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六、读写综合【考纲要求】读：能够根据不同的阅读目的运用简单的阅读策略获取信息。写：1、能够根据写作要求准备素材，起草短文、短信。 2、能够根据要求写出完整的句子，做到书写正确，语法基本无误。 3、能使用常见的连接词表示顺序和逻辑关系。 4、能简单描述人物或事件。 5、能够按照所给图示或表格写出简单的段落或操作说明。【教师点拨】读写综合是一种综合性题型。它考查学生从短文或信件中提取、归纳自己所需要信息的能力并要求学生能够恰当运用所归纳的信息来表达自己的思想、发表自己的观点、描述生活经历中的人物或事件等的能力。既考查了学生读的能力，又考查了学生写的能力。信息卡中的五个题目全部是名词形式，学生可以根据题目要求在文章中找答案。写作要注意以下几点：1认真审题，不要遗漏写作要求中的任何一个要点（给分点）。2根据写作要求列好提纲，分好段落。 写作模式：文章一般分为三段。第一段陈述观点(Topic sentences)。第二段用具体的事例（信息点）来支撑所陈述的观点(Detail 1, Detail 2)。第三段总结（Conclusion）。第一部分引入主题句，陈述自己的观点。（Topic sentences）第二部分正文具体事例（题目中的信息点）First,.Second,.第三部分结尾 总结（号召或呼吁）（Conclusion）3、注意语法、句法知识的灵活运用。（1）语态、时态要准确无误。（2）主谓语要一致，主语的人称和数要和谓语一致。（3）注意人称代词的宾格形式。（3）注意冠词的用法，例如： He is an honest student. 中的an不能写成a。（4）注意拼写、标点符号和大小写。4、多用简单句型，但可适当地运用一些连接词或复合句来提高文章的层次。5、遇到不会表达的句子，可采用变通的办法，化难为易，化繁为简。总之，所造句子要正确、得体、符合英语表达习惯。 6认真检查，改正错误。中考作文评卷是根据要点、语言准确性、上下文的连贯性来给分，根据错误多少来扣分。因此，花时间用来检查错误是很重要的。从以下几个方面进行检查：（1）格式是否有错；（2）拼写有无错误；（3）语言是否用错；（4）时态、语态有无错误；（5）标点有无错误；（6）人称是否用错。7注意书写工整，卷面整洁。这与得分高低直接相关。【中考回放】2016年广东省初中毕业生学业考试英语试题读写综合（本大题分为A、B两部分, 共20分）A.信息归纳（共5小题, 每小题1分, 共5分）请阅读网络上的两则关于溺水事故的报道, 根据所提供的信息, 完成信息卡, 把答案写 在答题卡指定的位置上。Do You Put off What You Should Be Done TodayUntil Tomorrow.Richards tells about time wastingSeptember 25th,2015Wages sin as hundreds of emails after we put Dr Rowman Pellings article Can You Manage Your Time Wellon our website.I started decorating the bathroom in 2006 when I moved into this house, the tins of painting I still lying there nine years later. I still havent decided what color paint Im going to use. It really troubles me a lot.by Caroline, New York Im still getting round to put away the Christmas trees used last December and its now September. In June I decided I might as well leave it because it would be Christmas soon. Anyway, whats wrong with having a Christmas trees throughout the year?by Polly London When I was traveling in Britain with my family, I bought a book called 52 Steps To Prevent TimeWasting. But I was so busy with my work that I could never find time to really even one word of it. Ten years has passed since then, and I cant remember where it is now.by Craig, Toronto Im furniture businessman.I once sold a set of British furniture to a customer from japan, but I didnt send him the furniture on time, which made me very embarrassed. Instead, I told him that I couldnt find a writer shipping company to send him the furniture.Ted Roseland, SydneyInformation CardThe name of Dr Rowan Pellings article.81.The year of Caroline moved into this house.82.The thing Polly wanted to put away.83.The city Craig comes from84.Ted Roselands job85.B.书面表达（本题15分）根据要求完成短文写作，请将作文写在答题卡指定的位置上。 现在很多学生不能好好管理时间，以致影响了学习，请你就此写一篇短文，谈谈你的看法。内容包括:1. 你或你的同学一次未能按时完成学习任务的经历，任务内容拖延的原因及后果。2. 对如何管理好时间提出两点建议。作文要求:1. 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。2. 语句连贯词数80个左右，作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数，也不必抄写在答题卡上了。Nowadays, many students cant make good use of their time and this has a bad influence on their study._评分标准A信息归纳(共5小题，每小题1分)信息准确，给满分；信息不完整或出现无关信息，每题扣0.5分；信息错误不给分。B书面表达(1题，共15分)1评分原则与方法： 从内容与语言两方面予以分档评分。内容方面要求考生能完整地按写作要点进行表述，要点详略得当，表述合理，词数符合写作要求。语言方面要求学生表达准确连贯，符合逻辑。允许学生合理运用原文句式结构，但不可以照抄原文。如考生把文章所给的开头部分抄写在答题卡上，不扣分（即使抄写有错误！）2内容分与语言分的分配内容分：7分(1)任务内容（1分）、拖延的原因（1分）及后果（1分）3分(2)两点建议（每条建议2分）2+2分内容要点完整且词数符合写作要求的作文可以得7分，词数在70以下的作文在内容三酌情扣分。语言分：8分第一档：8分 要求：内容涵盖所有要点，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑，只有个别语言错误。第二档：6-7分 要求：内容涵盖绝大多数要点，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑，但有少数语言错误。第三档：4-5分 要求：内容涵盖大部分要点，表达较为清楚，连贯，基本符合逻辑，但有一些语言错误。第四档：1-3分 要求：内容涵盖部分要点，能写出少数正确的句子，但整体表达不太连贯，且语言错误较多。第五档：0分 空白卷或完全没有相关内容。确定语言分档次时要考虑内容的涵盖，每少一个要点语言分降一个档次评分。参考答案：A. 信息归纳(共5小题，每小题1分)1.Can You Manage Your Time Well 2. 