读后续写(老人的手套).ppt

写作思路 On Christmas Eve, seventy-year-old George selected his food carefully. Skim milk was $2.99, white bread, 89 cents with a 10-cent discount. Leaving the cashier desk, he calculated that he had saved 80 cents today.Time: On Christmas Eve-coldCharacter: seventy-year-old GeorgePersonality: poor, thrift At the exit, the wind reminded him of his gloves. “Where are they?” Not in the coat pockets. Not in the grocery bag either. He was sure he was wearing them when he entered the store. He clearly remembered putting them into the pocket of his coat. George made a second thorough search of all his pockets, again including the grocery bag. Now he was sure they must have been dropped somewhere inside the store.He found the gloves had been lost.Where are they?地点锁定 Old George had bought the black leather gloves at a 25% discount, for just $35, ten years ago. They were soft and warm and very durable(耐用的). He had taken care not to let a drop of water or rain touch his expensive gloves, so they looked like new. Losing this favorite possession(拥有物) was almost like losing a child to him.He cherished the gloves very much. George, calm on the outside but nervous inside, re-entered the store. He followed the same route he had walked before, starting at the bread counter, to the milk section, the corner where salt and sugar were placed, then the rest of the store. Several minutes of anxious searching turned out to be in vain (徒劳). He asked the customers whether they saw a pair of black leather gloves, but they said no. Then he went over to the cashier without hesitation to ask if she had received any lost gloves, but only received the same answer. His heart grew heavier. He tried very hard to find the gloves but failed. “Society has changed, people have changed,” he murmured to himself. “Years ago, if somebody picked up something lost, they would give it back. Now a good action is lost.” Yet he did not give up hope. He started to stare at anybody wearing black gloves to see if they looked like his. The first two persons he sae did wear gloves but one was womens and the other not black. 预测故事的结局： 1 )老人有没有找到对他来说很珍贵的手套？ 老人最后终于找到了自己的手套2 )手套是怎么找到的？ 有好心人把捡到的手套还给老人3 ) 这个故事要说明一个什么样的道理 要说明There is still good action in todays world.世界还是有好心人，寒冷的冬天还是有人间的温暖，这个世界还是充满希望的。 Suddenly, he found a man looking like a lawyer. During the whole holiday, he was always thinking whether to buy a new pair.预测第一段的主要故事内容： 1 )老人有没有在第一段找到手套？ 没有找到，因为第二段中写到he was always thinking whether to buy a new pair.2 )第一段应该写什么？ 老人寻找手套的曲折的过程和因没有找到而失落的心情。3 ) 如何在写作中体现寻找手套的曲折？ 他看见一副手套，他冒昧地去询问，结果却不是4 ) 第一段中出现的lawyer怎么和老人之间发生联系 律师有和老人差不多的手套 Suddenly, he found a man looking like a lawyer.他竟然戴着一副黑色的皮手套！He was wearing a pair of black leather gloves!他欣喜若狂！ He was wild with joy! A wild gaiety took hold of him. His eyes were sparkling like diamonds. His heart beat wildly. His heart beat so fast that he could hardly breathe. His face brightened up with joy / pleasure. His face lit up with excitement 他毫不犹豫地冲上前去，抓住那人的手，指着手套问：“先生，你这手套是不是刚刚捡到的？”Without any hesitation he rushed up to the man , caught hold of his arm, pointing at the gloves and asked, “ Sir, are the gloves the ones you have just picked up?”让他倍感失望的是，律师模样的人否认了这是老人的手套,有点恼怒。 To his great disappointment, the man looking like a lawyer denied it, appearing rather annoyed / upset. 老人道了歉，不情愿地走开了The old man apologized and left reluctantly.他坐在一个长凳上好一会，满脸忧郁，叹着气。 He sat on a bench for a long time with glum looks on his face，sighing.然后，他做了个决定。他请求收银员万一有人找到手套交给她们还请她们保管一下。 Then he made a decision. He walked up to the cashier and asked her to keep them in case the lost gloves were found. 最后他拖着沉重的脚步走向了商场的出口Finally he dragged his heavy legs towards the exit. During the whole holiday, he was always thinking whether to buy a new pair.预测第二段的主要故事内容： 1 )老人有没有在第二段找到手套？ 找到了2 )手套是怎么找到的？他的心情怎么样？ Suddenly, he found a man looking like a lawyer. During the whole holiday, he was always thinking whether to buy a new pair.故事的总体发展可能是老George发现一个看起来像律师的人恰巧戴了一副黑色的皮手套，但是结果可想而知。临走前他拜托收银员帮他留意(第一段的可作要点)。整个圣诞期间，他肯定一直在犹像要不要再买一双手套。抱着最后一线希望，他又去店里问了，他丢的手套居然被好心人捡到放在收银台，他真是喜出望外。可能怀疑这个男的偷了手套不是这个男的偷的 翻译 1 . 可能看起来很唐突，乔治毫不犹豫地上前并且询问这双手套是否是他的，但是得到个令人失望的答案。（abrupt：adj唐突的） Abrupt as it might seem, George came up without hesitation and asked if they were his, but there came a disappointing answer. as引导让步状语从句，作“虽然，尽管”解。这时从句常用倒装语序，即把从句中的表语、状语或动词原形放在as之前。eg： Strange as it may seem，it is true尽管这事看上去很奇怪，但却是真的。 Try as he might，Tom could not get out of the difficulties不管怎样努力，汤姆还是摆脱不了困境。 2 .仔细思考后，他意识到没有人会愚蠢到以至于正好在商店里面戴着它们。（so.as to太.以至于） On second thought, he realized nobody would be so foolish as to wear them right inside the store. 3 .他没有其他选择只能要求收银员保管它们万一丢失的手套被找到了。（alternative：n. 选择，in case:万一） He had no other alternative but to ask the cashier to keep them in case the lost gloves were found. 4 .然后，他拖着腿走向了出口。（drag：v拖拽） Then he dragged his legs towards the exit. 5 .总而言之，在深冬，他不能没有手套。 After all, in deep winter, he could not do without gloves. 6 .最后，可怜的乔治决定另外买一副皮手套。 Finally poor George decided to buy another pair of leather gloves. 7 .抱着最后一丝希望，他再一次踏入了商店。 With the last ray of hope, he stepped into the store again. 8 .他一开门，收银员就告诉他的确有一副手套很像他丢的那副。（no sooner.than: 一.就.） No sooner had he opened the door than the cashier told him there was indeed one such pair as he lost. no sooner. than.倒装hardly. when.倒装eg: Hardly had we set off when it began to rain.on doing./the moment./as soon as/once 9 .在仔细检查了它们之后，他欣喜若狂，向收银员表达了感谢并且对自己说好的行为并没有消失。 After examining them carefully, he was wild with joy, expressing sincere gratitude and saying to himself that a good action was never lost.前后呼应 Suddenly, he found a man looking like a lawyer, wearing black leather gloves. Abrupt as it might seem, George came up without hesitation and asked if they were his, but there came a disappointing answer. On second thought, he realized nobody would be so foolish as to wear them right inside the store. He had no other alternative but to ask the cashier to keep them in case the lost gloves were found. Then he dragged his legs towards the exit. During the whole holiday, he was always thinking whether to buy a new pair. After all, in deep winter, he could not do without gloves. Finally poor George decided to buy another pair of leather gloves. With the last ray of hope, he stepped into the store again. No sooner had he opened the door than the cashier tole him there was indeed one such pair as he lost. After examining them carefully, he was wild with joy, expressing sincere gratitude and saying to himself that a good action was never lost.