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Description,FirstsomeReview,Thinkbacktoourpreviouslessonsaboutwritingessays.Ingroupsof3-4writedownastepbystepprocesstowritinganessayincludingdifferentwritingsuggestions.Trytodothiswithoutlookingatyournotes.TrytokeepthetalkinEnglish,WritingDescriptions,Inthewindowwasafan.Thebladesoftherustywindowfanclatteredandwhirledastheyblewoutastreamofwarm,soggyair.,DescriptiveEssay,Goalistoshareanexperiencewiththereaderappealingtotheirsenses.Howdoesthelastsentenceaboutthefanappealtothesenses?,DescriptiveEssay,Makereaderssee,taste,hear,smellandfeel.Givethereaderamentalpicture.,Proessay-Intro,Imaginearestaurantwhereyoureverywhimiscateredto,youreverywantsatisfied,youreveryrequestgrantedwithouthesitation.Thepeopleonstafflivetopleaseyou.Theyhoveroveryouanxiouslyasyousampleyourselection,waitingforyourjudgment.Yourpleasureistheirdelight,yourdissatisfactiontheirdismay.Lousisntthatkindofplace.,Question-example1,Doestheauthorhaveathesis?Canyoupicturethisperfectrestauranttheauthordescribes?,Proessay-Body1,AtLousKosyKornerKoffeeShop,themockabuseflowslikeacupofspilledFolgers.Customersareyelledat,lectured,blamed,mocked,teased,andignored.Theypayfortheprivilegeofpouringtheirowncoffeeandscramblingtheirowneggs.Asinafondbutdysfunctionalfamily,Loudisplayshisaffectionthroughcriticismandinsults,andhiscustomersrespondinkind.IfLoushadaslogan,itmightbe,“IfImpolitetoyou,askyourselfwhatswrong.”,Question-body1,Doestheparagraphsupportthethesis?DoyougetasenseofhowLoutreatshiscostumers?,Proessay-example3,“MaaaaakeeesomeonehappyMake-make-maaakeeeesomeonehappy,”hecroonsasheliftsthesteamingpotthathasinfusedtheroomwiththericharomaoffreshlybrewedcoffee.Hecarriesittothewomanstable,fillshercup,anddropstwosingle-servingcontainersofhalfandhalfnearby.Sight_Sound_Taste_Smell_Touch_,Assignment#4Edits,Unity-AskthequestionSupport-Ifyouseeaparagraphwiththreesentences.Intro/Conclusion-ifyouseeaparagraphwithoneortwosentences.,Assignment-DescriptiveEssay,Writeyourowndescriptiveessayusingaplacefamiliartoyou.alibrarystudyareaawaitingroomatatrainstationasmallshopaninternetbaraplaceinyourhometown,Remember:youneedathesis.ie:Thetrainstationwaitingroomwasfrightening.Theexamroomwastense.Thestudyroomwasquiet.,Assignment-DescriptiveEssay,Onceyouhaveathesis,makealistofasmanydetailsasyoucantosupportyourgeneralimpression.-Tiredworkersatthecounter-Out-of-orderneonsign-Silentmiddle-agedcouple-Couldntseeanyoneinthekitchen,Assignment-DescriptiveEssay,Organizeyourlist.-byphysicalorder:movefromlefttoright,fartonearect.-Size:Beginwithlargeobjectsandworkdowntosmallerones-specialorder:useanorderappropriatetoyoursubject.,Assignment-DescriptiveEssay,Developatopic/thesisListdetailssupportingthesisOrganizedetailsintosomelogicalorderBegin1stdraft,Assignment-DescriptiveEssay,
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