产品说明书翻译课件

Translation of Product Instructions产品说明书翻译产品说明书翻译5/18/20241Business English TranslationTranslation of Product Instruc 单元目标单元目标一、了解商品说明书的结构（知识）二、理解商品说明书的特点（知识）三、识记常用词汇及表达法（知识）四、掌握常用句型翻译方法（知识能力）五、能够翻译简单的说明书（能力）5/18/20242Business English Translation单元目标一、了解商品说明书的结构（知识）8/3/20232B Section AWork Task 工作任务（一）商品说明书的概念和功能（一）商品说明书的概念和功能 商品说明书是关于物品的用途、规格和使商品说明书是关于物品的用途、规格和使用方法等的文字说明，其主要功能是向消用方法等的文字说明，其主要功能是向消费者提供具体的商品特点和使用信息。费者提供具体的商品特点和使用信息。翻译技巧翻译技巧5/18/20243Business English TranslationSection AWork Task 工作任务（一）商品 Section AWork Task 工作任务（二）商品说明书的结构（二）商品说明书的结构商品说明书品种繁多，不同商品的说明书内容及特点也商品说明书品种繁多，不同商品的说明书内容及特点也不尽相同。一般来说，商品说明书包括以下几个部分：不尽相同。一般来说，商品说明书包括以下几个部分：1商品的特征、功能和成分商品的特征、功能和成分2安装安装/使用使用/服用服用/饮用饮用/食用的方法食用的方法3注意事项注意事项4主要性能、指标及规格主要性能、指标及规格翻译技巧翻译技巧5/18/20244Business English TranslationSection AWork Task 工作任务（二）商品 Section AWork Task 工作任务（三）英语说明书的语言特点（三）英语说明书的语言特点1）语言平实）语言平实2）句式简洁）句式简洁3）多用祈使句）多用祈使句4）技术性强）技术性强5）字体和版面设计有特色）字体和版面设计有特色翻译技巧翻译技巧5/18/20245Business English TranslationSection AWork Task 工作任务（三）英语 Section AWork Task 工作任务（四）汉语说明书的翻译技巧（四）汉语说明书的翻译技巧1）遣词造句简练得体）遣词造句简练得体2）语气风格与原文一致）语气风格与原文一致3）调整句子结构、理清层次）调整句子结构、理清层次翻译技巧翻译技巧5/18/20246Business English TranslationSection AWork Task 工作任务（四）汉语 Section BWork Task 工作任务2005年年8月，费列罗贸易上海有限公司从波月，费列罗贸易上海有限公司从波兰进口了一批巧克力，计划投入市场。进兰进口了一批巧克力，计划投入市场。进口部主任要求助理金敏将其产品说明书译口部主任要求助理金敏将其产品说明书译成汉语。成汉语。From English to Chinese英译汉背景介绍背景介绍5/18/20247Business English TranslationSection BWork Task 工作任务2005年 单元模块单元模块一、阅读商品说明书，了解其结构二、分析商品说明书，理解其特点三、学习说明书常用词汇（英汉）四、练习翻译说明书的常用句型五、分析说明书的译文，并作修改六、搜集一份商品说明书，并纠错5/18/20248Business English Translation单元模块一、阅读商品说明书，了解其结构8/3/20238Bu 说明书的结构说明书的结构 一、说明书类型:机械、电子、食品、药品、日用品 二、通常有四个组成部分(Pp243-4)：1.商品的特征、功能和成份 2.安装/使用/服用/饮用/食用的方法 3.注意事项 4.主要性能、指标及规格5/18/20249Business English Translation说明书的结构 一、说明书类型:8/3/20239Busin 说明书实例（说明书实例（1 1）胖胖瓜子仁胖胖瓜子仁本品选用中国特产天然无壳南瓜子为原料，富含人体所需之营养成分和微量元素，经独特工艺处理，外形晶莹饱满，风味脆香可口。为理想之保健旅游佳品，堪称“天下一绝”。配料：天然无壳南瓜子、食盐、天然调味品。贮藏：低温、干燥 保质期：七个月生产日期：见封口处 5/18/202410Business English Translation说明书实例（1）胖胖瓜子仁8/3/202310Busines 说明书实例（说明书实例（2 2）金嗓子喉宝金嗓子喉宝都乐含片说明书金嗓子喉宝都乐含片精选青果、罗汉果、薄荷脑等精制而成。名称金嗓子喉宝都乐含片配料表蔗糖、淀粉糖浆、青果、金银花、薄荷脑、桉叶油、罗汉果、桔红、八角茴香油、香蕉香精适量。食用方法含服，每次一片、一日6次。净含量2.0克X20片保质期24个月批准文号桂卫食准字2003第027号5/18/202411Business English Translation说明书实例（2）金嗓子喉宝8/3/202311Busines 说明书实例（说明书实例（3 3）Foaming Face WashOlay Foaming Face Wash not only cleanses thoroughly,but also helps maintain skins moisture.It keeps skin soft and smooth and leaves it youthful looking.泡沫洁面乳泡沫洁面乳玉兰油泡沫洁面乳，其配方：帮助彻底清洁面部，保持面部肌肤滋润，令肌肤柔滑。100%不含皂基，性质温和。泡沫丰富，气味清新。