英语写作常见语言错误.doc

考研英语写作常见语言错误I.词汇错误A. Article 冠词1. The machines could not run and people would have to fall back on their hands to produce what are essential for them to keep alive.2. The housing problem in big cities is rather a headache to both government and people.3. On the contrary, the percentages of milk and meat are on a rise.4. We cant avoid being beaten by the others.5. It provides us with natural scenes and the life of all kinds of wild animals, with the explanation by the narrator.6. And also, they treat the firecrackers as the heritage of the Chinese culture.7. Finally we can teach ourselves and learn the new knowledge.8. Higher English level will help you to find a satisfactory job in the future.B. Nouns 名词可数名词&不可数名词1. Even a lot of entertainment such as TV, recording and films need electricity.2. Two solutions have been recommended so far, and each one has both advantage and disadvantage.3. As long as we dont give up and believe in ourselves, and in the meantime learn something from failure, well certainly make our marks in the end.4. With money we can travel widely and have more experience.5. The fresh air and beautiful sceneries will attract people to leave the overcrowded city.6. For example, setting off firecrackers often sets fire to buildings, and causes many damages.7. Even a lot of entertainments such as TV, recordings and films need electricity.8. A great deal of new subjects, which are actually derived from both natural and social science, has come into existence and enrich the sea of human knowledge greatly.用词不当1. For example, in reporting, a reporter can use it (tape recorder) instead of the old means of writing them on a notebook.2. With more and more people coming into this world, human beings are now in danger of food shortage because the land on which man can grow rice remains the same.3. It can lessen the crowding degree of streets and speed up the flow of traffic.4. In the meantime, the grain requirement in peoples diet consequently kept dropping.5. With the development of the standard of living, people now can afford to buy more milk and meat than before.6. They will push our society to a higher position.7. Now, when a person is hunting for a job, there will always be a job interview.8. In contrast, still a few of civilians expect the government to call off this regulation.9. You should practice under the direction of a teacher.名词的并列&一致1. This directly causes the problem of the worlds food shortage, housing and lack of jobs.2. From the figures, we can see easily that the proportions of grain, fruit and vegetables have declined a little, while that of milk and meat has risen.C. Adjectives 形容词比较级和最高级1. And there are times when we fail to do more satisfactory work.2. I try my best to read more English articles to speed up my reading, because I believe the more I read the faster I can improve my reading comprehension.3. In modern society, the relationship between natural science and social science has become more and more close.用词不当/错误1. On the way home, I thought early morning walk was really helpful.2. In my opinion, the right solution to the problem is the combination of the two, that is, to lay down more roads in spacious areas and to open up more bus lines in downtown areas.3. With the development of big cities, a problem has arisen before us: traffic in cities has become more and more serious than before.4. Such opinion leads to surprising waste of water.5. Once these fake commodities enter the market, they will do unevaluated harm to the society.形容词词序1. This is no longer a childish unrealistic dream.2. This picture describes an American girl dressed in Chinese traditional costume.D. Adverbs 副词用词不当1. An early morning walk can help one to be light-hearted and to work effectively.2. In fact, fresh water is exactly inadequate.3. We should practice it from time to time, and thus we will slowly master it and do it perfectly.副词短语1. The industrial and Agricultural Revolutions which began in 1650 contributed a bit to the growth of population.E. Pronouns 代词用法不当1. Everyday I spent at least an hour on English in the past seven years.2. In order to make more profit, some manufacturers exaggerate their products functions in the advertisements. That is, the product does not live up to the standard advertised and the consumers will find themselves fooled.3. To our Chinese, firecrackers are symbols of festivals and happiness.指代不明1. For example, the need for jobs will make us develop our industries. It causes environmental problems.2. We always stick to the rules so that I never hurt others or be hurt.3. But when the customers are attracted by them and buy the goods finally they will find it of no quality and worth nothing.人称代词一致1. First, we cant deny that money is useful. You need money to buy food, to buy a house or to pay for your educational cost.F. Prepositions 介词介词错误1. What we can conclude from the figures and the explanations is the peoples life is improving and the changes of peoples diet show that peoples interest is on the quality of food now and that our peoples health improving day by day.2. I have bought a tape recorder with which I can practice my ability of listening comprehension.3. Advertisements exist everywhere, on the newspaper, on TV, on the walls in the streets and even in the postboxes of our houses.4. People showed extraordinary enthusiasm in face of a great, speculative prosperity ahead.G. Verbs 动词用词不当1. If not controlled, the population of the world will amount to 7,000 million in 2000 as can be seen from the graph.2. They can clean the air, beautify the city, develop a good climate and weaken noise.3. A road which can only hold two cars side by side can allow more than ten bicycles.4. While taking part in sports, people can strengthen their muscles, quicken their speed of response and increase their ability of resisting diseases.5. Social science and natural science are mixed with each other today.6. Being a teacher needs knowledge, patience, skills, etc.7. In conclusion, most students still dont know how to spare the time and make it valuable.8. Whether you will apply English or not in the future, English has undoubtedly been the most important language in our society.9. It will help me to know the world outside the campus better.