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作文第一步：审人称 大学：里德学院Reagan College.,Steve Jobs was born in San Francisco, America, February, 1955.,He graduated from Homestead high school in 1972. Then, he attended Reagan College.,3. 一学期后因为经济原因而休学，但他坚持学习 4. 1976年与朋友创办苹果公司（Apple） 面对各种挑战，相信只有努力才能成功,One term later, because of lack of money, he dropped school. But he continue study.,In 1976, he and his friend created “Apple”. Facing kinds of challenges, he believed only by hard can he succeed.,5. 2009年，被评选为十年内美国最佳行政总裁（Chief executive officer） 6.逝世日期：2011年10月。,In 2009, he was selected as the best Chief executive officer in ten years.,He was dead in October, 2011.,Worried about the time available, Zhang Pingyu had made a list of the sites she wanted to see in London. My first delight is to London. It is a pity that the industrial cities (built in the 19th century) do not attract visitors. What interested me most was the scenery. Pingyu had a photo taken standing in front of the gate. She finished the day by looking at th outside of Buckingham Palace. Oh, she had so much to tell her friends. You must keep your eyes open if you are going to make your trip to the United Kingdom enjoyable and worthwhile. She felt very proud of herself.,很遗憾建于19世纪的工业城市不吸引游客。 你一定让你的眼睛睁大,如果你要使你去伦敦的旅游有意思和有价值。 她通过看白金汉宫外面结束了这一天。 令我最感兴趣的是风景。 PINGYU站在大门前照了一张相。 哦！她有很多东西要告诉朋友。 她对自己很骄傲。,Worried about the time available, youd better make a list of the sites you wanted to see in Wuzhen. 2. People may wonder different words are used to describe Wuzhen such as magic, beautiful, ancient and so on. You can clarify this question if you vist Wuzhen. 3. Although,nationwide,Wuzhen is not as large as other famous sites in China, it is calledthe town of fish,rice and silkby poople. 4. If you look around Wuzhen, you will find its beauty.You must keep your eyes open if you are going to travel to Wuzhen enjoyable and worthwhile. 5. For historical architecture, you have to go to Wuzhen, there you will find out more about Wuzhen history and culture.,6. To their credit, the people in Wuzhen do work together to make it famous in China. 7.You find population settled in Wuzhen,with a number of 60,000. 8.You can finish the day by appreciating the beautyful scene of the water town in Jiangnan.It is just like a natural museum of ancient architecture. Oh,you must have much to tell your friends after your visiting! 9. Our first delight is to London.,假如你是李华,你校将在寒假举办外国人学汉语的短期学习班，并为学员安排周末“北京一日游”活动。作为志愿者，请根据下边信息，向他们介绍旅游活动安排，并提出出行建议。开头已为你写出. One-day Tour in Beijing Place to visit: the Forbidden City, the Temple of Heaven, the Summer Palace Price:70 Transport: bus Lunch: traditional Chinese food Time to start: 8:30 am Time to return: 5:30 pm Ladies and gentlemen, Attention,please. Id like to introduce to you the one-day tour for the coming Saturday._,1 五台山位于山西忻州市东部。 2 伦敦面积约245000平方公里，人口约6千万 中国有5000多年的历史 桂林有温暖气候，充足阳光和雨水(climate) 5 乌镇是鱼米丝绸之乡(be well known) 6 镇子由沿着河建造的房子组成(consist of/be made up of ),Wutai mountain lies in east of Xinzhou, Shanxi province.,London covers an area of 245,000 square kilometers, with a population of 60 million.,Guilin has warm climate, enough rain and sunshine.,China enjoys a history of over 5,000 years.,Wuzhen is well-known as “the town of fish, rice, and silk”.,The town consists of old houses built along the river.,你可以乘火车先去杭州再坐汽车去往乌镇，非常方便。所以下次你有假期，为什么不去乌镇那？,You can catch a train to Hangzhou first and take a bus to Wuzhen. Its convenient. So next time you have a holiday, why not try to visit Wuzhen?,Have you even been to Wuzhen? If not, you should pay a visit.,字一定要写的好看 印象分要点一定要保证写的正确 及格分写作前先确定时态，人称提前打个草稿最后自己读一遍检测,原则：,某旅游手册想吸引游客来参观，根据下列要点，用英语写一篇100词左右的短文介绍浙江的乌镇。 1 乌镇位于浙江省桐乡县的北部。面积71.19平方公里，人口60,000. 2 温暖气候，充足阳光和雨水,乌镇是鱼米丝绸之乡。 3 1000多年的历史，镇子由沿着河建造的房子组成。 4 我们能够欣赏到江南水乡的美景，似古建筑自然博物馆。 5 交通便利：游人可以乘火车到杭州，之后乘公交去乌镇。,Wuzhen lies at the north of Tongxiang County of Zhejiang Province. The town covers an area of 71.19km, with a total population of 60,000。 