真题2012年12月作文讲评.ppt

1 CET4 2012年12月 2 PartIWritingDirections Forthispart youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledEducationPaysbasedonthestatisticsprovidedinthechartbelow Weeklyearningsin2010 Pleasegiveabriefdescriptionofthechartfirstandthenmakecommentsonit Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words 3 Education AWorthyInvestmentWeeklyearningsin2010 4 三段论第一段 概述图表反映的主题思想第二段 分析产生的原因第三段 展望未来或提出方法或建议 5 圆形图piechart曲线图linegraph条形图bargraph增加increasegrowrisejump 词性 减少decreasedropdeclinefallreduce 词性 不变remainthesame程度slightsmallslowgradualsteadysharprapidsuddendramaticmarked 6 图表作文常用的句型开头Accordingtothetable piechart linegraph bargraph wecansee concludethat 根据该表 图 我们可知 Thetable graphreveals shows indicates illustrates represents pointsout that 该表 图表明 Aswecanseefromthetable Ascanbeseenfromtheline bargraph Asisshown illustrated indicated inthepiechart 如表 图所示 7 描述增减变化Thenumberof grew rosefrom to Anincreaseisshownin thencameasharpincreaseof In thenumberremainsthesame dropsto Therewasaveryslight small slow gradual rise increasein2006 Therewasaverysteady marked sharp rapid sudden dramatic drop decrease decline fall reduction in2006 comparedwiththatoflastyear 8 范文一EducationPaysTheabovebarchartclearlyshowsuseducationpaysin2010 Weseethatonewithhighereducationbackgroundearnsmoremoneyweeklythanthosewithlowerones Forinstance thecollegestudentswithnodegreegetpaid 712perweekwhereasthosewithaBachelor sdegreecanearn 1038 9 Severalreasons inmyopinion canbeidentifiedtoaccountforthisphenomenon Tobeginwith comparedwiththosewithcomparativelylowereducationdegree peoplewhohavereceivedhighereducationpossessconsiderablywiderknowledge moreremarkablelearningandresearchability greaterinnovationandmostofall resourcefulsocialnetwork allofwhichareessentialtoahigh incomework Also thehigherone seducationdegreeisthebiggerplatformhewillhavetoshowhisability Forexample hiscollege university orresearchinstitutewillorganizevariousjobfairsforthemtocommunicatefacetofacewithemployers 10 Thisphenomenontellsusthateducationisaworthyinvestment Therefore substantialeducationinvestmentshouldbestrengthenedwhilewe ascollegestudents shouldstudyhardertobuildourcountryandstriveforabetterlifeforourselves 11 范文二 EducationPaysJudgingfromthetable wecanseethatpeople sincomeincreasesalongwiththeireducationlevels Aboveall theaveragecollegegraduatesearnmuchmorethanthetypicalhigh schoolgraduates 12 Thefactrevealedbythesedataisobvious adegreedoesbringdistinctivefinancialbenefitstoitsholders Butisittruethatadegreealonecanensureabrightfuture Idon tthinksobecause ontheonehand thefinancialvalueofhigheducationdependsheavilyonwhatskillsgraduatescangainfromitinsteadofthedegreeitself Afterall anemployeronlypaysforyourabilityandperformance notforyourcertificate Ontheotherhand themostvaluableblesshigheducationbringstograduatesistheabilitytolearnquicklyandefficiently Peoplereceivedmoreeducationtendtokeeplifelonglearninghabitsaftertheirgraduation whichwouldhelpthemgainmoreopportunitiesintheircareerpath 13 Inconclusion whataccountsforeducationpaysisnotthedegreealone butthegraduate sabilityandlearninghabit