中考英语书面表达高分技巧课件

中考英语书面表达高分秘诀中考英语书面表达高分秘诀1三段四步法“美文秀秀”写作建议目录目录目录目录三段四步法“美文秀秀”写作建议目录2一三段四步法一三段四步法3评分标准评分标准评分标准评分标准知己知彼，百战不殆知己知彼，百战不殆知己知彼，百战不殆知己知彼，百战不殆内容审题清晰，紧扣提示语，不能偏题、离题结构分段明显，层次清晰，运用过渡词和过渡句，有严密的逻辑结构语言句式规范，表达准确，恰当、流畅地使用了一些高级句式一档文：17-20分：写出全部内容要点，层次清楚、语言流畅，有句式变化，有复杂结构（至少2-3个），基本无语法错误（1-2个错误），或有少量由于使用复杂结构而引起的语法或拼写错误，但不影响意义理解二档文：13-16分：基本写出全部内容要点，层次清楚、语言流畅，有少量语法错误（3-4个错误）。三档文：9-12分：写出大部分内容要点，语言基本通顺，有一些语法和拼写错误，基本不影响意思表达。四档文：5-8分：写出一半左右有关内容要点，语言不太通顺，语法结构单调、错误较多，只有少数句子可读，影响理解。五档文：0-4分：词不达意，不知所云；只有2-3个短语可读。评分标准知己知彼，百战不殆内容审题清晰，紧扣提示语，不能偏4三段论三段论三段论三段论三段论5四步走四步走四步走四步走假定你是苏华，你最近认识的英国笔友David给你发了一封电子邮件，想了解你初中三年来在学习和生活方面的一些收获、困惑和感受。请认真阅读下面的邮件，根据信中的内容及你的实际用英语回复。注意：1.词数90左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数；2.回复须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使全文连贯、通顺；3.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。DearDavid，ThankyousomuchforyouremailImveryhappytotellyouaboutmyschoollife_ Howaboutyourschoollife？WritetomesoonBestwishes，SuHuaTo：suhuachinacomFrom：davidsmithbritaincomSubject：SchoollifeDearSuHua，GladtohearyouregraduatingfromjuniorhighIminterestedinhowyoufeelaboutthosethreeyearsofschoollifeWouldyoupleasetellmethefollowingthings.Whatdoyoulikebestaboutyourschoollife？Whatsthebiggestproblemasajuniorstudent？Whohashelpedyoumost？Andwhy？Doyouenjoyyourschoollife？Whyorwhynot？IlookforwardtohearingfromyousoonAllthebest，David四步走假定你是苏华，你最近认识的英国笔友David给你发了一6四步走四步走四步走四步走审时态审人称审体裁审主题步骤一：速审题审内容要点应用文(电子邮件)主体部分为说明文校园生活以一般现在时为主以第一人称为主收获、困惑、感恩、感受四步走审时态审人称审体裁审主题步骤一：速审题审内容要点应用文7写句子列提纲步骤二：打草稿 Ive made quite a few friends by joining the clubI t s a n e x c e l l e n t c h a n c e t o l e a r n t e a m s p i r i tT h e b i g g e s t o n e i s h o w t o a c h i e v e a b a l a n c e b e t w e e n m y s c h o o l w o r k a n d m y h o b b i e sS h e i s t h e p e r s o n w h o /t h a t h a s h e l p e d m e m o s t i n j u n i o r h i g h I t s c o l o r f u l a n d m e a n i n g f u l中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件写句子列提纲步骤二：打草稿 Ive made quite 8(1)在连句成篇时，前后句之间为因果关系，可以用because或so来连接。(2)在补充说明原因时，可以使用besides或whats more来表达语义的引申。(3)在连句成篇时，前后句句意转折，可以使用however来连接。(4)总结时，可以使用all in all或in short，这样对整个上文能起到归纳和概括的作用。步骤三：巧衔接中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件(1)在连句成篇时，前后句之间为因果关系，可以用becaus9步骤四：成篇章DearDavid，ThankyousomuchforyouremailImveryhappytotellyouaboutmyschoollife（开篇点题）IliketheFootballClubbestbecauseIvemadequiteafewfriendsbyjoiningtheclubMoreover，itsanexcellentchancetolearnteamspiritHowever，IvealsometsomeproblemsoverthethreeyearsThebiggestoneishowtoachieveabalancebetweenmyschoolworkandmyhobbiesWheneverIamingreatneed，myEnglishteacheralwayscomestohelpme【高分句型一】Sheisthepersonwhohashelpedmemostinthejuniorhighschool【高分句型二】（介绍我的学校生活）Inshort，Ienjoymyschoollifebecauseitscolourfulandmeaningful（总结全文）Howaboutyourschoollife？WritetomesoonBestwishes，SuHua中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件步骤四：成篇章Dear David，中考英语书面表达高分技巧101.速审题2.打草稿3.巧衔接4.成篇章中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件1.速审题2.打草稿3.巧衔接4.成篇章中考英语书面表达高分11缺少一个内容要点，文章直接降到第三档内容要点名词单复数单词拼写错误动词时态语态主谓一致标点符号综合性错误过于简单的结构/词汇要试着变化变换与美颜检查中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件缺少一个内容要点，文章直接降到第三档 内容要点名词单复数综合12二“美文秀秀”中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件二“美文秀秀”中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件中考英语书面13中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件中考英语书面表达高分技巧p14Howtobeautifyacomposition？