Because of its warm climate, enough rain and sunshine, Wuzhen is well-known as “the town of fish, rice, and silk”. Wuzhen enjoys a history of over 1,000 years. The town consists of old houses along the river.,We can appreciate the beautiful scene of a water town in Jiangnan. It is just like a natural museum of ancient architecture. You can catch a train to Hangzhou first and take a bus to Wuzhen, its very convenient. So next time you have a holiday, why not try to visit Wuzhen?,Writing,Where is the Forbidden City? The origin of its name? How many parts is it divided? When does it begin and when was it completed? How many emperors had ruled there?,Where is the Forbidden City? The Forbidden City lies in the center of Beijing, north of Tiananmen Square. It has 9, 999 buildings, which are surrounded by a six meter-deep moat and a ten-meter-high wall.,2.The origin of its name? The Forbidden city got its name by forbiddening common people to enter unless they were given permission.,3. How many parts is it divided? The city is divided into two parts, the Outer Court and the Inner Court.,4. When does it begin and when was it completed? The building of the palace began in 1407, the 5th year of the Yongle rule. It was not completed until 1420.,5. How many emperors had ruled there? Until the last emperor of China was driven from the Inner Court in 1924, fourteen emperors of the Ming Dynasty and ten emperors of the Qing Dynasty had ruled there.,北京，16,410.54平方公里, 人口：约2千万. 北京位于华北平原北端，东南与天津相连，为河北省所环绕。中国第二大城市，中华人民共和国的首都、中国中心城市，中国政治、文化和国际交流中心。北京有着3000余年的建城史和850余年的建都史，是“中国四大古都”之一，拥有众多名胜古迹.,去年暑假你去了加拿大著名的水上公园（the World Water Park）。那里给你留下难忘的印象。今天英语课学习“主题公园”，老师让你们以“An Unforgettable Experience”为题，写一篇英语作文，描述这段游水上公园的经历（不少于80词）。 Contents: fine weather, with some of your friends very big, over 200 items of water activities things you do in the park: take a yacht(游艇), enjoy the scenery, white-knuckle ride, go down from height of 25 feet your feeling,Try to correct them!,I could went down from a height of 25 feet. I could go down form a height of 25 feet. In general, we all happy. In general, we were all happy. Liu Jiaqi The water park is so big that it is over 200 items of water activities. The water park is so big that it has over 200 items of water activities. We played many water activities there. First of all, we were took a yacht. We played many water activities there. First of all, we took a yacht.,An unforgettable experience,The World Water Park in Canada is one of the most beautiful parks in the world. I was very lucky to have got a chance to have a wonderful day in the park. When I entered the park, I was shocked by its large area. There are over 200 items of water activities such as water ball, boat-riding, write- knuckle ride and so on. Thanks to the sunny day, I played many items of water activities with some of my friends. First of all, we took a yacht to enjoy the beautiful scenery. After a white-knuckle ride, we amused ourselves by going down from a height of 25 feet place. Time flied! We left the water park tired but excited.,Tele-education,Why some people are against it Why the speaker supports it Measures,Some poor people have no access to it Students cant contact teachers directly,Some poor people have no access to it Students cant contact teachers directly,Some poor people have no access to it Students cant contact teachers directly,Some poor people have no access to it Students cant contact teachers directly,Tele-education,Over the past decade, tele-education has become very common in learning. Many learners welcome it as a great way to learn the subjects (that they like in remote areas). It also provides a wider range of choices as to teachers and lessons. On the contrary, some people are against it because of the following reasons: It makes it impossible for some poor people to have access(通路，入门)to it. Some other students said that they couldnt contacet teachers directly. However, everything has two sides. How to avoid such problem is what we should think about. Designing programs to help teachers and students to contacet each other may be the good way to have teachers and students talking face to face.,假如你是红星中学高二（1）班的学生李华，利用国庆长假期间去了海南岛。