5/18/202412Business English Translation说明书实例（3）Foaming Face Wash泡沫洁面乳 说明书的特点说明书的特点一、语言客观，毫无夸大(Objective)二、内容新颖，技术性强(Technical)三、具文学性，条理明晰(Methodical)(Cf.Pp246-252)5/18/202413Business English Translation说明书的特点一、语言客观，毫无夸大(Objective)8/说明书的特点说明书的特点四、例句1.Sharp MW/SW1/SW2/SW3/FM Stereo radio reception.The ST858L(radio cassette recorder)delivers superb MW/LW/SW1/SW2/FM Stereo band reception.2.This machine is equipped with a gear transmission mechanism,and its multi-dies are arranged in line.3.The Rules for Making Good Tea (1)Draw cold water from the tap.(2)(3)5/18/202414Business English Translation说明书的特点四、例句8/3/202314Business E 常用词汇常用词汇C-EC-E成分/配料功能主治/适应症用法规格包装净含量保质期副作用有效期限/失效日期食用方法操作程序使用说明生产日期注意事项生产商/企业贮藏/储藏/保存方法批准文号5/18/202415Business English Translation常用词汇C-E成分/配料有效期限/失效日期8/3/20231 常用词汇常用词汇C-E(1)C-E(1)1 成分/配料2 功能3 主治/适应症4 用法5 规格6 包装7 净含量8 保质期9 副作用1 Ingredients/Components2 Functions3 Indications 4 Usage5 Specifications/Specs6 Package/Packing7 Net content8 Shelf life9 Side effects5/18/202416Business English Translation常用词汇C-E(1)1 成分/配料1 Ingredients 常用词汇常用词汇C-E(2)C-E(2)10 有效期限/失效日期11 食用方法12 操作程序13 使用说明14 生产日期15 注意事项16 生产商/企业17 贮藏/储藏/保存方法18 批准文号10 Period of validity/Expiration(or Expiry)date/Sell-by date BrE11 Usage12 Operating procedures13 Directions for operation 14 Production date15 Precautions 16 Manufacturer/Producer 17 Storage/Preservation method18 License number/Permit No./Ratification No.5/18/202417Business English Translation常用词汇C-E(2)10 有效期限/失效日期10 Perio 常用词汇常用词汇E-CE-CCost-effectiveCost-efficient Installation MaintenanceDurability AdaptabilityPerformancePrecisionWear-resistingEnergy-savingEnergy consumptionPressure-resisting5/18/202418Business English Translation常用词汇E-CCost-effectivePerforman 常用词汇常用词汇E-C(1)E-C(1)1 Cost-effective2 Cost-efficient 3 Installation 4 Maintenance5 Durability 6 Adaptability1/2 有成本效益的；合算的3 安装4 维修 维护5 耐用性6 适应性5/18/202419Business English Translation常用词汇E-C(1)1 Cost-effective1/2 常用词汇常用词汇E-C(2)E-C(2)7 Performance8 Precision9 Wear-resisting10 Energy-saving11 Energy consumption12 Pressure-resisting7 性能8 精确度9 耐磨的10 节能的11 能源消耗；能耗12 耐压的5/18/202420Business English Translation常用词汇E-C(2)7 Performance7 性能8/3 说明书的翻译说明书的翻译一、产品性质二、产品声誉三、产品用途四、产品特点五、产品维护5/18/202421Business English Translation说明书的翻译一、产品性质8/3/202321Business 说明书的翻译说明书的翻译-产品性质产品性质典型结构：典型结构：该部分常使用“主语-系动词-表语”的结构常用动词有be,be made of,manufacture,produce等例句：例句：1.本产品是一种理想的原材料,2.本产品是采用特殊工艺制造而成的。3.本产品系采用粉末冶金方法，经压坯和压力加工而制成。(powder metallurgy;compacting;pressure working)5/18/202422Business English Translation说明书的翻译-产品性质典型结构：8/3/202322Busi 说明书的翻译说明书的翻译-产品性质产品性质1.本产品是一种理想的原材料。2.本产品是采用特殊工艺制造而成的。3.本产品系采用粉末冶金方法，经压坯和压力加工而制成。