一致性，平行1. It not only relieves the burden on the big city, but also provide a much better environment for people to live in.2. Due to the pollution, we will have no pure water, fresh air which are necessary to our lives.3. A great deal of new subjects, which are actually derived from both natural and social science, has come into existence and enrich the sea of human knowledge greatly.Phrasal Verbs 短语动词1. And new ways can be carried out to prevent the pollution and control the population.2. When a motorcycle is started, it gives away a lot of smoke which contains poisonous chemical substances harmful to our health.3. In fact, no one can be denied of the access to opportunity.4. To grasp a foreign language is not easy, but I will go out of my way to gain successfor my ideal job.5. Taking into account of their behavior, we can safely come to the conclusion that these students will waste too much time if they dont make good use of it.助动词，情态动词1. To master almost every skill, you cant but practice.2. We cannot strain our efforts and ignore the rules.3. Do “lucky numbers” really bring good luck?H. Connectives 连接词用词不当/用法不当1. The sun had just risen, shining brilliantly, everything seemed to be covered with a layer of golden silk.2. When I walked in the street, there were only some young men who were running in the street.3. Because a bicycle is not expensive, most families can afford it.4. So long as I am concerned, I am for the latter.5. And I should get practical experience as much as theories.6. No matter they are accepted or not, the interview is a good occasion for them to practice their ability of introducing themselves to others.7. In my opinion, although setting off firecrackers is one of the traditions that we Chinese have.8. The first, we have more spare time. . The second, we have enough time to do something which we like.9. So far as I am concerned, I managed to find a part-time jobtutor an orphan.过于绝对化1. For example, almost everybody had watched apples falling from an apple tree but only Newton discovered the Law of Gravity.2. With the development of modern transportation, you can get to any place by plane, by car, by ship, or by bicycle.3. In return, I can also learn a lot from foreign countries so that I can serve my motherland.4. But when the customers are attracted by them and buy the goods finally they will find it of no quality and worth nothing.5. In a word, firecrackers should be banned for the benefit of all people!6. Man has been able to cure the diseases which were incapable of being cured.7. With the rapid development of our society, the campus is no longer an ivory tower.逻辑不够严密1. Though it gives us more convenience, the two-day weekend has quite a few problems.2. Of course, some people have had good luck through “lucky numbers”, but I think that that is only a chance.II.句法错误主谓一致1. But now large amounts of water and air has been polluted, which brings about various problems troubling mans life.2. My ideal job is a teacher.重复1. Man is faced with more and more problems which threaten mans existence on Earth.2. Peoples opinions about whether firecrackers should be banned vary from person to person.3. During the past thirty years, developing countries have been greatly developed in many aspects.B.定语从句1. We may encounter some problems which need not only natural science but also social science.2. What on earth is the role money playing in our society?3. When I refresh, I will do something which I like.C. 倒装句1. Only in this way, you can get the true job of achieving your goals.D. 句子的连接与简练句子的连接a) Second, whoever breaks the regulation should be fined or punished. Then everyone will comply with this regulation.b) The result is that your brain is less and less efficient, your process is slower and slower.c) Community services as well as mass media are both golden chances to practice our ability, through which we can learn to cooperate with people, to contribute our intelligence to the society.d) But in fact, there are also many people who think numbers have nothing to do with luck.指代不明a) Sports and movies are means of relieving depression and violent emotions. This is why they are necessary in a society.b) Leaders of the Womens Liberation movement have criticized American doctors severely. They are angry and justifiably so.c) In the Royal Shakespeare production of Othello, Frank Finlay played Iago and was suited to it.简练的表达a) As I had nothing to do, I decided to take a morning walk. So I went to the park.b) As far as my ideal job is concerned, I think I want to be an interpreter in the future.c) Some want to be doctors, some want to be teachers, some want to be engineers, and so on.d) These fake commodities quality is always very poor. They may cause a great loss to the consumers, or even the life.E. 断裂句a) Some persons thought the law is no good. Because they think setting off firecrackers is a beneficial thing.b) However there are still a number of people who enjoy seeing films. Because the visual and audio effects of films are much better.c) Almost everyone of us has bought some fake commodities. For instance, fake shoes, fake bags, and the worst thingfake medicine.F. 标点错误&首字母大写错误a) I wandered around the park, to my delight, I found a few middle-school students talking to each other in English in the southeast corner of the park.G. 中国式英语1. Others were doing Chinese exercises.2. It plays an important role in many fields such as industry, agriculture and peoples daily life.3. People of nowadays are paying more attention to the structure of their diet.4. I have bought a tape recorder with which I can practice my ability of listening comprehension.5. Almost everyday I open TV at 6:30 p.m. and wait for the news program.6. Besides, the pictures are very beautiful; some of them are also very valuable.7. According to those mentioned above, I decide to make a good plan for the two-day weekend.8. These problems are really serious.9. English study requires reading, listening, speaking and writing.10. But the disadvantage of this suggestion is that many people will feel not as convenient as they did before.