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Module 3 Literature写作园地-人物描写 感悟范文请根据下面的英文短诗，展开适当的想象，写一篇短文。标题为：My Teacher Mrs.MaryTheres a teacher Mrs.Mary.Who is lovely and fortyfour.Always encouraging us to try.She leads us to a world of “why”We all admire her more and more.要求：1.不得照抄短诗原文；2结合短诗的内容，发挥想象，适当展开；3短文不能写成诗歌形式；4词数：120左右。范文Of all my teachers, Mrs.Mary is the one who impresses me most. Though she is 44, she looks very young for her age. And shes one of the most popular teachers in our school.pared with other teachers, Mrs.Mary pays more attention to her way of teaching. She tries various ways to make her classes lively and interesting. In the opinion of her, we should not only know “what”， but also understand “why”. So, instead of giving us answers immediately, she encourages us to think by ourselves whenever she puts forward questions. With her help, weve learned how to analyze and settle problems. What a wonderful world of “why” she leads us to! She is such a learned person that we all admire her very much.技法讨论1本文是人物描写，属于记叙文体。人物描写的目的是刻画人物性格，表现人物的精神面貌；人物描写应该力求具体生动，争取达到绘声绘色地再现“人物”，这样也能深刻地表达文章的中心。2按照记叙文的要求来写。人称相对统一，常用第三人称。时态常以一般时态为主。3首先总体介绍人物的整体概况，然后具体介绍人物的特点。写作时要主题明确，内容详实，层次分明，详略得当。黄金表达1和比较pare.with.2让课堂生动有趣make ones classes lively and interesting3在某人看来in the opinion of sb.4在帮助下with sb.s help5和其他老师相比，玛丽老师更注重教学方法。 pared with other teachers, Mrs. Mary pays more attention to her way of teaching.6在她看来，我们不但应该知道是什么，还应该知道为什么。In the opinion of her, we should not only know “what”， but also understand “why”亮点分析：1本文是一篇人物描写，能够根据所给的内容，围绕主题，展开丰富的想象，用简洁的语言把老师的形象描写出来，是一篇佳作。文中使用了很多短语：pay more attention to，in ones opinion, instead of，encourage sb. to do sth.等。还运用了一些句式结构，使文章不单一。如：pared with other teachers, Mrs.Mary pays more attention to her way of teaching.2文章使用一般现在时，条理清晰。3亮点句式(1)Though she is 44, she looks very young for her age.(2)pared with other teachers, Mrs.Mary pays more attention to her way of teaching.(3) So, instead of giving us answers immediately, she encourages us to think by ourselves whenever she puts forward questions.(4) She is such a learned person that we all admire her very much.类文演练请按照下面所提供的主要内容，以“My Mother”为题，写一篇120个词左右的短文。(1)你母亲是个农村妇女，40多岁，没上过学，但懂得年轻人掌握知识的重要性，她很关心你的学习情况。(2)你母亲为了让你有更多的时间学习，总是竭尽全力来照顾你。一次，当你听说母亲病重时，回家看她，可是却发现她为你做新衣服直到深夜，你感动得热泪盈眶。(3)你母亲就是这样一位妇女，善良、勤劳，永远值得你尊敬和爱戴。联想词汇1. 40多岁_答案：in ones forties2. 没上过学 have got no _答案：education3. 知识 _答案：knowledge4. 重要性 _答案：importance5. 关心，关注 _ oneself with答案：concern6我的学习情况 my _答案：study7竭尽全力 _答案：spare no efforts/do ones best8照顾某人 _答案：take care of/look after9善良、勤劳 _答案：kind and hardworking10尊敬 _/show _答案：respect；respect for连词成句1. My mother is a midaged woman who has been living in a village, and_.My mother is a midaged woman who has been living in a village, already _.母亲是个农村中年妇女，40多岁。答案：she is in her forties; in her forties2. Although she has got no education, she knows that _.She has very little school education, _.她没上过学，但懂得年轻人掌握知识的重要性。答案：it is of great importance for young people to master much knowledge; but she knows that knowledge is very important to young people 3. My mother _ me _ I can spend more time on study._ help me spend more time on study, my mother _ me.母亲为了让我有更多的时间学习，总是竭尽全力来照顾我。答案：cares well about; so that; In order to; takes good care of4. One day, _， I hurried to go home to see her._ , and I rushed home to see her.一次，当我听说母亲病重时，匆忙回家看她。答案：when I heard she was seriously ill; Once I heard she was badly ill5When I got home at night, I found my mother _， making new clothes for me late in the night.When I got home at night, I found that my mother _， making new clothes for me deep into the night.当我晚上到家时，发现母亲仍坐在床上，为我做新衣服直到深夜。答案：sitting in bed; was sitting in bed6I was _ tears came to my eyes.It was _ tears scalded my eyes.我感动得热泪盈眶。答案：so deeply moved that; such a moving scene that7My mother is _._， a kind and hardworking woman.我母亲就是这样一位妇女，善良、勤劳。答案：such a kind and hardworking woman; Such is my mother连句成章_One Possible Version：My MotherMy mother is a midaged woman who has been living in a village, already in her forties. She has very little school education, but she knows that knowledge is very important to young people. She often teaches me how to get along with my study and encourages me to study hard.My mother cares well about me. She does not let me do housework, so that I can spend more time on study.Once I heard she was badly ill, and I rushed home to see her. When I got home at night, I found my mother sitting in bed, making new clothes for me deep into the night. I was so deeply moved that tears came to my eyes.Such is my mother, a kind and hardworking woman. I will respect and love her forever.
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