中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件How to beautify 中考英语书面表达高分技巧pp15AsfarasImconcerned,astrictteacherisgoodforus.WhenIwasinmiddleschool,IwastoolazyandIeven didnt want to remember English words.However,myEnglishteacherwasverystrictwithus.She asked us to dictate new words and practisereading articles every day.In the end,we all gothighmarksinthefinalexam.Weweresohappy.Howimportantastrictteacheris!其实还不错啦，就是有点普通！没啥语法错误，凑合吧！开头写的还不错，就是没啥亮点！15中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件 As far as Im concerned,16磨皮中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件磨皮中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件中考英语书面表达高分技17秘诀秘诀1:1:磨磨“字词字词”begoodfor-behelpfultovery-extremelyask-requirehappy-satisfied同意转换用稍难一点的词汇替代比较简单常见词汇AsfarasImconcerned,astrictteacherisgoodforus.When I was in middleschool,IwastoolazyanddidntwanttorememberEnglish words.However,my English teacher wasvery strict with us.Sheasked us to dictate newwordsandpractisereadingarticleseveryday.Intheend,weallgothighmarks in the final exam.Wewerehappy.How important a strictteacheris!AsfarasImconcerned,astrictteacherishelpfultous.WhenI wasin middleschool,I was too lazy anddidnt want to rememberEnglish words.However,myEnglishteacherwasextremelystrictwithus.Sherequiredusto dictate new words andpractisereadingarticleseveryday.In the end,we all gothighmarksinthefinalexam.Weweresatisfied.Howimportantastrictteacheris!中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件秘诀1:磨“字词”be good for-be he1801IthinkAsforme,IholdthebeliefthatPersonally,AsfarasIamconcerned,0203作文美化技巧作文美化技巧之之“磨字词磨字词”高大上单词的替换高大上单词的替换中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件01 I thinkAs for me,I hold th1901 try to do0203作文美化技巧作文美化技巧之之“磨字词磨字词”高大上单词的替换高大上单词的替换make efforts to do 努力做make every effort to do 努力做spare no effort to do 不遗余力的做中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件01 try to do0203作文美化技巧之“磨字词”m2001 wanttodo0203作文美化技巧作文美化技巧之之“磨字词磨字词”高大上单词的替换高大上单词的替换decidetodo=makeadecisiontododesiretodo=beeagertodomakeuponesmindtodo中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件01 want to do0203作文美化技巧之“磨字词”21easilyeasilywithoutanydifficultyhavenotroubledoinghavenodifficultydoinghavenoproblemdoing作文美化技巧作文美化技巧之之“磨字词磨字词”高大上单词的替换高大上单词的替换easilyeasilyattractivebeautifulcharming，catching中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件easilywithout any difficultyha221、Youcandevelopagoodhabiteasily.Youwillhavenotrouble/difficulty/problemindevelopingagoodhabit.Youcandevelopagoodhabitwithoutanydifficulty.2、IthinkweshouldtryourbesttolearnEnglishwell.AsfarasImconcerned,westudentsshouldmakeeveryeffortto/spare no effort to dolearnEnglishwell.作文美化技巧作文美化技巧之之“磨字词磨字词”高大上单词的替换高大上单词的替换中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件1、You can develop a good habit23修五官中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件修五官中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件中考英语书面表达高分24秘诀秘诀2:2:修修“句型句型”I”I结果状语从句：sothat铂金版WhenIwasinmiddleschool,IwassolazythatIdidntwanttorememberevenanewword.钻石版把时间状语从句变为分词作伴随状语Studyinginmiddleschool,IwassolazythatIdidntwanttorememberevenanewword.When I was in middleschool,I was too lazy anddidntwanttorememberEnglishwords.中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件秘诀2:修“句型”I结果状语从句：sothat铂金版W25秘诀秘诀2:2:修修“句型句型”II IISherequiredustodictatenewwordsandpractisereadingarticleseveryday.主动改被动Wewererequiredtodictatenewwordsandpractisereadingarticleseveryday.Itisrequiredthatsb.shoulddoItwasrequiredthatweshoulddictatenewwordsandpractisereadingarticleseveryday.铂金版钻石版中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件秘诀2:修“句型”IIShe required us to26秘诀秘诀2:2:修修“句型句型”IIIIIIIntheend,weallgethighmarksinthefinalexam.Weweresatisfied.