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园丁网数学第一站成套数学资料免费下载 www.yszybase.com专题二十三 书面表达之图画式1.【2015上海】Guided WritingDirections: Write an English composition in 120150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.学校即将举办“读书节”，目前正广泛征集“读书节”宣传册图片。假设你是该校学生潘阳，你已找到以下三幅图片，决定给读书节组委会写一封信，推荐其中一幅，你的信须包括以下内容：1. 简单描述你想推荐的那幅图片；2. 阐述你用这幅图片宣传“读书节”的理由。【参考答案】Dear Sir/ Madam,Since the Reading Festival is around the corner, Im writing to recommend a picture which can be used in the brochure to remind the students of the pleasure of reading.In the picture, three students are sitting at the table, discussing heatedly what they have just read. It seems that they have had a lot of fun through the discussion. Though it is admitted that reading is mostly a personal activity which needs quietness and concentration, as far as Im concerned, it can also be a sharing experience when the same book is being appreciated. Just imagine that you have read a terrific detective story with fascinating and intricate plots. You are so amazed by the genius of the writer and you cant help sharing it with your classmates or best friends, who turn out to have been deeply impressed as well. The moment you mention the book, the passion and enthusiasm about the story will explode which can never be gained on your own. My ideal atmosphere of reading is just like that, through which you can not only appreciate the content by yourself, but also have the pleasure of sharing the plots or opinions with your peers, which will ultimately enhance your understanding of the book. To sum up, the reason of my recommendation is quite simple and apparent that reading, instead of being dull and isolating, can be full of participation and common interest. I sincerely hope that you will take my suggestion into consideration and Im looking forward to your early reply.Yours sincerely,Pan Yang【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。运用定语从句a picture which can be used in the brochure to remind the students of the pleasure of reading.; a personal activity which needs quietness and concentration; your classmates or best friends, who turn out to have been deeply impressed as well；My ideal atmosphere of reading is just like that, through which you can not only appreciate the content by yourself, but also have the pleasure of sharing the plots or opinions with your peers, which will ultimately enhance your understanding of the book； 运用连词 Though, 运用副词 deeply 修饰impressed运用了宾语从句discussing heatedly what they have just read；It seems that they have had a lot of fun through the discussion; Just imagine that you have read a terrific detective story; it is admitted that reading is mostly a personal activity；I sincerely hope that you will take my suggestion into consideration此外，文章还使用了大量习语和短语，如not only but also; as far as Im concerned; To sum up ; share with; 等。【考点定位】考查描述图片及表达理由。【名师点睛】一篇好的文章除了书写工整，还需要条理清晰以及充分利用各种句式和语法表达。可以适当地记忆一些表达的模，板比如说总结，开头和结尾。2.【2015福建】书面表达(满分25分）请阅读下面图画，按要求用英语写一篇词数为120左右的短文。 内容包括：1. 描述画面；2. 概述其含义；3. 谈谈个人感想。 凿壁偷光注意：1. 短文开头已给出,不计入总词数；2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯；3. 