请根据以下要点提示，以Traveling to Hainan Island为题，用第一人称为学校英文报写100字左右的短文，可以适当增加细节和发挥。,旅游受到人们的欢迎，去了海南岛 领略了自然美景，交朋友 天气，下雨，看电视 感受 反思（下次注意什么）,1. Recently, traveling is more and more popular. During the holiday, people prefer to traval around China. 2. 欣赏美景 接近自然 放松心灵 交朋友 appreciate the beautiful scenery get close to nature refresh your spirit make friends 4. I felt that the experience was.because. 5. We should . in advance next time. I hope to.,人称,时态,It seems that travel is becoming more and more popular these days. I went to Hainan Island for the National Day vacation. I experienced the beauty of nature as I breathed the fresh air and listened to the sound of sea waves. At the same time, I made a lot of friends. But the weather there changed often and during following few days, I was almost trapped in the room because of the rain. I had nothing much to do except watching TV, which made me feel a bit bored. Next time, I ll take some books with me so that I can spend the time reading books when its impossible to go outdoors.,It seems that travel is becoming more and more popular these days. I went to Hainan Island for the National Day vacation. I experienced the beauty of nature as I breathed the fresh air and listened to the sound of sea waves. At the same time, I made a lot of friends. But the weather there changed often and during following few days, I was almost trapped in the room because of the rain. I had nothing much to do except watching TV, which made me feel a bit bored. Next time, I ll take some books with me so that I can spend the time reading books when its impossible to go outdoors.,美国亿万富翁比尔盖茨和巴比特于2010年访华，与中国富豪分享他们的财富观和慈善理念。此事在网络上引起人们对财富话题的讨论。请根据以下提示，为某英文网站投稿。,赚钱 earn money 存钱 save money in the bank 捐款 donate money to the charity 花钱在某事上spend money in doing sth 给予要比获得好Its better to give than to receive 给人玫瑰，手留余香 Helping others will benefit yourself as well Just as an old saying goes, “Make a gift of rose while your hands stay a lingering fragrance. ”,In my opinion, money plays a very important part in our lives. However, even though we cant live without money, it isnt everything. The most important thing about money is how we spent it and what we do with it. If I had one million dollars, I would set up many schools for children who are in poor areas, because they are badly in need of a good education. Also, I would give away some money to those in need, because its better to give than to receive. The reason why I would do these things is that money itself cant bring us happiness. Only be helping others can we achieve a real of happiness and pleasure.,Dear Jack, I am glad to know you are interested in Chinese culture and that you want to know the similarites and differences between Chiness Tomb Sweeping Day and Easter. Tomb Sweeping Day and Easter are similar in two ways: they are both celebrated in the srping and they are held in memory of the dead. However, their ways of celebrating are quite Different. On Tomb Sweeping Day, the Chinese go to clean the graves of their ancestors and relatives, offering sacrifices and sweeping the graves. As far as I know, Eater is an important religious festival for Christians. It is a time to celebrate Jesuss coming bact to life, and a religious parade and egg rolling are held during the day. I hope my explanations satisfy your curiosity. Yours, Li Hua,Time: hapens/takes place/falls on 清明节在每年的4月5日前后 Tomb Sweeping Day falls on April,5 or so every year.,Purpose: 人 honour/ be in memory of= 节日 be held to honour 清明节纪念祖先。 