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Unit 10Ive had this bike for three years本单元的写作内容是描述自己在学业、人际交往中的一些烦恼以及生活中出现的一些问题，并针对这些烦恼和问题，征求或提出建议。写此类文章时应注意以下几点：1.关于征求建议和提出建议的文章通常使用书信体，这是人们在日常生活、社会生活中常用的应用文体。2.征求建议时要明确阐明自己面临的问题及自己的困惑。3.建议信要给人真诚、亲切的感觉，建议要中肯、有针对性。假设你叫张明。寒假即将来临，你的朋友Mike正在为假期计划而犯愁。请根据下列要点提示，给他写一封邮件，并提出一些合理的建议。不少于70词。提示：1.有很多作业要做，但又想去度假；2.想购买一块自己喜欢已久的手表，但是没有足够的钱；3.想帮助父母，但不知道该如何做。Dear Mike，_Yours, Zhang Ming1.使用书信体。2.第一段要包含以下内容：寒暄、同感、安慰和过渡句。3.第二段针对对方的烦恼和问题提出中肯的建议。4.结尾要表达美好的祝愿。常用短语1.寒假_2.去旅行_ 3.至于_4.说到_5.假期愉快_6.期盼你的早日回复_常用句子1.提建议You can/couldYoud betterWhy not？Why dont you？What/How about？If I were you, I wouldIts good for you toDoing sth. is a good idea.2.其他I understand how you feel.Dont worry. I can help you.I hope my advice can help you.高分模板Dear Mike，Thank you for writing to me. I can understand your feeling . Dont worry about your problems. Here is some useful advice for you. If you really want to take a trip, you should finish your homework first. Then youll have a great time. As for the watch, why dont you get a parttime job to make some money? Then you can have it through your own work. And the watch will become more meaningful to you. Finally, I think you can help your parents do some housework, such as doing the dishes and cleaning the house. Im sure they will be very glad to see that youve grown up.I hope my advice can help you and you will have a wonderful holiday. Im looking forward to your early reply.Yours, Zhang Ming名师点评开头用简练的语言表达同感、进行安慰，拉近了与对方的距离，给人以信任感。最后一句为过渡句，起到承上启下的作用。第二段进行细节描写，根据来信中的三个烦恼提出了中肯的建议，并适度扩展；很好地运用了本单元所学的if条件句及情态动词should。副词、介词短语等使用恰当。结尾与开头呼应，并表达美好的祝愿，使文章的整体性更强。假如你是Tony，你的好朋友Mary 对即将到来的期末考试感到很焦虑，担心不能取得好成绩。请你给她写一封信，针对她的问题，提出你的建议。提示词：finalexam, be worried about, helpful, normal, believe in yourself, do best要求：1使用所给提示词，可适当发挥；2语句通顺，符合逻辑；380词左右(开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。Dear Mary，Im sorry to hear that_Yours，Tony详解详析【素材积累】1the winter vacation/holiday 2take a trip/go on a trip 3as for 4speaking of 5have a good vacation/holiday 6look forward to your early reply【小试身手】One possible version：Dear Mary，Im sorry to hear that you were worried about the coming finalexam. I think its very normal to be nervous before an exam. Ill give you some advice about it and I hope my advice can be helpful to you.First of all, try your best to prepare for it. Go over all of the things you have learned and make sure you dont miss anything important. Next, although this exam is important to you, I dont think you need to worry. Worry may make things worse, so relax! All in all, believe in yourself! I think you can make it. If you are really nervous, do something interesting or relaxing, and you will feel much better. Wish you luck!Yours，Tony
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