2006 3.the Christmas tree used last December 4.Toronto 5.a furniture businessmanB书面表达(本题15分)参考例文一：Nowadays, many students cant make good use of their time and this has a bad influence on their study. Last Sunday our teacher told us to write a report in two days. But I lose myself in computer games and I couldnt hand it on time. So, I was left behind after class to finish it. From this, we know its important to manage our time well. Here are two tips. First, make a timetable for the tasks we are going to finish. Second, carry out the timetable without any delay and never put off todays work till tomorrow. If we can follow these tips, we can manage our time well. (93 words).参考例文二： Nowadays, many students cant make good use of their time and this has a bad influence on their study. Last summer vacation, my English teacher asked us to recite some passages we had learned. I plannned to recite one passage a day. However, I spent much time chatting with my calssmates on Wechat. Then I had to stay up to finish the task on the last day. But I couldnt make it and was punished by the teacher. To manage our time well, we should try to keep away from our mobile phones so that we can put our heart into our task. Secondly, we should make a good plan and follow it strictly. (95words)【真题演练】一、2015年广东省初中毕业生学业考试英语试题A信息归纳请阅读网络上两则关于溺水事件的报道，根据所提供的信息，完成信息卡，把答案写在答题卡指定的位置上。Recently, more and more people are reported dead from drowning(溺水)accidents. Here are two reports from www.xinhuanet.com.Seven People Drowned in a Reservoir(水库)Reporter Tang got the news from Guangdong Provincial Government that people died in a drowning accident on April 5th, 2015.A 17yearold girl, Xiao Yi, fell into a reservoir while washing hands after a tomb(墓) sweeping with her family. Her sister, her parents, her brother and some of her relatives jumped into the water one after one to save her, although they didnt have good swimming skills. Unfortunately, none of them succeeded. As a result, Xiao Yi and six of her family members lost their lives.Three People Lost Their Lives in the Dongjiang RiverOn May 1st, 2015, seven middle school students went swimming in the Dongjiang River. At first, they had a great time playing in the water. Suddenly one of the boys had a cramp(抽筋). He went up and down in the water and shouted for help. Two of them tried to save him, but got drowned. At that time, a man called Li Jinlin was fishing nearby. When he heard the shout, he jumped into the water without a second thought. He tried his best to save the second one, he ran out of energy and couldnt go up again. Two students and he lost their lives.Information CardThe website for the readers to get the news reports81. The time of the first accident82. The thing Xiao Yi was doing when she fell into the reservoir83. The person who saved a student in the Dongjiang River84. The number of the people who lost lives in the two accidents85. B.书面表达每年夏天，溺水事故频发。 请你就此写一篇短文谈谈你的看法。内容包括： 1我们应该如何防止此类事故发生？(两点建议) 2如果看到有人落水，我们应该如何施救？ 3呼吁同学们热爱生命，注意安全。作文要求：1.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实姓名。2语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数，也不必抄写在答题卡上。Almost every year in summer, many people are reported dead from drowning accidents. How to prevent such sad accidents？_二、2014年广东省初中毕业生学业考试英语试题A信息归纳请阅读下面这篇文章，根据所提供的信息，完成信息卡，把答案写在答题卡指定的位置上。Woodlands Junior SchoolHunt Road, Tonbndge, Kent. the UKoffice woodlands_junior. kent. sch. ukWelcome to Woodlands Junior School. Our school is big and it has 380 students aged 711. However, it only had 108 students and four teachers when it was open on September 10th, 1964.Main Teaching BuildingAs you can see, the school has a huge yard and next to it is the main teaching building. It is a twostorey building with twelve classrooms, six on each floor. In each classroom there is a computer, an overhead projector (投影仪), and a smart whiteboard.It also has a small reading area with different kinds of books offered by the students.LibraryOur school library is used for all the reading classes weekly and at lunch times. The members of the reading club also meet here