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短文改错时要注意一下几点： 1 快速阅读，整体把握短文大意2 重视语境以及上下文的关系 3 充分运用基础语言知识找出错误所在（一）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文， 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文 文中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（A）,并在其下面写出该加的词.删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ）划掉修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意： 1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10 处，多者（从第11 处起）不计分The best advice I received in my childhood was from my dad He always gives me s ome advice，but I seldom took them seriously One day he was encouraged me to participate in a spe ech competition So I signed up and after the competition ，I did my best to be full prepared But the moment I stood on the stage ，I was too nervous that my mind completely went blank The experience of lose a competition was really painful Then ， my dad said ， My son ， life is like battlefield You have to lose many time to win the final victory Thanks fo r his advice ， I never give up when I do anything 1. gives-gave.考查谓语动词.根据上句可知本句的谓语动词用过去式gave,表示过去的动作2. them-it.考查代词.代指不可数名词advice用it.3. 去掉 was.考查谓语动词的语态.主语he和谓语动词 encouraged之间是主动关系，表示他鼓励我 ，所以去掉was4. after-before 考查连词本句表示在比赛以前做充分的准备 ，所以用 before引导时间状语the competition 5. full-fully .考查副词.修饰形容词prepared,用副词fully .6. too-so 考查固定句式根据后半句that my mind completely went blank 可知用so修饰nervous,表示如此以至于.7. lose-losing 考查非谓语动词 做介词 The experience of 的宾语，用动名词 losing 8. battlefield前加a.修饰名词 battlefield用不定冠词 a,表示一块B地.9. time-times .考查名词.表示 许多次，many修饰可数名词复数 times.10. for-to 考查固定短语表示幸亏，由于，用固定短语 Thanks to（二）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文 ,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、 删除、或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（人）,并在其下面写上该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改 :在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意 :（1） 每次错误以及修改仅限一词;（2）只允许修改10处,多者 （从第11 处起）不计分。How can you be a good sports audience? First, read your ticket carefully because there are rules writing on the back of it. Second, reach at your seat half an hour before the start of the event but try not to leave when a game is in progress. When you leave, remember to take out your soft drink bottles and other rubbishes. Third, after a excellent performance, applaud warm. If someone fails, your applause will encourage him/her. Finally, enjoying the game require silence. The noise you make may disturb the athletes, that may cause them not concentrate on the game.（ 1）将 writing 改为 written ；（ 2）将at 去掉；（ 3）将but 改为and；（ 4）将out 改为away；（ 5）将rubbishes 改 rubbish ；（ 6）将a 改为an；（ 7）将warm 改为 warmly ；（ 8）将require 改为 requires；（9）将 that 改为 which ；（ 10）在concentrate 前加 to（三）假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文 , 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。 每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、 删除、或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（A ）,并在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改 : 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意 : 1每次错误以及修改仅限一词 ;只允许修改10 处 , 多者 （从第11 处起 ）不计分。Our school is holding an activity to help a school in the poor area, which not only help the students there enrich their lives but also enables us to feel the joy of sharing and appreciate it what we have by helping others.Here is that we can do. First, we can donate our using books, clothes, basketballs, electronic products and so on to them. Second, we can write letters to them regular to share opinions and make friend with them. In addition, invite them to our homes to spend holidays is a good way, where may give them some unforgettable experiences.You all are welcome to join in the activity do what you can to make the better world for us all!(1) 将 help 改为helps；(2) 将 appreciate 后的 it 去掉；(3) 将 that 改为 what；(4) 将 using 改为used；(5) 将 regular 改为 regularly ；(6) 将 friend 改为 friends ；(7) 将 invite 改为 inviting ；(8) 将 where 改为 which ；(9) 在 do 前加 to ；(10)将 the 改为 a。(四)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文， 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。 文中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(A ),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线( ) 划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：(1) 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；(2)只允许修改10处，多者 (从第 11 处起 )不计分。