(powder metallurgy;compacting;pressure working)1.The product is an ideal raw material,2.The product is made by/in a special technique.3.This product is manufactured by powder metallurgy through compacting and pressure working.5/18/202423Business English Translation说明书的翻译-产品性质1.本产品是一种理想的原材料。The 说明书的翻译说明书的翻译-产品声誉产品声誉典型结构典型结构：该部分常使用“主语-系动词-表语”的结构常用动词为：gain,reach,choose,compete,award,enjoy,win等例句：例句：1.本产品在国内外享有很高声誉。(reputation/prestige)2.本产品深受用户好评。(win high praises from)3.本产品深受广大消费者欢迎，远销东南亚。(consumers;Southeast Asia)4.本产品性能可靠、经济划算、众多特色，在许多 国家和地区享有盛誉。(reliability;cost-effectiveness;gain an excellent reputation)5/18/202424Business English Translation说明书的翻译-产品声誉典型结构：8/3/202324Busi 说明书的翻译说明书的翻译-产品声誉产品声誉1.本产品在国内外享有很高声誉。2.本产品深受用户好评。3.本产品深受广大消费者欢迎，远销东南亚。4.本产品性能可靠、经济划算、众多特色，在许多国家和地区享有盛誉。1.The product enjoys a good reputation/high prestige at home and abroad.2.The product has won high praises from the users.3.The product has been well well receivedreceived by customers and sells well in Southeast Asia.4.The product has gained an excellent reputation in many countries and regions by virtue of its reliability,cost-effectiveness and a wealth of features.5/18/202425Business English Translation说明书的翻译-产品声誉1.本产品在国内外享有很高声誉。Th 说明书的翻译说明书的翻译-产品用途产品用途典型结构：典型结构：1.It meets/satisfies the demands/needs of 它能满足的需求/需要。2.It is greatly used in 它广泛应用于（场所或领域）3.It offers for它为提供 例句：例句：1.本产品能满足目前所有的需求。(current)2.该机器适用于建筑工地，仓库等地进行设备安装。(construction sites;warehouses;installation)3.该药品为将来广泛范围的各种应用提供了最佳解决方法。(applications;optimal;solutions)4.本产品已广泛用于电子、精密仪器和食品加工等各个部门。(electronics;precision instrument;food processing)5/18/202426Business English Translation说明书的翻译-产品用途典型结构：8/3/202326Busi 说明书的翻译说明书的翻译-产品用途产品用途1.本产品能满足目前所有的需求。2.该机器适用于建筑工地，仓库等地进行设备安装。3.该药品为将来广泛范围的各种应用提供了最佳解决方法。4.本产品已广泛用于电子、精密仪器和食品加工等各个部门。1.The product meets all current demands.2.The product is suitable for use in construction sites and warehouses for installation of equipment.3.The medicine offers optimal solutions for a wide range of future-orientoriented applications.4.The product is greatly used in a variety of fields such as electronics,precision instruments and food processing.5/18/202427Business English Translation说明书的翻译-产品用途1.本产品能满足目前所有的需求。Th 说明书的翻译说明书的翻译-产品特点产品特点典型结构：典型结构：The product features 本产品的特色是The product is attractive/durable 本产品外形美观/结实耐用例句：例句：1.The product features high durability and good appearance.2.本产品的特色在于设计新颖、质量上乘。3.It is resistant to high temperature and heat.4.The product is pleasant in appearance,reliable and stable in performance and high in precision.5.本产品外形美观、体积小、重量轻、能耗低。5/18/202428Business English Translation说明书的翻译-产品特点典型结构：8/3/202328Busi 说明书的翻译说明书的翻译-产品特点产品特点1.The product features high durability and good appearance.2.本产品的特色在于设计新颖、质量上乘。