《高三英语书面表达复习》PPT课件.ppt

书面表达复习 北京二中王岱 书面表达复习 一 书面表达的能力要求二 书面表达的复习策略三 书面表达的课堂指导四 书面表达的批改方法 书面表达复习 一 书面表达的能力要求二 书面表达的复习策略三 书面表达的课堂指导四 书面表达的批改方法 一 书面表达的能力要求 1 新课程标准7级要求2 新课程标准8级要求3 新课程标准9级要求4 英语教学大纲要求5 高考书面表达要求6 情景和开放作文的对比7 写作评分要求 1 新课程标准7级要求 能用文字及图表提供的信息进行简单描述 能写出常见体裁的短文 如报告或信函 能描述人物或事件 并表达自己的见解 能填写有关个人情况的表格 如申请表 求职表 能做简单的书面翻译 2 新课程标准8级要求 能写出连贯且结构完整的短文 叙述事情或表达观点和态度 能根据课文写摘要 能在写作中做到文体规范 语句通顺 能根据用文字及图表提供的信息写短文或报告 3 新课程标准9级要求 能用英文书写摘要 报告 通知 公务信函等 能比较详细和生动地用英语描述情景 态度或感情 能阐述自己的观点 评述他人的观点 文体恰当 用词准确 能在写作中恰当地处理引用的资料及他人的原话 能填写各种表格 写个人简历和申请书 用语基本正确 得当 能作非专业性的笔头翻译 在以上写作过程中做到文字通顺 格式正确 4 英语教学大纲要求 高中学生应 能就已学课文的内容作简单的改写 能在日常生活中 写简单的书信 便条和通知等 能填写简单的个人履历表等 书写格式 行文及常用词语等无严重错误 能根据提示 在30分钟内写80 100个词的短文 意思表达清楚 无严重语言错误 5 高考书面表达要求 测试考生的英语书面表达能力 共两小题 35分 其中第一小题20分 第二小题15分 书面表达提供必要的提示 提示包括目的 过程 对象 时间 地点 内容等 提示的形式有文字 图画 图表等 第一小题 情景作文 要求考生根据所给的情景用英语写一篇约100个单词的短文 第二小题 开放作文 要求考生根据简略提示 写一篇不少于50个单词的短文 6 情景作文和开放作文的对比 情景作文 写作内容有明确的规定 评分尺度相对统一 在一定的程度上减少主观性 对考生来说 这类作文比较容易 根据题目要求 组织好所提供的材料 用明白通顺恰当的英语表达出来 基本完成了任务 开放作文 有一定的难度 要扣题 自主谋篇 创造性 逻辑性 交际要得体 7 写作评分要求 书面表达复习 一 书面表达的能力要求二 书面表达的复习策略三 书面表达的课堂指导四 书面表达的批改方法 二 书面表达的复习策略 了解写作命题特点内容贴近生活 符合时代要求词汇句式丰富 数字有所变化1 在使用中复习词汇2 在使用中复习句型3 在使用中复习语篇 1 在使用中复习词汇 1 1 在阅读课文中掌握重点词汇重点词汇 提示造句 连词造句 段落造句 语法造句1 2 在听力训练中掌握不同表达法试题与原文的不同表达1 3 在语篇中练习词汇单句填空 框词填空 词性转换 段落填空 听后填空1 4 在重复中巩固词汇及时听写 阶段测验1 5 在口述中扩展词汇说词组 看图写话 举一反三 下列图画描述的是你的一段亲身经历 请据此为一家中学生英文报的故事专栏写一篇短文 练习表示时间的词组 theotherdayyesterdayafternoononSundaymorningseeingthatatthatmomentwhenIsawit hearingthat atoncebeforewecouldsayanything 练习表示动作的词组 wenttothecinemabybicycle wasridingwithmesittingontheseatbehindwenttothecinemabybikewithmeontheseatbehindcrossroads wasridingacrosstheroad cameupandstoppeduswalktousandaskedustostopfoundyouatlonglastsawyoudidn tknowthemdidn tknowwhattheymeant pointingtoapolicemannotfarawaypointedtoapolicestandingthereexplainedtousthattoldustrytofindstoppedmakeuscatchthenextoffendercomeonstandhere don thavetowaitlong 文字提示 举一反三 有些人以为某些数字 比如6 8 9等会带来好运 他们在选择车牌号 电话号码时不惜花费 择号费 要这些数字 而你本人却不相信这些 你认为成功和财富与所谓的吉祥数字无关 要靠自己艰苦的劳动和努力 请你根据以上内容写一篇文章 词数100 关键动词 believe think holdtheview considerchoose decide like preferspendmoneyon costmuchmoney paymuchfor chargefordependon havetoworkhard liein resultfrom 2 在使用中复习句型 2 1掌握课文中的重点句型Unit6重点句型Letmeremindyouwhatwearelookingfor Itlooksasifitisn tcleanenoughtobathehere Itseemsthatthereisabigwastepipecomingdownfromthetown Nomatterhowmuchyouwanttobathe itjustisn tsafe Howcantheygetridofwastewaterinthisway 重点句型 Otherwastemaybethrownintothesea either19kilometersfromland ormorethan40kilometersfromland dependingonthenatureofthematerials Itisthereforeunlikelythatthechemicalswillbecarriedupwardsintothewater