2019-2020年高考英语写作最后冲刺 训练、点评和猜题 01（含解析）.doc

2019-2020年高考英语写作最后冲刺 训练、点评和猜题 01（含解析）为了营造一种“多读书，读好书”的良好氛围，你班将举行一次主题班会，要求以 “A good book can affect our life ” 为题作演讲(词数：120个词左右)，向同学们介绍一本自己读过的好书，并谈谈自己的感悟。【思路点拨】 这是一篇演讲稿，写作时要注意格式：称呼语和结尾语；可根据内容要点适当增加细节，写作时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩，注意要求的字数在120词左右，不要太多或太少。特别注意最后要谈自己的看法，这样才能体现出文章的完整。除此之外，有下列重点需要考生认真思考，加以解决：1.如何引出自己演讲的话题；2.怎样介绍自己读过的一本好书；3.自己从这本书中感悟出了什么；4.如何深化你的演讲主题，增强演讲的鼓动性。【参考答案】Boys and girls, As Francis Bacon once said, reading makes a full man. A good book can affect our life in one way or another. My Life Story by Helen Keller is one such book as touched my heart. It is about how Helen overcame her physical disabilities and succeeded by struggling in her long and hard learning period.From the book, I have learned that whenever we e across difficulties or even misfortune, we should never give in or run away. Instead, we are supposed to face them bravely and try to find ways out. Reading can not only improve our ability to understand the world, but also wash our souls. To live an enjoyable and meaningful life, lets read more good books! Thats all. Thank you!【范文评析】1.文章首句引用名人名言“As Francis Bacon once said, reading makes a full man.”引出话题“A good book can affect our life in one way or another.”，可谓事半功倍。此句运用了时间状语从句和动名词状语作主语；2.向听众介绍自己读过的一本好书时，用一个简单句“My Life Story by Helen Keller is one such book as touched my heart.”恰到好处地打动了听众的心灵。用一个复合句“It is about how Helen overcame her physical disabilities and succeeded by struggling in her long and hard learning period.”介绍了书的主要内容，为自己的感悟打下了伏笔。该句使用了how引导的表语从句；4.为了深化演讲主题，作者用一个并列句“Reading can not only improve our ability to understand the world, but also wash our souls.”来达到了目的。在本句中运用了并列连词not onlybut also结构；文章的结尾“To live an enjoyable and meaningful life, lets read more good books!”非常具有演讲的鼓动性，该句将动词不定式作目的状语和祈使句的巧妙结合起来，尽显文章风采。顺便说一下，范文作者运用了称呼语“Boys and girls,”和结尾语“Thats all. Thank you!”，没有忘记演讲稿的格式。练习二阅读使人充实，阅读对于每个人的成长至关重要。请认真阅读下面的引言(quotation)，按要求用英语写一篇短文。 Reading makes a full manFrancis Bacon内容要求：1.你对该引言的理解； 2.举例说明； 3.恰当的结尾。注意：1.词数：150左右；2.文中不能出现考生的具体信息；【思路点拨】 考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。运用适当的短语表达中心思想，增加作文的可读性。完成提示词时也要符合事实。题目已给出要求，要求考生引用名言，再对它加以诠释，阐述自己的理解；然后再举例说明阅读可以使人充实的例子来阐述它；最后结合名言和自己的内容来适当的结尾。考生应注意语言的恰当的应用。对单词、语法的掌握。除此之外，有下列重点需要考生认真思考，加以解决：1.如何巧妙地引出话题；2.对该引言如何理解；3.怎样举例说明；4.结尾怎么做到恰到好处。【参考答案】As Francis bacon puts it, reading makes a full man. It is reading that guides us into a world of wonders and gives us a glimpse of what life is like. It is no exaggeration(夸张)to say that reading enriches the mind and shapes what we are today. My story of reading started when I was just a little girl and fairy tales like Snow White were the best lullabies(摇篮曲) that sent me to sweet dreams. As I grew up, what touched me most was the beauty of language, whether it was Secret Garden or My Friend Lu Xixi. The more I read, the more curious and eager I bee to explore the unknown. To put it simply, reading to me is more of a friend, a teacher and a soul-mate. Not only does reading bring me much joy but it also helps me get access to a broader world and greater minds. That is exactly what reading is all about.2.