Last Saturday morning, my mother and I were taking bus home. I told her how much her English teacher Miss Smith loved me ， saying I was the teacher s favourite student. I didn t know Miss Smith s mother is sitting behind us. On Monday, Miss Smith kept chat with me after class. To my shames, she told me that what her mother had heard. I thought she would scold me for talking too proud on the bus, so she didn t. She said, “The important thing is that you work for yourself, not as my approval. If you feel that doing well matter to you, you will become your own fan. ”(10) s前加上the或a;(11) 将 her 改为 my;(12) 将 is 改为 was;(13) 将 chat 改为 chatting;(14) 将 shames 改为 shame;(15) 将 that 去掉 ;(16) 将 proud 改为 proudly;(17) 将 so 改为but;(18) 将 as 改为for;(19) 将 matter 改为 matters(五)假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(A) ，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意： (1)每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；（2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11 处起）不计分。Recently, I went with my group to a nearby river. We did much scientific tests to check how the river was clean or not. Surprisingly, it was ! We still, though, took the rubbish we could found out of the river to make sure fish could live there happy. And the other days, our group were planted .some flowers in our school. They are hoping they will come out or make the school look more beautiful. Our group collected rubbish and sold it in order pay for the flowers! We still have some money left. We hope to use it to buy any recycling bins for the school.1 .将 much 改为 many ；2 . 将 how 改为 if 或 whether ；3 . 将 found 改为 find ；4 .将 happy 改为 happily ；5 . 将 days 改为day；6 .去掉 were ；7 .将 They 改为 We ；8 .将 or 改为 and；9 .在pay前加to；10 .将 any 改为some；（六）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文 ,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、 删除、或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（人）,并在其下面写上该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改 :在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意 :（1） 每次错误以及修改仅限一词;（2）只允许修改10处 ,多者 （从第11 处起 ）不计分。How can you be a good sports audience? First, read your ticket carefully because there are rules writing on the back of it. Second, reach at your seat half an hour before the start of the event but try not to leave when a game is in progress. When you leave, remember to take out your soft drink bottles and other rubbishes. Third, after a excellent performance, applaud warm. If someone fails, your applause will encourage him/her. Finally, enjoying the game require silence. The noise you make may disturb the athletes, that may cause them not concentrate on the game.（ 1）将 writing 改为 written ；（ 2）将at 去掉；（ 3）将but 改为and；（ 4）将out 改为away（ 5）将rubbishes 改为 rubbish ；（ 6）将a 改为 an；（ 7）将warm 改为 warmly ；（ 8)将require 改为 requires ；（ 9)将 that 改为 which ;（ 10)在concentrate 前加 to(七)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文， 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。 文中共 有 10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(A),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意： (1)每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；(2)只允许修改10处，多者(从第11 处起 )不计分。One day on my way to school, I went to buy the pancake in a food store, leave my bag on the table while waiting. With the pancake ready, and I paid for it, took “my bag” on the table, and hurriedly headed to school.Seating in the classroom, I was about to take my books out while suddenly I became frozen. It was not my bag! I took the bag for mistake! What surprised me most was there was a large sum of money in it. Calming me down, I turned to the teacher for help.At that time, I come to understand the true meaning of being honestly.(1) 将 the 改为a；(2) 将 leave 改为 leaving ；(3) 将 and 去掉；(4) 将 Seating 改为 Seated/Sitting ；(5) 将 while 改为 when；(6) 将 for 改为by；(7) 在 there 前加 that；(8) 将 me 改为 myself ，或将 me 去掉；(9) 将 come 改为 came；(10) 将 honestly 改为 honest(八)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文， 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。 文中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(A),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线( )划掉。修改：在错的同下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：(1) 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；(2)只允许修改10处，多者(从第11 处起)不计分。Nowadays fewer students take exercise due to various reason and some students fall ill every now and then because of they are not healthy or strong enough. However, we shouldtake exercise regularly to improve our health.First of all, taking PE classes seriously. In PE classes we can build up our bodies with the careful guidance of PE teachers. Secondly, it is of great important to make it a routine to exercise after class or during breaks. In addition, it was also a good idea to join a sports club that you are interested.As the old saying go, The first wealth is health. Lets do more exercise to live a better and healthy life.