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Low-carbonlife,环保类话题写作青州八中王善勤,Wehaveonlyoneworld.,写作口诀,一审二写三修改，意义原因把头开，正文要点不能少，观点愿望末尾在。时态一致不忘怀，加入名句高分来。,以“Savingwater”为题写一篇70字左右的段文。1.水在我们生活中很重要。2.有人不关心节约用水，洗完手不关水龙头。3.工厂往河里排放污水，河流、湖泊的水被污染了，鱼死了。4.我们一定要采取措施保护水。5、让我们的河流、湖泊更干净。提示词：careabout,tap,pourwastewaterinto,dosomething,审题,文体,要点,提示词,二次修改,Waterisveryimportantinourlives.Wecantlivewithoutit.Butsomepeopledontcareaboutwater.Theydontturnoffthetapsaftertheyhavewashedtheirhands.Whatisworse,somefactoriesevenpourwastewaterintoriversandlakes.Somefisheshasdied.Inordertomakeriversandlakescleaner,Wemustdosomethingtoprotectwater.Environmentprotectionisthedutyofeverybody.,开头-写明写什么，意义、原因。,have,正文-中心要点,结束-你的愿望、观点,Goodbeginning,开门见山揭示主题。Waterisveryimportantinourlives.2.交代人物、事情、时间开头。Lastweekwewenttothelakeandfoundthatitwasverydirty.3.回忆性的开头。Istillremembermyfirsttriptotherivernearmyhometown.,Goodending,首尾呼应。Wemustdosomethingtoprotectwaterinordertomaketheworldmorebeautiful.重复主题句。Ilovemyhometown,andIloveitspeople.名句结尾。Ibelievewecandobetterinprotectingourworld.Wherethereisawillthereisaway.,二次创作,写作常见基本问题：1、要点描述是否齐全。2、非语法错误：拼写、标点、大小写。3、语法错误：时态、词形变化等。4、句型多样化：过渡句、从句的使用。5、书面整洁。,Nowmoreandmorepeoplegettoknowitsimportanttoprotectourlivingenvironment.Asastudent，itsmydutytodosomethingfortheearth.Fromnowon,Illgotoschoolbybikeoronfootinsteadofinacar.Illusefewerplasticbags【少用塑料袋】toreducewhitepollution【减少白色污染】.InordertosaveenergyIllplantmoretreessothattheairwillbefresher.Illtakelessliftandreusewater【循环用水】.Atlastlwillusesecond-handbooks【使用二手书】,sowedontneedtocutdownmoretrees.,Ifeveryonetakesaction,ourenivronmentwillbebetterandbetter.Ourworldwillbemorebeautiful.,1.众所周知，环境变得越来越糟糕。1)Asweallknow,theenvironmentisgettingworseandworse.(Zhangyuyue)2)Itiswell-knownthattheenvironmentisgettingworseandworse.2.环境变得越来越糟糕的原因是Thereasonwhytheenvironmentisgettingworseandworseisthat(Dangmengmeng),3.所以，必须采取有效的措施来解决那些问题。1)Soeffectivemeasuresmustbetakentosolvethoseproblems(Liuwenshuang)2)Sowemusttakeeffectivemeasurestosolvethoseproblems.4.真的到了我们该立即采取行动保护环境的时候了。Itshightimethatwetookimmediateactiontoprotectourenvironment.(Lijia),1.时态问题Ourenvironmentgetworseandworse.2.Therebe句型Therehadabeautifulandclearriver.3.冠词问题Theenvironmentisaimportantproblem.,常见错误:,isgetting,was或者usedtobe,an,4.词性混淆Thefreshairisimportancetoourhealth.5.时态一致问题Notonlyisitharmfultoourlife,butalsoitcaused6.第三人称问题Itiswell-knownthattheearthbelongtothehumanbeingsratherthanindividual.,causes,belongs,important或者ofimportance,信息2信息3信息4,开头正文结尾,结构,Para.1Para.2Para.3,信息1,信息5,水污染树木遭砍伐垃圾遍地,总结：人人做贡献，环境越来越美好,各种污染的原因,污染对健康有危害,立即采取措施解决问题,环境被破坏的现状,写作大练兵,三月本应该是个美丽的季节，但是雾霾（smog）天气持续不断再次引起了全社会对环境保护的关注。假设你是新华中学的学生李华，根据以下要点提示写120词左右的演讲稿，主要内容包括：1.描述现象2.原因及危害3.解决措施参考词汇：二氧化碳carbondioxide环保的environmentally-friendly注意：1.词数：120词左右；2.演讲稿开头和结尾已给出，请将其抄写在答题卡上且该部分不计入总词数。Goodmorning,everyone,MynameisLihua.Imhonoredtogiveaspeechhere.Thankyou!,概述现象简述原因指出危害解决措施总结展望,Goodmorningeveryone,MynameisLihua.Imverygladtogiveaspeechhere.Asweallknow,Marchissupposedtobeabeautifulmonth.Butwearefacingabigproblem,smogwhichisbecomingmoreandmoreserious.Thewholesocietyispayingattentiontoit.,Actually,itisstillamatterofairpollution.Therearesomanycarsgivingoutcarbondioxide.Airpollutiondoesgreatharmtoourhealth.Itishightimethatweshouldtakeimmediateactiontodealwithit.Firstofall,letsridebicyclesinsteadofdrivingcars.Then,wecanplantasmanytreesaswecantocleantheair.Lastbutnotleast,letsstartfromeverylittlebit.,Ifeveryonedoessomethingfortheenvironment,wewillhaveabrightfuture.Thankyou!,
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