范文接着用一个强调句和一个复合句阐述对引言的理解，大大增加了文章的可读性和深度。这个强调句“It is reading that guides us into a world of wonders and gives us a glimpse of what life is like.”比较复杂：句子中动名词作主语，复杂句中套简单句增加了文章的难易程度，充分彰显了作者的语言功底。但是需要指出的是文中“exaggeration(夸张)”一词对于大多数考生非常陌生，建议换成下列表达方法“We cannot say too much that reading enriches the mind and shapes what we are today.”；3.在举例的过程中，作者更是运用了丰富多彩的句型，为文章增加了亮点，使文章的表达更具有逻辑性，更富有条理性。比如：when, as引导的状语从句“when I was just a little girl”“As I grew up”；that引导的定语从句“that sent me to sweet dreams”； what引导的主语从句以及whether引导的让步状语从句 “what touched me most was the beauty of language, whether it was Secret Garden or My Friend Lu Xixi.”；还有the more，the more的结构；但是大多数考生可能不知道“lullabies(摇篮曲)”怎么拼写，建议换成这样的表达方法“fairy tales, for example, Snow White, were just like best music that sent me to sweet dreams.”同样可以起到异曲同工之效；4.结尾部分对文章进行了总结并对主题作了进一步的强调。Not only does reading bring me much joy but it also helps me get access to a broader world and greater minds这个句子not only.but also 连接两个句子，第一个分句用部分倒装；That is exactly what reading is all about.这个句子运用what引导的表语从句；最后需要指出的是：如果考生对“To put it simply”不太熟悉，那就干脆使用：In brief, In short, In a word等等。练习三在全国读书月到来之际，请你根据图中所示，用英文写一篇短文，对现在中小学生的阅读现象做个描述，并发表自己的看法。 pupils junior students senior students 注意：1.短文首段已给出，不计入总词数；2.词数：120左右。Recently, a survey has been done on the readings among the students in different stages. _【思路点拨】 这是一篇图画类的写作。图画类作文实际上就是要求考生根据自己的认识水平，解读画面，将漫画、照片或图片中描述的内容转化成文字，按照要求和提示信息展开想象和议论。在写作过程中，考生可根据图片的寓意、内容或情节线索，传递信息，表达自己的思想，揭示图画所反映的主题。注意本篇的写作所用的基本时态为现在范畴的时态。除此之外，有下列重点需要考生认真思考，加以解决： 1.因为首段已经给出，故只要考虑如何描述三幅图画所反映的内容，并要加以恰当的议论； 2.如何围绕图画所反映的主要问题(如高中生的问题)展开讨论，发表自己的看法； 3.得出自己的结论。【参考答案】Recently, a survey has been done on the readings among the students in different stages. For the pupils, they prefer cartoons just because these books provide them with interesting characters. Junior students express their feelings directly by saying：“Love stories are our favorites.” Maybe dreams about life fill their minds. Unfortunately, burdened/ loaded with endless homework, senior students have to deal with all the textbooks. They hardly spare any time for some other readings besides the required famous literature. They are longing for more, though.As far as I am concerned, we should focus on the teens reading which should cover various materials. Despite heavy burdens, senior students should be involved in reading raging from economics, politics as well as literature. Besides, humors stories are popular in order to reduce the stress from exams.To sum up, balance should be kept between study and other sources of absorbing knowledge. 2.范文围绕“青少年读书的问题”谈了自己的看法，并突出了对主要问题的看法“Despite heavy burdens, senior students should be involved in reading raging from economics, politics as well as literature. Besides, humors stories are popular in order to reduce the stress from exams.”与上文进行呼应。 3.最后得出自己的结论“To sum up, balance should be kept between study and other sources of absorbing knowledge.”，亮明了作者的观点。 4.本文过度词(句) “Unfortunately, As far as I am concerned，Besides, To sum up”及关联词“Despite heavy burdens，as well as literature”等的使用使得文章条理非常清晰。猜 题阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。