短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息；参考词汇：凿，钻：boreIn the picture,【答案】In the picture ,we can see a boy in worn clothes,sitting at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it.A weak ray of light came in through a small hole in the wall and he was absorbed in his reading.This is a well-known story from ancient Chinese idiom.The boy, being poor ,couldnt afford even a candle,so he bored a hole in the wall to “steal” light from his neighbour s house to read at night.The moral of the story is spare no effort to accquire knowledge and never get discouraged easily no matter how difficult the situation may beOf course, things are totally different today It is not the story itself but what is reflected in the story that counts.Hard work pays off.We should take pains to improve ourselves through learning and get perpared for the future.【亮点分析】文章第一段描述图片，第一句中用到了动词ing形式的非谓语动词做伴随状语和with 的复合结构In the picture ,we can see a boy in worn clothes,sitting at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it.图中我们可以看见一个男孩穿着破旧的衣服坐在一个堆满书的桌子旁边。A weak ray of light came in through a small hole in the wall and he was absorbed in his reading.一丝微弱的光亮从墙上的一个小洞穿过，他沉静在自己的阅读中。第二段第一句开始说这个图片的主题。This is a well-known story from ancient Chinese idiom.这是一个众人周知的中国古代成语。第二句也是用了一个分词结构表示伴随状语The boy, being poor ,couldnt afford even a candle,so he bored a hole in the wall to “steal” light from his neighbour s house to read at night.这个贫穷的男孩甚至不能够买得起一根蜡烛，于是他把墙凿了一个洞，从他邻居那里偷了一些光在夜晚阅读。第二段最后一句用了一个no matter引导的让步状语从句。The moral of the story is spare no effort to accquire knowledge and never get discouraged easily no matter how difficult the situation may be.故事的精神是要不遗余力的获取知识，并且不管有多么困难的情况从不轻易气馁。第三段结束Of course, things are totally different today .当然，现在可完全不同了。第二句是一个not but 结构以及宾语从句It is not the story itself but what is reflected in the story that counts.不是这个故事本身而是这个故事反映出来的东西才是重要的。俗语：Hard work pays off.功夫不负有心人。We should take pains to improve ourselves through learning and get perpared for the future.我们应该带着苦来通过学习来改进自己并且为未来做准备。【考点定位】看图说话写作。【名师点睛】本文考查看图说话写作，要求学生仔细描述图片并且发表自己的感受。一篇好的文章除了书写工整，还需要条理清晰以及充分利用各种句式和语法表达。可以适当地记忆一些表达的模，板比如说总结，开头和结尾以丰富文章的内容。3.【2015北京】假如你是红星中学学生李华。根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，介绍在“传统文化进校园“活动中，面向人艺术家学习捏面人的过程。并以”A Day with a Craftsman”为题，给校刊”英语角“写一篇英文稿件。注意：词数不少于60.提示词：一个面团a piece of dough 面人dough figurine【答案】 Last Tuesday, our class invited an old craftsman to teach us how to make dough figurines. When the craftsman came into the classroom, we gave him a warm welcome and two boys helped him with the tool box. First, he showed us the basic steps and skills of making dough figurines. We stood around him and watched attentively. Then we started to have a try ourselves. The old man walked around and helped us patiently.Finally, we put the figurines we made on the table and took pictures with the old craftsman. Looking at the figurines, we were all very excited.We hope we can have more activities of this kind!【解析】试题分析：本文依然用四幅图的形式展现了一个活动的过程，与往年一样，体裁为记叙文。与往年不同的是，命题并未给出作文开头，需学生自己写一个事件的概括及总体感受作为文章的第一段。【亮点说明】范文注意使用First, Then, Finally等来衔接句子和段落，表示事情发生的时间顺序，使作文更有条理，做到了行文连贯。全文适用的是一般过去时，注意了文章上下文时态保持一致的原则。范文使用了一些重要的语法知识：非谓语动词Looking at the figurines, we were all very excited.；定语从句we put the figurines we made on the table；时间状语从句When the craftsman came into the classroom, we gave him a warm welcome and two boys helped him with the tool box. 语法知识使用得当，叙事清晰。【考点定位】图表类记叙文【名师点睛】本题考查的细节是手工艺人教大家如何去做这个东西，学生认真聆听，是教育学。第二幅图最重要的点就是学生能不能找到学生认真聆听这个环节，因为老师教一定能看得出来，但是学生能不能写到学生在听，这应该是一个得分点。第三幅图是一个指导。所以，重点在于一对一这样对应的指导关系。最后一幅图是我们在上课的时候会重点讲的照相，大家很欢乐，做成一个作品。 所以，除了四幅图的要点之外，所以，重点在于一对一这样对应的指导关系。所以写好这样的作文一定要抓住细节，才能得分。还需要注意时态，词汇不要拼写错误，多用复合句式才能体现出亮点。考生切忌在文章开篇犯低级的语法错误，尤其注意时态、单复数及冠词的正确使用。相比于实用性强的应用文来说，情景作文可以在保证要点齐全的前提下适当增加长难句的使用，如对非谓语、三大从句及连词进行灵活运用。关注句式的多样性及用词的准确性对取得该板块的高分会有更大的保障。
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