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开心写作坊：我最喜欢的科目在你所学的科目里，你最喜欢的科目是什么？请以 “My favorite subject” 为题，写一篇英语作文。词数：60 100。技巧点拨这篇文章要求学生介绍自己最喜欢的科目，并简要介绍该科目，同时说明自己喜欢这一科目的原因，还要写出今后的学习计划。文章主题贴近校园生活，让学生既有话题可写，又有内容想表达。建议学生在写作时充分结合自身的学习经历，简明扼要、有理有据地说明自己喜欢这一科目的理由，并有条理的列举自己的学习计划。写作提纲时态：一般现在时，一般将来时人称：第一人称内容：1、介绍你最喜欢的科目是什么，以及你对该科目的了解；2、写出你喜欢这一科目的原因；3、谈谈你对该科目今后的学习计划。重点词组： 我最喜欢的科目 my favorite subject 喜欢的 favorite努力学习 work hard 有趣且实用 interesting and useful在未来 in the future重点句型: is my favorite subject. It is for . to do sth. I like . because . I am interested in . I will .过渡衔接在介绍喜欢这一科目的理由时，可以使用 because, because of, in addition 等词或词组衔接上下文，使文章的条理更加清晰，内容更有说服力。一类文My favorite subjectDo you know what my favorite subject is? The answer is English.As everyone knows, English is the most widely used language in the world. So its important for everyone to learn English well in our rapidly developing world. After learning English, we can read more foreign books. This helps us to gain more knowledge. It can also broaden our horizons.In order to improve my English skills, I will read English newspapers and listen to the radio in English as much as possible. I also bought lots of classic English books. Ill read them whenever I have time.People say “to have another language is to possess a second soul.” So lets learn English well. 【点评】首先，作者开门见山地介绍了自己喜欢的科目是英语，并接着道出了学习英语的重要性和学习英语可以拓宽眼界的好处。As everyone knows；It is important for sb to . 等句型和 in order to；as much as possible；broaden ones horizons；gain knowledge 等表达的使用为文章增色不少。最后以一句引人深思的名言结尾，画龙点睛。二类文My favorite subjectDo you like math? I like it very much. There are many subjects in my school. They are all very important, but I think that math is more interesting than any other subject.Learning formulas (公式) is interesting. There are many formulas in math for us to use. When you solve math problems, the formulas are very useful. They are so simple, yet they can work out difficult problems. You will feel very proud and fulfilled (满足的) when you solve difficult math problems. In addition, you can tell your classmates happily, “I did it!” That is really cool.I want to get better at math in the future. I will make more efforts to studythe subject. I will listen to my teachers more carefully in class. To be honest,Learning math is not easy at all, so I will always keep it up. I believe that I can do it well! 【点评】文章通过问句引出作者最喜欢的科目。第二段，作者道出自己喜欢学习数学公式，并配合细节描写，作者解决难题后的兴奋与成就感仿佛跃然纸上。在最后一段中，作者道出自己的学习计划，并表示为了学好这一科目必须加倍努力。美中不足的是，作者在内容表达上不够精练，文章显得有点啰嗦。在语言上，作者能够准确的把握时态语态，并恰当地运用 more than, make effort to do sth, not at all, keep up 等表达，增强了文章的可读性。三类文My favorite subjectThere are plenty of subjects in my school. Among these subjects, I like English best. Let me tell you why.I think everyone should know at least two languages. Language is a tool for communication. English is important and useful. So all of us should study English well. In addition, I think it is interesting and relaxing to study English. For these reasons, I like English best.This year, I will study English harder. I plan to read more English books so I can learn more words and expressions, as well as understand Western culture. I will put my plan into practice. Where there is a will, there is a way. I think I can gain a lot through hard work.
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