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Writinglesson,3.用词基本恰当,句子结构完整,语法正确,语言通顺,语句连贯,层次清楚,意思正确;4.会使用适当的过渡词,和一定比例的复合句提高作文的档次;5.书写规范,字迹工整(字体稍大一些),格式符合要求。,1.能在所学词汇、句型、语法范围内书写正确的句子,要求不得少于80词(1015句即可,不画蛇添足。);2.要求能通过记叙某一件事表达真实情感、感悟人生的哲理;,答题要求,一档(13-15分)内容切题、层次清楚、语言流畅、基本无语言错误;二档(10-12分)内容切题、层次比较清楚、语言比较流畅、语言表达错误较少;三档(6-9分)内容基本切题、层次不够分明、语言表达较多错误;四档(1-5分)有一定内容、但语言表达错误较多。,评分标准,一、认真审题、细读提示、把握体裁,二、明确要点、组织信息、构思文路,书面表达“四步法”,三、斟酌词句、连句成文、动笔书写,四、核对修改、查缺补漏、规范誊写、卷面整洁,Howtowriteagoodarticle?,Howtowriteagoodarticle?,记叙文“三段式”结构:,第一段(首段):“凤头”(文章开头应给人以美感),第二段(正文):“猪肚”(文章内容要充实),第三段(尾段):“豹尾”(文章结尾要圆滑有力),2004Highsandlowsinmylife2005Loveformyparents2006Understanding2007AGift2008Aletter(Tobestrong)2009Sunshineinmylife,0409年中考考题回放,AfterWenchuanEarthquake,soldiers,thegreatestlove,parentslove,teachersencouragement,friendshelp,Sensationiseverywhere.(感动无处不在。),Inourlife,weareoftenmovedby,提示:生活中,令我们感动的事很多很多。父母的关心、照顾,老师的鼓励与帮助,朋友、同学的理解和支持,甚至是陌生人的一次小小的帮助都会令我们深深地感动,而我们也会尽自己所能关心、帮助、感动着周围的人。请你以“Iwasmovedby”为题,写一篇不少于80词的短文,记叙生活中你经历过的一件令你感动的事,说明生活中充满着爱与感动。,Iwasmovedby,实战演练,(2)Tense(主要时态),TheSimplePastTense(一般过去时态),words,sentences,article(文章),1.审题(1)体裁,记叙文,2.列要点,3.连句成文,4.修改誊写,paragraph(段),请用“四步法、三段式”完成写作,Iwasmovedby提示:生活中,令我们感动的事很多很多。父母的关心、照顾,老师的鼓励与帮助,朋友、同学的理解和支持,甚至是陌生人的一次小小的帮助都会令我们深深地感动,而我们也会尽自己所能关心、帮助、感动着周围的人。请你以“Iwasmovedby”为题,写一篇不少于80词的短文,记叙生活中你经历过的一件令你感动的事,说明生活中充满着爱与感动。,实战演练,Usefulexpressions,remember,canthelpcrying,happiness,help,grateful,worryabout,sensation(感动),fillwith,move,happy,lucky,love,colorful,make,experience,feel,understand,bemovedby,Wonderfulsentences,Beginning开头句,1.Movingthingisthesweetestcandy.2.Inourlife,theremustbemanypeopleorthingsmakeyoumoved.,Fromthemovingthing,IknowImsoluckytoliveinthemovingworld.,Ending结尾句,Body中间句,1.,重复关键词,Onepossibleversion:,Sensationisthesweetestcandy.Itmakesmefeelthatmylifeiscolorfulanditsfilledwithloveandhappiness.Inourlife,theremustbemanypeopleorthingsmakeyoumoved.Ihaveeverexperiencedonethingwhichmakesmemoveddeeply.,Beginning(首段),主题句,连接词,Lastyear,myrightfootwashurtinabasketballmatch.AndIfeltsopainfulthatIcouldntmove.Atthatmoment,myfriend,Jack,sentmetothehospital.Ifelthappy,althoughmyfootwasstillpainful.Butbecauseofmyillness,Iworriedaboutmystudyverymuch.Iwastooupsettosayaword.Seeingthis,Jacksaid,Body(正文),Frommyfriendslove,IknowImsoluckytoliveinthemovingworld.,结尾句,表明态度,Ending(尾段),“Takeiteasy!Iwillcarryyoutoschooleveryday.”Iwasmoveddeeply,SOIcouldnthelpcryingout.Hegavenotonlyahelpbutalsothegreatestlovetome.Iwassograteful.,热门话题,1.Moved/Somethinginmyheart2.Happiness3.Lovearoundme4.Loveforthepeopleintrouble/Whensomeoneintrouble,whatshouldIdo?5.ThepersonIwanttothankmost,6.Learntosmile7.Tobestrong8.Confidenceandsuccess9.Dosomethingforourenvironment10.Savingwaterisourduty11.Studyinahappyway,热门话题,HomeworkFinishoffthecompositioncarefully.,Nothingisimpossibletoawillingheart.心之所愿,无事不成。,Thankyou!Goodbye!,
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