2019-2020年高考英语 写作指导篇二轮复习教案.doc

2019-2020年高考英语 写作指导篇二轮复习教案1. 首先要认真审题。读懂题目所给信息，初步确定要点内容，并可用序号标出以免遗忘。2. 列题纲使要点条理化，有序化，统筹安排布局。3. 勿要直译，需意译。尤其对看图情景作文要构建完整故事结构，不可逐句罗列了事。4. 要刻意把好语言关。要用自己最熟悉的句型结构和词语，力求文理通顺，语言准确。没有把握的词句不要写，确有把握的的可以锦上添花。5. 遇到一时想不起的词语，需变通。可以用同义近义词代替，也可以用否定词加反义词来表达，亦可变换句式。不可钻牛角尖，更不能生造词语，汉化表达。6. 注意文章的长度。看具体内容而定，如果内容多应多用复杂句式，如果内容不多，为了达到词的限数应多用简单句式，并适当增补合理内容。7. 注意保持卷面整洁，书写工整清楚。书写的好坏会直接影响阅卷老师的情绪。8. 最后应注意复查全文。看内容要点有无遗漏，标点、格式、大小写是否规范，是否有语病等。总之，要心有全局。英文写作如果结构意识良好，应试写作就简化成为一个填空的过程了，适当地填入观点、素材，文章就自然而然立起来了。临考在即，同学们要牢记英语写作的基本要领，特编顺口溜如下：细审题，巧构思，列要点，防遗漏。写日记，同汉语；书信、通知格式要牢记。看清图表细梳理，写人记事按顺序；完稿后查遗漏，整洁干净莫忘记。英语作文写作的步骤 由于时间限制，高考时一般在30分钟内必须完成英语作文。高考的英语作文步骤如下：1. 作文动笔之前一般都要先打腹稿。在确立中心上、运用材料上、篇章结构上，充分酝酿。 2. 考虑好想写多少句子，该用哪些动词和词组等。3. 边写边思考内容的连贯性，语言和句子的准确性。4. 写完后一定要再细看一遍。如何冲刺英语写作1. 重视增加阅读量是提高英语写作的途径之一目前，考生在进行大量阅读的同时，应注重所读材料的文章结构以及连接词的运用（on the other hand, however, furthermore）、作者的表达方式（词汇、习惯用语和典型句子的使用）、作者是如何进行叙述和议论的。2. 在教师的指导下，平时应勤写多练练习写作应从基本功抓起。在中译英翻译训练过程中，加强积累适量的词汇、词组和增加各种类型句子的运用。把握好各种句型和词汇的搭配，并从各类题材和体裁着手，多阅读好的范文。然后模仿写作，作文写好之后，一般都要修改。第一遍收笔后，先看一看结构，然后从字词上推敲，使文章“充实”起来。更重要的是经老师修改过的作文一定要仔细地看一至两遍，然后再认真地抄写一遍，收获将会很大。第四部分：写作（共两节，满分45分）第一节：阅读表达（共5小题；每小题3分，共15分）阅读下面短文，请根据短文后的要求进行答题。（请注意问题后的字数要求）Dear Sirs,Your shipment of 12,000 “Smart” watches was received by our pany this morning. However, we wish to make a number of plaints concerning the serious delay in delivery and your failure to carry out our instructions with regard to this order.It was stressed from the beginning that the date had to be less than six weeks from the initial order in order to meet with our own customers requirements. While we appreciate that delays in production are at times unavoidable, we must point out that we were promised the immediate shipment. Late delivery of the goods has caused us to disappoint several of our most valued customers and is bound to have an adverse effect on potential future orders.The second plaint concerns the difference in colour. It was stated clearly in the original order that watches in binations of green / purple and orange / purple only were required, but only half of them are of the colours specified. Our Hong Kong agent assures us that she stressed to you the importance of following our instructions precisely, since we consider there to be limited market in this country for watches of other colours, at the present time. The rest will, of course, be taken back to you. , we feel that the most suitable course of action is to return to you unpaid any of the goods considered unsatisfactory, and to deduct (扣除) any cost incurred from our final settlement. We shall also, of course, be forced to reconsider whether any further orders should be placed with your pany.We look forward to your early reply.Sincerely yours,Miss Madonna Morrison76. Which sentence in the passage can be replaced by the following one? We just doubt if there would be any potential chances of trading with your pany in the future. 77. Please fill in the blank in the passage with proper words or phrases. (Please answer within 10 words.) 78. Please translate the underlined sentence into Chinese. 79. Why was the watch producer told to carry out the instructions strictly with regard to colors of the watches? (Please answer within 20 words.) 80. What would you do if you received the letter as manager of the watch pany? (Please answer within 20 words.) 第二节：写作（满分30分） 阅读下面的文字，用英语写一篇120150词的短文。 自xx年6月1日起，在所有超市、商场、集贸市场等商品零售场所实行塑料购物袋有偿使用制度，一律不得免费提供塑料购物袋。请你结合自己的生活实际，自拟题目，谈谈自己对该项规定的看法与建议。 参考答案：第一节：阅读表达（每小题3分，合计15分）76. We shall also, of course, be forced to reconsider whether any further orders should be placed with your pany. 评分建议：能够准确找出上述句子。字体清楚，无拼写错误，即可得分。有部分抄写错误要酌情扣分。77. As a result of the above problems (reasons) / Because of what has been stated above 评分建议：与内容相关，能呈上启下，无语法、拼写错误即可得分。