2019届高考英语二轮总复习：短文改错练习（含答案）+高三作文：贾宝玉心中的玉

2019 届高考英语二轮总复习：短文改错练习（含答案）+高三作文：贾宝玉心中的玉高考英语短文改错技巧第一步 必须熟悉设错方式1. 必须熟悉设错方式：多词、少词、错词。 多词现象大多出现在冠词、介词、助动词、连词、语义重复及行文逻辑等方面。 少词现象主要出现在冠词、介词、副词、助动词、不定式符号 to、连词等。 错词现象主要在冠词、介词、名词单复数、动词时态、非谓语动词、主谓一致、代词、连词、词形。2. 平时应加强基本功训练，用一个“错题集”本把自己或同学在书面表达中出现的错误归纳一下，以便考前复习。第一步加强基本功训练短文改错与书面表达一样，最能反映一个人的语言功底。大家在该题上失分最厉害，因为此题而影响英语总成绩的占大多数。第二步对全文宏观把握大家应把改错内容当作一篇小短文来理解，这样能对短文有个宏观把握，对上下文有全面的了解。在理解篇章的基础上逐句审读，分析判断，上下兼顾，把明显的、拿的准的题先做完，这样可以缩小包围圈，也有助于对全文的进一步理解。第三步 从语法角度审查1. 查看时态是否一致。My favorite sport is football. I was a member of our football team. 全文都是用的一般现在时，此句中的 was 显然与上下文语境不符，应改为 am。2. 查看主谓是否一致。Anyone may borrow books, and it cost nothing to borrow them. cost 应改为 costs，因其主语是 it(为形式主语)，且上下文均为一般现在时。3. 查指代是否一致。The Smiths did his best to make me feel at home.句中的主语 the Smiths 表的是 Smith 一家人，因此指示代词 his 应改为 their。4. 查平行结构是否平行一致。由 and, or, but, either.or., neither.nor., not only.but also., as well as 等并列连词和词组连接的结构可称为平行结构。It was very kind of them to meet me at the railway station and drove me to their home. 句中的 drove 显然与and 前面的 to meet 不平行，应改为 drive。5. 查名词的单复数与修饰词语或上下文是否一致。We study quite a few subject, such as Maths, Chinese. quite a few 只能修饰复数名词，故 subject 应改为subjects。6. 查行文逻辑是否一致。Most people can quickly get help from a doctor or go to a hospital since they are ill.根据行文逻辑，这里不应该由 since 来引导原因状语从句，而应该是 when / whenever 或if 来引导时间或条件状语从句。第四步 十大常见错误短文改错是有一定的规律可循的，纵观近几年的高考试题及我们平常的模拟考试，可以发现短文改错主要有以下十大错误：1. 形容词与副词的误用。如 exciting 与 excited，hard 与 hardly，possible 与possibly，here 与 there 等，以及形容词与副词的比较级与最高级。2. 名词的单复数误用。如在 several，many，various，different，a few，one of 等之后，常用名词的复数，在 every 与 each 之后常用单数。3. 代词的误用。如 you 与 your，its 与 its，it 与 they 或 them，one 与ones，宾格(如 me)与反身代词(如 myself)等的误用。4. 介词的误用、缺少或多余。常见的如 in 与 on，to 与 for，instead 与 instead of，because 与 because of 等的误用。5. 时态的错误。看一篇文章，要有一种大局观，要上前下挂，看看上下文的时态是否一致。6. 连词的误用。如 or 与 and 的误用，and 与 but 的误用，so 与 but 的误用，because 或 since 与 so 连用，though 与 but 连用等。7. 第三人称单数后的动词形式。8. 一些固定结构的误用。如 so.that 被误用作 very.that，too.to 被误用very.to，as.as 被误作 so.as 等。9. 定语从句中关系词的误用。10. 一些常用词的误用。如 what 与 how，except 与 besides，any 与 some 以及它们的合成词如 anything 与 something，anywhere 与 somewhere 等混淆不清。第五步 验证答案改完后，要回过头来重读一遍全文，查看改过后是否能使语气通顺，时态一致，合乎逻辑。再次通读可以在初改时感觉不顺的地方集中精力，仔细推敲，使答案更加准确。第六步 要多读多背增强语感在平常的学习中一定要注重语感的培养，英语学习的根本任务是学习语言，而学习语言的根本在于学习和习得语感。语感一旦形成，就为英语学习打下了良好的基础。语言是学出来的，所以要学好语言，一定要多读多背，尤其是背，它是语言习得最重要的途径之一。高考英语句子改错练习 100 题（含答案）单句改错.(下列句子各有一处错误，请改正)1. Now people get a lot of informations from TV.2. German is a European country.3. They didnt want me to do any work at family.4. Yesterday I met an old friend of my father.5. Boys and girls, dont lose hearts. Do better next time.6. They are of different size.7. It is so beautiful place that you must visit it.8. What a terrible weather we have been having!9. It took place in France, an European country.10. Suddenly I caught a sight of my English teacher