2019-2020年高三英语上学期开学测试题分类汇编 六 书面表达.doc

2019-2020年高三英语上学期开学测试题分类汇编 六 书面表达（一）随着科技的发展，iPad已经成为学生的新宠。用iPad既可以听音乐、阅读电子书，又可以玩电子游戏。请你用英语给你校长写一封信，谈谈你对你校学生使用iPad的情况。信的内容包括以下几点：1使用iPad对学生学习产生的好处。2使用iPad对学生产生的负面影响。3提出自己的建议并简要说明理由。注意：词数120词左右。Dear Sir，My name is Li HuaI am writing to show my concern about the effects of modern media on us students_Yours，Li Hua【答案】 Dear Sir，My_name_is_Li_HuaI_am_writing_to_show_my_concern_about_the_effects_of_modern_media_on_us_studentsNowadays，iPads are very popular in our schoolMany students hold the view that possessing an iPad is a fashionThere is no doubt that with it we can listen to music，download learning materials，and so onIn other words，its helpful to our studies，especially our English learningHowever，each coin has two sidesSome students bring their iPads to the classroom and listen to music，which ruins our learning atmosphereWhats worse，some even waste their precious time playing gamesIn my opinion，school is a place where we should focus our attention on lessons，so iPads should be banned in classroomI hope you will take my suggestions into considerationI am looking forward to your early replyYours，Li_Hua【解析】 试题分析：本篇书面表达属于英文书信，根据提示信息说明本校学生使用iPad的情况。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确三个要点：使用iPad对学生学习产生的好处和产生的负面影响以及自己对此事的看法。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如the view that possessing an iPad is a fashion 和There is no doubt that.运用了同位语从句，以及which 和where引导的定语从句。此外，文章还使用了大量习语和短语，如each coin has two sides, in other words, focus our attention on, take .into consideration等。插入语whats worse，以及副词However的使用使文章内容更具有层次感，也使语言更加连贯。【难度】一般（二）请你根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文。Life isnt about waiting for the storm to passIt is about learning to dance in the rain注意：无须写标题；除诗歌外，文体不限；不能透露个人信息和学校名称；字数120左右。【答案】In our daily life, we are often confronted with difficulties, even great troublesSome people do nothing but wait, while others face them bravely and conquer themPersonally, I think we should learn to face difficulties positively and make every effort to overe themMy memory drew me back to four years ago when I was a junior middle school studentAt that time, I had great trouble studying EnglishFirst of all, I felt it hard to memorize English wordsBesides, I didnt dare to say anything in class when the teacher asked questions though I knew some answersWhat annoyed me most was that I failed exams constantlyI was about to give up when my English teacher found problemHe encouraged me and gave me some good adviceInspired by him, I was determined to defeat itFollowing his advice, I made progress graduallyFrom my experience, I can draw aconclusion that difficulties are weak if you are brave enoughSo keep up and try to defeat them whenever you have anyNever wait for the storm to pass; instead, learn to dance in the rain【解析】试题分析：考查开放性作文写作,开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，如besides, further, last but not least等。在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。【亮点说明】文章使用了很好的短语和句子：take action采取行动，encourage to do 鼓励某人做什么How I wished I could swim like them! 这句话用了虚拟语气， It frightened me just to think of being alone in the water. 这句话用了it做形式主语， Nobody is born knowing how to swim.” 这句话用了伴随状语， there was nothing to be afraid of. 这句话用了there be句型。This experience has also taught me that as long as I never give up and keep trying, I can succeed.这句话用了宾语从句和条件状语从句。【难度】一般【答案】Looking back to the National English Speaking petition I took part in several days ago, I have a lot to share with you.Firstly, I feel really delighted that I have won the first prize in the petition, which makes me understand the true meaning of the proverb “no pains, no gains”. Besides ,I have established the friendship with students from all over our country, from whom I have learned a lot. More importantly, taking this petition has enabled me to overe my fear of speaking in public, thus developing my self-confidence. Additionally, I owe many thanks to my teachers and judges, without whose help, I couldnt have done such an excellent job.To sum up, I will always treasure this meaningful and memorable experience.【解析】试题分析：分析要求可知，假如你是某中学的学生Tom。前不久，你参加了全国英语演讲比赛并获得一等奖。请用英语给校刊写一篇文章，谈谈你的体会。内容主要包括：1付出才有回报；2收获自信和友谊；3感激之情。短文应该用一般现在时，第一人称。要求写约100个词，不要太多或太少。尽量多使用较高级的词汇和短语以及固定句式，注意句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。【亮点说明】 文中用了一些高级的短语和句式。如： which引导的定语从句、taking 非谓语结构、Additionally, To sum up等都很不错。【难度】一般（四）请就以下话题，按要求用英文写作。