关键词：problem, reason, above.78. 虽然我们理解偶尔出现的产品延误难以避免，但我们必须指出，贵公司曾经给我们承诺会及时送货。 评分建议：忠于原句，语句通顺，无语言错误，方可得3分。其他情况酌情扣分。注意关键词while与appreciate的翻译。79. Because the market for watches of other colors is very limited in the country. 评分建议：在规定字数内，准确回答“其他颜色的表市场有限”这一原因方可得分。80. I would write a letter of apology and pay for all the loss of the receiving pany for further cooperation. 评分建议：只要与原文内容相关，所陈述的解释合情合理均可得分；不完整的陈述视答题情况酌情给分。 特别说明：1. 卷面涂抹（包括乱涂乱画）严重，总分扣2分；2. 异色笔、铅笔答题，一律判0分。Say “No” to Plastic BagsPlastic bags will not be provided free in the supermarkets, department stores and other markets since June 1 st, xx. customers need to pay for it. Im in favor of this act.In my view, the government is starting to attach importance to protecting the environment. It also reminds people to be aware of the responsibility to protect our environment.As well all know, plastic bags make our shopping easy and convenient. However, it takes a very long time for them to break up. As a consequence, they can cause serious pollution, which does great harm to our surroundings. Whats worse, they can be mistakenly used in our daily life. Therefore, I strongly remend that every one of us should take it seriously and try more recyclable bags, like paper ones when shopping to make our environment more friendly.第四部分：书面表达（共两节，满分45分）第一节：阅读表达（共5小题；每小题3分，满分15分）阅读下面的短文，请根据短文后的要求答题（请注意问题后的字数要求）。Young Japanese are not content with using mobile phones to text and e-mail ,play games, take photos and check the news and weather. They now have another reason to stay glued to their handset : full-length novels.There are hundreds of titles available on subscription websites .There are classic novels and new fictions ,as well as essays ,dictionaries ,educational and self-improvement testsanything to keep Japans 85 million mobile phone users happy.Traditional bookworms may be shocked at the thought of reading a classic novel on a tiny screen. But devotees of the new medium say it is a habit that is easily picked up. The biggest attraction is the convenience of being able to have your favorite books with you all of the time.Miona Yamashita is a typical e-reader :young, urban ,and very fond of her mobile . And , shes eager to find new ways to kill time when shes on the train.“I like the idea of being able to read on crowded trains where there isnt even space to open a book,” said the 24-year-old office worker.Improvements in display technology and features such as automatic page-flipping (you dont to move down the screen line by line) have made reading novels easier .Publishers dont see e-books as a threat to written books. Instead ,they see them as an opportunity to draw in a new generation of readers .Several well-known Japanese publishers are setting up subscription sites. Users pay a few hundred yen a month. They can search for books by author ,title or type .Several authors write short novels specifically for .The most popular Japanese writer ,known as Yoshi, took e-novels to a new level with “Deep Love”. Its a story of a 17-year-old Tokyo girl who finds romance through a chance meeting. It proved so popular that it was made into a film.76. What is the best title of the passage?(within 10 words) _77. Which sentence in the passage is the closest in meaning to the following one?However ,e-novel fans hold that you can easily grow accustomed to this type of reading. _78. Fill in the blank in Paragraph 7 with proper words or phrases to plete the sentence.(within 10 words) _79. Do you like the idea of e-books ? Why or why not? (within 30 words)_ _80. Translate the underlined sentence in the first paragraph into Chinese. _第二节：写作（满分30分）阅读下面的文字，用英语写一篇120150词的短文。（开头已给出，不计入总词数。）最近，山东省教育厅下重手整治全省中小学加班加点的现象。作为一名高三学生，请结合自己及身边的实际谈谈你对这一举措的认识。