宾语从句WeweresatisfiedthatWeweresatisfiedthatweallgothighmarksinthefinalexam.Muchtooursatisfaction,intheend,weallgothighmarksinthefinalexam.铂金版钻石版合成一句，把weweresatisfied.变成介词短语。中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件秘诀2:修“句型”IIIIn the end,we al27众所周知：Asisknowntoall,+句子魔鬼句型1毫无疑问：Thereisnodoubtthat2Itis+adj.+forsbtodosth.形式主语/sbfind/feel/makeit+adj.+todosth.形式宾语3之所以的原因是ThereasonwhyisthatThereasonwhyIkeepdoingexercisesisthatitcanmakemehealthy.4形容词最高级+完成时（haveeverknown/heard)Mr.LJisthebestteacherthatIhaveeverseen.5Nothingis+形容词比较级+thantoNothingismoreimportantthantoreceiveeducation.6秘诀秘诀3 3:创创“新句新句“中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件魔鬼句型12It is+adj.+for sb to 28顺承关系：foronething.fortheotherthing；ononehand.ontheotherhand；tobeginwith；lastbutnotleast递进关系：besides;moreover;furthermore;inaddition;aswell,whatsworse;whatsmore;转折关系：but;however;yet;instead因果关系：asaresult,therefore,sothat总结关系：onthewhole;inshort;inbrief；inaword；inconclusion;toconclude；ingeneral作文美化技巧之造句作文美化技巧之造句逻辑连贯性逻辑连贯性秘诀秘诀4 4:巧巧“逻辑逻辑”中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件顺承关系：for one thing.for the29秘诀秘诀5 5:熟熟“谚语谚语”1.Knowledgeispower.知识就是力量。2.Timeismoney.时间就是金钱。3.Practicemakesperfect.熟能生巧。4.Actionsspeaklouderthanwords.行动比言语更有说服力。（事实胜于雄辩）5.Itseasiersaidthandone.说起来容易做起来难。6.Itislovethatmakestheworldgoround.爱使世界更美好。7.Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.有志者事竟成。8.Wherethereislife，thereishope.有生命就有希望。（留得青山在，不怕没柴烧）9.Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.患难见真情。10.Experienceisthemotherofwisdom.实践出真知。作文美化技巧之造句作文美化技巧之造句善用谚语善用谚语中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件秘诀5:熟“谚语”Knowledge is power.30秘诀秘诀6 6:美美“框架框架”开头：As far as Im concerned,a strictteacherisgoodforus.结尾：Howimportantastrictteacheris!龙头凤尾凤尾结尾应该呼应主题，又不能与开头重复。总结词Inaword/Inconclusion/Therefore/Frommypointofview 一般可以用反义疑问句、感叹句或者祝愿句。Inaword,wereallyneedstrictteachersinourlearning,dontwe?Therefore,Ireallyhopethatwecanhavestrictteacherstohelpuslearnbetter.中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件秘诀6:美“框架”开头：As far as Im con31AsfarasImconcerned,astrictteacherisgoodforus.WhenIwasinmiddleschool,Iwastoolazyand IdidntwanttorememberEnglishwords.However,myEnglishteacherwasverystrictwithus.Sheaskedustodictatenewwordsandpractisereadingarticleseveryday.Intheend,we all got highmarksinthefinalexam.Weweresohappy.Howimportantastrictteacheris!AsfarasImconcerned,astrictteacherishelpfultous.WhenIwasinmiddleschool,I was too lazyandIdidntwanttorememberEnglishwords.However,myEnglishteacher was extremelystrictwithus.Sherequired us to dictatenewwordsandpractisereadingarticleseveryday.In the end,we allgot high marks in thefinalexam.Weweresatisfied.Howimportantastrictteacheris!AsfarasImconcerned,astrictteacherishelpfultous.Studyinginmiddleschool,IwassolazythatIeven didnt want torememberanewword.However,myEnglishteacherwasextremelystrictwithus.We were required todictate new words andpractise reading articlesevery day.Much to oursatisfaction,in the end,weallgothighmarksinthefinalexam.Therefore,I really hopethatwecanhavestrictteacherstohelpuslearnbetter.19中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件 As far as Im concerned,32step 2step 1step 3step 1 磨磨“字词字词”同意转换要活用稍难词汇替代简单常见词汇step 2 修修“五官五官”高级句型的使用step 3 创创“新句新句”短句变长句、从句要多用状语从句、名词性从句、定语从句、被动语态、it句型中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件step 2step 1step 3step 1 磨“字词33step 5step 4step 6step 4 巧巧“逻辑逻辑”逻辑连接词灵活运用step 5 熟熟“谚语谚语”开头、结尾step 6 美美“框架框架”每个话题谚语熟记中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件中考英语书面表达高分技巧ppt课件step 5step 4step 6step 4 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