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词汇能力 书面表达能力,3500个左右,转述、表达 开放 不少于120词,考纲新要求,开放性作文,假如你是张华，你所在的学校将建一个学生活动中心，请给校长写一封信，建议可在该中心举行的两种活动。 注意： 1、词数：不少于120； 2、文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。,Composition,Cross-question(审题),体裁 人称 时态 要点,建议信,第一人称,一般现在时和一般将来时,3W,what/who,why,how,1、建议可在该中心举行的两种活动,2、推荐两种活动的原因,3、开展两种活动的方式,4、合适的开头和结尾(书信),格式,提 纲,Para1- 引出主题,Para2-表述要点,Para3-发表感想,总,分,总,spirit,Dear Headmaster, Im very glad to hear that our school will build an activity centre of students. So I want to give some advice about it. First, I think we should have enough place to take exercise.We can run and play basketball.Every day,we study hard and have no time to do exercise. I think if we do more exercise, we will become healthier and healthier. We can also build a big room for the speech. We can invite famous people to our school to give a speech. Then, we can learn knowledge out of class. We will have a beautiful school life and have a good time. I hope you can think about my advice. Best wishes! Yours, Zhang Hua,Students Sample 1,第四档（1620）, 虽漏掉1，2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容 语法结构或词汇应用基本准确，可有些许错误 应用了简单的连接成分,第四档作文评分标准,完全完成试题规定的任务,词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。,运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉 。,使用恰当连接词，对写一篇有“英语味”的文章很重要，能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑。,增强书面表达效果的技巧,Dear Headmaster, Im very glad to hear that our school will build an activity centre of students. So I want to give some advice about it. First, I think we should have enough place to take exercise.We can run and play basketball.Every day,we study hard and have no time to do exercise. I think if we do more exercise, we will become healthier and healthier. We can also build a big room for the speech. We can invite famous people to our school to give a speech. Then, we can learn knowledge out of class. We will have a beautiful school life and have a good time. I hope you can think about my advice. Best wishes! Yours, Zhang Hua,Students Sample 1, 覆盖所有内容要点 运用较多的语法结构和词汇，有些许错误 有效地运用了连接成分,第五档作文评分标准,完全完成试题规定的任务, 虽漏掉1，2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容 语法结构或词汇应用基本准确，可有些许错误 应用了简单的连接成分,第四档作文评分标准,完全完成试题规定的任务,Dear Headmaster, Im very pleased to hear that an activity center of students will be built in our school. On hearing the news, I start considering recommending some activities to you . Here are two activities as follows. First, its a good idea to set up an English corner. It helps not only develop our interest in English and improve our oral English but improve our English grades by means of communicating in English. In addition to this, building up our body is also important. “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy”. Therefore, a small gym which is equipped with sports facilities will be a good place for us students to work out. I hope that you could consider my suggestions carefully. I will appreciate it if you take my advice. Yours, Zhang Hua,Students Sample 2,第五档（2125）,Dear Headmaster, Im very pleased to hear that an activity center of students will be built in our school. On hearing the news, I start considering recommending some activities to you . Here are two activities as follows. First, its a good idea to set up an English corner. It helps not only develop our interest in English and improve our oral English but improve our English grades by means of communicating in English. In addition to this, building up our body is also important. “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy”. Therefore, a small gym which is equipped with sports facilities will be a good place for us students to work out. I hope that you could consider my suggestions carefully. I will appreciate it if you take my advice. Yours, Zhang Hua,Students Sample 2,第五档（2125）,Dear Headmaster, Im very pleased to hear that an activity center of students will be built in our school. On hearing the news, I start considering recommending some activities to you . Here are two activities as follows. First, its a good idea to set up an English corner. It helps not only develop our interest in English and improve our oral English but improve our English grades by means of communicating in English. In addition to this, building up our body is also important. “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy”. Therefore, a small gym which is equipped with sports facilities will be a good place for us students to work out. I hope that you could consider my suggestions carefully. I will appreciate it if you take my advice. Yours, Zhang Hua,Students Sample 2,第五档（2125）,Dear Headmaster, Im very pleased to hear that an activity center of students will be built in our school. On hearing the news, I start considering recommending some activities to you . Here are two activities as follows. First, its a good idea to set up an English corner. It helps not only develop our interest in English and improve our oral English but improve our English grades by means of communicating in English. In addition to this, building up our body is also important. “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy”. Therefore, a small gym which is equipped with sports facilities will be a good place for us students to work out. I hope that you could consider my suggestions carefully. I will appreciate it if you take my advice. Yours, Zhang Hua,Students Sample 2,第五档（2125）,Dear Headmaster, Im very pleased to hear that an activity center of students will be built in our school. On hearing the news, I start considering recommending some activities to you . Here are two activities as follows. First, its a good idea to set up an English corner. It helps not only develop our interest