高中英语建议信写作课件

书书面表达面表达专专题题（三）（三）-建建议议信信How to write a letter for advice.书面表达专题（三）-建议信Howtowritea1如何算是一篇好文章？如何算是一篇好文章？覆盖了所有的要点覆盖了所有的要点应应用了用了较较多的多的语语法法结结构和构和词汇词汇有效地使用了有效地使用了语语句句间间的的连连接成接成分，使全文分，使全文结结构构紧紧凑，行文凑，行文连贯连贯，条理清楚。条理清楚。要要点点全全词汇词汇,句型句型（高（高级级）和）和语语法法多多样样化（化（较较复复杂杂）语语言地道言地道连连接接词词.如何算是一篇好文章？要点全词汇,句型（高级）和语法多样化2写作攻略写作攻略1.建议信是向收信人对某事提出写信人的建议和忠告。2建议信有可能是写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点；也可能是写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。3建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建议的理由，提出的理由要入情入理，语气一定要礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。.写作攻略.3建议信写作的注意事项：a这类文章一定要符合英语信件的基本格式。b这类文章的基本时态多用一般现在时和一般将来时。.建议信写作的注意事项：.4篇章结构及内容：首段：表明写作意图。陈述事由，简单介绍自己，注意语气。主体段落：应该首先肯定对方的优点，然后再写需要改进的地方或针对具体情况提出具体建议或忠告。千万注意不要让别人以为你是在投诉，而不是提建议。结尾段：对提出的建议进行总结，要注意有礼貌使读者容易接受。注意事注意事项项：语语言要委婉、礼貌，言要委婉、礼貌，顾顾及及对对方感受。方感受。.篇章结构及内容：.5常用套常用套语语A建建议议信开信开头头常用句式常用句式(照照应应材料材料,表明写作意表明写作意图图)1AfterIreadyourletterinthenewspaper,Iamsorrytoknowthat2Iamverygladtohearthatyouwantto3Iknowyouhavetroubleinafterreadingyourletter4.Iamwritingtoyouforthepurposeof-5.YouhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardtoandIlltrytomakesomeconductivesuggestions.常用套语A建议信开头常用句式(照应材料,表明写作意图).6B.表达建表达建议议（body）1.first，firstly，secondlythen，after that，in the endfinallyMeanwhile,whats more2.I think it would be more beneficial if you could 3.I would like to suggest/recommend that4.If I were you,I would5.In my opinion,it would be wise to take the following action.6.When it comes to such a situation,I would like to suggest that you can.B.表达建议（body）.7C.建建议议信信结结尾常用句式尾常用句式1.Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceintoaccount/consideration.2.Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals/suggestionspractical/useful/helpful.3.Iwillbemorethanhappytoseeimprovementsinthisregard.4.Ifeelthatitwouldbebeneficialifyousticktoit.5.Intheend,Iwillbegladifyoufindmysuggestionsuseful.C.建议信结尾常用句式1.Ibelieveyouw8假假如如你你叫叫孙孙军军，是是恩恩施施高高中中的的学学生生，要要给给市市长长写写一一封封信信，反反映映学学校校门门前前交交通通拥拥挤挤现现象象，包包括括以下要点：以下要点：参考参考词汇词汇:穿行穿行threadonesway天天桥桥overpass问题问题建建议议学学校校和和一一所所小小学学毗毗邻邻，对对着着大大街街，高高峰峰期期交交通通繁繁忙忙；加加之之孩孩子子小小,家家长长接接送送。交交通通更更拥拥挤挤；学学生生过过街街在在车车辆辆中中穿行危穿行危险险。政政府府应应采采取取措措施施,如修天如修天桥桥等。等。.假如你叫孙军，是恩施高中的学生，要给市长写一封信，反映学校门9第一步：第一步：审题审题养成重养成重视审题视审题的的习惯习惯。虽然基础写作题是半封闭性的，但审题仍然十分重要。现以样题为例，谈谈如何审题：思考的思考的问题问题样题样题分析分析第几人称？（第几人称？（person）文章的文章的题题材是什么？材是什么？要写的文章主要写的文章主题题是什么是什么(topic)怎怎样样安排信息点的安排信息点的顺顺序？序？(order)动动作是什么作是什么时时候候发发生的？生的？(时态时态)(when)第一人称第一人称一封信一封信建建议议政府采取措施舒政府采取措施舒缓缓交交通通拥挤拥挤的状况的状况说说理理逻辑逻辑性性一般一般现现在在时时.