The Chinese will honour/ will be in memory of their ancestors. Tomb Sweeping Day is held to honour their ancestors,到亲人墓地供上祭品,扫墓祭奠. go to clean the graves and offer the sacrifices to their relatives 复活节举办宗教游行,滚彩蛋活动等. Easter will have religious parade, egg rolling and so on.,Nelson Mandela who helped black people get the same right as white people. He help black people the same right as white people. In order to helped black people get the same rights as white people, he fought for black people. When he young, he helped many poor black people on their legal problems.,英文写作八条基本守 1.Organize your thoughts before writing： brainstorm、make an outline、etc. 下笔前整合思绪：脑力激荡,写出纲要等。 2.Write clearly. Be concise. Avoid wordiness. 写作清晰,务必精简,避免赘言。 3.Use good grammar and write complete sentences. 使用好的文法,写出完整句子。 4.Write simple sentences. Avoid a fancy style. 尝试简单句,避免花俏的句法。,5.Avoid slang、cliche and informal words. 避免俚语、陈腔滥调和非正式用字。 6.Avoid use of the first person （i.e. I/me/my） unless necessary to specific piece. 除非必要,避免使用第一人称：如“我/我的”。 7.Writing naturally. Read it aloud. Does it sound natural？ Does it flow？ 自然挥洒,大声朗诵。整篇文章听起来自然吗？通顺吗？ 8.Move logically from one idea to the next. Dont skip steps. 上下句意要合乎逻辑。别毫无章法乱跳。,as soon as 一就as/so.as不像那样,There are four lovely people in my family. They are hard-working mother, handsome father, beautiful sister and I. My mother is older than all of us, so she is the leader of our family. As an early bird, she is always busy in doing housework. Time flies, my mother is older and older. She is not as kind as other peoples mother. She always blames me as soon as I makes mistake.,书写？时态？谓语动词？首字母？ 通顺？,A story about a little pig,Once upon a time, there was a shy little pig. He fell in love with a pink pig. One day they had a date by the river. They got on well with each other and did not see that there was a wolf approaching to them. The little pig broke wind as soon as he was nervous. The wolf went away when he smelt the terrible gas. The two little pigs were safe. Then they got married and led a happy life together.,作为农业和旅游业结合的新兴产业， 采摘园吸引了许多愿意动手的参与者。请你根据以下要点用英语为王村采摘写一篇100词左右的介绍文字，邀请有兴趣的国外游客来体验田间采摘瓜果的乐趣。 位置 北京北郊，两小时车程 果园面积 13亩 种植方法 纯天然果园，无化肥 活动 自由采摘，品尝，观赏,注意：1. 词数：100左右 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 参考词汇：郊区 suburb 采摘园 fruit-picking garden,要点,要点,要点,要点 1 lie in,要点 2 mu,要点3 No fertilizer, apply,要点4 freely pick and taste,Wangcun Fruit-picking Garden lies in the northern suburbs of Beijing, only two hours ride from downtown. In the 13 mu field, you can freely pick and taste kinds of fruits like strawberries, apples, pears and watermelons. No fertilizer has ever been applied and you can be sure that every bite of the fruit is organic.,位置 北京北郊，两小时车程 果园面积 13亩 种植方法 纯天然果园，无化肥 活动 自由采摘，品尝，观赏,Wangcun Fruit-picking Garden lies in the northern suburbs of Beijing, only two hours ride from downtown. As a new business, this fruit-picking garden has attracted lots of people who are interested in agricultural activities. In the 13 mu field, you can freely pick and taste kinds of fruits like strawberries, apples, pears and watermelons. Each season has its own contribution. No fertilizer has ever been applied and you can be sure that every bite of the fruit is organic. The weekend is coming. Why not take a break and enjoy all the happiness that nature offers to us?,The fruit-picking garden in the suburb in Beijing. The fruit-picking garden is in the suburb of Beijing It have 13,00,00 meters long. It has 13,00,00 meters long. Dong Lulu It attraction many people. It attracts many people. We can picking more and more fruits. Liu Bingtong We can pick various of fruits there. We can freedom pick. We can pick freely. Activity is Taste, watch and enjoy. Jin Mengge We can join in many colorful activities such as tasting the fruits, watching the beautiful scene and enjoying the nature with your friends.,In the spring of 2008, food shortage broke out all over the world, so the prices of rice and many other grains went up rapidly. There are several reasons. First, it is a well-known fact that the population of our country is growing fast. In addition, a large amount of