初中生英语写作能力培养.ppt

初中学生英语写作能力的培养施志红2008 5 07年写作无现成的范文可套ThingsIhatetodoMostofthetimeIdothingswhichIenjoy However therearestillthingsthatIhatetodo 三 了解评分标准 07作文分标准 内容 语言 组织结构 组织结构分1 内容充实 不写废话 上下文连贯 用语规范 表达准确 无或少见语法错误 词汇和句型句式运用恰当 多见好句型和习惯表达用语者 可给2分 组织结构分2 一般情况下 内容和语言在13分以上者 含 方可得到1 2分组织结构分 组织结构分3 内容和语言在12分以下者 如文中有值得肯定的好的句型和表达 可酌情考虑给1分组织结构分 组织结构分4 通篇句型 句式单一 词汇贫乏者 即使无语法错误 一般亦不予给组织结构分 07作文分析举例Ihatetokeeppetsandtelllies ThethingthatIhatedoingmostissmoking Asweallknow smokingisnotonlybadforourselvesbutalsoharmfultoothers Whenevermyfathersmokes Ifeelrathersick Besides itisawasteofmoneytosmoke Ithink What smore smokingpollutestheair SoIhatesmokingmost A挡 07作文分析举例Suchasthehousework AlthoughIsometimeshelpmymothertodosomehousework Ireallyhateit Idon tlikewashdishes Ithinkitisuncomfortablethatyoumustputyourhandsintothecoldwaterandthenwashthedirtydishes Idon tlikecleanmyroomaswell Somyroomisalwaysveryuntidy MymothertoldmethatIwasverylazy Idon tthinkso ButIreallyhatedoinghousework B挡 5 6 0 07作文分析举例SuchasdoingmuchhomeworkandwatchingTV Everyday wemustdoalothomeworkanditmustspendalongtimetofinishit Whenwefinishedit Itwasalready11o clockintheevening SoIhatedoingmuchhomework IlovedwatchingTVwhenIwasachild IalwayswatchingTVforalongtime Soitmakesmyeyesbad That swhyIhatewatchingTVnow C档 5 5 0 四 培养写作能力 1 指出常见问题句型单一东拉西扯时态错误用词不当 2 提醒注意事项围绕中心意思连贯学会审题注意文体研究考试 3 避免指导缺失光给一个题目没有任何铺垫不考虑学生的学习基础和生活实际 4 全面多方指导狠抓听说训练重视基础落实介绍写作技巧丰富训练方法落实作文批改 小结一 明确教学目标二 把握变化走向三 了解评分标准四 培养写作能力 1 指出常见问题2 明确写作要求3 避免指导缺失4 全面多方指导 Thanksforlistening 1 1Mymotherisateacher Sheis Sheis Sheis Sheis Ilikeherverymuch Thisisourschool Thereis Thereis Thereare Thereare Ilikeitverymuch 1 2Mymotherisfortyyearsold butshelooksyoung Sheisadoctorandherhospitalisnotfarawayfromourhome soshegoestoworkbybike Sheworkshardandisalwayskindtoherpatients Athomeshedoesalotofhouseworkandoftenhelpsmewithmylessons IthinkmymotheristhebestmotherintheworldandIloveherverymuch 73词 1 3OurschoolislocatedinthecentreofShanghaiItwasbuiltin1950 Nowthereareabout200teachersand2000studentsinourschool Wehavealanguagelab acomputerroomandabiglibraryinourschool Wearegoingtobuildanewclassroombuildingnextyear Ourschoolwillbecomebiggerandmorebeautifulinthefuture 63词 2 1LastweekIgotanAinthetest I mveryhappyaboutitandI lltrymybesttolearnEnglishbetterandbetter IknowitisveryimportanttolearnEnglishwell IbegantolearnEnglishwhenIwaseightyearsold However withthehelpofmyteachersandclassmates I vemadegreatprogress ButsometimesIfounditsodifficultthatInearlygaveitup 2 2IbegantolearnEnglishwhenIwaseightyearsold IknowitisveryimportanttolearnEnglishwell ButsometimesIfounditsodifficultthatInearlygaveitup However withthehelpofmyteachersandclassmates I vemadegreatprogress LastweekIgotanAinthetest I mveryhappyaboutitandI lltrymybesttolearnEnglishbetterandbetter 3 1MrWangusedtosmokealot Hefeelillandgotoseethedoctor Thedoctortoldhimsmokingisbadforhishealth MrWangisgoingtotakethedoctor sadvice