Theproblemofdealingwithwastehasbecomesogreatthatseveralinternationalorganizationshavebeensetuptoprotecttheworldandtofightagainstpollution Theyseektoreducewaste protecttheearth theoceansandallformsoflifeinthem Europeancountriesarenowmakinganactiveefforttoreusematerialsmorethantheyusedto 2 2 练习课文中的句型转换 Unit7Itmaybenecessarytoputupanoticesaying Keepoff Toputupanoticewhichsays Keepoff isnecessary Pilesofstoneslieinacornerofthecourtyard waitingtobereplaced Pilesofstoneslieinacornerofthecourtyard whichwaittobereplaced Europeancountriesarenowmakinganactiveefforttoreusematerials Europeancountriesaretryingtheirbesttoreusematerials Wecallthisrecycling Thisiscalledrecycling Ihappenedtomeethimonmywayhome IthappenedthatImethimonmywayhome 2 3 练习作文中的句子结构 enterYoucanentertheparkbythemaingate YoucanenteritbythemaingatewhenyouseethePeople sPark walkstraightWalkstraightuntiltheendoftheroad Walkstraightuntilyoucometotheendoftheroad Whenhesawthatheraninahurry invitingtheoldladytosharetheumbrellawithhim Seeingthat heranimmediatelytotheoldladyandsharedthesameumbrella 3 在使用中复习语篇 3 1 介绍人物MadamCuriewasborninateacher sfamilyinPoland onNovember7th 1867 MadamCurie adaughterofateacher wasborninPoland onNovember7th 1867 Whenshewasyoung shebecameinterestedin Asayoungman In1903 inJuly1903AfterthewarFromthenonTodaysheisrememberedandadmiredasascientist Butsheisalsorememberedforherdeterminationandcourage 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Likewise inmycountry studentsrespectteachers however whenateacherasksustospeakwelookdowntoshowrespect Wedonotlookintotheireyes Inconclusion therearebothsimilaritiesanddifferencesinthewaystudentsbehavetheirteachersintheclassroom 3 6 介绍国家 城市 NewYorkNewYorkisbuiltonagroupofislandsontheeastcoastoftheUSAatapointwhereseveralriversflowintotheocean By1820thepopulationofNewYorkhadgrowntoabout125 000 makingitthelargestcityintheUSA ThebuildingofskyscrapersinNewYorkbeganaroundtheyear1900 NewYorkneversleeps 3 6 介绍国家 城市 datebackto datefrom belocatedin stand lieinhasapopulationof thepopulationofthecitycoveranentirecontinent fromnorthtosouththedistanceis inareaitisabout hasanareaofTheclimateisdifferentdependingonthearea isanextremelyrichcountry isanimportantagriculturalcountrywithasmallpopulation Insizeitisbiggerthan yethasamuchsmallerpopulation 3 7 介绍场景 假设你是李华 你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华学校学中文 来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房 请根据图画提供的信息 写信介绍住房情况 并告知住房面积20平米 月租550元 3 7 介绍场景 DearBob I msogladtolearnthatyou recominginSeptember I vefoundaplaceforyou It sasmallflatof25squaremeters withabedroom abathroomandakitchen