Dozens of old people gather in public parks and squares early in the morning and night, turn on the loudspeakers and dance to the music, which has been controversial(引起争议的) because of the noise pollution it creates. Guangzhou is the first city in China to have drafted a rule on the creation of silent zones in areas of parks that are close to schools, hospitals, offices and residential quarters.请就此内容写一篇短文并发表自己的看法。要求：(1) 就此材料发表你的感想；(2) 应紧扣材料、有明确观点；(3) 词数不少于60字(4) 在答题卡上作答。_【答案】【范文】Dozens of old people gather in public parks and squares early in the morning, turn on the loudspeakers and dance to the music, which has been controversial because of the noise pollution it creates.Some citizens hold the view that the loud noise is unbearable, thus disturbing the normal life of the people living near the squares and they also hope that the groups can keep the volume down to create a quiet environment. However, the retirees think group dancing brings them health and happiness, without which their life will be extremely boring. Besides they have their own right to dance on the square as it is also one of the recreational activities like playing chess or playing cards.In my opinion, there is no denying that getting together to dance allows the elderly to maintain health and be social(make more new friends who share the same hobby with them, and build up their body as well). However, whatever their choice of entertainment, its important not to neglect the public order and affect other peoples lives. So its time for the government to draft regulations which include details such as the restrictions on the volume, the areas and musical equipment. Only in this way can we see harmonious scene.【解析】范文中运用一些常见的短语dozens of 很多；turn on 打开；because of 因为；in ones opinion 在某人看来；However, the retirees think group dancing brings them health and happiness, without which their life will be extremely boring.这个句子中without which引导定语从句；In my opinion, there is no denying that getting together to dance allows the elderly to maintain health and be social这个句子用到固定句型there is no denying that 不可否认；Only in this way can we see harmonious scene这个句子only+状语+部分倒装；【难度】一般（五）Bookcrossing. 是一个面向全球的图书分享网站。该网站组织的分享活动有两种参与方式：一是自由分享（wild release），即把书放在指定地点，由其他参与者自由获取；二是定向分享（controlled release），即直接传递给另一位参与者。假设你是李华，请用英文写信申请参加。内容应包括：表明写信目的选择一种分享方式简述作出该选择的理由希望了解更多信息注意：（1）词数不少于80； （2）在答题卡上做答 （3）书信格式及开头已给出（不计入总词数）【答案】Learning that you are organizing this activity to share books worldwide, I am writing to apply for it for the simple reason that I love reading and I own a large number of books. Youve introduced two ways to share books: wild release and controlled release. Of the two, the latter wins my favor. By the means of controlled release, I only need to deliver books to other participants, not only are books shared but it can build up a bridge connecting readers from different parts of the world as well.If you could provide more specific information, I would be well grateful. Looking forward to your reply.【解析】试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁，不拖拉，使用短语：apply for申请；Looking forward to盼望着；Learning that you are organizing this activity to share books worldwide, I am writing to apply for it for the simple reason that I love reading and I own a large number of books.这句话运用learning做伴随状语，reason后面跟着一个同位语从句；not only are books shared but it can build up a bridge connecting readers from different parts of the world as well.这个句子not only but also连接两个句子，第一个句子需要用部分倒装；【难度】一般（六）学校计划举行英语作文竞赛，主题为“We Need Advice from Older Generations”。请根据以下要求写一篇100-120词的作文：你遇到了困难或问题，不知该怎么办。你去请教一位长辈，后来问题得到了解决。要求写清楚下面三点：1 当时面临的困难或问题是什么？2 你获得的指教是什么？3 结果如何？注意：不能在作文中出现所在学校的校名和本人姓名。【答案】 One year ago, I was in great trouble. I worked hard at English and devoted all my spare time to practising English. But I failed to pass the mid-term examination. I felt very disappointed.So I asked my grandpa for advice when I went home. Hearing what I told him, he said examination resulted more or less on a fortuitous phenomenon. We cant judge our improvement only by one examination. He encouraged me to stick to working hard for a long time to check my results.I took my grandpas advice and have been doing it as he told me to since then. Now my English is much better than before. From my experience, I feel that we need advice from older generation.【解析】 试题分析：本文的主题是我们需要来自老一辈的建议，本文贴近生活，比较有话说。