Hedecidedtogiveupsmoking Hiswifeanddaughterwereveryhappy 4 1Dogsaremen sbestfriends Dogscanhelpblindmen Theycantakethemeverywhere Theyareveryclever Theycanalsohelpthepolicementocatchrobbers Theycanhelppeopletobuynewspapers Somedogscancalculate Dogsareourbestfriends Weshouldprotectthem Weshouldtakecareofthem Don thurtourbestfriends 4 2Dogsaremen sbestfriends Theyalwaysgiveusalotofhelp Inancienttime theyhelpedmenhuntanimalsandkepttheircavessafe Now dogshelppolicementocatchrobbersandfindlostpeople What smore somedogscanevenhelpblindmen Theyshowthemthewayanddoalotofthingsforthem Wecallthiskindofdogsguidedogs andtheyareblindmen seyes Inaword dogsarenotonlyourpets butalsoourbestfriends 5 1Writeapassageofatleast60wordsonthetopic Growingpainsandgains Thepicturesbelowareforyourreferenceonly 以 成长的烦恼与欢乐 为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文 标点符号不占格 以下图片仅供参考 05中考 5 2112 Writeapassageofatleast60wordsonthetopic IHaveaDream 以 我有一个梦想 为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文 标点符号不占格 注意 短文中不得出现考生的姓名 校名及其他相关信息 否则不予评分 Sentencepatternsforreference 以下句型仅供参考 Mydreamistobe todo togo Ienjoy like prefer Tomakemydreamcometrue I Ifmydreamcomestrue 06中考 5 3Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic ThingsIHatetoDo 以 我不喜欢 为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文 标点符号不占格 注意 短文中不得出现考生的姓名 校名及其他相关信息 否则不予评分 段文开头已给 所给部分不计入字数 Usethefollowingpointsasaguide 短文须包含下列要点 Whatarethethingsthatyouhatetodo Whatdoyouhatedoingmost Why Giveatleasttworeasons ThingsIHatetoDoMostofthetimeIdothingswhichIenjoy However therearestillthingsthatIhatetodo 07中考 6 1短文对话信件日记 7 1写人物写事件写物件写场所夹叙夹议 7 203年 TobealovelyShanghainese 做可爱的上海人 04年 Leavingschool 毕业时分 05年 Growingpainsandgains 成长的烦恼与快乐 06年 Ihaveadream 我有一个梦想 07年 ThingsIhatetodo 我不喜欢 8 1培养良好书写习惯单词形义常抓不懈介绍基本句子成分理清五种基本句型 Whowillwin 主语 不及物动词 主语 及物动词 宾语 主语 联系动词 表语 主语 及物动词 双宾语 主语 及物动词 复合宾语 WestudyEnglish Thegirllookspretty Mumgivesmeapresent Heaskedustogothere 8 2简单句的五种基本句型 9 1学会使用过渡词或连接词鼓励使用状语从句 宾语从句恰当使用英语习语 谚语 9 2表示并列and or also too aswell表示转折but however yet while though otherwise表示递进what smore besides inaddition表示让步though although evenif whether nowthat whatever whenever表示因果because becauseof since asaresultof thanksto 9 3表示条件if unless表示对称foronething fortheotherthing ononehand ontheotherhand表示解释thatis thatistosay inanotherword inotherwords表示举例forexample suchas like表示强调Aboveall indeed really especially 9 4表示空间here there ononeside ontheotherside infrontof atthebackof 表示时序first second then finally atlast afterwards immediately suddenly 表示归纳inshort ina oneword generally speaking 表示转换Ithink I mafraid youknow asweallknow I msure bytheway 表示列举firstly secondly thirdly one another athird 10 1Anappleaday keepsthedoctoraway Eastandwest homeisthebest AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy Agoodbeginningmakesagoodending Godwillhelpthosewhohelpthemselves 11 1从单词到句子从句子到段落从个体到集体从集体到个体从课内到课外从课外到课内 12 1口头评价自我批改互相批改集体批改教师批改