写作提高三步阶梯：MyViewonOpportunity.ppt

写作提高三步阶梯 MyViewonOpportunity Directions Forthispart youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicMyViewonOpportunity Youmustbaseyourcompositiononthefollowinginstructions giveninChinese 有的人认为机会是极少的 另一些人则认为人人都会有某种机会 你的看法如何 写出你的理由并且适当举例 在你的文章结尾处不要忘记写出你的结论 Yourcompositionshouldbenolessthan120words Remembertowriteitneatly 经典议论文的布局模式一般为 引言 论点 论证 结论 那么模仿此法 这篇文章也可以划分为四个段落 第一段为引言段 在此段中只需写出这两种相反的观点就可以了 在第二段中提出自己的看法 并稍加说明 举例论证可作为第三段单独成段 充分 生动地论证自己的观点 最后在结论段中 回应主题 结束作文 TS Differentopinionsonopportunity Somethink Othersthink 初稿 1 Somepeoplethinkthattheopportunityisveryfew becausetheyhavenevermetthechance 2 Butothersthinkthatthereareopportunitieshereandthere 3 Everyonemaymeetsomekindofopportunitiessometimes 点石成金 1 Peoplehavedifferentopinionsuponopportunity 2 Somepeopleregardopportunityararethingthatisdifficulttoget 3 Butotherpeoplethinkthateveryonehassomekindofopportunitiesfromtimetotime 锦上添花 1 Thereisnoconsensusofopinionamongpeopleastohowtoviewopportunity 2 Somepeoplesuggestthatopportunityissorarethatonlytheluckiestpersonscanobtainthem whilesomeotherpeoplearguethatinasenseeveryonehassomekindofopportunityfromtimetotime 点评 第一段先概述人们对于机会的一般看法 提出积极的和消极的两种 为后文埋下伏笔 积极的看法为我所用 大书特书 消极的看法当作 靶子 大批特批 因而 看似闲笔 实则有用 貌似松散 实则紧凑 TS Iamforthelatteropinion Everydoghasitsday Thosewhoclaimthattheyareunlucky 初稿 4 Iamforthelatteropinions 5 Thereisawesternsaying Everydoghasitsday 6 Thereareopportunitiesforeverybody 7 Everybodyhasopportunitiestogetsuccess 8 Thereisnoexceptiontothisrule 9 Peoplewhoclaimthattheydon thavegoodluckmaybethosewhoarenotabletotakeopportunities 10 They maybe areunabletorecognizeorusethem 11 Wemusttrytofinditandmakeuseofit 点石成金 4 Asforme Ipreferthelatteropinion 5 Awesternsayingtellsus Everydoghasitsday 6 Everybodyhasopportunitiestobesuccessful Infact noonecanbedeniedbyopportunities 7 Thosewhoclaimthattheydon thavegoodluckjustcan trecognizeormakegooduseofopportunity 8 Wemusttryourbesttofinditandmakeuseofit 锦上添花 3 AsfarasIamconcerned Iagreewiththelatteropiniontosomeextent 4 Asawesternsayinggoes Everydoghasitsday whichmeanseverybodyhasopportunitiestobesuccessfulinhisorherlife 5 Infact noonecanbedeniedaccesstoopportunity 6 Thosewhoclaimthattheyhavebeenoutofluck justcan trecognizeormakegooduseofopportunities 7 So wemusttryourbesttosearchforandcreatemoreopportunities 点评 第二段正面提出个人观点 先用谚语说明 再作具体分析 然后批判那种说自己运气不好的人 一针见血地指出其要害所在 有破有立 批评消极观点是为了反衬正面看法 最后总结我们今后应该怎么做 TS Awisemanisalwayscreatinghisopportunity Forexample Somethinglearnedfromthestory 初稿 12 Forexample mostpeoplesawanapplefallingdownfromanappletree butonlyNewtondiscoveredthelawofgravity 点石成金 9 Forexample beforeNewtonalmosteveryonehadseenanapplefallingdownfromatree butonlyNewtondiscoveredthelawofgravity 10 Thereasonisthathehaddevelopedagoodhabitofthinkingoveranswerstoproblemsandstucktohisstudiesinspiteofdifficulties 锦上添花 8 Let stakeNewton theworld famousscientist asanexample Beforehimalmosteveryonehadseenanapplefallingfromatree butonlyNewtondiscoveredthelawofgravity 9 Thereasonisthathehaddevelopedagoodhabitofthinkingoveranswerstoproblemsandstucktohisstudiesinspiteofdifficulties 10 Thisstorytellsusthatawisemanisalwayscreatinghisopportunityratherthanwaitingforit 点评 第三段 空洞的说理是不能服人的 于是此段以大科学家牛顿发现万有引力为例 通过讲故事 指出故事包含的道理 读起来意味深长 论证了作者观点的正确性 增强了说服力 初稿 13 So wecanconcludethattherearemanyopportunitiesaroundusandeveryoneisequalinfrontofthem 14 Thosewhomakepreparationscangraspopportunities 点石成金 11 Inaword Ibelievethatopportunitiesarearoundusinoursocietyandeveryoneisequalforthem 12 Onlythepreparedandqualifiedcancatchthem 锦上添花 11 Inconclusion Ibelievethatopportunitiesareabundantinoursocietyandeveryoneisequalforthem 12 Wecanacquirethemonlyifwearewellpreparedandqualified 13 Asaproverbsays Opportunitiesarewellonlyforthepreparedmind 点评 第四段总结全文 重申自己的观点 机会是很多的 且对每个人都是公平的 只有当我们有准备 有能力时才会抓住机遇 最后用谚语结束全文 为整篇文章画上了一个漂亮的句号 使文章增色不少 归纳总结常用套路 so inaword insum insummary tosumup thus inconclusion inshort finally therefore then hence atlast ingeneral inbrief afterall