对于此类文章，要注意一下几点：1、首先，要根据自己的实际生活经历来描写你因为与问题而去请教一位长辈，后来问题得到了解决的实践；2、其次，描述事件的原因、过程、结果时，可以多用一些连接词来使文章顺畅；3、最后，要注意点出文章的主题，文章的主题要与所写内容有关；4、注意单词、词组、句式的运用来给文章增色。【亮点说明】在对于诸如此类文章的写作，要善于使用不同的句型。英语的写作过程中切忌使用重复的表达，对于不会表达的意思要学会替换。文章按照时间顺序来写，使用了One year ago，since then，Now 这样的时间副词来连接文章。学生在写作时也要注意用平时在课本中或是阅读中积累的单词句型来自如的表达自己的意思，本文运用了in great trouble处于巨大的困难中，devoted all my spare time to付出了我全部的课余时间，stick to坚持等短语。本文也有很多句型值得学习，如Hearing what I told him, he said examination resulted more or less on a fortuitous phenomenon. 运用了非谓语形式，这样文章才能写出新意。最后的结尾From my experience, I feel that we need advice from older generation.点出了文章的主题。【难度】一般（七）1请你给外教Jeff写一封电子邮件，内容包括：1. 告诉他你在学校演讲比赛中获得了第一名；2. 感谢他在口语及演讲技巧上给予的帮助。注意：1. 词数不少于50。2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jeff,_Yours,Li Hua【答案】One possible version:Dear Jeff,I cant wait to tell you that I took first place in the Speech Contest. I know that without your help, I could have gone nowhere. Thank you so much for helping me with my pronunciation and offering me the advice on how to make the speech impressive. With your great help, I faced the challenge confidently. I really appreciate what youve done for me. Thank you very much!Yours,Li Hua【解析】试题分析：分析要求可知，请你给外教Jeff写一封电子邮件，内容包括：1. 告诉他你在学校演讲比赛中获得了第一名；2.感谢他在口语及演讲技巧上给予的帮助。 词数不少于50。多使用较高级的词汇和短语以及固定句式，句子结构要准确，信息内容必须完整，篇章结构连贯性强。【亮点说明】 文中用了一些高级的短语和句式。如：I cant wait to tell you 、could have gone nowhere 、what引导的宾语从句等都很不错。【难度】一般（八）假如你是红星中学学生李华。根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，介绍在“传统文化进校园”活动中，向人艺术家学习捏面人的过程。并以”A Day with a Craftsman”为题，给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿件。注意：词数不少于60.提示词：一个面团a piece of dough 面人dough figurine【答案】 Last Tuesday, our class invited an old craftsman to teach us how to make dough figurines. When the craftsman came into the classroom, we gave him a warm wele and two boys helped him with the tool box. First, he showed us the basic steps and skills of making dough figurines. We stood around him and watched attentively. Then we started to have a try ourselves. The old man walked around and helped us patiently. Finally, we put the figurines we made on the table and took pictures with the old craftsman. Looking at the figurines, we were all very excited. We hope we can have more activities of this kind!【解析】试题分析：本题考查的细节是手工艺人教大家如何去做这个东西，学生认真聆听，是教育学。第二幅图最重要的点就是学生能不能找到学生认真聆听这个环节，因为老师教一定能看得出来，但是学生能不能写到学生在听，这应该是一个得分点。第三幅图是一个指导。所以，重点在于一对一这样对应的指导关系。最后一幅图是我们在上课的时候会重点讲的照相，大家很欢乐，做成一个作品。 所以，除了四幅图的要点之外，所以，重点在于一对一这样对应的指导关系。所以写好这样的作文一定要抓住细节，才能得分。还需要注意时态，词汇不要拼写错误，多用复合句式才能体现出亮点。考生切忌在文章开篇犯低级的语法错误，尤其注意时态、单复数及冠词的正确使用。相比于实用性强的应用文来说，情景作文可以在保证要点齐全的前提下适当增加长难句的使用，如对非谓语、三大从句及连词进行灵活运用。关注句式的多样性及用词的准确性对取得该板块的高分会有更大的保障。【亮点说明】范文注意使用First, Then, Finally等来衔接句子和段落，表示事情发生的时间顺序，使作文更有条理，做到了行文连贯。全文适用的是一般过去时，注意了文章上下文时态保持一致的原则。范文使用了一些重要的语法知识：非谓语动词Looking at the figurines, we were all very excited.；定语从句we put the figurines we made on the table；时间状语从句When the craftsman came into the classroom, we gave him a warm wele and two boys helped him with the tool box. 语法知识使用得当，叙事清晰。【难度】一般 (九)请阅读下面文字及图表,并按照要求用英语写一篇 150 词左右的文章.We often hear people plain about lack of opportunity. In fact, this world does not lack opportunity. But it does make a difference if we are able to grasp it.For example, lets suppose that Harvard University is recruiting(招收) students in China, and the requirement is that students must score above 640 for the Test of English as a Foreign Language(TOEFL) and 2,200 for the Graduate Record Examination(GRE) for admission to the university. Have you scored those scores? If you havent, you may feel regret, “I would have worked harder if I had known the requirements.”When opportunity knocks, make sure your door isnt locked. An able man will find opportunity everywhere, while a weak one will be left with only one opportunity, and that is to plain of having to prove what he is worth in this world.【写作内容】1、以约30个词概括上文的主要内容；2、以约120个词就“机遇”这一话题发表你的看法，内容包括：(1) 你如何看待机遇？(2) 我们怎样才能抓住机遇？【写作要求】1. 可以发表个人观点，但必须提供理由或论据；2. 阐述观点或提供论据时，不能直接引用原文语句；3. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；4. 不必写标题。【评分标准】概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。