(1) 将 reason 改为reasons；(2) 去掉 of ；(3) 将 However 改为 Therefore 或者 Thus ；(4) 将 taking 改为 take；(5) 将 with 改为 under ；(6) 将 important 改为 importance ；(7) 将 was 改为 is；(8) 在 interested 后面加 in；(9) 将 go 改为 goes；(10) 将 healthy 改为 healthier(九)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文 ,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(A，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意 :(1)每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;(2)只允许修改10处,多者(从第11 处起 )不计分。I am the shared bike. People can ride me just via a mobile app. So far, we have been wide used in many big cities. Id like to serve for people. But horrible things happen a few days ago. Several people stole some of us without pay their bills on the app and treated us badly. They broke my saddle but even threw my friends everywhere. We felt angry for which those bad guys had done. People have the right use the public facilities, but it is also our duty to use us with care. Designed to help public with traffic problems, we are neither toy nor private vehicles. People should obey the basic rules when using us.(1) 将 the 改为 a；(2) 将 wide 改为 widely ；(3) 将 for 去掉；(4) 将 happen 改为 happened；(5) 将 pay 改为 paying ；(6) 将 but 改为 and；(7) 将 which 改为 what ；(8) 将 right 后加 to ；(9) 将 our 改为 their ；(10) 将 toy 改为 toys ；(十)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文， 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。 文中共有 10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(A),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：( 1)每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；( 2)只允许修改10 处，多者(从第11 处起)不计分。This summer, I attended a journalism-themed summer camp, where I learn a lot.What impressed me most was the interviews carrying out in the street. In thebeginning, I wasnt used to talk to strangers. But with my teammates encouragement, I was able to communicate smooth with them. Then we were noticed most of the answers we got were brief. After a discussion, my teammates and I realized that was why our questions werent open-ended enough. So we changed their questions and our interviewees were more willing to share their ideas with us in end.From this experience Ive gained several skill for interviewing people as a journalist.(1) 将 learn 改为 learnt/learned ；(2) 将 carrying 改为 carried；(3)talk 改为 talking ；(4) 将 teammates 改为teammates；(5) 将 smooth 改为 smoothly ；(6) 去掉 were ；(7) 将 why 改为because；(8) 将 their 改为 our ；(9) 在 in 后加 the；(10)将 skill 改为 skills 。(十一)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文 ,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。 每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、 删除、或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(A，并在其下面写上该加的词。删除 :把多余的词用斜线 ()划掉。修改 :在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意 :(1)每次错误以及修改仅限一词 ;(2)只允许修改10处 ,多者 (从第 11 处起)不计分。As we can see, some students in our school are in poor health, what deserves our attention. It is obvious that poor health is close related to bad living habits. Some students stay up late doing their homework and playing with their mobile phones. As result, they have difficulty concentrating on our lessons in class. Some students dont have a balanced diet. They always eat snacks instead of having healthy meal. Besides, some students never take exercise, which lead to weight problems.It is time to reflecting on our way of life. Lets develop good living habits to keep fit. By having enough sleep, eat a balanced diet and taking regular exercise, we can live in healthily and happily.1 .what 改为which;2 .close 改为closely;3 .and 改为 or;4 .result 前加 a;5 .our 改为 their;6.meal 改为 meals;1.1 ead 改为 leads;8 .reflecting 改为 reflect;9 .eat 改为 eating;10 .去掉介词 in 。(十二)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文， 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。 文 中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(A),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线( )划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意： (1)每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；(2)只允许修改10处，多者(从第11 处起)不计分。Yesterday my Chinese teacher asked me recite a poem today in class. I became very anxiously at once because I had never try a poem. Then I realise that if I practised hard, I could succeed. Therefore, I decided to do his best. After I got home, I stayed in my room, spend all my time reading the poem aloud. This morning when the Chinese teachers came in, my heart raced wildly but my face went red. Though I was quite afraid to stand before my classmates, I finally remembered that what to recite. Lucky, I made no mistake at all.(1) 在 recite 前加 to;(2)将 anxiously 改为 anxious;(3)将 try 改为 tried;(4)将 realise 改为 realised;(5)将 his 改为 my;(6)将 spend 改为 spending;(7)将 teachers 改为 teacher;(8)将 but 改为and;(9)将 that 去掉;(10)将 Lucky 改为 Luckily
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