九年级英语全册Unit14IremembermeetingallofyouinGrade7同步作文指导课件新版人教新目标版.ppt

Unit14IremembermeetingallofyouinGrade7 写作题目 Unforgettableperson thinginjuniorschool Learningaim Writeaboutunforgettableperson event 在初中三年的生活中 你永远不会忘记的一个人或者一件事是什么 关于这个人或者这件事 你有什么看法或感想 合作探究 theperson MyEnglishteacher Mybestfriend Theonewhogavemehelp theevent Myteacherpraisedme Myclassmatefooledme Iarguedwithmybestfriend Someonehelpedmewithouttellingmehisname 1 写中学生活中的难忘的人 事 2 事件要有五要素 when where who what how why3 最后阐述这件事对自己所产生的影响 写作指导 DearMissZhao Asyouknow I vemadegreatprogressinEnglishwithyourhelp Atthismoment Iwanttosay Thankyou IstillrememberwhenIbegantolearnEnglish Ifoundittoodifficult NomatterhowhardItried Istillcouldn tdowellinit Ilostmyconfidenceandalmostgaveitup Assoonasyouknewit youhadalongtalkwithmeabouthowtolearnEnglishwell YoualwaysencouragedmewheneverImadealittleprogress EversincethenIhavebeeninterestedinitandimprovedmyselfalot ThoughIhavetosaygoodbyetoyouverysoon IstillthinkIamsoluckytobeyourstudent Ihopeyoucanrelaxyourselfandkeephealthy Bestwishestoyou Yours LiLei Enjoyagoodcomposition theperson theevent how who when where yourfirstfeeling what appearance 外貌 howthepersonchangedyou howthepersonhelpedyou yourfirstfeeling yourfeeling howtheeventhelpedyou howtheeventchangedyou yourfeeling 写作任务 三年的初中生活一定让你记忆深刻 请写出令你难忘的某个人或一件事 并阐述这个人或这件事对你的影响 字数要求 80词左右 writingtask 体裁 写作顺序 时态 人称 关注以下写作三要素 记叙文 以时间 事件发展为顺序 以一般过去时为主 第一人称 1 Ioncehadanexperience 2 Itwasthemostunforgettableexperiencethathaseverhappenedinmylife 3 ThemostunforgettableexperienceinmymemorywasonedaymyclassmatesandIwenttothepark 4 Iwillneverforgetthemilitarytraining 5 TherearealotofmemoriesinmyheartthatIcan tforget WhenIwas yearsold I 各式开头 6 Asweallknow everyonehassomethingspecialinhislife IthinkIwillneverforget becauseonthatday 7 Ithinkmyjuniorhighwaswonderful becauseittaughtmetobe 8 WheneverIopenthebookfullofphotos IalwayslookbackwhenI 9 IstillrememberthemostvaluabletimethatIhaveeverhad 10 Everyonehasadifferentjuniorhigh Itmaybewonderful excitingorhard Ihavea juniorhigh Ithinkthisisthemostunforgettableexperienceinmymemory 2 Onthatday IbegantofeelthatIhavethedutyformylife AndImustbestronger 3 IfeltthatIwasgrowingup andIshouldberesponsibleformyself 4 Howexcitingandunforgettabletheexperiencewas 你的感受 5 It sreallyanimportantdaytomeandI lllearntobe allthetime 6 Juniorhighisapreciousmemorywithoutpressure competitionandlotsofhomework 7 Fromthisexperience IlearntthatIshouldbecareful IfIamcareless Iwilllosealotofchances 写作任务 三年的初中生活一定让你记忆深刻 请写出令你难忘的某个人或一件事 并阐述这个人或这件事对你的影响 字数要求 80词左右 writingtask 开声朗读自己的文章 并从结构 人称 时态 字数 拼写 大小写 标点符号等方面进行自我修正 Task1 自我欣赏与修正 同伴互赏 欣赏角度 写作基本要求 人称 时态 2 要点齐全 3 结构 开头 正文 结尾 4 好词好句 Task2 欣赏与修正请交换习作欣赏 用红笔划出对方的亮点词 句 并运用改错符号找出不足 进行适当修改 评分以满分15分为标准 给同伴的习作打分 点评由亮点欣赏到不足的修正 篇章结构分析 细节点评 集体赏析 共同进步 Task3 Task8 Summary Everypersonyoumet everythingyoudidmakesapartofyounow Nomatterhappyorsad youshouldthankthepersonandeventthathelpyougrowup 感恩过去 感恩亲友 感恩师长 描绘人物外貌词汇 good lookingprettylovelyslimoverweightmiddle agedfitwearglassesalwayssmile描绘人物性格词汇 braveself confidentwarm heartedpatienteasy goingoutgoingenergeticforgetfulgeneroushardworkinghelpfulhumorousoptimisticpunctualtalentedgood temperedstraightforwardconsideratehonest Samplewriting TheonepersonfrommyjuniorhighschooldaysthatIwillneverforgetisMrs Wong myEnglishteacherinGrade7 WhenIfirststartedGrade7 Iwasshyanddidnotdaretospeaktoanyone MyEnglishwasnotverygoodandIfeltnervouswhenIhadtoanswerquestionsinclass IwouldhaveproblemsspeakingeventhoughIknewtheanswer Ifeltquiteunhappywithmyself OnedayMrs Wongspoketomeafterclass Sheencouragedmetospeakslowly ShealsotoldmethatshebelievedIcouldspeakwellifIpracticemore Iwastouchedbywhatshesaidanditmademeworkharderonmyspeakingskills Mrs WongcontinuedtoencouragemeandIbecameevenmoreconfident IimprovedsomuchthatIwonanEnglishspeechcontestthatyear IwillalwaysbegratefultoMrs Wongforheradviceandsupport