3.It is resistant to high temperature and heat.4.The product is pleasant in appearance,reliable and stable in performance and high in precision.5.本产品外形美观、体积小、重量轻、能耗低。1.本产品经久耐用，外形美观。2.The product features novel design and excellent quality.3.本产品耐高温、抗热。4.本产品外形美观，性能稳定可靠，精确度高。5.The product is attractive in appearance,small in size,light in weight and low in energy consumption.5/18/202429Business English Translation说明书的翻译-产品特点1.The product feat 说明书的翻译说明书的翻译-产品维护产品维护典型结构：典型结构：The product is simple/convenient in use 常用形容词还有reliable,safe,smooth等例句：例句：1.The product is convenient for operation and maintenance.2.本品操作简单，维修方便。3.The product is simple in structure,easy to install and maintain,and safe and reliable in operation.4.本品运转平稳，便于安装、调整与保养。5/18/202430Business English Translation说明书的翻译-产品维护典型结构：8/3/202330Busi 说明书的翻译说明书的翻译-产品维护产品维护1.The product is convenient for operation and maintenance.2.本品操作简单，维修方便。3.The product is simple in structure,easy to install and maintain,and safe and reliable in operation.4.本品运转平稳，便于安装、调整与保养。1.本品便于操作，易于维修。2.The product features simple operation and easy maintenance.3.本品结构简单，安装、维修方便，使用安全可靠。4.The product is smooth in operation,convenient for installation,adjustment and maintenance.5/18/202431Business English Translation说明书的翻译-产品维护1.The product is c 翻译案例（翻译案例（1 1）电熨斗电熨斗注意事项注意事项熨斗接通电源后，切勿离开。注水时不要让水溢出，最大容量约为200毫升。注水时一定要切断电源。如果熨斗损坏或电源线裂损，停止使用。勿将熨斗浸入水或其他液体中。待熨斗冷却后再收起。不要让熨斗压住电源线。不要让儿童和动物靠近。5/18/202432Business English Translation翻译案例（1）电熨斗注意事项8/3/202332Busine 翻译案例（翻译案例（1 1）电熨斗电熨斗注意事项注意事项熨斗接通电源后，切勿离开。注水时不要让水溢出，最大容量约为200毫升。注水时一定要切断电源。如果熨斗损坏或电源线裂损，停止使用。勿将熨斗浸入水或其他液体中。待熨斗冷却后再收起。不要让熨斗压住电源线。不要让儿童和动物靠近。PrecautionsIron the supply 供应系统：electric/water supply 电力/自来水供应系统overfill 把.装得溢出 maximum 最大量的 最大值的capacity 容量 能力 approximately 大约unplug 拔去的电源插头the supply cord fray 磨损，磨散，磨破immerse cool storing pets5/18/202433Business English Translation翻译案例（1）电熨斗注意事项Precautions8 翻译案例（翻译案例（1 1）电熨斗电熨斗注意事项注意事项熨斗接通电源后，切勿离开。注水时不要让水溢出，最大容量约为200毫升。注水时一定要切断电源。如果熨斗损坏或电源线裂损，停止使用。勿将熨斗浸入水或其他液体中。待熨斗冷却后再收起。不要让熨斗压住电源线。不要让儿童和动物靠近。Safety PrecautionsNever leave your iron unattended when connected to the supply.Do not overfill with water,maximum capacity is approximately 200ml.Always unplug before filling with water.Never use you iron if it is damaged or the supply cord is frayed.Never immerse in water or other liquids.Allow to cool before storing.Keep children and pets at a safe distance.5/18/202434Business English Translation翻译案例（1）电熨斗注意事项Safety Pre 翻译案例（翻译案例（2 2）胖胖瓜子仁胖胖瓜子仁本品选用中国特产天然无壳南瓜子为原料，富含人体所需之营养成分和微量元素，经独特工艺处理，外形晶莹饱满，风味脆香可口。为理想之保健旅游佳品，堪称“天下一绝”。配料：天然无壳南瓜子、食盐、天然调味品。