in the crowd.11. What good time we had last night!12. We shall spend three-day holiday together.13. I came to understand that was not easy to earn money.14. Some parents think useless for girls to go to school.15. When he bought a chocolate cake, he put them in a secret place.16. One day I wrote a little story and showed to my teacher.17. Its important that we should think over before doing anything.18. The truck was moving so fast that the driver couldnt control.19. I apologized and controlled me at my best till the dinner started.20. We must take part in the social practice to prepare us well for our future.21. The teacher did not punish for cheating but instead gave me a second chance.22. Henry did not like his car, that ran badly and often broke down.23. There was a five-pound note in the pocket of the trousers I had told her to wash it.24. People can hardly do some fishing there.25. I visited a place where is surrounded by mountains.26. I am sure you will find one you like it.27. It was yesterday when he broke the window.28. He had lost his glasses without them he couldnt see.29. Oliver Twist, the hero of the story, he was an orphan.30. It starts with choosing a tree from neither a farm or a store.31. She never has enough time for that she wants to do.32. I find what I have one shortcoming in my character.33. What necessary it is that we get rid of the bad habits .34. It didnt matter that I would win or not.35. People in the US drink more coffee than people in any country.36. The development will bring us much more hopes and chances.37. The Olympics are held each four years.38. A summer, Fane traveled abroad.39. I hope you think about my request as soon as possibly.40. I know you are particular interested in Human Rights.41. As there is no air or water, there can be no life , too.42. There were too many nice things that I didnt know what to choose.43. He decides to travel a lot and visit such many new places as possible.44. I couldnt see as clear as before.45. The water in it is so dirty that it smells terribly.46. I appreciate your help very well.47. You always gave me specially attention and inspired me.48. It was until midnight that it stopped raining.49. People both at home and abroad have been great helped by the new computer.50. He has to work if he wants to live comfortable.51. She is a brave and honesty girl.52. It is much easy to make plans than to carry them out.53. It is convenient for me to prepare for the exam than before.54. He gave me an order worthy 15 million dollars.55. The tree was put into a Christmas stand that holds the tree up straightly.56. Is teaching kids English as interested as you expected in college?57. We had guests last night who had not stayed in it ago.58. We are all very much active and the activities are enjoyable.59. If you wont want to take a taxi, you