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短文改错专题突破练181Recently,a famous basketball player has caused public angry by writing on the Great Wall. In the fact,this happens in many place of interest.I had some suggestions to solve this problem.First,make more posters to inform the public the damage of graffiti(涂鸦). Besides,punishments,such as a fine,is necessary to tourists with so bad behavior.Also,I think its helpfully to put up some boards along the tourist attractions that tourists can leave messages.Im sure with our efforts,more and more people will become concerning about protecting cultural relics.答案Recently,a famous basketball player has caused public by writing on the Great Wall.In fact,this happens in many of interest.I some suggestions to solve this problem.First,make more posters to inform the public the damage of graffiti(涂鸦). Besides, punishments,such as a fine, necessary to tourists with bad behavior.Also,I think its to put up some boards along the tourist attractions tourists can leave messages.Im sure with our efforts,more and more people will become about protecting cultural relics.2During my second month of nursing school,our professors gave us a quiz. I had smoothly finished the others questions when I got stuck on the last one:“Whats the first name of the woman who clean the school?”I had seen,many times,the woman,tall and in her fifty,but how could I know her name? I handed in my paper,leave the last question blankly. After a class ended,one student asked for the answer for the question.The professor said,“As you know,that in your careers you will meet many people. You should respect them and care about them,even you just smile and say hello to them.”答案During my second month of nursing school,our gave us a quiz.I had smoothly finished the questions when I got stuck on the last one:“Whats the first name of the woman who the school?”I had seen,many times,the woman,tall and in her ,but how could I know her name?I handed in my paper, the last question .After class ended,one student asked for the answer the question.The professor said,“As you know, in your careers you will meet many people.You should respect them and care about them,even you just smile and say hello to them.”3I still remember the first day I come to this new school.Everything was new to me,what made me realize I was no longer a small child. I had to depend on me.Luckily,I made several good friend.Their interests were similar with mine. I had great English teacher,Maggie.She let me know the important of English.So I decided to learn English hardly. Although it was very difficult at first,but with the help of my teacher,I made rapidly progress.Just as the old saying goes,“Where there is a will,there is a way.”答案I still remember the first day I to this new school.Everything was new to me, made me realize I was no longer a small child.I had to depend on .Luckily,I made several good .Their interests were similar mine.I had great English teacher,Maggie.She let me know the of English.So I decided to learn English .Although it was very difficult at first, with the help of my teacher,I made progress.Just as the old saying goes,“Where there is a will,there is a way.”4My father is the man I respect most.Strict as he may be,however he never fails to show her care and consideration.Once I broke a neighbor window.Seeing nobody around,I ran away immediately.When Dad came home,he noticed my uneasiness and asked me what has happened. I could only tell him a truth. Instead of scold, he praised my honesty and then encouraged me to apologize our neighbor. I learned from this incident that not only does Dad take care of my health and he also teaches me what to be a good citizen.How luckily I am to have such a good father!答案My father is the man I respect most.Strict as he may be,he never fails to show care and consideration.Once I broke a window.Seeing nobody around,I ran away immediately.When Dad came home,he noticed my uneasiness and asked me what happened.I could only tell him truth.Instead of ,he praised my honesty and then encouraged me to apologize our neighbor.I learned from this incident that not only does Dad take care of my health he also teaches me to be a good citizen.How I am to have such a good father!5I have met many teachers since I begin my schooling. Of all my teachers,Mrs.Green is the one who impresses me most.Though she is 50,she looks very young at her age.Comparing with other teachers, Mrs.Green pays more attention to her way of teaching. She tries various ways to make her class lively and interestingly.In her opinion, we will not only know “what” but also understand “why”.So instead of giving us answer immediately,she encourages us to think carefully every time when she puts forward questions. With her help,we have learned how to analyze and settled problems. What the amazing world of “why”she leads us!She is such a learned person that we all admire him very much.答案I have met many teachers since I my schooling.Of all my teachers,Mrs.Green is the one who impresses me most.Though she is 50,she looks very young her age. with other teachers,Mrs.Green pays more attention to her way of teaching.She tries various ways to make her class lively and .In her opinion,we will not only know “what” but also understand “why”.So instead of giving us immediately,she encourages us to think carefully every timeshe puts forward questions.With her help,we have learned how to analyze and problems.What amazing world of “why” she leads us !She is such a learned person that we all admire very much.6Last weekend we went for camping in the mountains with our teacher,Anna. When we arrived,we made a campfire first.Then,Anna taught us to catch fish so that they could have more food to eat that night.I liked the airs there because it was fresh and clean. Many stars were up highly in the sky and the moon looked bright. We all sat around the fire,listening Annas stories about her childhood.She was born into a poor family or she worked very hard to be successful. I was very touched that I couldnt sleep the whole night,thought about being a teacher in the future.When I get home,I said to my parents,“Everything was great about the camping. I want to be the teacher like Anna in the future.”