贮藏：低温、干燥 保质期：七个月生产日期：见封口处 TT1:Roasted Pumpkin KernelsThis product,rich in essential nutrients,is made of the natural shell-less pumpkin seeds uniquely bred in China.Plum,crisp and delicious,it is an ideal and healthy tourist snack.Ingredients:shell-less pumpkin kernels,table salt,natural flavouring Storage:cool and dryConsumed within:7 monthsManuf date:on seal5/18/202435Business English Translation翻译案例（2）胖胖瓜子仁TT1:R 翻译案例（翻译案例（2 2）roast vt.烤,烘,烘烤 adj.roasted 烘烤过的：roast duck 烤鸭pumpkin n.南瓜melon n.瓜，甜瓜，西瓜(watermelon)：melon seeds瓜子kernel n.(果实的)核,仁:the kernel of a walnut 核桃仁nutrient n.养分；营养品，营养物 adj.有营养的breed(bred,bred)vt.(动物)繁殖；育种，培植，改良品种；教养,抚养plum n.李子 1.pick the plums out of the pudding 把好的挑给自己2.take all the plums 挑出最好的东西据为己有5/18/202436Business English Translation翻译案例（2）roast vt.烤,烘,烘烤 adj.翻译案例（翻译案例（2 2）plump adj.1.a word meaning pleasantly fat,often used when you want to avoid saying the word fat 丰满的，胖乎乎的；2.圆鼓鼓的:plump pillows/tomatoessnack n.小吃，点心：snack food 小吃食品；snack bar点心店，小吃店，快餐店ingredient n.成分,配料；因素table salt 佐餐盐,餐桌盐,精制食盐flavouring BrE flavoring AmE n.调味品；调味料；调味剂 seasoning n.调味品,调料consume vt.消耗,消费manufacture vt.制造，加工5/18/202437Business English Translation翻译案例（2）plump adj.1.a word in 翻译案例（翻译案例（2 2）TT1:Roasted Pumpkin KernelsThis product,rich in essential nutrients,is made of the natural shell-less pumpkin seeds uniquely bred in China.Plum,crisp and delicious,it is an ideal and healthy tourist snack.Ingredients:shell-less pumpkin kernels,table salt,natural flavouring Storage:cool and dryConsumed within:7 monthsManuf date:on seal ST:胖胖胖胖瓜子仁瓜子仁本品选用中国特产天然无壳南瓜子为原料，富含人体所需之营养成分和微量元素，经独特工艺处理，外形晶莹饱满，风味脆香可口。为理想之保健旅游佳品，堪称“天下一绝”。配料：天然无壳南瓜子、食盐、天然调味品。贮藏：低温、干燥 保质期：七个月生产日期：见封口处 5/18/202438Business English Translation翻译案例（2）TT1:Roasted Pumpkin Ke 翻译案例（翻译案例（2 2）ST:胖胖胖胖瓜子仁瓜子仁本品选用中国特产天然无壳南瓜子为原料，富含人体所需之营养成分和微量元素，经独特工艺处理，外形晶莹饱满，风味脆香可口。为理想之保健旅游佳品，堪称“天下一绝”。配料：天然无壳南瓜子、食盐、天然调味品。贮藏：低温、干燥 保质期：七个月生产日期：见封口处 TT2:“Plump”Shelled Pumpkin Seeds“Plump”Shelled Pumpkin Seeds are a distinctive and peerless product of its type.The product,rich in essential nutrients and microelements,is made of the natural shell-less pumpkin seeds uniquely bred in China.The seeds look plump and clear,and taste crisp and delicious.The product boasts an ideal snack for good health and happy travel.Ingredients:shell-less pumpkin seeds,salt,natural flavoring Storage:in a cool and dry placeShelf life:7 monthsProduction date:see the seal 5/18/202439Business English Translation翻译案例（2）ST:胖胖瓜子仁TT2:“Plump”S 翻译案例（翻译案例（3 3）乐陵金丝枣说明乐陵金丝小枣位于全国三大产区之首，以优异的品质和丰富的营养闻名于世，乐陵金丝小枣，其体形小、色红、核小、皮薄、肉质丰满，本品含有果胶维生素、蛋白质、脂肪、丰富的铁、钙、磷和维生素AP等营养物质。对人身增热补血、滋肝、健脾，益气养肾，润肤延寿，营养丰富。是历史悠久、中外驰名的高级补品。