can go by bus.60. Our city is a modern city. It set up in the early 1980s.61. Bad habits not come suddenly.62. I have caught a bad cold for a week and I cant get rid of it.63. Following the road and you will find the store.64. I rush over without delay, jumped into the water and swam towards him.65. You must do everything you can help them.66. When a rabbit see something dangerous, it runs away.67. Its tail, which is white, moving up and down as it runs.68. Think perhaps I was too tired, I stood up and was going to sleep.69. I was often tired and watch TV demands little effort.70. The little girl hurried home with the remained money.71. His young patient was soon able to get up and ran about again.72. It was kind of them to meet me at the station and drove me to their home.73. She liked it very much and reads it to the class.74. There were over 1000 students attend it.75. Is it likely to be any food at the party on Saturday?76. Please excuse us for not able to say goodbye to you.77. He spends hours on the telephone, talks to his friends.78. Filling with many people, the room is crowded.79. At the interview there are many people who wait to interviewed for jobs.80. It will cost a rocket a hundred thousand years to reach it.81. There used to have a church in front of the school.82. Hope you great success in your work!83. All you can do is encouraging him, show him understanding and offer him advice.84. In Friday afternoon, some students took part in a speech activity.85. In a few weeks the story was returned to her.86. It was very fine when I got up early on last Sunday morning.87. I rushed out the house as quickly as I could.88. It is necessary to decide what is worth taking notice.89. I had difficulty in grammar after I entered into the school.90. She could hardly afford for the medical care.91. But we dont seem to have much time to talk about together.92. He was punished because what he had done.93. The ice isnt thick enough for us to skate.94. I gave you my luggage at a quarter of an hour ago.95. I am writing to thank you with your kind help.96. He means to come no earlier as that time.97. We must return back to school this afternoon98. Child as he is, but he knows a lot.99. Having been ill for a long time, so she fell behind her classmates.100. Thinking he happened to have no work to do, and he came back home.Answers1-5 informations-information; German-Germany; family-home; father-fathers; hearts-heart;6-10 size-sizes; a place; 删除 a; an-a; 删除 a11-15 a good time; a three-day; that 后加 it; think 后加it; them-it;16-20 showed 后加 it; think 后加 it; control 后加 it; me-myself; us-ourselves;21-25 punish 后加 me; that-which; 删除 it; some-any; where-which;26-30 删除 it; when-that; them-which; 删除 he; neither-either;31-35 that-what; what-that; What-How; that-whether; any后加 other;36-40 