答案Last weekend we wentcamping in the mountains with our teacher,Anna.When we arrived,we made a campfire first.Then,Anna taught us to catch fish so that could have more food to eat that night.I liked the there because it was fresh and clean.Many stars were up in the sky and the moon looked bright.We all sat around the fire,listening Annas stories about her childhood.She was born into a poor family she worked very hard to be successful.I was touched that I couldnt sleep the whole night,/ about being a teacher in the future.When I home,I said to my parents,“Everything was great about the camping.I want to be teacher like Anna in the future.”7Im a huge book lover but like sharing my love for books! So Ive been bought books constantly.Finishing reading one book,I placed it in or around my school so that some of my schoolmate can treat themselves to the book. I especial like placing it on a stone table in the little garden in that students might have time to take a rest. I was delighted an other day when I saw a card left on the table to say thanks.And from the card,I knew my book turned out of to be a birthday gift for a strange girl. It was so lovely find out that my book could bring anyone pleasure!答案Im a huge book lover like sharing my love for books! So Ive been books constantly.Finishing reading one book,I it in or around my school so that some of my can treat themselves to the book.I like placing it on a stone table in the little garden in students might have time to take a rest.I was delighted other day when I saw a card left on the table to say thanks.And from the card,I knew my book turned out to be a birthday gift for a strange girl.It was so lovely find out that my book could bring pleasure!8Now Id like to share with you a strange experience I had a month before. It may sound funny,and its true. After a days hard work I went to bed early than usual. It was about two oclock in the morning,and suddenly I woke up. I heard a noise. I got out of bed and went slow downstairs. I listened carefully. I could heard two men speaking quietly. I believed two thieves had broken into my house and I was really frightened,so I went back to upstairs,and immediately phone the police from my bedroom.The police arrived quickly. They opened front door with a special key and went into the living room.You can imagine what embarrassed I was when they came upstairs and told me we had turned the television off for me and everything was all right.答案Now Id like to share with you a strange experience I had a month .It may sound funny, its true.After a days hard work I went to bed than usual.It was about two oclock in the morning,and suddenly I woke up.I heard a noise.I got out of bed and went downstairs.I listened carefully.I could two men speaking quietly.I believed two thieves had broken into my house and I was really frightened,so I went back upstairs,and immediately the police from my bedroom.The police arrived quickly.They opened front door with a special key and went into the living room.You can imagine embarrassed I was when they came upstairs and told me had turned the television off for me and everything was all right.9Susans family was terrible poor.One Christmas Eve,Susans father saw that Susan had used piece of gold wrapping paper to decorate a shoe-box,where was so precious to their family,and she put it under the Christmas tree. The next morning,Susan takes the box to her dad and said,“This is for you,Dad!”But if he opened it,he found it was empty.“Why do you give me an empty boxes? Dont you know the gold wrapping paper is such expensive to us?” Her dad said angrily.Susan cried,said,“Dad,it isnt empty.I blew kisses into it until it was all full.”Hearing of this,the dad felt regretful,he held Susan in his arms but said,“Sorry,my dear,I love you!”答案Susans family was poor.One Christmas Eve,Susans father saw that Susan had used piece of gold wrapping paper to decorate a shoe-box, was so precious to their family,and she put it under the Christmas tree.The next morning,Susan the box to her dad and said,“This is for you,Dad!”Buthe opened it,he found it was empty.“Why do you give me an empty ?Dont you know the gold wrapping paper is expensive to us?”Her dad said angrily.Susan cried,“Dad,it isnt empty.I blew kisses into it until it was all full.”Hearing this,the dad felt regretful,he held Susan in his arms said,“Sorry,my dear,I love you!”10In hot summer,there are many kind of drinks such as water,tea and coffee.When you are very hot and feel thirst,which is the best you should drink?Scientists say water is very important for people.Water is needed for cooling the body on the hot day.Water carries body heat to the surface of the skin,but the heat is lost by sweating. Scientists say in hot weather,drink cold water is the best.Cold water helps cool us faster than warmer water.This is because it takes more heat inside the body and carries them away faster.However,scientists think why sweet drinks are not good in hot weather.The sugar slows the drinks from getting the blood system.Tea and coffee are also not effective.Doctors also warn against alcoholic drinks.Alcohol speed the loss of body water.答案In hot summer,there are many of drinks such as water,tea and coffee.When you are very hot and feel ,which is the best you should drink?Scientists say water is very important for people.Water is needed for cooling the body on hot day.Water carries body heat to the surface of the skin, the heat is lost by sweating.Scientists say in hot weather, cold water is the best.Cold water helps cool us faster than water.This is because it takes more heat inside the body and carries away faster.However,scientists think sweet drinks are not good in hot weather.The sugar slows the drinks from getting the blood system.Tea and coffee are also not effective.Doctors also warn against alcoholic drinks.Alcohol the loss of body water.7
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