Inthebedroomthereisabed asofa adeskandachair Therentis500yuanpermonth TheflatisinabuildingonFangcaoStreet whichisnotfarfromJianxinhuaChineseSchool BusNo 11cantakeyoustraighttotheschool Infact it sonlyonestop Doyouthinkyou dlikeit Ifnot Icantryandfindanotherplaceforyou Yours LiHua 3 8 看图指路 假定你是李华 你和你的朋友约定星期天在人民公园野餐 你的英国朋友Peter也应邀参加 请你根据下面的示意图 给他写封短信 告诉他进公园后如何找到你们 3 8 看图指路 DearPeter We resogladyou recomingtojoinusonSunday Hereishowyoucanfindus We llhaveourpicnicinthePeople sPark Youknowwherethatis don tyou Afteryouentertheparkbythemaingate walkstraightontillyoucometoasmallriver Crosstheriverandturnright Afterwalkingforawhileyou llcometoahill Walkroundthehill you llseealake We llhaveourpicnicthereinthesmallwoodsbythelake I msureyou llhavenotroublefindingus Docome Lihua 3 9 说明程序 Expertsbelievethatthereareabout40 000differenttypesofjobsintheworld 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Ithinkthereisapossibleproblemifyoutellthemanageraboutthethief Thereisnoneedtosay totheotherworker ButIadviseyoutocheckyourbageveryeveningbeforegoinghome Bestregards Marty 3 13 给与帮助 回信 9OceanRoadFreetown9thApril 2003DearKen Thankyouforyourletter I msorrythatyouarenothappyyetinyournewschool Itiswrongoftheotherchildrentomakefunofyou Firstofall don tworryaboutbeingshort Itreallydoesn tmatter Lotsofpeopleareshort Youarefinejustasyouare Haveyouconsideredlookingforonespecialfriend Isuggestyouchoosesomeonewhoyouthinkiskindandfriendly Sowhydon tyoulookforsomewhomightbeaspecialfriend Anddon tspendtoomuchtimealone Bestwishes Yourfriend Amy 3 14 推销产品 信件 No 76ZhichunRoadHaidianDistrictBeijing1000863rdAugust 2004 9 12DearMs Zhang Ibelievethatyouareateacherofcomputerstudiesatyourschool Iamwritingtoyoubecausewehaveausedcomputerforsaleandwonderifyouwouldliketobuyit ThemodelisZY 2anditisoneyearold Wewouldbehappytosellittoyoufor3 500yuan thatis50 ofthecostofanewone Ifyouareinterested pleasewritetomeattheaboveaddress Couldyoualsosuggestatimewhenitwouldsuityoutovisitusandtryoutthemachine I mlookingforwardtohearingfromyou Yourssincerely HeXiaohua 3 15 索要资料 书信 40964FriendshipHotelBeijing 108314thJanuary 2002SalesmanComputerSalesDept FounderComputerCorp DearSir Iamacollegestudentstudyingelectricalengineering Ineedamicro computerathome Foundercomputersaremyfirstchoice soIamwritingtoyouforsomeinformation Iwouldbeveryhappyifyoucouldsendmeanintroductiontoyourproductsandthepricesofthem Pleasewritetomeattheaboveaddress Ilookforwardtohearingfromyou Yourssincerely JohnJenkins 3 16 口头通知 Attentionplease Boysandgirls Lessnoise please Gatherroundandlistencarefully Ladiesandgentlemen mayIhaveyourattentionplease Ihavesomethingimportanttotellyou