It is reported in the Yangzi Evening Paper that the 23rd of this April is the first public book-reading day in Jiangsu. People are doing more: watching television, surfing the Web, listening to their iPods, talking on mobile phones, and texting their friends. But a new report released by the paper declares what people in Jiangsu are doing a lot less reading.The report paints a terrible picture of the dropping time of reading spent by people in Jiangsu over the past two decades. Among the findings:Only 50 percent of Jiangsunese between 13 and 21 read almost every day. Almost half of Jiangsunese between ages 25 and 35 never read books for pleasure. The average person between ages 15 and 35 spends more than 2 hours a day watching TV and 5 minutes reading.It is thought by many experts that this is a serious social problem. Jiangsu, a big province of education, economy and building industry, is losing its status because of poor reading.”【写作内容】1.用约30个词概括上文的主要内容； 2.用约120个词就“江苏人(Jiangsunese)读书越来越少” 谈谈你的看法，内容包括：(1)你认为江苏人读书减少的原因是什么；(2)请你结合自身的经历或体会，列举读书的益处；(3)你建议人们阅读什么类型的书。 【写作要求】1.作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。【评分标准】概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。【思路点拨】 读写任务型写作大约在xx年首先出现在广东试卷中，继而xx年江苏高考英语卷中又首次出现了这种题型。任务型写作要求考生阅读一篇短文，然后完成两项任务：使用约30个词概括要点；使用约120个词写一篇符合要求的短文。这一题型旨在考查考生“用英语获取信息、处理信息、传达信息的能力，分析问题、解决问题的能力以及用英语进行表达的能力”，即“综合语言运用能力”。因此，本篇写作有下列重点需要考生认真思考，加以解决： 1.概括短文内容：浏览全文，我们不难发现，这篇新闻报道的主要内容是：根据扬子晚报报道，江苏人花在读书上的时间在过去二十年中下降了。人们普遍认为，对于江苏这样一个教育、经济、建筑业的大省来说，这是一个严重的问题。2.就新闻中所报道的主要内容谈自己的看法；3.如何结合自身的经历或体会，列举读书的益处；4.如何建议人们阅读什么类型的书。【参考答案】According to a recently released report in Yangzi Evening Paper, the time of reading spent by people in Jiangsu has dropped over the past 20 years, which is considered to be a serious problem to a big province of education, economy and building industry.There is no denying the fact that people in Jiangsu read fewer books nowadays. Why, For one thing, the Internet is taking up most of peoples free time. For another, people are much busier than before, which makes people in Jiangsu can hardly find time to do reading.Reading benefits everyone in many ways. First of all, one can acquire much knowledge by reading. The knowledge one gains from books can change his way of life. Secondly, reading can enrich ones mind. With out books, our soul would be like a desert. Whenever I am upset, I would read my favorite book The Little Prince and I feel inspired at once. Thirdly, reading makes ones life more colorful and pleasant. Reading offers us one of the best pastimes and few pleasures can pare with that of reading a good book.In my opinion, classical works of literature and bestselling books by excellent contemporary writers are the best choices. Lets read as many good books as we can. The more we read, the more we will learn.2.接着用一句主从复合句“There is no denying the fact that people in Jiangsu read fewer books nowadays. (there be denying the fact that.是经典句型)”和盘托出对此现象的看法；然后结合原文所提供的事实给自己的看法提供论据，使结论更具有说理性；3.第三段结合自身的体会列举读书的益处。范文用过渡句“Reading benefits everyone in many ways.”引出话题。然后用“First of all, Secondly, Thirdly” 分三点向读者阐述了读书的益处，条理非常清楚。4.用过度词语“In my opinion”引出了“建议人们阅读什么类型的书”，使得上下文浑然一体。最后一句“The more we read, the more we will learn”为全文画龙点睛。