_【答案】 The author seems to believe we dont lack opportunity in our lives. He informs us through an example that what need most is the courage and ability to grasp opportunity. (30 words)Needless to say, opportunity plays a very important part in our lives when it es to achieving success. To some extent, almost every success involves an element of opportunity. Just as the ancient Chinese put it, it takes the correct time, favorable place and united people to achieve something. But opportunity doesnt often e our way.From my point of view, all that it takes is good preparation. As a popular saying goes, opportunity favors those who are prepared. Hard work and good preparation can equip us with enough knowledge and skills to deal with the ing challenges, which are golden opportunities. However, if we dont work hard, we can do nothing but regretfully let opportunity slip off our fingers.【解析】试题分析：本篇书面表达属于谈看法的书面表达，根据提示信息的具体情况来行文。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，简要概括短文，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2、分析文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象，覆盖所有内容要点。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态。4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。Just as the ancient Chinese put it, it takes the correct time, favorable place and united people to achieve something.描写了一句中国谚语；Hard work and good preparation can equip us with enough knowledge and skills to deal with the ing challenges, which are golden opportunities.采用非限制性定语从句；此外，文章还使用了大量短语plays a very important part，From my point of view等。使用连词Needless to say，However使文章内容更具有层次感，也使语言更加连贯。【难度】一般 (十）高三学生学习任务繁重。体育课已成为难得的放松时间, 可目前你们体育课内容单一，有时甚至被其他学科占用。请你用英语写一篇短文，给校报投稿, 词数120左右。内容应包括：1. 目前体育课的现状2. 你对此现象的看法3. 提出一些合理的建议Dear editor,As the college entrance examination is drawing near,_Yours Sincerely，【答案】 Dear editor,As the college entrance examination is drawing near. We senior high school students are occupied with busy work. To a certain extent, PE class is our only chance to relax and enjoy ourselves at school. However, it is a pity that our present PE class is quite dull and sometimes even replaced by other subjects.Not only can PE class build our body but it also can shape our personality. It serves to develop our awareness of cooperation and spirit of petition. Therefore, personally I hold the view that it would be a great loss to us students if it were replaced by other lessons. Meanwhile, I think the teacher can design and organize some fun sports besides dull field and track practice or ball games, where everyone can be involved and have fun as well. After all, not everybody thinks running, jumping or ball games appealing.I hope PE class can not only enrich our school life but also enable everyone to find his or her own pleasure in it.【解析】 试题分析：这是半开放性作文，给出了一个话题，关于体育课内容单一, 有时甚至被占用的问题，并有部分的文字提示。要求谈谈你对此现象的看法,并提出一些合理的建议。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，如besides, further, last but not least等。在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。【亮点说明】所给范文的一大亮点是句式多变： To a certain extent, PE class is our only chance to relax and enjoy ourselves at school. 这句话用了不定式做目的状语，However, it is a pity that our present PE class is quite dull and sometimes even replaced by other subjects.这句话用了it做形式主语， Not only can PE class build our body but also can shape our personality. 这句话用了倒装句， Therefore, personally I hold the view that it would be a great loss to us students if it were replaced by other lessons. 这句话用了同位语从句，Meanwhile, I think the teacher can design and organize some fun sports besides dull field and track practice or ball games, where everyone can be involved and have fun as well. 这句话用了非限制性定语从句。【难度】一般（十一）假定你是李华。请你给笔友Peter写封信，告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会，带去他想要的那幅中国画，同时询问他是否可以接机。信中还需说明：李明：高个子，戴眼镜航班号：CA985到达：8月6日上午11:30注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。Dear Peter,How are you doing?_Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【答案】 Dear Peter,How are you doing?Im writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to your city for a conference, and Ive asked him to bring you the Chinese painting youve asked for before.Also, Id like you to do me a favor. Would you please meet my uncle at the airport and take him to his hotel since this is his first visit to the U.S.? Thank you in advance!His flight number is CA985, and it will arrive at 11:30 am, August 6. My uncle is tall and he is wearing glasses. And he will be in a blue jacket.Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【解析】 试题分析：本题是一篇书信类作文，信中还需说明：李明：高个子，戴眼镜，航班号：CA985，到达：8月6日上午11:30，需要注意：词数100左右；可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 开头语和结束语已为你写好。亮点说明：本题是一篇书信类作文，作者写出了文章所需要的信息，用了do one a favor表示需要帮一个忙。用了Would you please句式委婉的说出了自己的想法。时间，地点写的都比较明确，My uncle is tall and he is wearing glasses. And he will be in a blue