2019-2020年高考英语二轮复习 书面表达选编（6）(II).doc

2019-2020年高考英语二轮复习 书面表达选编（6）(II)书面表达(满分25分) 假如你是李华，英国交换生Anna将来你校学习中文并住在你家（幸福路58号）, 请你应她的要求，根据下图介绍你家周边的情况，以便她初步了解在中国的生活。注意;1. 词数100左右； 2. 可适当增加细节使行文连贯；3. 开头和结尾已经给出，不计 入总词数。Dear Anna,I am so happy to learn you are ing to study in our school and stay at my home._ 。I cant wait to see you in China. Yours Li Hua【参考范文】One possible version:Dear Anna, I am so happy to learn you are ing to study in our school and stay at my home.My home is at No.58, Xingfu Road, just opposite a bank. A five-minute walk from my home along Xingfu Road westward will bring you to a crossroads, where Xingfu Road meets Youyi Street. On the southeast corner of the crossroads lies a shopping mall, where you can get everything you need. Walk north for about 300 meters, along Youyi Street, and youll see our school on the right. There we will spend most of the daytime. At the east end of Xingfu road stands the new railway station and its easy to reach, as a bus stop is just next to my home and No.26 or No.46 bus will directly take you there.I cant wait to see you in China. Yours Li Hua【吉林省吉林市xx质量检测】书面表达（满分25分）假如你是荣光中学的学生李华，你偶然看到在你市求学的美国学生Tom在网上发帖，要大家给他推荐一本学习汉语的书。你手头正好有一本合适的书可以借给他。请你给他发一封电子邮件，要点如下：1.说明写信原因； 2.描述书的情况； 3.约定见面时间和地点。注意：1.词数100左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Tom, Im Li Hua, a student of Rongguang Middle School. Yours, Li Hua【参考范文】书面表达：（满分25分）One possible version Dear Tom, Im Li Hua, a student of Rongguang Middle School. I learned quite by chance that you needed a book to improve your Chinese. I happen to have one, which I think might help you.The book, entitled New Practical Chinese, is intended for beginners at your level. Not only does it include the basic conversations in our daily life, it is also a window through which you can get to know Chinese culture and customs. Edited by three language experts, it is widely used by many foreign learners. If it is convenient to you, lets meet at the entrance to Jiangnan Park at 3 p.m. this Sunday. If not, try to find another time that is suitable for both of us. Yours, Li Hua【福建省福州市xx高考英语3月质检试题】书面表达(满分25分) “百善孝为先是中国人的传统美德。请根据以下提示，谈谈你对“孝”的理解。提示：1你认为“孝”是什么? 2以你自己或身边人的事例说明。注意：1文章开头已给出，不计人总词2文中不得透露个人和学校信息；3词数1 20左右；4参考词汇：孝顺filial pietyIt is universally accepted that filial piety is an important virtue in China 一、评分原则1本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分；2评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分；3词数少于100和多于150的，从总分中减去2分；4评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性及上下文的连贯性；5拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受；6如书写较差以致影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。二、内容要点1. “孝”是什么；2. 举例说明；3. 总结。三、各档次的给分范围和要求第五档完全完成了试题规定的任务。覆盖所有内容要点。应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。完全达到了预期的写作目的。2125分第四档完成了试题规定的任务。虽漏掉一两个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。应用简单的语句间连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。达到了预期的写作目的。1620分第三档完成了试题规定的任务。虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。有一些语法结构和词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。应用简单的语句间连接成分，使全文内容连贯。整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。1115分第二档未恰当完成试题规定的任务。漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。语法结构单调，词汇项目有限。有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。信息未能清楚地传达给读者。610分第一档未完成试题规定的任务。明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求。语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。信息未能传达给读者。15分0分0分未能传达给读者任何信息：内容太少，无法评判；写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。四、One possible versionIt is universally accepted that filial piety is an important virtue in China. It means respecting and caring for parents and the elderly.Take my parents for example. After my grandma died last year, my parents spent much time chatting with my grandpa, acpanying him on walks and cooking him delicious food. At first, my grandpa seemed to be happy about it, but as time went by, he became uneasy, because he was not used to leading so fortable a life. Therefore, my parents encouraged him to attend some activities in our munity. They also encouraged him to go to a drawing class in a school for the old, which gave my grandpa a great sense of achievement. He became happy again.My parents set a good example to me. In my opinion, the real filial piety is giving the old what they really need.