答案,写作提示,1.本文属于应用文,按照要求写一封书信,应使用第一人称。基本时态用一般现在时。,2.本文要点:1)主题:环境保护;2)展览时间;3)投稿邮箱。,One possible version:,Dear Peter,Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School Student Photography,Show. The theme of the show is environmental protection. It will start from June 15th and last for,three weeks. I know you take good pictures and you,ve always wanted to do something for envi-,ronmental protection. I remember you showed me some photos on that theme the last time you vis-,ited our school.,This is surely a good chance for more people to see them.,If you want to join, you,can send your photos to,intlphotoshow.,Hope to hear from you soon.,Yours,Li Hua,Writing 13,(2016北京,第二节改编),假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华。你班同学参加了学校的“地球日”系列活动。请,按照以下四幅图的先后顺序,以“Actions for a Greener Earth”为题,给校刊“英语角”写一篇,英文稿件,介绍活动的全过程。,注意:词数80左右。,提示词:地球日Earth Day,答案,写作提示,1.本文属于图表类作文,主体时态应为一般过去时。,2.文章要点是对同学们参加学校“地球日”系列活动的介绍。,(1)第一段:获知活动信息;,(2)第二段:介绍整个活动过程,即具体所做的事情。主要是对废旧物品进行再利用,并把物品,赠送给了老人和孩子们;,(3)第三段:总结。,One possible version:,A week before Earth Day, posters were put up around our school, calling upon us to join in the ac-,tions for a greener earth.,Our class came up with the idea to make better use of used materials.,We brought to our classroom,worn-out clothes, pieces of cardboard and empty plastic bottles, and turned those into dolls, hand-,bags, tissue
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