2022年高中英语人教版选修7 Unit 3 Under the Sea period4 教案2

2022年高中英语人教版选修7 Unit 3 Under the Sea period4 教案2写作指导抱怨信属于书信的一种，要求简洁、清楚、易懂。英文信一般由称呼、正文、结束语、署名组成。称呼(Greeting)：收信人的称呼写在左上角，顶格写。写给熟悉的人用逗号(，)。例如：Dear Auntie，。正文(Body)：此为信的主体部分，从称呼的下一行写起。抱怨信的正文一般先说明抱怨的原因，然后提出要求。应特别注意使用委婉语气的句子，例如：Would you please not make so much noise？(请你别弄出那么大的噪音好吗？)Would you mind not standing there？(请你别站在那儿好吗？)结束语(Closing)：抱怨信的结束语一般写在正文的下方，另起一行。常见的结束语有：Yours sincerely；Yours truly等。署名(Signature)：写信人自己的姓名，写在结束语的下面一行。常用句式1Its a great pity that we found there is something wrong with.2I hope that my problem will get your kind consideration.3I am sure there are technical or manmade errors involved.4I hope you can make an investigation into this matter as soon as possible.5I am writing to make a plaint on.6If it is not properly settled，I would ask you to give my money back，or I would plain to the concerned authorities.7One annoying aspect of your service is.8I have been pleased with your services for years，but now I feel very disappointed.9I wish to express my dissatisfaction about.10It would be highly appreciated if you could.典题示例假设你是李华，上个星期天去市图书馆看书时发现了一些问题。请根据下列提示，用英语给图书馆馆长写一封100词左右的信，反映情况。1新书太少；2书架上的书比较混乱；3管理员工作时彼此闲聊，读者无法安心看书；4阅览室的一盏灯坏了，桌椅有些也被损坏。注意：1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2信的开头和结尾已经为你写好，不计入总词数。写作步骤Step 1审题谋篇写作要求是写一封抱怨信，写作时应注意下面几点：1确定文体：这是一封抱怨信。写作时注意书信的写作特点；2主体时态：文章应以一般现在时为主；3主体人称：由于是向市图书馆指出存在的问题，所以人称应该以第三人称为主。Step 2联想词汇1令人不愉快的事情 2发表我的观点 3管理图书馆 4按正确顺序 5提供好的服务 6集中注意力于 Step 3句式升级1首先，架子上新书不多，其中大多数现在都不流行了。 First，there are not enough new books on the shelves and .(and并列句) First，there are not enough new books on the shelves, .(定语从句)2其次，一些书没有按正确顺序分类，使得读者很难快速找到想要的书。 Second，some books are not sorted in proper order. what we want quickly.(两个简单句) Second，some books are not sorted in proper order， what we want quickly.(定语从句)Step 4连句成篇Dear Sir/Madam，Last Sunday，I went to do some reading in the library.I found something unpleasant. Therefore，Id like to voice my opinions，hoping it will be of help to you to manage the library. Yours，Li Hua答案Step 21something unpleasant2.voice my opinions3.manage the library4.in proper order5.offer good service6concentrate onStep 31most of them are not popular today；most of which are not popular today2It makes it difficult for us readers to find；which makes it difficult for us readers to findStep 4Dear Sir/Madam，Last Sunday，I went to do some reading in the library.I found something unpleasant. Therefore，Id like to voice my opinions，hoping it will be of help to you to manage the library.First，there are not enough new books on the shelves, most of which are not popular today.Second，some books are not sorted in proper order，which makes it difficult for us readers to find what we want quickly.Third，the assistants dont offer good service.They are chatting while we are reading quietly，which makes it difficult for us to concentrate on books.Moreover，there is something wrong with one of the lights as well as some desks and chairs.So，I suggest that you make some necessary changes as soon as possible so that the library can benefit more people.Yours，Li Hua