2014中考英语作文突破指导.ppt

中考书面表达突破 新乡市一中 1听力 152单项 83完形104阅读 255词语 76补全 57作文 20所剩5 10分钟 检查 分值高到低 难到易 中考英语大致时间分配 建议 一 题型特点 书面表达是对学生的语言组织能力 行文表达能力 基础知识 语法 词汇等综合驾驭能力的考查 中考书面表达贴近生活 贴近时代 给同学们一更多的表达空间 作文题目由限制性题目到半开放性题目 提示性词语越来越少 而给同学们的空间越来越大 06年Non smokingDay 07年 校园节约从我做起 到09年的 APersonIwillneverforget 10年 isfun 二 考查形式 体裁 中考英语考查形式多样 看图 表 写作 书信 通知 日记 记人物等 体裁包括 记叙文 说明文和应用文 三 中考评分标准 作文一律按档给分 与错误个数无直接关系 影响作文分数的因素 1题目要求 内容要点 2句子准确 通顺 3层次结构清晰 4拼写 语法等错误 5卷面整洁度 2010年河南中考评分标准 四 做题步骤 1审题 审清作文体裁 类型 时态 人称等细节 2列提纲 文章结构框架 分几段 以及每段大体内容 3写作 在提纲的基础上补充要点 4复查 2遍 1遍看查拼写 语法 标点等问题 2遍不出声读查 靠语感检查语句是否通顺 连贯等 5誊抄 不允许做任何的更改 总之做到三审 体裁 时态 人称 三思 词汇 短语 句式 三查 要点 拼写和语法 连贯 五 作文一般框架 文章分3段 1 综述 概括性强 最多2句话引入主题 2 正文 主要内容 层次性强 一定要有过渡型连接词 最多展开3个方面 每个方面最多2句话 3 结尾 紧扣主题 2句话内结束 尽量升华 满分作文标准 第一档 15 13分 完全符合题目要求 观点正确 要点齐全 立意高 句式多样 词汇丰富 语言准确 语意连贯 表达清楚 结构合理 具有逻辑性 卷面书写干净 整洁 无涂抹 字迹大小适中 疏密合适 书写美观 标点 大小写正确 最好能有一两个亮点句 主从 定从 表从 谚语 六 如何列提纲 例1 利弊型作文 Microblog的利与弊Para1 综述 withthedevelopmentofinternet moreandmorepopular Para2 利 First convenient anywhere anytime Second share 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Ihaveanannouncementtomake 正文部分 Alltheteachersandstudentsarerequiredtoattendit Pleasetakeyournotebooksandmakenotes Pleaselistencarefullyandwe llhaveadiscussioningroups Pleasecomeontimeanddon tbelate 结束语部分 Pleasecomeandjoininit Everybodyiswelcometoattendit Ihopeyou llhaveanicetimehere That sall Thankyou 八 常见的作文类型提纲模板 2图表 数字比例型 提出讨论或调查的事实 Lastweek ourclasshadaclassmeetingon howto Herearetheresults 表达出不同看法或观点 Moststudentsthink While 20 ofthemchooseto Another15believe Therearealsosome sayingthat 表达个人看法 Asastudent Iagreeto 3说明利弊型 Nowadays isbecomingmoreandmorepopular Ithasmanyadvantages First 优点1 Besides 优点2 However everycoinhastwosides Italsobringsusbadinfluences Ontheonehand 缺点1 Ontheotherhand 缺点2 Inmyopinion 个人观点 4不同观点型 Wemadeasurveyaboutwhetherweshould 提出矛盾问题 Differentpeopleholddifferentideas Somebelieve 正方观点 First 原因1 Besides 原因2 Whileothersdon tagree Theythink 反方观点 Ontheonehand 原因1 Ontheotherhand 原因2 Asforme 个人观点 5解决问题型 Recently the problemhasbeenmoreandmoreserious 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时态错误 Atthattime theyalwayshelpmewithmyEnglish IhadenjoyedstudyingEnglishsinceImeethim Atthattime theyalwayshelpedmewithmyEnglish IhaveenjoyedstudyingEnglishsinceImethim Myfavoritesportisrun Ithinkdosomesportsisveryimportantforus Myfavoritesportisrunning Ithinkdoingsomesportsisveryimportantforus 3 非谓语动词错误 Ilikedosports IwishtakepartintheOlympicGameswhenIgrowup IwishtotakepartintheOlympicGameswhenIgrowup Ilikedoingsports 4 副词位置错误 Iverythankher Iverylikefootball Ithankherverymuch Ilikefootballverymuch 5 代词错误 Theyaregoodforusbody Ihopemealsobecomeabasketballplayer Theyaregoodforourbody IhopeIalsobecomeabasketballplayer 6 缺介词或介词错误 IthankhimverymuchhelpmestudyEnglish Heevencametomyhomeforhelpme IthankhimverymuchforhelpingmestudyEnglish Heevencametomyhometohelpme