in English and improve our oral English but improve our English grades by means of communicating in English. In addition to this, building up our body is also important. “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy”. Therefore, a small gym which is equipped with sports facilities will be a good place for us students to work out. I hope that you could consider my suggestions carefully. I will appreciate it if you take my advice. Yours, Zhang Hua,Students Sample 2,第五档（2125）,Dear Headmaster, Im very pleased to hear that an activity center of students will be built in our school. On hearing the news, I start considering recommending some activities to you . Here are two activities as follows. First, its a good idea to set up an English corner. It helps not only develop our interest in English and improve our oral English but improve our English grades by means of communicating in English. In addition to this, building up our body is also important. “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy”. Therefore, a small gym which is equipped with sports facilities will be a good place for us students to work out. I hope that you could consider my suggestions carefully. I will appreciate it if you take my advice. Yours, Zhang Hua,Students Sample 2,第五档（2125）,Dear Headmaster, Im very pleased to hear that an activity center of students will be built in our school. On hearing the news, I start considering recommending some activities to you . Here are two activities as follows. First, its a good idea to set up an English corner. It helps not only develop our interest in English and improve our oral English but improve our English grades by means of communicating in English. In addition to this, building up our body is also important. “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy”. Therefore, a small gym which is equipped with sports facilities will be a good place for us students to work out. I hope that you could consider my suggestions carefully. I will appreciate it if you take my advice. Yours, Zhang Hua,Students Sample 2,第五档（2125）,Dear Headmaster, Im very pleased to hear that an activity center of students will be built in our school. On hearing the news, I start considering recommending some activities to you . Here are two activities as follows. First, its a good idea to set up an English corner. It helps not only develop our interest in English and improve our oral English but improve our English grades by means of communicating in English. In addition to this, building up our body is also important. “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy”. Therefore, a small gym which is equipped with sports facilities will be a good place for us students to work out. I hope that you could consider my suggestions carefully. I will appreciate it if you take my advice. Yours, Zhang Hua,Students Sample 2,第五档（2125）,Dear Headmaster, Im very pleased to hear that an activity center of students will be built in our school. On hearing the news, I start considering recommending some activities to you . Here are two activities as follows. First, its a good idea to set up an English corner. It helps not only develop our interest in English and improve our oral English but improve our English grades by means of communicating in English. In addition to this, building up our body is also important. “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy”. Therefore, a small gym which is equipped with sports facilities will be a good place for us students to work out. I hope that you could consider my suggestions carefully. I will appreciate it if you take my advice. Yours, Zhang Hua,Students Sample 2,第五档（2125）,Dear Headmaster, Im very pleased to hear that an activity center of students will be built in our school. On hearing the news, I start considering recommending some activities to you . Here are two activities as follows. First, its a good idea to set up an English corner. It helps not only develop our interest in English and improve our oral English but improve our English grades by means of communicating in English. In addition to this, building up our body is also important. “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy”. Therefore, a small gym which is equipped with sports facilities will be a good place for us students to work out. I hope that you could consider my suggestions carefully. I will appreciate it if you take my advice. Yours, Zhang Hua,Students Sample 2,第五档（2125）,Dear Headmaster, Im very pleased to hear that an activity center of students will be built in our school. On hearing the news, I start considering recommending some activities to you . Here are two activities as follows. First, its a good idea to set up an English corner. It helps not only develop our interest in English and improve our oral English but improve our English grades by means of communicating in English. In addition to this, building up our body is also important. “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy”. Therefore, a small gym which is equipped with sports facilities will be a good place for us students to work out. I hope that you could consider my suggestions carefully. I will appreciate it if you take my advice. Yours, Zhang Hua,Students Sample 2,第五档（2125）,Dear Headmaster, Im very pleased to hear that an activity center of students will be built in our school. On hearing the news, I start considering recommending some activities to you . Here are two activities as follows. First, its a good idea to set up an English corner. It helps not only develop our interest in English and improve our oral English but improve our English grades by means of communicating in English. In addition to this, building up