高一读后续写练习ppt课件

ContinuationWriting 读后续写 1 读后续写 提供一篇350词以内的语言材料 原文多是情节丰富的记叙文 偶有少量的议论文 要求考生依据该材料内容 所给段落开头语和所标示关键词进行续写 150词左右 将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接 情节和结构完整的短文 满分25分 新高考考试说明 2 3 4 第五档 21 25第四档 16 20第三档 11 15第二档 6 10第一档 1 5 5 评分原则 本题总分为25分 分5个档次给分 6 Step1 ReadthepassageStep2 Getthemainidea who When Where What Why How Step3 Predictthepossibleplotdevelopment theplot logical reasonable thegiventwosentences Step4 Begintowrite theunderlinedwords Step5 Polishyourwriting 词汇 句式 语法的多样性 Howtowriteacontinuation 7 When Where Who what Why how howtogetthemainidea 8 Basicformsofthe6questions Whendidthestoryhappen Wheredidthestoryhappen Whoisthemaincharacter Whathappenedinthestory Whywasthemattercaused Howwasthemattersolved ended 9 读后续写练习IIWhenIwasalittlegirl everytimemydadwasrepairingsomething hewouldaskmetoholdthehammer andmeanwhile haveaconversationwithme Ineversawmydaddrinkingortakinganightout Allhedidafterworkwastakingcareofhisfamily Igrewupandlefthomeforcollegeandsincethen mydadhadbeencallingmeeverySundaymorning nomatterwhat SeveralyearslaterIboughtahouse whichmydadpaintedbyhimselfforthreedaysinthe80 degreesummerheat Allheaskedwasformetotalktohim ButIwasalwaysbusy unabletofindanytimeforconversationwithhim OneSundaymorningwehadatelephonetalkasusual Inoticedthatmydadhadforgottensomethingswediscussedlately Iwasinahurry soourconversationwasshort Laterthatdaycameacallsayingmyfatherwasinhospital ImmediatelyIboughtaticketforaflightandonmywayIwasthinkingaboutallthemissedoccasionstohaveatalkwithmydad注意 1 所续写短文的词数应为60左右 2 至少使用4个短文中标有下划线的关键词语 3 续写部分只有一段 开头语已为你写好 4 续写完成后 请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语 10 When Where Who What Why How whenIwasalittlegirl mydad I haveaconversationwithme mydadtakescareofmyfamily 11 Step1 ReadthepassagePara 1WhenIwasalittlegirl everytimemydadwasrepairingsomething hewouldaskmetoholdthehammer andmeanwhile haveaconversationwithme Ineversawmydaddrinkingortakinganightout Allhedidafterworkwastakingcareofhisfamily Mainidea WhenIwasalittlegirlmydadliketohaveaconversationwithme whotakescareofmyfamily 12 Step1 ReadthepassagePara2 Igrewupandlefthomeforcollegeandsincethen mydadhadbeencallingmeeverySundaymorning nomatterwhat SeveralyearslaterIboughtahouse whichmydadpaintedbyhimselfforthreedaysinthe80 degreesummerheat Allheaskedwasformetotalktohim ButIwasalwaysbusy unabletofindanytimeforconversationwithhim Mainidea WhenIgrewup mydadwanttotalktome ButIwasbusy unabletohaveaconversationwithhim 13 Step1 ReadthepassagePara 3OneSundaymorningwehadatelephonetalkasusual Inoticedthatmydadhadforgottensomethingswediscussedlately Iwasinahurry soourconversationwasshort Laterthatdaycameacallsayingmyfatherwasinhospital Mainidea OneSundaymorningcameacallsayingmyfatherwasinhospital 14 Para 4ImmediatelyIboughtaticketforaflightandonmywayIwasthinkingaboutallthemissedoccasionstohaveatalkwithmydad whenIgottothehospital 15 Step3 Predictpossibleplotdevelopment Inagrouppredicthowthestorywilldevelop Topredictdoesn tmeanyoucanwritewhateveryoulike Continuationwritingmustbedesignedinalogicalandreasonableway Andontopofthatbeingcreativewillbeappreciated 16 Step4 Begintowrite 注意 1 所续写短文的词数应为60左右 2 至少使用4个短文中标有下划线的关键词语 3 续写部分只有一段 开头语已为你写好 4 续写完成后请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语 Theunderlinedwords Idadconversationtalkunablehospital 17 参考词汇 passaway die vi dead adj losesb regretdoingsth 后悔做过某事 findsb lyingonthebed burstintotears burstoutcrying onlythendidIrealize getovertheillness recoverfromtheillness myheartisbroken selfless beworriedabout beconcernedabout 18 Possibleversion1 WhenIrushedtohospital Ifoundmydadlyingthere weakandhopless Holdingbackthetears Italkedtohimgently Hisfacelitup OnlythendidIrealizetheconversationwasmorethanconversation Itwaslove IwasgratefulthatmyfathergotovertheillnessandnowitisIwhoalwaysenjoystartingthecoversation 62字 19 Possibleversion2 BythetimeIgottohospital myfatherhadpassedaway Nowitwashewhodidnothavetimeforaconversationwithme IrealizedhowlittleIknowaboutmydad hisdeepestthoughtsanddreams AfterhisdeathIlearnedmoreabouthim andevenmoreaboutmyself 53字 20 Step4 Polishyourwriting 简单句 复合句以及强调句 倒装句等特殊句式的使用情况 主被动语态 非谓语动词 独立主格结构 with的复合结构 虚拟语气的使用情况 常见初级词汇 高级词汇 以及不同词性的使用情况 比喻 拟人 夸张等修辞格的使用情况 句式结构 语法结构 词汇选择 修辞手法 21 关于衔接 1 关注段落内部句与句之间的衔接 2 关注与续写段落首句之间的衔接 3 关注两个续写段落之间的衔接 4 关注上下文间的前后呼应 22