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满分作文的标准：?包含所有要点（不能丢落要点）?围绕内容适当发挥，内容具体、丰富（不能限于回答问题或逐句翻译）?应用丰富的语言结构和词汇（表达不能过于单一）?用词准确、句子通顺、行文连贯、表达清楚（表达有层次，会用关联词，注意周围呼应）?没有语言错误（杜绝任何小错）.无“过”便是“功正确为先；流畅为好；文采为妙。注重衔接与连贯满分作文的标准：?包含所有要点（不能丢落要点）?围绕内容适写作:1.分析体裁2.选定人称3.时态：时态错误扣三分4.要点全5.字数要够6.书写一定要工整写作:1.分析体裁2.选定人称3.时态：时态错误扣三分书面表达要求：1）使用正确的时态2）使用正确的词语3）要有清晰的思路4）要有不同的句子5）要有一定的连接书面表达要求：1）使用正确的时态2）使用正确的词语3）要有清分析河北近分析河北近10年中考真题的书面表达可年中考真题的书面表达可知，针对“计划安排”这一话题，主要考查了介绍自己的周末计划。结合全国近年与“计划安排”这一话题相关的书面表达可知此话题主要涉及以下命题角度：活动时间及地点安排、具体活动内容安排等。具体活动内容安排等。命题探索分析河北近10年中考真题的书面表达可知，针对“计划安排”这一人教课本中涉及人教课本中涉及“计划安排计划安排”这个话题这个话题的单元有：的单元有：教材链接人教课本中涉及“计划安排”这个话题的单元有：教材链接英语课上，老师要求同学们介绍个人的周末计划，假设下面表格内容是你的计划提纲，请根据表格中提示的活动内容，写一篇发言稿，介绍你的周末计划，并在班上与同学交流。审主题：周末计划；审时态：一般将来时审文体：应用文审人称：第一人称英语课上，老师要求同学们介绍个人的周末计划，假设下面表格内容SaturdayWatch TVGo to a bookstore SundayVisit grandparents.要点1：周六的计划要点2：周天的计划SaturdayWatch TVGo to a bookst要求：(1)发言稿须包括三个所列要点和一个补发言稿须包括三个所列要点和一个补充要点；(2)发言稿中四个要点都要适当发挥；发言稿中四个要点都要适当发挥；(3)发言稿中不得涉及真实的人名、校名和地名；(4)词数：80个左右(已给出的开头和结尾不计入总词数)。Hi,everyone!Heres my plan for the weekend._要求：(1)发言稿须包括三个所列要点和一个补充要点；(2)发【教材好句范例】【教材好句范例】1.I would like to invite you to the opening of ournew libraryat No.9 High School.School.八(上)Unit 9P712.Im making some plans to work in an oldpeoples homethissummer.summer.八(下)Unit 2 P10时间地点安排时间地点安排【教材好句范例】1.Iwouldliketoinviteyo3.I want to put off my plan to work in an animalhospital until next summer.八(下)Unit 2 P124.My family is taking a trip to Wuhan at the endof this month to visit my aunt and uncle.八(上)Unit 9 P663.Iwanttoputoffmyplantoworkina【句子仿写】【句子仿写】1.我想邀请你和我们一起去公园野餐。_2.九月末的时候我将去上海旅行并拜访我的朋友们。I would like to invite you to go on a picnic in the park with us.Im taking a trip to Shanghai at the end of September to visit my friends.【句子仿写】1.我想邀请你和我们一起去公园野餐。_3.我们班正计划于六月十日在我们教室里举办一我们班正计划于六月十日在我们教室里举办一个聚会。个聚会。_4.我们想去田地里采摘水果和蔬菜。我们想去田地里采摘水果和蔬菜。Our class is making some plans to have a party in our classroom on the tenth day of June.We want to go to the fields to pick up fruit and vegetables.3.我们班正计划于六月十日在我们教室里举办一个聚会。_【教材好句范例】【教材好句范例】1.Mary decided to try out for a job at an after-school reading program lastyear.year.八(下)Unit 2P112.Our classis trying to comeup with someideasto cheer up sick children becausethey are oftensad.sad.八(下)Unit 2 P123.Im going to bring my new camera to take lotsof photos！具体计划内容具体计划内容【教材好句范例】1.Marydecidedtotryoutf【句子仿写】1.今年夏天我决定去海南度假。_2.我这周末将去市图书馆借一些关于科学的书。3.Frank正尽力在用一种友好的方式和他的同学们交流。_I decide to go to Hainan for vacation this summer.Im going to the city library to borrow some science books this weekend.Frank is trying to communicate with his classmates in a friendly way.【句子仿写】1.今年夏天我决定去海南度假。_【句子扩写范例】【句子扩写范例】1.I hopeto bea teacher.I hope to be a teacher.I would be nice tomy students.2.Maybe Ill bean airplane pilot.Maybe Ill be an airplanepilot.Thatwould bea cooljob.