land is being eaten by the desert. Worse still, building factories, roads, railways, and houses uses up a lot of land, especially farmland.,In my opinion, its time for us to take some measures to solve the problems. For example, we should plant more trees around the farmland to prevent the wind and sand damaging our farmland. We should also control the increase of population and limit the use of farmland for buildings. By the way, I call on our scientists to find out better ways to increase production.,在2008年的春天，食物短缺在全世界爆发了因此，大米和很多其他谷物的价格迅速增长起来,In the spring of 2008, food shortage broke out all over the world, so the prices of rice and many other grains went up rapidly.,有几个原因首先，一个众所周知的事实是我国的人口在快速发展,There are several reasons. First, it is a well-known fact that the population of our country is growing fast.,此外，大量的土地正在被沙漠吞噬,In addition, a large amount of land is being eaten by the desert.,更糟糕的是，修建工厂、道路、铁路、房屋用光了很多土地，尤其是耕地。,Worse still, building factories, roads, railways, and houses uses up a lot of land, especially farmland.,我们还应该控制人口增长限制使用耕地来搞建筑。,We should also control the increase of population and limit the use of farmland for buildings.,顺便，我呼吁我们的科学家们研究出更好的办法来增加产量。,By the way, I call on our scientists to find out better ways to increase production.,依我看来，我们该采取一些措施解决这些问题了。,In my opinion, its time for us to take some measures to solve the problems.,比如，我们应该在耕地周围多种树以便制止风沙毁坏耕地。,For example, we should plant more trees around the farmland to prevent the wind and sand damaging our farmland.,Writing (25),2009年六月，美国流行音乐之王迈克尔.杰克逊（Michael Jackson）去世，几天后，他的12名歌迷随之自杀。请根据此报道写一篇词数不少于60的短文，主要内容如下： 1. 对此事的观点 2. 音乐对人的影响 3. 中学生如何对待自己的偶像。 参考词汇：歌迷fan;偶像idol,one point,one point,one point,one point,one point,Ss sentences,Know that I am surprised to hear this news. We should love their lives. Niu linlin In June,2009, American musical Michael Jackson was die out. He dont lonely. Hes fans so proud that they are very happies. Wang Jin Music are good for people. We love he Ling Xiaonan We dont should importance our star. Yang Xuelian I think this fans should intelligent Yu Xiaoxi 7. Im very like his music and his dance. Yang Tong (sad),I was shocked to hear the news that twelve of Michael Jacksons fans killed themselves over the death of their idol.,As middle school students, we should not confuse our love for music with that for the musicians and do whatever they do.,One possible version,I was shocked to hear the news that twelve of Michael Jacksons fans killed themselves over the death of their idol. I think it was a wrong and stupid idea for those crazy fans to end their lives. Music is so powerful that it can create another world for people to stay away from the trouble of the real world. But we should know that the world it creates can never be true. As middle school students, we should not confuse our love for music with that for the musicians and do whatever they do. In that case, we will lose ourselves and sometimes even destroy our own life.,review the report,your idea,音乐对人的影响,中学生如何看待音乐偶像,Travel journal,去年你们学校组织去世界公园参观，请写一篇不少于80字 的短文来介绍你的旅游经历和感想。 作文必须包括以下内容： 两个小时车程 游览顺序：白宫the White House英国大本钟the Big Ben 美国自由女神像 the Statue of Liberty 埃及金字塔 the Pyramid in Egypt. 3. 参观的意义,作文分析：,时态：,过去时,内容： 全文分三部分,介绍去哪参观，什么时候，怎么去的,游览了哪些名胜古迹,有何感想，参观的意义,Last Sunday, I went to the World Park with my classmates by bus. I was so excited, because I had never seen so many popular buildings. After we got there, I went to the White House with my teacher. My teacher said, “It was so beautiful.” So did I. Then we went to other places. There are many buildings in the world Park, for example, the Big Ben , the Statue of Liberty, Louvre Museum and so on. Each of the buildings stands for each countrys culture. They all can increase my knowledge. I like the Statue of Liberty best. Then we bought some souvenirs and played many games. I was very happy. I also took many photos there, It was
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