Ilikeitbecauseit sexcitingandgoodformyhealthy IhaveevergivedupEnglish 单词错误 动词P P 错误 Ilikeitbecauseit sexcitingandgoodformyhealth IhaveevergivenupEnglish 7 其他错误 It sgoodformyhealth Notonlymakemebrave butalsomakemebecometaller Ifyouwanttokeepfit itimportantforyoutotakeanhourtosportseveryday It sgoodformyhealth Itnotonlymakesmebrave butalsomakesmebecometaller Ifyouwanttokeepfit itisimportantforyoutospendanhouronsportseveryday 缺主语 句型错误 Let spractise Findoutthemistakesinthefollowingsentencesandcorrectthem 1 Iclimedslowlyandwasverytried 2 IthinkitisanunforgetablethingbecauseIhelpedsb climbed tired unforgettable somebody 3 Onafridayafternoon Iwentshoppingwithmymother Spelling 拼写 others Friday 4 Ican tforgetthatday Becauseitisthelasttimewecancelebrateherbirthdaytogether Ican tforgetthatdaybecause 5 Whatacrazydayitwas Iwillrememberitforever Capitalletter 大小写 Punctuation 标点符号 6 Iwillrememberedthatdayforever remember 7 Ithoughtitishungry was 8 Mygrandmotheralwaystidyupmyroom tidies 9 Howunforgettablethisthingsis thing Findoutthemistakesinthefollowingsentencesandcorrectthem Tense 时态 Verbagreement 主谓一致 Wordform 词形 10 Inmyfather shelp Ibecamemorepatientthanbefore Withmyfather shelp 11 Tocutalongstorytoshort Tocutalongstoryshort 12 IwenttoShihuabyabuswithmymother bybus 13 Mymothertoldmedon tgiveitup toldmenottogiveitup Findoutthemistakesinthefollowingsentencesandcorrectthem Phrases 短语和固定搭配 14 Isawanoldladylayinthemiddleoftheroad sawanoldladylying 16 Weplayedsnowinfrontofhouse playedwith 15 Isatonaseat listeningmusic listeningto 17 Thenaladyaskedwhohadbrokenherwindow Weallwereafraid wereall Findoutthemistakesinthefollowingsentencesandcorrectthem Missingwords 漏词 18 Weshoulddothingsbyourownhands with thehouse 19 Itistiredwork tiring Words order 词序 Usingwrongword 选词错误 22 Heencouragedmetolookforthewatchbyheart carefully 21 OneSundaymorning IwenttoShihuabybusandsatbesidemewasagirl IwenttoShihuaonabusandtherewasagirlsittingbesideme Findoutthemistakesinthefollowingsentencesandcorrectthem ChineseEnglish 中式英语 Inmylife manythingshappened 20 Inmylifehavemanythingshappened Duringthewinterholidays Ithappenedalotofthings Oneofthethingswashelptasmallgirltofindhermother Whenmyfriendsandmeshoppinginashoppingmall wesawasmallgirlcriedinacorner Weaskedwhathappenedonher Shesaidshecuond tfoundhermother Sowestartedtohelptshetofoundhermother Luckily wefoundhermother theywereveryhappyandwewerehappy too IthinkitwasthemostunforgettablethingIdidinthewinterholidaysbecauseIfoundIalsocanhelpothers ThemostunforgettablethingIdidinthewinterholidays Checkandcorrectthisarticle alotofthingshappened helping I wereshopping crying happenedto couldn t find help her find They couldalso so 1 是否有大小写错误 capitallettersorlowercaseletters 是否有拼写错误 spellingmistakes 是否有标点错误 punctuationmistakes 4 是否有语法错误 grammarmistakes 主谓是否一致动词的时态语态的使用是否正确词组的搭配是否合乎习惯 CommonErrorsinEnglishwriting 五 整洁性 