高中英语写作教程-记叙.ppt

高中英语作文教学 教师 梁德义 Listthepointsofthecomposition TranslatethepointsintoEnglish Organisethepointstoanessay Three stepWritingComposition 假设下面六幅图画描述的是你的一段亲身经历 请你根据画面所示内容 用英语写一篇100字左右的日记 日记的开头已写好 今天下午我去看电影 在路上 我看到一个手提箱从一辆自行车上掉了下来 我捡起箱子 并向骑车人大声喊叫 但他却已经骑远了 于是 我拦了一辆出租车去追赶失主 我终于追上了失主 并把箱子还给他 失主非常的感动 他拿出一些钱来感谢我 但被我拒绝了 我又乘车返回了电影院 司机被我的行动所感动 不收我的车费 今天下午我去看电影 在路上 我看到一个手提箱从一辆自行车上掉了下来 Iwenttothecinemathisafternoon Iwenttoseeafilmthisafternoon Ontheway Ifound sawacasefalldownfrom offaman sbike 我捡起箱子 并向骑车人大声喊叫 但他却已经骑远了 Ipickedupthecaseandshoutedattheman buthehadalreadyrodeaway 于是 我拦了一辆出租车去追赶失主 Istoppedataxitocatchupwiththeman 我终于追上了失主 并把箱子还给他 Icaughtupwithhimatlastandgavethecasebacktohim 失主非常的感动 他拿出一些钱来感谢我 但被我拒绝了 Themanwasverygratefulandtookoutsomemoneytothankme butIrefused 我又乘车返回了电影院 司机被我的行动所感动 不收我的车费 Iwentbacktothecinemabytaxi Thedriverwasverymovedanddidn tacceptmymoney 1 举例 举例forexample suchas namely first second finally2 总结归纳 发表意见inaword inshort inone sopinion personally toone ssurprise3 句与句之间的连贯what smore besides and then so that4 转折however while onthecontrary5 因果therefore thus asaresult so May3rd FridayFineOneafternoon Iwenttoseeafilm Ontheway Isawacasefalloffaman sbike Ipickedupthecaseandshoutedattheman Buthedidn thearmeandrodeaway WhatshouldIdo ThenIhadanidea Istoppedataxiandgotintoitwiththecase Andwecaughtupwiththeman Igavethecasebacktohim Themanthankedmeverymuchandwantedtogivemesomemoney ButIrefused Thenthedrivertookmetothecinema WhenIpaidhim thedriverwouldn tacceptthemoney HesaidhewasverymovedatwhatIdid 一 合并为简单句 把其中一句改为分词短语 把其中一句改为介词短语 二 合并为复合句 三 把复合句改为简单句 把从句改为分词短语 把从句改为介词短语 四 避免只使用一两个句式 要灵活运用诸如倒装句 强调句 主从复合句 分词状语等 五 注意使用词组 习语来代替一些单词 以增加文采 六 适当的联想与发挥 Iwenttothecinemaoneafternoon Ontheway Ifound sawacasefalldownfrom offaman sbike Oneafternoon onmywaytothecinema Isawacasefalloffaman sbike Ipickedupthecaseandshoutedattheman buthehadalreadyrodeaway Afterpickingupthecase Ishoutedatthemanloudly butherodetoofasttohearme Themanwasverygratefulandhetookoutsomemoneytothankme butIrefused Gettingthecasebackfromme themanwassogratefultomethatheinsistedonofferingmesomemoneyasareward ButIrefusedhimpolitely May3rd FridayFineOneafternoon Iwenttoseeafilm Ontheway Isawacasefalloffaman sbike Ipickedupthecaseandshoutedattheman Buthedidn thearmeandrodeaway WhatshouldIdo ThenIhadanidea Istoppedataxiandgotintoitwiththecase Andwecaughtupwiththeman Igavethecasebacktohim Themanthankedmeverymuchandwantedtogivemesomemoney ButIrefused Thenthedrivertookmetothecinema WhenIpaidhim thedriverwouldn tacceptthemoney HesaidhewasverymovedatwhatIdid May3rd FridayFineOneafternoon onmywaytothecinema Isawacasefalloffaman sbike Afterpickingupthecase Ishoutedatthemanloudly butherodetoofasttohearme WhatshouldIdo ThenIhadanidea Istoppedataxiandgotintoitwiththecase Andwecaughtupwiththeman Gettingthecasebackfromme themanwassogratefultomethatheinsistedonofferingmesomemoneyasareward ButIrefusedhimpolitely Withthehelpofthedriver Iwentbacktothecinema Tomysurprise thedriverdidn tacceptthemoneybecausehewasverymovedatwhatIdid HowproudIwas HomeworkTranslatethepointsthatyouhavelistedontheexercisebooks thenwriteacompositionaccordingtothepictures