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4版：Travelling by Bike写作任务假设你是张华，你的英国朋友Sam来中国旅游，你建议他骑自行车旅游。请结合以下要求，向他介绍自行车旅行。要求：1. 简要说明骑自行车旅行的好处；2. 着重说明这种旅行方式应注意的事项（不少于3项）；3. 词数：60-80词。参考词汇：tool 工具；obey 遵守 写作分析从写作任务上看这篇文章是说明文，那么根据说明文的写作要素应注意以下几点：1. 说明的重点要明确。从“要求”看，骑自行车旅行的好处要写得简单，这个可结合中国的实际情况，如乘车人多、易堵车等现象或骑自行车带来的好处。当然，重点应是这一旅行方式应注意的事项，可结合自己骑自行车的经验或平时的观察；也可适当列举几点或将其中某些点进行拓展叙述。2. 本文章时态适宜用一般现在时。3. 对注意事项的列举可以采用First, .; Second, .; Third, .的结构。4. 句式：可使用祈使句或if引导的条件状语从句。5. 参考句型：You are welcome to .You can take . Riding a bike is good because . But you should pay attention to . I hope you have a good journey!写作初稿You are welcome to China. China is a good place for travelling. I think you can travel by bike although there are many ways to choose. Traveling by bike is good for your health. You can save some money. You can also get lots of fun. What should you pay attention to? First, you should take tools with you before you start. Second, you must obey the traffic rules. Third, you shouldnt ride too fast.初稿点评：作者介绍了这种旅游方式的一些好处，然后说明了三点注意事项。文章脉络比较清楚，也符合说明文的基本特点。但是，这篇文章也存在一些问题：1. 详略不太合理，有“头重脚轻”的感觉。文章在注意事项方面笔墨太少，可以多写几点，也可就某一点稍作发挥，使文章更充实、饱满。如携带工具是为了修车，不遵守交通规则可能会发生危险等。2. 缺乏适当的过渡词。如：Traveling by bike is good for your health. You can save some money. You can also get lots of fun. What should you pay attention to? 这些句子之间若增加一些过渡词，则文章会更连贯。写作成稿Welcome to China. China is a good place for travelling. I think that you should travel by bike because you cannot only save money but also have a lot of fun. However, make sure that you obey all the traffic rules to keep safe and dont ride too fast. Always remember to have a rest when you are tired and take good care of your bike.下面举些好的句子供同学们参考：1. You should be careful not to suffer from heatstroke when traveling in summer. 如果你在夏天旅游的话，你应该谨防中暑。2. You cannot only save money but also enjoy yourself. 你既可以节省钱，也可玩得开心。3. Take some tools with you, in case that you fall in trouble. 随身带些工具，以防出现故障。4. When traveling, remember to put safety first. 旅行时，记得把安全放在第一位。A Dervish and a Rich Man 苦行僧与富翁富有并不总是指钱财，容易满足的人比拥有许多钱财的人更富有。A dervish was praying silently. A rich man saw him and then gave him a bag of gold, I know you need the money. Please take it!Just a moment, the dervish replied. Im not sure if it is right for me to take your money. Are you a rich man? Do you have more money at home?Oh, yes. I have at least one thousand gold pieces at home, said the man proudly.Do you want a thousand gold pieces more? asked the dervish.Yes, of course. Every day, I work hard to make more money.And do you wish for a thousand gold pieces more beyond that?Sure. Every day I pray that I may make more and more money.The dervish pushed the bag of gold back to the rich man, I am sorry, but I cannot take your gold, he said. A rich man cannot take money from a beggar.How can you call yourself a rich man and me a beggar? the rich man asked.The dervish replied, I am a rich man because I am content with whatever God sends me. You are a beggar, because no matter how much you have, you are begging God for more.Notes:意为：默默地祈祷proudly adv. 骄傲地content with sth. 对满足EQ Test 情商测试Where Has Your Time Gone? 你的时间跑哪儿去了？你是不是一直在苦恼为什么时间总是不够用？想知道你的时间都跑到哪里去了吗？做一做下面的测试吧！Have you ever complained that you dont have enough time? Do you want to know where you time has gone? The following test will provide you with some information.If you were provided with a super power, which one would you like to have?A. The power to travel through different times.B. The power to prevent others from seeing you.C. The power to read peoples minds. D. The power to be young forever.Key: If you choose A, it means you always spend your time daydreaming. You are the sort of person who has lots of ideas and dreams, but seldom puts them into practice. If you choose B, it means that you usually waste your time watching TV or surfing the Internet. You are not an outgoing person. You dont like to have close relations with others, or want to be the focus among people. If you choose C, it means you often waste time playing cards, making calls and gossiping. You are curious about everything and that makes you want to collect different kinds of information. If you choose D, it means you always spend you time shopping, looking in the mirror and on a diet. You are the sort of person who pays a lot of attention to you looks.Note:gossip v. 