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话题写作实境运用,本模块的主题是“摄影”， 要求同学们能够通过摄影作品及摄影活动谈论自己的体会和感受。“摄影”这一话题贴近学生生活，现代社会中人们大都会对日常生活的各种事物进行拍照留念，进而与别人分享自己的生活。,摄影作品大多体现人们的生活，一些好的摄影作品会陶冶人们的情操，增长人们的见识，并让人们获得其独特的视觉与心灵感受。在写作过程中，除了要求同学们进行客观描述外，还应适当地做出一些评价，表达自己观点。写作中以“摄影”为话题的书面表达，其命题的主要形式有：谈谈自己感兴趣或自己最喜欢的摄影作品；谈谈摄影竞赛及对其竞赛上作品的体会和感受。,【典型例题】 假设你是一名摄影爱好者，你拍摄的一张照片在学校摄影比赛中得了一等奖，你被要求在下午的颁奖典礼上发言。请根据以下写作要点提示，用英语写一篇80词左右的发言稿。,要点：1.当被告知获得一等奖时，你的心情如何；2.这张照片的拍摄时间，照片中的内容；3.你要感谢谁？为什么？ 【写作思路】 本篇习作要求同学们先描述一下自己获奖后的感受，再描述一下获奖作品的内容，最后发表获奖感言。在谈论摄影作品时，也要注意主次分明。人称用第一人称，时态用一般过去时。,【高分模板】,【范文展示】 Good afternoon, everyone! When I knew that I got the first prize at the school photo competition, I was very excited. It was taken 2 years ago. It showed what my hometown was like. This was an old but modern village. A small river goes through it. There were many trees on both sides of the river. A girl was reading by the river when the monkeys were playing in the tree. Here, Id like to thank my mother. She always encouraged me and taught me many skills in taking photos.,【训练一】 假设你向大家展示了一张你家乡的照片，请根据下面的要点提示，写一篇不少于80词的英语短文，介绍一下这张你家乡的照片。,要点：1.这张照片是在我家乡拍摄的；2.我家乡是珠江旁的一个小村庄，在广东的东南方，那里空气清新；3.在珠江上有一座小桥，两岸种植着美丽的鲜花和绿树，有时你可以看到一些鸟儿在天空中飞翔。 _ _ _,This is one of photos of my hometown that I have taken. I love my hometown very much, so I often take photos of it. This one is my favorite. My hometown is a small village near Zhujiang River. It is in the southeast of Guangdong. I love it very much. The air is so fresh that you wont want to leave if you have a chance to go there.,【训练二】 请根据要点提示，写一篇英语短文介绍自己最喜欢的摄影作品。 要点：1.照片是在我第一次参加学校乒乓球比赛时拍摄的；2.在照片中，我已经准备好了去打乒乓球，我看起来很小心翼翼的；3.我很喜欢打乒乓球，但是我害怕比赛，我的朋友们鼓励了我；4.经过了艰苦努力地训练，在乒乓球比赛最后，我获得了第一名。,要求：1.80词左右；2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 My Favorite Photo _ _ _ _,My Favorite Photo Hello, everyone! This is my favorite photo. It was taken when I first took part in school table tennis competition. In the picture, I was getting ready to play. I looked very careful. To tell the truth, I liked playing table tennis, but I was afraid to play in the competition. My friends encouraged me to have a try. At last, I agreed. I practiced so hard for the competition that I won the first prize in the end. From the experience I learn that nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it.,
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