Shandong Provincial Education Department has recently taken strict measures to make sure that no student has to go to school on weekends or during official holidays. _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _参考答案：76. E-books :a new way to spend time/ Reading novels on your mobile phone77. But devotees of the new medium say it is a habit that is easily picked up.78. mobile phone reading/ mobile phone readers/ mobile phone users79. Yes .Because it is very convenient for readers: you can read anywhere at any time as long as you have a mobile phone with you.No. Because that makes reading less serious :you cannot concentrate enough to go very deep into the reading .Besides ,it is not good for your eyes.80. 他们现在又多了粘在手机上的一个原因：整部整部的长篇小说。One possible version:Shandong Provincial Education Department has recently taken strict measures to make sure that no student has to go to school on weekends or during official holidays. For the first time in our senior middle school life my friends and I enjoyed a full-length winter vacation ,and for the first time in years we are free to do what is necessary and important to meet our personal needs .In the past years ,we kept working hard from morning till night in order to get a higher mark in the college entrance exam. We omitted everything (such as art classes ,social activities ,etc. )that did not have a direct relationship with that goal .Consequently ,many of us are weak both physically and mentally. Over 70 percent of my classmates are near-sighted If the whole generation of us continue to live this way, what would the future of our nation be like?! Id like to express my heartfelt thanks to our responsible government for its wise and timely decision to bring all that to an end.第四部分：书面表达（共两节, 满分45）第一节：阅读表达(共5小题, 每小题3分, 满分15分)阅读下面的短文, 请根据短文后的要求答题（请注意问题后的字数要求）London has more than nine million visitors every year. They e and visit some of the most famous places in England：Big Ben, the Tower of London and the River Thames.You can see some of the most interesting places in the city by getting on one of Londons tour buses. It has an open roof and let you off at any places you want to visit.The River Thames is Londons main waterway. It has shaped the capitals landscape, history and geography. So one of the best ways of making sense of the city is to take a trip along the river. Much of the riverbank can now be walked along, particularly the south bank.The clock tower of the Houses of Parliament, Big Ben, has bee one of the main symbols of London. It rises up nearly 100 m to a golden point above the clock and a 13-ton bell. The sound of the bell, which you can hear at the beginning of many television and radio programmes, has bee well-known throughout the nation. No visit to London is plete without a look at the Tower of London, in the eastern part of the city. After Big Ben, the Tower may be Londons most visited tourist spot. Sightseeing in London is great, but . So, the best way to start the day is to fill up on an English breakfast. For starters, have an egg, bacon, sausages, tomatoes, mushrooms, black pudding and fried bred. Then finish off with toast and jam, and a large pot of tea. You can buy an English breakfast in nearly every hotel, and at many restaurants and cafes. An English pub is a good place to stop for lunch and a drink：You can get hot or cold food and try one of Englands beers. Or you can sit outside one of the many roadside pubs and cafes in London, and simply watch the busy world go by. 76What is the best title of the passage?（within 10 words. ) 77Which sentence in the passage can be replaced by the following one?It is very regretful if you dont go to the Tower of London when visiting London. 