传播流言蜚语3版：“不好也不坏”咋表达今天我们要讲三个习惯用语，它们的意思都是指一些东西不是很好，也不是非常坏，只是一般而已。1. run of the mill 一般化的；质量一般的；平平的；不突出的run的意思是跑。然而，在run of the mill这个习惯用语里，它的意思是一个工厂生产产品的活动，mill在这里是指工厂。run of the mill这个说法最初的意思是一个纺织工厂每天生产的纺织品。现在，人们用run of the mill来形容某样东西不是特别好，但是还算可以。我们来举一个例子！这是一个人在说他昨晚看的一个电影，他就是用run of the mill来描述这个电影的。“This movie had so much publicity I thought it would be great. But to tell you the truth, it was just run of the mill. Sure, I enjoyed it but its the kind of film you forget about as soon as you leave the theater.”“这部电影做了那么多的宣传，我以为一定是非常好。可是，我告诉你，它只是一般而已。当然咯，我看的时候也觉得很好，可是这种电影，你一出电影院就忘了。”2.no great shakes 平凡的，并不出众的，不重要的shakes在这里不是和别人握手的意思。shake hands里的shake是一个动词，而no great shakes里的shakes是个名词，而且还是复数。在这里，shakes是指赌博用的骰子。参加赌博的人把骰子拿在手里摇几下，然后往桌上一扔，看看是几点。no great shakes的意思是你得到的点数不是很高，也不是很低。 no great shakes这个习惯用语两个世纪以前就已经出现了，但是现在用的人还是很多。我们也来举个例子。下面说话的人是华盛顿职业篮球队巫师队的球迷，可是他对这个球队在这个季度里的表现不是很满意。“Im afraid our Washington Wizards havent been no great shakes this year. In fact theyve lost more games than theyve won and most likely they wont even qualify for the playoff series. Maybe next season well do better.”“我认为我们华盛顿的巫师队今年表现一般。事实上，它们输的次数比赢的次数更多。它们很可能会没有资格参加决赛。也许我们下一个季度会打得好一些。”3. nothing to write home about 不值得大书特书的事；没什么值得说的nothing的意思是什么也没有；to write home就是写信回家。nothing to write home about这个习惯用语是在1917年第一次世界大战期间开始普遍使用的。那时候，美国兵被送到法国去帮助法国和英国跟德国打仗。大多数年轻的美国士兵从来没有离开过家。他们在写信回家的时候说他们在这个陌生的国家感到很孤单，又不会讲法语。许多人说，法国这个国家没有什么可以写信告诉家人的。这种情绪很快就形成一个广泛使用的习惯用语，它的意思和上面两个习惯用语相同，就是：没有什么特殊，没有什么不同寻常的地方。下面就是一个例句：At college I needed a way to get to school so I bought a used motorbike. Its nothing to write home about its hard to start and eats a lot of gas. But its all I can afford to spend and it does get me to classes okay.在上大学的时候，我得想办法怎么去学校。所以我就买了一辆旧的摩托车。那不是一辆很好的车，它很难发动，消耗汽油很多。可当时我只买得起这样的东西。它也确实让我能到学校去上课。你是idle car owner “捧车族”吗？买得起车却添不起“料”的有车族越来越多，所以，有些已经买了车的人不用车，宁可把车“捧”起来闲置，这种新型用车人群被称为idle car owner “捧车族”。Idle car owners are the car owners who rarely get behind the wheel of their vehicles because of rising petrol, insurance and registration costs. Their cars linger in parking lots or on streets the majority of the time, only being used at weekends or during holidays and vacations.所谓“捧车族”就是那些因为油费、保险、登记费用上涨而极少开车的有车族。他们大多数时间把车停在停车场和街道上，只有在周末或者节假日才开车出行。Having a car is convenient for commuting or taking recreational trips. But nowadays, some private car owners are leaving their cars in the garage, driving as infrequently as possible. Surveys show that ten percent of private car owners in Beijing have become idle car owners.拥有车确实便于上下班及休闲出行。但是如今，很多私家车主把他们的车留在车库里，尽量少开车。调查显示，北京10%的私家车主成为“捧车族”。Many factors, like traffic, economic status, and parking fees, have restricted peoples driving. The deterioration of these conditions has resulted in rising driving costs. Improved public transportation is another factor leading people to drive less.包括交通、经济条件、停车费用等很多因素限制了人们开车。这些条件的恶化导致开车成本上升。公共交通改善也是人们少开车的另一个原因。Fax the Exam 中考传真中考方向标1. John is the boy legs were badly hurt in the accident. (2011年天津)A. whose B. that C. who D. which点拨：选A。考查定语从句。先行词是人，排除D，根据句意：谁的腿，用whose。故选A。2. Li Mei is the student handwriting is the best in our class. (2011年铜仁)A. whose B. whom C. who D. that点拨：选A。考查定语从句的用法。who作主语指人，whom作宾语指物，that既可作主语又可作宾语，whose用来指人或物。只用作定语。由handwriting可推断关系代词作定语。故选A。3. I hate those dont help others when they are in trouble. (2011年河源)A. who B. which C. what D. where点拨：选A。考查定语从句的用法。who作主语指人，该句的先行词为those，指代人，故用who。故选A。4. The first thing we should do is to tell him the news. (2011年三亚)A. who B. which C. that D. whom点拨：选C。考查定语从句。首先容易排除A和D，因为先行词是物而不是人，又由于先行词前面有序数词修饰，所以只能选C。5. We couldnt finish our work so early your help. (2011年丽水)A. without B. with C. for D. by点拨：选A。本题为句意猜测题。句意为“没有你的帮助，我们不能如此早地完成工作。”6. A big earthquake hit Japan the afternoon on March 11th, 2011. (2011年内江)A. in B. on C. at点拨：选B。在具体的某一天要用介词on。7. We should protect the animals danger. (2011年清远)A. on B. in C. of D. at点拨：选B。in danger是固定搭配，意为“在危险中”。句意为“我们应该保护危险中的动物。”
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