第一步：审题思考的问题样题分析第几人称？（person）文章10适当运用适当运用模板模板.适当运用模板.11DearBob,Imgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowto(引出主引出主题题).Here are a few suggestions.First,it isimportantto.Then,italsohelpsto.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideato.Youcanalso.(此三句此三句不同不同的句式提出建的句式提出建议议)Asto,Isuggest(有有时时根根据据需需要要具具体体到到某某一一反反面面).Inaddition,(其其他他建建议议).Imsure(预预测测可可能能的的结结果果，给给对对方方以以行行动动的信心和决心的信心和决心).Imlookingforwardto(表达愿望表达愿望).Sincerelyyours,LiHua.DearBob,.12Dear_,Youhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardto_,andIlltrytomakesomeconductivesuggestionshere.Inmyhumbleopinion(以以我我拙拙见见),youwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions:_.IhopeyoullfindtheseproposalsusefulandIwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyoutofurtherdetails.Goodluckwithyou.Yours,XXX.Dear_,.13第二步：搜索相关第二步：搜索相关词组词组或句型或句型问题建议学学校校和和一一所所小小学学毗毗邻邻，对对着着大大街街，高高峰峰期期交交通通繁繁忙忙；加加之之孩孩子子小小,家家长长接接送送。交交通通更更拥拥挤挤；学学生生过过街街在在车车辆辆中中穿行危穿行危险险。政政府府应应采采取取措措施施,如修天如修天桥桥等。等。.第二步：搜索相关词组或句型问题建议学校和一所小学毗邻，对着14学校与一所小学毗学校与一所小学毗邻邻,对对着大街着大街stand next to primary face/be faced with the main streetTheresaprimaryschoolnearourschool,andbothschoolsfacethemainstreet.Ourschoolstandsnexttoaprimaryschool,facedwith/facingthemainstreet.推荐句型：推荐句型：There be+并列句并列句非非谓语结谓语结构构Standingnexttoaprimaryschool,ourschoolisfacedwith/facesthemainstreet.学校与一所小学毗邻,对着大街standnextto15润润色色小建小建议议Nexttoaprimaryschool将介将介词词短短语语提前（全倒装）提前（全倒装）stands/lies/isourschool,facedwith/facingamainstreet.可将可将stand next to替替换为换为高高级词汇级词汇/短短语语be located next to(near/beside/by)border/adjoin vt.be adjacent to与与毗毗邻邻在在对对面面 be opposite to.润色小建议Nexttoaprimaryschool将16 The traffic is busy during the rush hours.高峰期交通繁忙高峰期交通繁忙.traffic.during the rush hoursDuring the rush hours,there are so many cars and buses going on the road thatDuring the rush hours,there is a lot of traffic.so.thatwith结结构构With so many cars and buses going on the road,.Thetrafficisbusyduring17润润色色小建小建议议“高峰期高峰期”可意可意译译:atpeaktime，alargecurrentofcarsandpeople“交通繁忙交通繁忙”可可译为译为:trafficjamcongestion交通堵塞交通堵塞bechokeupwithbecrammedwith被被堵塞堵塞/塞塞满满.润色小建议“高峰期”可意译:atpeaktime，“交通18加之孩子小加之孩子小,家家长长接送接送,交通更交通更拥挤拥挤 sendto,fetch.,非非谓语结谓语结构构.Manyparentssendtheiryoungchildrentoschoolandfetchthemhome,whichmakesthetrafficheavier.Manyparentssendtheiryoungchildrentoschoolandfetchthemhome,makingthetrafficheavier.,which.