2016-高考英语短文改错-公开课.ppt

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Hehadadeepvoice whichsethimselfapartfromothersinoursmalltown hewasstrongandpowerful Inafact heevenscaredmyclassmatesawayduringtheycameovertoplayordohomeworkwithme However hewasthegentlestmanIhaveneverknown Hi Janice It sbeenamonthsinceIcametothisnewschoolandIreallywantsharewithyousomeoftheproblemsIhavebeenexperiencing AsItellyoulasttime Imadethreenewfriendhere Wehangouttogetherduringlunchandafterschool We vebeenspendingalotoftimesinginkaraokebars It sbeenthreeSaturdaysnowanditreallycostsmemany AndIstartedtoseethisasatime wastingactivity Infact Idon tliketogoanymore soI mafraidI llloseourfriendship HowdoyouthinkIshoulddo Ifyouareme wouldyoutalktohim Pleasehelpwithmeandgivemesomeadvice Ihardlyremembermygrandmother Sheusedtoholdingmeonherkneesandsingoldsongs Iwasonlyfourwhenshepassesaway Sheisjustadistantmemoryformenow Iremembermygrandfatherverymuch Hewastall withbroadshoulderandabeardthatturnedfromblacktowardgrayovertheyears Hehadadeepvoice whichsethimselfapartfromothersinoursmalltown 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