and do some reading after school.School HallWe have a fantastic school hall. It is used for gym, meetings and having lunch. It is the place where we hold many events, such as school plays, concerts, indoor games and so on. Other RoomsWe have a wellequipped music room for music lessons, a computer room of thirtytwo computers and a large staffroom for teachers to have a rest during lunch times.PlaygroundsWe are lucky to have two playgrounds. They are used by the students for ball games and crosscountry runs. Our students enjoy themselves here after school every afternoon.Welcome to pay a visit to Woodlands Junior SchoolInformation CardThe country which the school is in81.The opening date of the school82.The number of the classrooms on each floor83.The people who the staffroom is for84.The activities that the students can do on the playgrounds85.B.书面表达根据要求完成短文写作，请将作文写在答题卡指定的位置上。广东正在创建教育强省，学校需要改善办学条件。你所在的学校正在就如何改善学校现有的设施设备征求学生的意见。请你在学校的官方微博上留言，内容包括：1你喜欢学校哪个场所的设施设备以及喜欢的原因；2选取学校现有的两个场所谈谈设施设备的不足：这两个场所里还缺少哪些设施设备或物品；这些设施设备或物品的缺乏所带来的负面影响；如何改善。作文要求：1不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。2语句连贯，词数80个左右。开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。In my opinion, some facilities(设施)and equipment(设备)in our school are quite good. _ Li Ming三、2013年广东省初中毕业生学业考试英语试题A信息归纳仔细阅读下文，根据所提供的信息完成信息卡，把答案写在答题卡指定的位置上。Our class had a weekly class meeting this week.We talked about how to deal with lies, hoaxes(骗局) or rumors (谣言)Here are the stories some students told.Zhang Wei: Yesterday my friend Jim went to school without his homework.He told the teacher that his dog ate it.It was just an excuse he made to cover the fact that he didnt do his homework.The teacher knew about that and made Jim stay to finish his homework after school.Sometimes we think we can avoid trouble by making excuses when we do something wrong, but were really making the trouble bigger.Chen Ping: Last week I got a message.It said，“A little girl called Julia has brain cancer.The girl will get three cents from American Online each time this message is forwarded(转发)So please be kind and forward this to everyone you know.If not, you will have bad luck for a year.” In fact, it is just one of the silly chain letters(连锁信)to cheat you and waste your time.Xu Yan: A big earthquake (地震) hit Yaan, Sichuan on April 20th.The earthquake was strongly felt by people in Chengdu.A rumor said Chengdu would be hit by a bigger earthquake in the coming days.For the next several days, thousands of people camped outside their houses at night because of fear.Besides, many people rushed to buy food, water, medicine and so on.Some businessmen used peoples fear of earthquake to help sell their goods (商品) at a higher price.Of course, nothing happened in the end.Information CardThe topic of this weeks class meeting81.Jims excuse for not bringing his homework82.Julias illness83.The place people in Chengdu camped when the rumor came84.The people who sold their goods at a higher price85.B.书面表达根据要求完成短文写作，请将作文写在答题卡指定的位置上。大千世界，无奇不有。相信同学们也遇到过这类谎言、骗局或谣言。假设你叫李明，是红星(Hongxing)中学九(1)班的学生，请你写一篇发言稿。内容包括：1自我介绍；2描述一次类似的经历，并说说你当时的感受；3以后再经历这样的事，作为学生，我们该怎么做？请提出两个建议或做法。作文要求：1不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名；2语句连贯，词数在80个左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。Good morning, everyone! Let me introduce myself first. _ Thats all.Thank you.四、2012年广东省初中毕业生学业考试英语试题A信息归纳请阅读下面这篇文章，根据所提供的信息，完成下面表格，把答案写在答题卡指定的位置上。