理想愿望理想愿望【句子扩写范例】1.Ihopetobeateacher.I3.SowhydoI wanttobea farmer?So why do I wantto be a farmer?Becauseit is really animportant job.Everyone needsfood,and Iwantto grow thebestcrops.3.SowhydoIwanttobeafarmer?Sow【句子扩写】1.I will work hard in the newyear.(扩写具体做法)_I will work hard in the new year.I will pay more attention to my study.I will spend more time with my family.I will share my joys and tears with them.【句子扩写】1.Iwillworkhardinthenewy3.I wanttobehealthierthanbefore.(扩写具体计划扩写具体计划)_4.I hopeto beadoctor.(扩写原因扩写原因)_I want to be healthier than before,so I will eat healthy food and do sports.I hope to be a doctor.Because it is a great job.Everyone needs healthy bodies,and I can help patients.3.IwanttobehealthierthanbeforeOur classaregoingto havea picnicin a park.We are supposed to arrive at the park at 8：00am.After arriving there,someof usare goingto _(活动1).At the sametime,afew classmates who are interestedin musiccan_(活动活动2).At noon,we will _(活动活动3).I nt hea f t er noon,wep l a nt o_(活动4)play games活动安排活动安排sing songs togethersit around and have a wonderful lunchcollect rubbish that is thrown away by careless visitorsOurclassaregoingtohaveapicniciHi,everyone!Heres my plan for the weekend.On Saturday morning,Im going towatch TV to relax myselfafter a long week s study.I am fond of watching comedies and cartoons.On Saturday afternoon,Im going to a bookstore to buy some books.Reading is one ofmy hobbies.I miss my grandparents somuch that Im going to visit them on Sunday.Ill help them do some housework.After I come back,Ill do my homework to get ready forthe next week.That s my weekend.How do you like it?Thank you!Hi,everyone!Heres my plan f(2019黄石改编黄石改编)假如你是李华，你的外国同假如你是李华，你的外国同学学Tom写了一封邮件询问你暑假的安排，请你根写了一封邮件询问你暑假的安排，请你根据所给提示和要求，给 Tom回封邮件。回封邮件。提示：(1)Read some useful books.(2)Help my parents do some housework.(3)Do exercise with some friends.写作练兵(2019黄石改编)假如你是李华，你的外国同学Tom写了一封?要求：(1)邮件须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。?(2)邮件中不得出现真实的人名，校名和地名。?(3)词数80个左右。(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)?要求：(1)邮件须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。?(2)邮Dear Tom，Im very happy to hear from you._写作练兵Now Im going to tell you my plans for the summer vacation.First of all,I want to read some meaningful and good books.Maybe these books will be helpful for my future study.Then,I want to spend more time helping my parents do some housework,such as Dear Tom，Im very happy to hea_I wonder how do you plan your vacation?Write to me soon.Yours，Li Hua写作练兵sweeping the floor or washing dishes after dinner.Finally,I plan to go to the park with my friends every morning or afternoon for exercise.Exercising can help me keep healthy._
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