TT1:SPECIFICATIONSLaoLing Golden Silk Small Dates is produced in the biggest area of three big production areas.It is famous in the world for its small body,small pit,thin skin,rich of pulp,good quality and rich of nutritions.It contains Pectin Vitamin,Protein,Fat and rich of Fe,Calcium,Pho sphorus and Vitamin AP etc,nutritious materials.It can add heat and blood to the peoples body,nourish liver,invigorate the function of pleen,nourish kidney and prolong life of the people.It is high-grade notic of hasing a long history and well known both in China and abroad.5/18/202440Business English Translation翻译案例（3）乐陵金丝枣TT1:SPECIFICATION 翻译案例（翻译案例（3 3）乐陵金丝枣说明乐陵金丝小枣位于全国三大产区之首，以优异的品质和丰富的营养闻名于世，乐陵金丝小枣，其体形小、色红、核小、皮薄、肉质丰满，本品含有果胶维生素、蛋白质、脂肪、丰富的铁、钙、磷和维生素AP等营养物质。对人身增热补血、滋肝、健脾，益气养肾，润肤延寿，营养丰富。是历史悠久、中外驰名的高级补品。TT1:SPECIFICATIONSLaoLing Golden Silk Small Dates is produced in the biggest area of three big production areas.It is famous in the world for its small body,small pit,thin skin,rich of pulp,good quality and rich of nutritions.It contains Pectin Vitamin,Protein,Fat and rich of Fe,Calcium,Pho sphorus and Vitamin AP etc,nutritious materials.It can add heat and blood to the peoples body,nourish liver,invigorate the function of pleen,nourish kidney and prolong life of the people.It is high-grade notic of hasing a long history and well known both in China and abroad.5/18/202441Business English Translation翻译案例（3）乐陵金丝枣TT1:SPECIFICATION 翻译案例（翻译案例（3 3）乐陵金丝枣说明乐陵金丝小枣位于全国三大产区之首，以优异的品质和丰富的营养闻名于世，乐陵金丝小枣，其体形小、色红、核小、皮薄、肉质丰满，本品含有果胶维生素、蛋白质、脂肪、丰富的铁、钙、磷和维生素AP等营养物质。对人身增热补血、滋肝、健脾，益气养肾，润肤延寿，营养丰富。是历史悠久、中外驰名的高级补品。TT2:INTRODUCTIONLeling Small Sweet Dates are the best in quality in Chinas three big date-growing areas.They are well-known for their small bodies,tiny pits,thin skin,rich pulp,good quality and rich nutrients.The Date contains various nutritious elements such as pectin vitamin,protein,fat and rich ferrum,calcium,phosphorus and vatamin AP.It serves to improve your health by tonifying the blood to promote the production of heat,nourishing the liver and invigorating the spleen,supplementing qi and the kidney,so as to prolong your life.It is a high-grade tonic with a long history and well-known both at home and abroad.(Trans.by Prof.Liu Fagong)5/18/202442Business English Translation翻译案例（3）乐陵金丝枣TT2:INTRODUCTION8 附：商品说明书实例-15/18/202443Business English Translation附：商品说明书实例-18/3/202343Business 附：商品说明书实例-25/18/202444Business English Translation附：商品说明书实例-28/3/202344Business 附：商品说明书实例-35/18/202445Business English Translation附：商品说明书实例-38/3/202345Business 5/18/202446Business English Translation8/3/202346Business English Tra