加之孩子小,家长接送,交通更拥挤sendto19加之孩子小，家加之孩子小，家长长接送，交通更接送，交通更拥挤拥挤Whats more,pick up.make.Tomakethingsworse/whatsworse,manyparentscomingtopickuptheirchildrenmakethestreetmorecrowded.Inaddition/Additionally,manyparentssendtheiryoungchildrentoschoolandfetchthemhome,whichmakesthetrafficheavier.Whatsmore,parentsoftenattendtheirkidstoschool,resultinginmoreserioustrafficjams.Whatmakesthingsworseisthatchildrenhavetobepickedupbytheirparentsowingtotheiryoungage.加之孩子小，家长接送，交通更拥挤.20making the situation more serious.making the traffic heavier可意可意译为译为：so.that.=tootoThechildrenaresoyoungthatparentshavetosendthemtoschoolandfetchthemhome,whichmakes/makingthetrafficheavier.making 可替可替换为换为：causing,leading to,resulting in“sendfetch”可替可替换为换为短短语语：pick up润润色色小建小建议议.makingthesituationmoreseri21 学生学生过过街在街在车辆车辆中穿行危中穿行危险险thread ones way，when doingItisdangerousforthestudentstothreadtheirwayamongbusesandcarswhencrossingtheroad.固定句型固定句型Itis+adj.fortodo.学生过街在车辆中穿行221.Studentsareriskingtheirlivestothreadtheirwayamongcars.润润色色小建小建议议2.Someareexposedtodangerwhencrossingtheocean/seaofcars.灵活运用其它的短灵活运用其它的短语进语进行意行意译译：适当增加形容适当增加形容词词和副和副词词：itisextremelydangerous，itisofgreat/tremendousdanger.Studentsareriskingtheirliv23政府政府应应采取措施采取措施,如修天如修天桥桥等。等。vsuggest/suggestion,take steps/measures/action to do such asMy suggestion is that the government should表表语语从句从句固定句型固定句型 It is high time that(虚虚拟语拟语气气)It is high time that relevant authorities took some measures like buildingI suggest that the government should take steps such as building an overpass.简单简单句句.政府应采取措施,如修天桥等。suggest/suggesti241.Inordertoreleasethestressoftrafficproblems,润润色色小建小建议议2.Aimedatsolvingtheseproblems,thegovernmentshouldA.适当添加一些意思（适当添加一些意思（过过渡句）渡句）Thegovernmentshouldpaymoreattentiontoitandtrytosolveit.B.语义语义的意的意译译3.Seeingthesematters,neverwillIstopurgingourgovernmenttotakesomemeasures.Forthesakeofimprovingthequalityoftraffic,itissignificanttobuildC.添加形容添加形容词词和副和副词词Istronglysuggest,active/effectivemeasures.1.Inordertoreleasethestr25第三步第三步.连连句成文句成文但要注意：篇章的但要注意：篇章的连贯连贯性性Nexttoaprimaryschoolstandsourschool,facingamainstreet._,itscrammedwithcarsduringtherushhour._childrenhavetobepickedupbytheirparentsowingtotheiryoungage._,itsofgreatdangerforthestudentstogothroughthetraffic._,itishightimethatrelevantauthoritiestooksomemeasureslikebuildinganoverpass.A.As a consequence B.According to the phenomenon stated above C.When it comes to traffic jamsD.What makes things worse is that A.C.D.B.第三步.连句成文但要注意：篇章的连贯性Nexttoa26反面范例反面范例.反面范例.27反面范例反面范例.反面范例.28反面范例反面范例.反面范例.29反面范例反面范例.反面范例.30不推荐字体不推荐字体.不推荐字体.31优优秀作文范例秀作文范例1优优点：考生能灵活地点：考生能灵活地处处理各个信息点，大量运用理各个信息点，大量运用非非谓语谓语，介，介词词短短语语，从句，从句，连词连词等来提亮句子，等来提亮句子，使得文章更彰使得文章更彰显显个性和个性和语语言功底。