That sall Thankyou 3 17 书面通知 Aboutspoken EnglishCompetitionInordertodevelopstudents interestsinlearningEnglishandimprovetheirspokenEnglish aspoken EnglishcompetitionwillbeheldbyStudentsUnionandEnglishOfficeonNovember2nd Goodluck StudentUnionFriday December10 3 18 日记 May9th TuesdaySunny 3 19 分析图表 Asurveyaboutchoiceofjobshasbeendoneamong100middleschoolstudents whichshowsthat 3 20 介绍喜好 MyMostFavoriteProgramTherearealotofTVprogramsIlikebuttheoneIlikebestisWorldReportbroadcastbyCCTVatteneverynight Thisprogramaimsatkeepingaudiencesinformedabouttheinternationalsituation Thereareseveralfactors whichmayaccountformypreferenceofthisprogram First Besides Finally Fromtheexamplesmentionedabove itcanbeeasilyunderstoodwhyIlikeWorldReport 写作的相关话题和词汇 灾害事故 火灾 书信 日记分析表格 就业选择 业余爱好 喜爱的节目 指明道路 去野餐的路 通知布告 广播晚会的通知 介绍人物 孙淑伟 老师 描述场景 描写学校变化 环境保护 城市的污染 讲述经历 参观农场 幽默故事 井盖和修路 好人好事 给老人让座 度假旅游 对比旅游方式 商店购物 退还衣物 学校生活 减负前后 书面表达复习 一 书面表达的能力要求二 书面表达的复习策略三 书面表达的课堂指导四 书面表达的批改方法 三 书面表达的课堂指导 集中和分散相结合口头和笔头相结合分类和综合相结合记忆和发挥相结合 课堂指导作文 假设你是李华 在一所中学读书 最近收到美国朋友Smith先生的来信 他三年前参观过你校 听说现在变化很大 希望了解有关情况 参照下图 给他写一封回信介绍你校的变化 注意 回信须包括图画的主要内容 可以适当增减细节 使内容连贯 词数100左右 练习表示方位的词组 ononesideoftheroadontheothersideinfrontoftheoutsideofaroundtheschoolatthebackoftotheleftoftotherightof 练习表述内容的动词 havechangedhavetakenonanewlookhavetakenplacecanseegreatchangesusedtobetherewerebelocatedinlieinstandcansee 学生作文 DearMr Smith I mverygladtohavereceivedyourletter Asyouknow ourschoolhaschangedalotthisyears Letmetellyousomethingaboutit Ifyoucometoourschool youwillseethenewplaygroundandtherearemoretreesinsideandoutsidetheschoolthanbefore Walkingthroughtheschoolgate youcanfindthenewlibrary whichtakestheplaceoftheoldplaygroundonyourleft Ontherightstandsanewteachingbuildingwith40classrooms Inthefrontoftheschoolistheoldbuilding butithasbeenequippedwiththelatestequipment Ifyouhavetime pleasecomeandseeit Ithinkyou llgetsurprisedatwhatyousee Bestwishes Yourfriend LiHua 开放作文 Youareoneofthechildrenplayingontheriver Telluswhathadhappenedafterwards Supposeyouareoneofherfriendsandtellhermotherwhatshehasdoneatschool Youareamiddleschoolstudent YouaregoingtohaveanimportantEnglishexaminationintwomonth stime Youwantyourparentstobuyyouataperecordertotaketheplaceoftheoldone Nowyoutellthemwhyyouneedanewtaperecorder Oneofyourfriendstellsyouthatsheissufferingfromdepression Wheneverthinkingofthecomingentranceexamination shehadtroublesleeping Shefeelshopelessaboutherfuture Thefearthatshemightfailintheexaminationworriesherallthetime Tellherwhatyouthinksheshoulddo 书面表达复习 一 书面表达的能力要求二 书面表达的复习策略三 书面表达的课堂指导四 书面表达的批改方法 四 书面表达的批改方法 原则 粗批 快改 及时反馈挑选批改重点批改互批再改部分批改当面批改 再见 再见