BBC World Have Your Say: “Life in China”Every day, BBC News on TV, radio and online brings you stories from across the world. But what we want to hear are the stories that matter to you. Have got a story about life in China today? If you do, please put your stories here.I like travaling and I have traveled a lot around China. During the trip, I often find that a number of Chinese dont have good public manners(举止). They always talk loudly on the phone and smoke everywhere. The worst is that they often break the rules in public. For example, when I travled in Hong Kong in January this year, I saw a kid eating noodles on the underground, which is against the rules. However, the kids mother didnt think he did wrong. Can you believe it? Lets improve our public manners. (Mike, Shenzhen) I am a 14yearold boy from a poor village in Fuyang, Anhui Province. Like many other leftbehind children(留守儿童)in China, I live with my grandparents now. My father went to work in Shanghai several years ago. Last year, my mother went there to care for him because his health is not as good as before. They tell me to listen to my grandparents and call me about twice a month to ask about my study. I really miss my parents and I hope I can afford to go to school in Shanghai. I think every child needs parents love and care. (Wu Peigen, Anhui Province) Information CardThe topic of BBC. World Have Your Say today81.The thing that the kid did on the underground82.The time when Mike traveled in HongKong83.Wu Peigens age84.People who live with Wu Peigen now85.B.书面表达根据要求完成短文写作，请将作文写在答题卡指定的位置上。假如你是一名叫李明(Li Ming)的中学生，看了上述故事后，你想表达自己的看法。 请你给栏目编辑写一封电子邮件，内容包括：1你对其中的哪个故事感兴趣？原因是什么？2你对这个故事所提及的现象的看法。3就该现象提出至少两条解决问题的建议。作文要求：1不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。2语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数，也不必抄写在答题卡上。Dear Editor，I read the stories on BBC World Have Your Say today. _Your，Li Ming五、2011年广东省初中毕业生学业考试英语试题A信息归纳请阅读某网站论坛上关于“地球一小时”的短文，根据所提供的信息，完成下面表格，把答案写在答题卡指定的位置上。From 8：30 pm to 9：30 pm on Saturday，March 26th，2011, a great number of people around the world turned off the lights for Earth Hour. It is a bit like an environmental New Year, providing a chance to help care for our earth and make people around the world learn how important it is to do that. What can we do during this hour? We can do lots of fun things in the dark, such as planning a candlelight dinner for our family or a group of friends, telling stories and singing songs with the kids and neighbors. What did you do for Earth Hour this year? Lets share the Earth Hour stories. EmmaI was on one of the mountains near the city and took photos of my city. It was great to watch the stars and the moon after a busy day so that I could enjoy this relaxing moment. AlbertI work as a waiter in a restaurant. Our restaurant was still open even for Earth Hour as we got lots of reservations (预订) that night. So we spent the hour working by candlelight. And guess what? Our customers loved that and promised to come for next Earth Hour. BrandonI turned off the main power to my house and went for a walk for Earth Hour. It was a little strange to walk in the dark, but it was only for one hour. Just think of what it must have been like before the invention of the light bulls. MaryI invited my friends who know and support Earth Hour activities. We actually had a candlelight concert and we talked about the old happy days that we spent together in college. Information CardThe date of Earth Hour in 201181.Alberts job82.What Brandon did when it was dark83.Who stayed with Mary during the hour84.The number of people who talked about their stories85.B.书面表达根据要求完成短文写作，把答案写在答题卡指定的位置上。你听说过Earth Hour这项活动吗？今年的Earth Hour你是如何度过的？请你写一篇题为 “My Earth Hour”的短文。内容包括：1你今年参加过Earth Hour这项活动了吗？请表达你参加或者没有参加的心情。2请描述你当时在哪里，与谁一起度过，做了什么事。3请列举两件以上你在日常生活中经常做的有利于环保的事情。4号召大家加入到明年的Earth Hour 活动中来。作文要求：1不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。2语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的标题开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数，也不必抄写在答题卡上。My Earth HourThe Earth Hour was from 8：30 pm to 9：30 pm on Saturday，March 26th, this year. _I believe that we can make our earth a better place to live in.【巩固练习】练习一A信息归纳请阅读报纸上发表的一篇关于校园安全的短文，根据所提供的信息，完成下面表格，把答案写在答题卡指定的位置上。Safety Activities for Middle School KidsSchool is not the safe place as it used to
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