言功底。.优秀作文范例1优点：考生能灵活地处理各个信息点，大量运用非谓32优优秀作文范例秀作文范例2优优点：考生的点：考生的书书面整面整洁洁，字体美，字体美观观，运用，运用there be句型，介句型，介词词短短语语，从句，非，从句，非谓语谓语，套用句式等来，套用句式等来提亮句子，使得文章更彰提亮句子，使得文章更彰显显内涵和内涵和语语言功底。言功底。.优秀作文范例2优点：考生的书面整洁，字体美观，运用there33优优秀作文范例秀作文范例3优优点：考生运用倒装句，点：考生运用倒装句，so that句式，精彩的句式，精彩的表达以及虚表达以及虚拟语拟语气等来提亮句子，使得文章更彰气等来提亮句子，使得文章更彰显显内涵和内涵和语语言功底。言功底。.优秀作文范例3优点：考生运用倒装句，sothat句式，34优优秀作文范例秀作文范例4优优点：点：该该考生最大的特色是运用了大量的高考生最大的特色是运用了大量的高级词汇级词汇等来提亮句子，使得文章更彰等来提亮句子，使得文章更彰显显深厚的深厚的语语言底言底蕴蕴。.优秀作文范例4优点：该考生最大的特色是运用了大量的高级词汇等35.36优优秀作文范例秀作文范例5.优秀作文范例5.37优优秀作文范例秀作文范例6.优秀作文范例6.38Congestion n.阻塞阻塞,拥挤拥挤,充血充血.Congestionn.阻塞,拥挤,充血.39.40适当运用适当运用模板模板.适当运用模板.41Dear_,You have asked me for my advice withregard to _,and Ill try to make someconductivesuggestionshere.Inmyhumbleopinion(依依我我拙拙见见),youwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions:_.I hope youll find these proposals usefuland I would be ready to discuss this matterwithyoutofurtherdetails.Goodluckwithyou.Yours,XXX.Dear_,.42DearBob,Imgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowto(引出主引出主题题).Here are a few suggestions.First,it isimportantto.Then,italsohelpsto.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideato.Youcanalso.(此三句此三句不同不同的句式提出建的句式提出建议议)Asto,Isuggest(有有时时根根据据需需要要具具体体到到某某一一反反面面).Inaddition,(其其他他建建议议).Imsure(预预测测可可能能的的结结果果，给给对对方方以以行行动动的信心和决心的信心和决心).Imlookingforwardto(表达愿望表达愿望).Sincerelyyours,LiHua.DearBob,.43 假定你是李假定你是李华华，你的英国朋友，你的英国朋友PeterPeter来信向你咨来信向你咨询询如何才能学好中文。如何才能学好中文。请请你根据下列要点写回信。你根据下列要点写回信。要点：要点：参加中文学参加中文学习习班；班；看中文看中文书书刊、刊、电视电视；学唱中文歌曲；学唱中文歌曲；交中国朋友。交中国朋友。注意：可适当增加注意：可适当增加细节细节，以使行文，以使行文连贯连贯；开；开头语头语已已给给出。出。Dear Peter,Dear Peter,Im glad to receive your letter asking for Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice no how to learn Chinese well._ my advice no how to learn Chinese well._ _Best wishes,Best wishes,Li HuaLi Hua.假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学44DearPeter,ImgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.Hereareafewsuggestions.First,itisimportanttotakeaChinesecourse,asyoullbeabletolearnfromtheteachersandpracticewithyourfellowstudents.Then,italsohelpstowatchTVandreadbooks,newspapers,andmagazines in Chinese whenever possible.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideatolearnandsingChinesesongs,becausebydoingsoyoulllearnandrememberChinesewordsmoreeasily.Inaddition,YoucanalsomakemoreChinesefriends.TheywilltellyoualotaboutChinaandhelpyoulearnChinese.TrywritingtomeinChinesenexttime.Bestwishes,LiHua.DearPeter,.45