1 字迹乱 划痕较多 字字不踩线 高低错落 2 字迹或太大 显得不紧凑 或太小 太密 看不清 占不满格 3字数太多 显得太罗嗦 出格就看不见了 字数太少 空太多格 会被误认为字数不够 不会得高分 4规范三写 大小写 拼写 书写 以 MyEnglishTeacher 为题写一篇100字左右的英语短文 提示如下 1孙老师 25岁 1 65米 打扮入时 2关心热爱学生 3教学方法生动有趣 4与学生关系融洽 深受同学欢迎 六 实战训练 Pre writing1 审 2 定 MyEnglishTeacher 为题写一篇100字作文 记叙文 第三人称 一般现在时篇章结构 三段式首段 个人简历正文 教学特色尾段 作者的评价 befashionable lovestudents andcareaboutthestudents belivelyandinteresting getonwellwith bepopularwith Writing 3 列打扮入时2 热爱学生 关心学生3 生动有趣4 相处融洽 深受欢迎 MyEnglishTeacherMissSunisourEnglishteacher Sheis25yearsold Sheis1 65meterstall Sheisveryfashionable Shelovesherstudents Shecaresaboutus Herlessonsareinterestingandlively MissSungetsonwellwithus Sheisverypopular Weallloveherandherteaching Writing4 连 连词成句 连句成篇 复写Rewriting 5 美 润色丰富要点 6 改 查错改错 7 抄 修改无误后 认真规范地誊写在规定的地方 WritingMyEnglishTeacherMissSunisourEnglishteacher Sheis25yearsold Sheis1 65meterstall Sheisveryfashionable Shelovesherstudents Shecaresaboutus Herlessonsareinterestingandlively MissSungetsonwellwithus Sheisverypopular Weallloveherandherteaching homework 请根据要点提示 用英文写一篇简要介绍四川汶川大地震中舍己救人英雄谭千秋老师的短文 字数100词左右 内容要点如下 1 谭老师个人简况 1957年生于湖南 大学毕业后 2 在四川德阳一所中学教书 外表严肃 3 对学生要求严格 4 深爱学生 5 谭老师英雄事迹 汶川地震时 他在上课 教学楼坍塌时刻 用身体保护4名学生英勇献身 4名学生得救 6 你的感受及愿望 参考词语 1 graduatefromauniversity 大学毕业2 bestrictwith 对 严格3 theWenchuanearthquake 汶川地震4 collapse 坍塌5 deeds 事迹 三段式 首段 正文 结尾 谭老师的个人简介 谭老师的英雄事迹 作者的感受和愿望 列出7个内容要点 1 外表严肃 2 对学生要求严格 3 深爱学生 4 地震时在上课 5 教学楼坍塌时 用身体保护4名学生英勇献身 6 感受 7 愿望 Helooksserious He sstrictwithhisstudents Heloveshisstudentsdeeply Hewasgivinglessonsatthatmoment Whentheteachingbuildingcallapsed heprotectedfourstudentswithhisbody Ifeeldeeplymoved I lllearnfromhim 连句成文 TanQianqiuwasbornin1957inHunanprovince HegraduatedfromHunanUniversity HetaughtpoliticsinamiddleschoolinDeyangcity Sichuanprovince Hehadtaughttherefor27years Helookedserious Hewasverystrictwithhisstudents Helovedthemdeeply WhentheWenchuanearthquakehappened hewasgivingalesson Theschoolbuildingcollapsed heprotectedhisfourstudentswithhisbody Thestudentsweresaved MrTanlosthislife Iamdeeplymovedbyhisdeeds MrTanisanordinaryteacherandagreathero Iwilllearnfromhim Homework Finishrewritingthecompositionafterclass usingthetechniqueslearnedinthislesson TanQianqiuwasbornin1957inHunanprovince AftergraduatingfromHunanUniversity hetaughtpoliticsinamiddleschoolinDeyangcity Sichuanprovince Hehadtaughttherefor27years Thoughhelookedseriousandwasverystrictwithhisstudents helovedthemdeeply WhentheWenchuanearthquakehappened hewasgivingalesson Atthemomenttheschoolbuildingcollapsed heprotectedhisfourstudentswithhisbody Thestudentsweresaved butMrTanlosthislife Iamdeeplymovedbyhisdeeds MrTanisnotonlyanordinaryteacher butalsoagreathero Iwilllearnfromhim IwillstudyharderandbeapersonlikehimwhenIgrowup 温馨提示 后期复习应以阅读为中心 坚持 全面 系统 扎实 灵活 的基本指导思想 立足语言基础知识 进行系统地梳理 归纳 总结和拓展 突出语言应用 注重能力培养 Thankyou Goodbye Agoodpassage Arighttitle Ahealthybody Aniceconclusion end