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走向高考 英语,第一部分,微专题强化练,七 书面表达,第一部分,3 (半)开放式作文,考 向 分 析,考 题 引 路,强 化 训 练,2,3,1,Writing 1 (2014福建) 如何理解“成功”，不同的人有不同的看法。请认真阅读下面的引语(quotation)，按要求用英语写一篇短文。 “Success is the ability to go from one failure to another with no loss of enthusiasm.” Sir Winston，Churchill,内容要求： 1你对该引语的理解； 2你的相关经历； 3恰当的结尾。 注意： 1短文开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2文中不能出现考生的具体信息； 3词数：120左右。,This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that_ _ 立意与点拨：,答案： This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that we shouldnt get discouraged right after failures.Rather，we should keep trying with enthusiasm.Success consists in the ability to continue efforts through failures.,At the age of twelve，I got a nice bike as a birthday gift.So excited was I that I couldnt wait to try my hand at riding it.However，it was harder than expected.The bike seemed too heavy and difficult to control.Worse still，I took many falls off the bike.I was about to give up when my father came and encouraged me to keep going.With more practice，I did better and better.Looking back，I feel had I lost heart I wouldnt be able to ride a bike. Actually，we cant succeed in everything we try.Whats important is that we should stick at it.,Writing 2 (2015浙江) 在班级活动中，当你的想法与大多数同学不一致时，你是坚持自己的观点并说服别人，还是尊重大多数同学的意见？请你以“When I Have a Different Opinion”为题，用英语写一篇100120个词的短文。要求如下： 1从以上两种做法中选择一种； 2以具体事例阐述你选择的理由。 注意：短文中，不得以任何形式透露地区、学校、同学姓名等真实信息。否则，按考试作弊行为认定。,When I Have a Different Opinion _ _ _ _ _ _ _,立意与点拨：,答案： One possible student version： When I Have a Different Opinion We may have different opinions in organizing class activities. We may have various ways to deal with such a situation. When I have a better idea，I would choose to stick to it. By doing so, I can not only share good ideas with others but also learn to express myself clearly.,Once we were discussing where to go for an outing. Most of my classmates wanted to go to a park while I had an idea of going to a nicer place. I managed to persuade my classmates into accepting my idea. We did have a good time that day. Good opinions are worth sticking to because they can benefit us all.,An alternative student version： When I Have a Different Opinion We may have different opinions in organizing class activities. When I have a different opinion, I may choose to give it up and respect the opinion of the majority.,The main reason for my choice is that being brought up in a culture emphasizing collectivism, I tend to sacrifice my own interest for the group benefit. Once we were left to decide whether to have a picnic in a park or go to a museum. I would love to go to a museum, but most of my classmates wanted to go for a picnic. Without hesitation, I decided to follow them and we did have lots of fun that day. Sometimes giving up a little can mean getting more.,审题急促，主次不分 根据下面的提示，用英语写一篇120词左右的短文。 (1)眼睛是心灵的窗口。 (2)学会如何保护眼睛。 _ 易错分析：学生由于急于答题，所以往往审题不认真，极易把写作重点放在眼睛的重要性上。,答案： People often say, “Eyes are the windows of soul”. All of us understand the importance of the eyes. But how to protect eyesight still remains a question among us students. If you want to take care of your eyesight, you must pay attention to the following points. Firstly, you should not use your eyes continuously for long periods. After you have read for a long time, about two hours or so, you take a rest by looking atsomething more distant. Secondly, you should keep your book about a foot away from your eyes when you read it.,You should also keep in mind: “Dont read in a dim light or in the sun; dont read in a moving bus or in bed.” Doing eye exercises regularly will help you keep good eyesight. If you fail to keep these rules, you will become shortsighted sooner or later.,解析：从题目的要求看，本篇作文要求写成说明文。重点要放在如何保护眼睛上。例如：不要看书时间太长，眼睛与书的距离要适当，走路坐车时不要看书，要常做眼保健操等。如何保护眼睛这个问题比较好写，因为考生有这方面的知识和体验。开放式作文的答题思路与汉语作文非常相像。首先要明确主题，然后根据主题搭建文章的主体结构，即写作提纲，接着进行文章血肉的填充。在拟写作提纲时，要突出主题，有层次，先写什么，后写什么，要层次分明。,
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