2019-2020年高考英语二轮复习专题3应用文写作类型2建议信讲练.doc

2019-2020年高考英语二轮复习专题3应用文写作类型2建议信讲练1写作目的：建议信的写作目的是提出建议或忠告，观点要合情合理，注意礼貌当先。2写作方法(1)首段：a简介自己，不要啰嗦；b说明目的，注意语气。(2)主体：a提出具体建议；b首先肯定优点，再写需改进内容，否则变成投诉信；c经常进行交流，注意对方感受，时时提升你和我，否则容易跑题写成议论文，因为内容与议论文相似。(3)尾段：总结建议，注意礼貌，盼望回复。假如你叫李华，你的英国朋友Andrew下个月要来你校学习两个月。他来信请你对他上学期间的交通方式提出建议。现在，请你用英语回一封信，按以下各点答复：1建议骑自行车上学；2自行车是学生常用的交通工具；3骑自行车的一些好处；4骑自行车需注意的问题。注意：词数80左右。习作评阅自我修改三档作文Dear Andrew，As for the question about the transportation to and from school，Id like to remend your riding bicycle.Here are some reasons. (骑自行车上、下学在学生中是很常见的。)As is wellknown，buying or repairing a bicycle doesnt cost a lot.And parking a bicycle is easy in our school.Bicycleriding is also a way to do exercises and protect the environment.What you should do careful is just to keep an appropriate speed while riding and lock it after youre off it.By this way，youll feel it simple and relax to ride a bicycle while youre here.Hopefully，these tips could be helpful.Yours sincerely，Li Hua1.避免词汇搭配错误处careful改为carefully处By改为In2.杜绝语法错误处添加冠词a处exercises改为exercise处relax改为relaxing3.要点一定不要遗漏补上处要点：Riding a bike toand from school is very mon among the students.自我提升向极优作文迈进Dear Andrew，As for the question about the transportation to and from school，Id like to remend your riding a bicycle.Here are some reasons.Firstly，riding a bike to and from school is very mon among the students，for buying or repairing a bicycle doesnt cost a lot.Next，parking a bicycle is easy and (便利的)in our school. (事实上)，bicycleriding is also a (实用的)way to do exercise and protect the environment.What you should do carefully is just to keep an appropriate speed while riding and lock it after youre off it.In this way，youll feel it simple and relaxing to ride a bicycle while youre here.Hopefully，these tips could be helpful.Yours sincerely，Li Hua1.高级词汇convenientActually/As a matter of factpractical2.高级句型用it is mon practice to do.改写句加黑部分：it is mon practice for the students to ride a bike to and from school