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Anessayhasatleastthreeparagraphs 1 Introductoryparagraph2 Supportingparagraphs3 Concludingparagraph Themainpurposesofanintroduction 1 introducethetopic2 giveageneralbackgroundinformation3 indicatetheoverallplan4 arousethereader sinterest Writingskills WritingSkills 1 UsingphenomenonAsthecompetitionforcollegeeducationbecomessevere parentsbegintopayattentiontotheirchildren searlyeducation Asaresult kindergartenchildrenareforcedtolearnforeignlanguages 2 IntroducingdifferentviewsWhenaskedwhatkindofcareertheywillpursueaftergraduation mostcollegestudentssay ButIthinkquitedifferently 3 UsingQuestionsWhatdoesittaketosucceedinone sstudiesorcareer Opinionsvarywidely 4 UsingastoryOnceinanewspaperIreadofacrowdofpeople 5 UsingNumbersInmanybigcities agrowingnumberofyoungmarriedcouplesaredecidingnottohavechildren Arecentsurveyshowedthatthepercentageofyoungcoupleswhodidnotwantchildrenhaddoubled 6 UsingaQuotationEducationisnotcompletewithgraduation SuchistheopinionofMortimerJ Adler agreatAmericanphilosopher Nowcollegeoruniversitycaneducateitsstudentsbythetimetheygraduate UsefulExpressions 1 PhenomenonRecentlythe hasdrawn arousedpublic world wideattention concern phenomenonofproblemof Usefulexpression Opener with phrase Withthedevelopmentofeconomy Withtheprogressofsociety WiththeinventionofTV Withthegrowthinindustry WiththeconsiderableimprovementinlivingstandardWiththeimplementationofreformandopening uppolicy one childpolicy Withthegrowingtrendof 日益增强的趋势Withtheimprovementinbuildingindustry moreandmorestructuresarebeingerectedtosetthepeople smindsatease Opener Anproblememerged structure Recently theproblemofunemploymenthasbeenbroughttopopularattention Theconflicthasbecomethefocusofpublicconcern Apublicdebatehasrisenasto concerningWhatmeritsourprimaryattentionisavarietyofeffectsthebadpracticeshaveproduced Opener anincreasing phrase Changeshavetakenplaceinpeople smind Nowadaysmoreandmorepeoplearebeginningtorealizetheimportanceofeducation PeopleinincreasingnumberarebeginningtorealizethatAlargenumberofpeopletendtoAnincreasingnumberofpeoplerealize Thereisa publicgeneral debatediscussion todaynowadays onabout 2 Opposition Whenaskedabout that But Theoverwhelmingmajorityof many quiteafewpeople say think believe Otherpeople Ithink viewquite abitdifferently 3 Questions ShouldWhat Opinions vary widely greatlyfrompersontoperson some thinkofregardview as Other argueclaim 4 Story Oncein anewspaper Ireadof learnt Thephenomenonof hasarousedpublicconcern Onceuponatime therelivedamanwho Thisstorymaybe unbelievable butitstillhasarealisticsignificancenow 5 Statistics Accordingtoarecentsurvey Thelateststatisticsshowthat 6 Quotation Knowledgeispower suchistheremarkmadebyBacon Thisremarkhasbeensharedbymoreandmorepeople Educationisnotcompletewithgraduation SuchistheopinionofagreatAmericanphilosopher Nowmoreandmorepeoplesharehisopinion Suggestions Suggestions Adverbialclausesareimplied If Original Ifyoucarefullycomparethetwoteachingmethods youwillfindtheformerissuperior Revised Carefulcomparisonofthetwoteachingmethodswillshowthesuperiorityoftheformer Adverbialclausesareimplied If Original Ifyouonlyapplybookknowledge youwon tgetgoodresults Revised Theapplicationofbookknowledgealonewon tbringyougoodresults Adverbialclausesareimplied Because Original Becauseonecan tknowwhatkindofknowledgewillbemoreusefulinthefuture sohemaynotmakeanintelligentchoiceintakingschoolcourse Revised Inabilitytopredictwhatkindofknowledgewillbemoreusefulinthefuturepreventsapersonfrommakinganintelligentchoiceintakingschoolcourse Adverbialclausesareimplied Because Original Becauseweareshortoftime wehavetoomitsomeplaceofhistoricalinterest Revised Shortnessoftimehasrequiredtheomissionofsomeplacesofhistoricalinterest Adverbialclausesareimplied when Original Whenourteacherhadleft theheateddiscussionthenended Revised Thedepartureofourteacherbroughttheheateddiscussiontoanend ImpersonalSubject Nominalizationsubject Original Ididn trealizetheseuntilmid life Revised Theserealizationdonotdawnuntilmid life Original Weeventuallyfindanewpattern Revised Anewpatterneventuallyemerge Therecentyearshaveseenworseningtermsoftrade plummetingexportearnings dwindlingproductioninvestmentandheavydebtburdens ImpersonalSubject Itis Original PeopleagreethattheAmericaneducationsystemisindeeptrouble Revised ItisgenerallyagreedthattheAmericaneducationsystemisindeeptrouble Itisatruththatuniversallyacknowledgedthatasinglemaninpossessionofagoodfortunemustbeinwantofawife ImpersonalSubject Therebe Original PeoplehaverecognizedoftheimportanceofscientificstudyofAfrica swildlandsandtheirecology TherehasbeenarecognitionoftheimportanceofscientificstudyofAfrica swildlandsandtheirecology Thereisageneraldebateonthecampustodayoverthephenomenonofcollegeorhighschoolstudent sdoingapart timejob ImpersonalSubject Therebe Thereisanincreasingpublicreluctancetoregardhighereducationassacrosanct whenitcomestocutsinpublicspending Thereisaneverincreasingoptimismaboutthefutureofeconomicgrowth Figuresofspeech Threepassions simplebutoverwhelminglystrong havegovernedmylife thelongingforlove thesearchforknowledge andunbearablepityforthesufferingofmankind Thesepassions likegreatwinds haveblownmehitherandhither inawaywardcourseoveradeepoceanofanguish reachingtothevergeofdespair Simile metaphor Thankyou