much-many; each-every; A-One; possibly-possible; particular-particularly;41-45 too-either; too-so; such-as; clear-clearly; terribly-terrible;46-50 well-much; specially-special; was 后加 not; great-greatly; comfortable-comfortably;51-55 honesty-honest; easy-easier; is 后加 more; worthy-worth; straightly-straight;56-60 interested-interesting; ago-before; 删除 much; wont-dont; It 后加 was;61-65 habits 后加 do; caught-had Following-Follow; rush-rushed; can 后加 to;66-70 see-sees; moving-moves; think-Thinking; watch-watching; remained-remaining;71-75 ran-run; drove-drive; reads-read; attend-attending; it-there;76-80 not 后加 being; talks-talking; Filling-Filled; to后加 be; cost-take;81-85 have-be; Hope-Wish; encouraging-encourage; In-On; In-After;86-90 删除 on; out 后加 of notice 后加 of; 删除 into; 删除for91-95 删除 about; because 后加 of; skate 后加 on; 删除 at; with-for;96-100 as-than; 删除 back; 删除 but; 删除 so; 删除 and;高三作文：贾宝玉心中的玉人都是生出来的，无论他出生于马棚、森林、或是更多人呆着的床上，还是生在农民家庭或是皇宫内院，无论是顺产或是遇上难产而剖腹产子的，甚至于腿先出而头在后面跟着的，他都是生出来的，伴着一股生命之源充分酝酿后的萌发，在母亲用痛苦浇灌喜悦的泪水朦胧之中汇聚成型而开始存在于这个世界上。人的起点便是如此丢失了上帝的光环普照然后被抛弃了，用几乎失明的双眼独处着心血中溶解消逝却有饿狼复苏的模糊的欲望，去寻找不安。贾宝玉的出生却让当时的整个社会都感到有微微的呼喊自死亡深渊中传来，人性再也无法和谐舒展，它裂开成许多块，都互相殴斗着，只因那涎玉而生的人，那玉是他前世的自己-一块顽石，让今世的他载着，去召唤死尸向着对生命的饥渴发出那种骨骼间干瘪的摩擦出的乞求，或应该是怒吼。不同的人的眼中会看见不同的玉，贾府上下却不约而同的因玉而重视宝玉，如此众多的人悲哀的只看见了一种玉，是代表地位的玉，代表财富的玉，还是代表他们整天拜了又拜的上皇天下厚土那无尽的莫名奇妙的思德的玉，当贾宝玉骂着“劳什子“摔那人们眼中的“命根子“时，争恐而拾之的场面让人一阵失落，世俗就是那群混乱的趴在地上拾玉的人。人看不到人眼中的价值，就成了瞎子，也许卧龙岗的农夫看卧龙先生也至多是多把羽扇的庄稼人，又怎能够想起他背后立着半壁江山？二千多年的索链经久不衰，被捆绑如此之久的人也渐失了最初挣扎的活力，当时的中国人软弱了，下跪便是最好的证据：从佃户跪地主|、地主跪官绅、官绅跪大臣、大臣跪皇帝、皇帝跪天，一串下来，人都跪着生活，一个跪着的民族又怎能在外人面前高大起来呢？原来那玉中还有只贪婪的兽，不仅撕咬而且玩弄人性，把它们咬成自己所喜爱的僵硬图案，却吞下了有无限创造激情活力的汁液，碾碎了发亮的颗粒，于是人群常常为殉夫的女人欢呼喝采，并为之竖起贞节牌坊，颂着那牺牲品和自已残缺的心灵。贾宝玉丢下了那玉，却掘出了心灵中的另一块玉，真正的纯洁无瑕“女儿是水做的骨肉“一席话,算是感动了上下五千年的女子,这是对中国女性旷世的尊重.当母亲氏族结束之后,其后的几千年当中,中国的女性生活在没有地位、没有自由的禁锢当中，她们是弱者，却往往处在被伤害的前列，从小便囚在深闺，而后由父母定下婚姻，婚后依旧坚守着三从四德，自己的人生被他人左右着，品尝着一生不情愿的苦涩。“沉鱼落雁，闭月羞花“代表着中国古代的四大美女，而她们的人生又能够怎样呢？西施是越王勾践送给吴王的礼品，同样是用来祸害吴国的暗箭；昭君则是为讨好匈奴而抛给虎狼的羊羔；貂婵离间了吕布与董卓，而她也只不过是得利渔人穿在钩尖的蚯蚓；杨贵妃是因为对玄宗有刻骨深情还是因圣诣难违而当的妃子暂且不提，倒是祸国的罪名偏让这弱女子背黑锅实在是唐代的耻辱，那些牵扯了这归西白绫的男人们负罪至此竟还能暗自嘲笑这垫背之物。他们并没有把她们当作是和自己一样的人，而仅仅把她们看作是手中的玩物和馈赠的佳品，“红颜祸水“肯定是出自男人之口，却让我羞愧的叹息着同性的毫无廉耻，古今红颜所惹出的祸，又有多少不是因幕后的男人把弄她们所至呢？在如此不齿的环境中，宝玉却因众姐妹都无而自己独有气极败坏的扔掉了那玉，灵魂中涌出一股平等之心冲淡些那个污浊的社会，透出丝丝清爽之气，婴儿本不会鄙视任何人，是酸臭的腐气让那颗玻璃般的心泯灭成沙，却让人钦佩起宝玉心地的永恒。贾宝玉永远敬爱着美丽多情、灵性十足的女性，这是他心中那块玉的高洁，而玉终归是易碎的。深爱的黛玉死了，她的确如木石前盟那般用一辈子的眼泪还给了他，而宝玉也入了空门，他大概没有参悟佛法却是在参悟着红尘。一点闪烁救不了整个世界，一块玉也无法吞下满社会的污浊，所以只有月色水乳交融着昏云挤出模糊粘稠的光哀抚着碎玉，聆听着蓝色空气中幽灵吐出的凝重的叹息，死亡和魂魄伴着悲剧落幕，同样开启另一循环的悲哀，红楼不是一部悲剧，它是许多悲剧的总和。红楼唱词中的薄命女子终究一一的揉碎为雾中的幻影，受封建礼教束缚而自身便懦弱起来，似乎才是悲哀完结的原因。孙子兵法演义中西施便是自己毁了自己，她曾说到自己有两个丈夫：一个是他肉体上的丈夫-吴王，另一个是心灵上的伍子胥，身为越王工具的她在真爱与束缚之中竟怯弱的抛弃了爱情，西施说服了吴王杀了伍子胥，却在吴国灭亡之后跳湖自尽，不能说她奴隶般一味屈服，灭吴后她本是有功的越王欲纳她为妃，西施因满心创伤而用死回绝了；鸣凤也是用死拒绝压在她身上的命运，“她是不愿让他牺牲他的一切来救她“。似乎死才是最好的抗争，才是对封建礼教干脆的说着不，但是死亡便是结束，或者说是失败，是封建礼教的又一战绩。贾宝玉的玉便是因这样的死亡和这样的失败而碎了。心即是玉，有心而亮，又因心少而暗，点点星光是蠢蠢欲动的反抗，势单力薄又窒息在胚胎状态，贾宝玉心中的玉是向往美好，摆脱束缚的心，也是被扼杀掉了的生灵。