英语写作要领及技巧.ppt

英语写作要领及技巧,制作人：薛少鹏,大学英语（CET4，CET6）作文要求,写作时间：30分钟作文字数：100-150字评分标准：A）是否切题B）是否表达思想清楚C）是否连贯通顺D）是否存在或严重存在语言错误,SentenceWriting,用词必须明确、具体。多用主动语态省去不必要的词不要滥用并列句正确选择并列连词避免悬垂分词不要改变说话角度避免主次颠倒注意标点符号的使用,用词必须明确、具体,Ex:A)Hewasnotveryoftenontime.Heusuallycamelate.B)HedidnotthinkthatstudyingLatinwasofmuchuseHethoughtthestudyofLatinuseless.C)Heshowsatisfactionasthetookpossessionofhiswellearnedreward.Hegrinnedashepocketed.,多用主动语态,MyfirstvisittoBostonwillalwaysberememberedbyme.MyfirstvisittoBostonwillalwaysberemembered.IshallalwaysremembermyfirstvisittoBoston.,省去不必要的词,Thequestionastowhetheritisrightorwrongdepends.Thequestionwhetheritisrightorwrongdepends.Hisstoryisastrangeone.Hisstoryisstrange.Thisisasubjectthatarousespublicattention.Thissubjectarousespublicattention.,省去不必要的词,Inspiteofthefactthatshewasinahurry,shestoppedtotalk.Althoughshewasinahurry,shestoppedtotalk.Thefactthatyouhadnotsucceededintheexaminationshouldnotdeteryoufromtryingagain.Yourfailureintheexaminationshouldnotdeteryoufromtryingagain.,不要滥用并列句,Wearegoingtothecountrysidethissummer,andwearegoingtovisitmygrandmother.Wearegoingtothecountrysidethissummertovisitmygrandmother.MyfriendtoldmethatIhadwonthescholarship,andIwasoverjoyed.WhenmyfriendtoldmethatIhadwonthescholarship,Iwasoverjoyed.,正确选择并列连词,Itistimeforthecurtaintorise;andonlyafewoftheaudiencehaveyetcome.Itistimeforthecurtaintorise,butonlyafewoftheaudiencehaveyetcome.,避免悬垂分词,Flyingat12,000feet,thecountrysidelookslikeagreenchecktablecloth.Whenyouflyat12,000feet,thecountrysidelookslikeagreenchecktablecloth.Walkingthroughthefields,thewildflowersflowersareaninterestingsubjecttostudy.Asonewalksthroughthefields,thewildflowersprovideaninterestingsubjecttostudy.,不要改变说话角度,Theentireclassattendedthepicnic,andanenjoyabledaywasspentbyall.Theentireclassattendedthepicnic,andallspentanenjoyableday.Whenyouhaveselectedasatisfactorypattern,thematerialmaythenbebought.Whenyouhaveselectedasatisfactorypattern,youmaythenbuythematerial,避免主次颠倒(1),Thedevelopmentofthesuburbshascreatedproblem,whileithasalsoprovidedsubstantialmodernhousingformillionsofpeople.Whilethedevelopmentofthesuburbshascreatedproblem,ithasalsoprovidedsubstantialmodernhousingformillionsofpeople.,避免主次颠倒(2),Joewalkedoutoftheroom,findingtheboystillthere.Walkingoutoftheroom,Joefoundtheboystillthere.分词表示次要动作,注意标点符号的使用,MarysaysAmyisthegreatestactressinLondon.Mary,saysAmy,isthegreatestactressinLondon.Heisfortunatelymarried.Heis,fortunatelymarried.,ParagraphWriting,ThestructureofaparagraphTopicsentenceDevelopmentsentenceConclusion,Thestructureofaparagraph,Topicsentence,WhatistopicsentenceThepositionoftopicsentenceHowtowriteatopicsentence,TOPICSENTENCE,Radarisveryimportantinaviationtoday.Radarisgreatlyusedinourlifetoday.Radarplaysanimportantroleinsupportingmyfamily.,Developmentsentence,WhatisdevelopmentsentenceHowtowroteadevelopmentsentence.SkillA:EnumerationSkillB:ComparisonandcontrastSkillC:Causeandeffect,写作的基本步骤,审题构思列出提纲动笔复合,写作的基本要求,完整性文章是有机的整体要表达完整的信息，初此文章还应保持结构的完整。唯一性主题唯一、中心鲜明连贯性对中心思想（论点）的阐述要合乎逻辑，前后连贯。,练习：,AdultEducationinChina1)Chinaneedstodevelopheradulteducation.2)AdulteducationisnowplayinganimportantpartinChinasrealizationofthefourmodernizations.3)However,adulteducationinChinafacessomeproblems.,习作评析,Chinaneedstodevelophereducation.Inchina,thenumberofhigheducationislimitedbecauseofitseconomicsandpopulation.Soheradulteducationisanimportantcontent.Adulteducationisimportantonincreasingthewholeeducation.,Adulteducationisnowplayinganimportantpartintherealizationofherfourmodernizations.Thefourmodernizations-nationaldefense,agriculture,scienceandtechnology,industry-areChinasaimofdevelopment.Realizingthefourmodernizationsneedsmoreeducatedworkers,soinChinaadulteducationisveryurgent.However,adulteducationinChinafacessomeproblems.first,thenumberofadulteducationistoolargetosatisfyinfunds.second,thequalityofeducationcantbeguaranteed.,词不达意Thenumberoftheyouthwhocangethighereducation.,Itsbackwardeconomyandlargepopulation.Isaveryurgenttask.Thenumberofpeoplereceivingadulteducationistoolargetobesatisfiedatonce,HOMEWORK,MysuggestionsonEducationChinaseducationalcausehasdevelopedveryfastduringthedecade,butitstillleavesmuchtobedesired._,英语写作的三要和三忌,要尽量用学过的词句表达法，忌用ChineseEnglish。要紧扣要求，忌自由发挥。要内容连贯，忌东拼西凑。,议论文写作,确定主题论据充分逻辑严密结构清晰态度忠诚，友好,转承词I,表示时间：first,second,next,beforeduringafter,now,then,last举例：inaddition,also,anther,further,more,similarly,forexample/instance对比：although,buthowever,instead,nevertheless,ontheotherhand,incontrast,onthecontrary,转承词II,表示因果：since,therefore,asaresult,consequently,because,thus加强语气：again,besidemoreover,inparticular,infact,indeed,tothisend总结结论：ashasbeennoted,inbrief,inshort,toconclude,tosumup,