our body is also important. “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy”. Therefore, a small gym which is equipped with sports facilities will be a good place for us students to work out. I hope that you could consider my suggestions carefully. I will appreciate it if you take my advice. Yours, Zhang Hua,Students Sample 2,第五档（2125）,Dear Headmaster, Im very pleased to hear that an activity center of students will be built in our school. On hearing the news, I start considering recommending some activities to you . Here are two activities as follows. First, its a good idea to set up an English corner. It helps not only develop our interest in English and improve our oral English but improve our English grades by means of communicating in English. In addition to this, building up our body is also important. “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy”. Therefore, a small gym which is equipped with sports facilities will be a good place for us students to work out. I hope that you could consider my suggestions carefully. I will appreciate it if you take my advice. Yours, Zhang Hua,Students Sample 2,第五档（2125）,Dear Headmaster, Im very pleased to hear that an activity center of students will be built in our school. On hearing the news, I start considering recommending some activities to you . Here are two activities as follows. First, its a good idea to set up an English corner. It helps not only develop our interest in English and improve our oral English but improve our English grades by means of communicating in English. In addition to this, building up our body is also important. “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy”. Therefore, a small gym which is equipped with sports facilities will be a good place for us students to work out. I hope that you could consider my suggestions carefully. I will appreciate it if you take my advice. Yours, Zhang Hua,Students Sample 2,第五档（2125）,Dear Headmaster, Im very pleased to hear that an activity center of students will be built in our school. On hearing the news, I start considering recommending some activities to you . Here are two activities as follows. First, its a good idea to set up an English corner. It helps not only develop our interest in English and improve our oral English but improve our English grades by means of communicating in English. In addition to this, building up our body is also important. “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy”. Therefore, a small gym which is equipped with sports facilities will be a good place for us students to work out. I hope that you could consider my suggestions carefully. I will appreciate it if you take my advice. Yours, Zhang Hua,Students Sample 2,第五档（2125）,Dear Headmaster, Im very pleased to hear that an activity center of students will be built in our school. On hearing the news, I start considering recommending some activities to you . Here are two activities as follows. First, its a good idea to set up an English corner. It helps not only develop our interest in English and improve our oral English but improve our English grades by means of communicating in English. In addition to this, building up our body is also important. “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy”. Therefore, a small gym which is equipped with sports facilities will be a good place for us students to work out. I hope that you could consider my suggestions carefully. I will appreciate it if you take my advice. Yours, Zhang Hua,Students Sample 2,第五档（2125）,Students Sample 2,Dear Headmaster, Im very pleased to hear that an activity center of students will be built in our school. On hearing the news, I start considering recommending some activities to you . Here are two activities as follows. First, its a good idea to set up an English corner. It helps not only develop our interest in English and improve our oral English but improve our English grades by means of communicating in English. In addition to this, building up our body is also important. “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy”. Therefore, a small gym which is equipped with sports facilities will be a good place for us students to work out. I hope that you could consider my suggestions carefully. I will appreciate it if you take my advice. Yours, Zhang Hua,第五档（2125）,Dear Headmaster, Im very pleased to hear that an activity center of students will be built in our school. On hearing the news, I start considering recommending some activities to you . Here are two activities as follows. First, its a good idea to set up an English corner. It helps not only develop our interest in English and improve our oral English but improve our English grades by means of communicating in English. In addition to this, building up our body is also important. “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy”. Therefore, a small gym which is equipped with sports facilities will be a good place for us students to work out. I hope that you could consider my suggestions carefully. I will appreciate it if you take my advice. Yours, Zhang Hua,Students Sample 2,第五档（2125）,+16,Special Attention,如书写较差，以致影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。,平时书写中普遍存在的问题,1.字迹潦草 2.涂改过多 3.字体不当,精彩的首尾句 通俗易懂的短语 多样的句型 恰当的连接词 规范的书写,3个段落 35个高级词汇 35个句型 35个连接词 12句 15行,总结,Directions: write an English composition according to the instructions below. Today is March 5th. To learn from Lei Feng, at 3:30 p.m., my classmates and I went-,记叙文,第一人称,一般过去时态,活动,原因,方式,体裁：记叙文 人称：第一人称 时态：一般过去时 要点：活动、原因、方式,Discussion,Practice,Rome isnt built in a day. The more you read，accumulate and practise，the better your writing will be！,Remember:,
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