78Pleasefill in the blank in paragraph 5 with proper expressions to plete the sentence. (within 10 words. ) 79Which place of London do you want to visit most? Why?（within 30 words.) 80Translate the underlined sentence in the third paragraph into Chinese. 第二节：写作（满分30分） 某英文网站正在开展关于 “是否取消黄金周”的讨论。请你根据下面所给的要点提示, 用英语写一篇短文, 描述目前存在的两种看法, 并陈述你的观点, 以便向该网站投稿。赞成取消的人认为：反对取消的人认为：你的观点1.给交通、旅游者安全和环境带来巨大的压力；2购票难；3服务质量下降1消费需求得到满足；2促进旅游业和经济发展注意：1词数：120150字；2参考词汇：黄金周the Golden Week（或以the GW代替） 参考答案：第一节：阅读表达（每小题3分, 共15分） 76Visiting Paying a visit to London（评分要求：依据与文章整体内容的相关程度酌情给分, 关键词visiting或者是paying a visit to）77No visit to London is plete without a look at the Tower of London. （评分要求：要求准确找出以上句子）78(it can be very)tiringexhaustingyou can get tiredexhaustedit takes strength. (评分要求：要求给出的答案能保持与上下文的连贯性而且与参考答案相近)79My favorite place is the River Thames. We can get further impression of the citys history, geography and culture. The landscape of the fiver is wonderful. (以此为例) 80想了解这个城市最好的方式之一是沿河旅游。 、 (评分要求：要求在准确全面的基础上翻译成较为通顺的汉语并表达出作者的思路)One possible version： In recent days, a discussion is being carried on about whether the Golden Week should be cancelledSome people agreed to cancel the Golden Week. They pointed out that nationwide traveling has put big pressure on transportation, tourist safety and the environment. The Golden Week results in crowded scenic spots and packed hotels, making the quality of service decline. However, other people argue the golden week has encouraged people to spend more during the seven-day holiday so it has brought huge profits to the nations tourism industry and promoted the economic growth. Despite the fact that voices calling for its cancellation are being even stronger I still think people need to relax and mon vacation time is very important. It should take into consideration not only ines, but also the satisfaction of those who take the holiday.Opinions of those who object： In my opinion, the current golden week might as well be canceled and we should readjust the nations public holidays. The new 1ist of public holidays may include important traditional festivals, such as the Dragon Boat Festival and the Mid-Autumn Festival. 第四部分：书面表达（共两节，满分35分）第一节：阅读表达（共5小题；每题3分，满分15分）When stress does occur ,it is important to recognize and deal with it .Here are some suggestions for you to handle stress.Try physical activities. When you feel nervous or upset ,release the pressure through exercise or physical activities. Walking and working in your garden are just two of the activities you can try. . You can talk to someone about your concerns and worries. Perhaps a friend or family member can help you see your problem in a different light .If you feel your problem is serious ,you can seek professional help .Knowing when to ask for help may avoid more serious problems later.Know your limits .If a problem is beyond your control and can not be changed at the moment , dont “fight” the situation. Learn to accept what it is for now until the time when you can change it.Take care of yourself .Get enough rest and eat well. If you are irritable（急躁的）and tense due to lack of sleep or if you are not eating correctly ,you will have less ability to deal with stressful situations.Make time for fun. Schedule time for both work and relaxation .Play can be just as important to your well-being as work; you need a break from your daily routine to just relax and have fun.Its Ok to cry. A good cry can be a healthy way to bring relief to your anxiety ,and it might even prevent a headache or other physical consequences.76. What is the best title for the passage ?(Please answer within 10 words.) 77. Which sentence in the passage can be replace by the following one?If your problem is hard for you to handle ,you can turn to professionals for help. 78. Please fill in the blank in Para. 3 with proper words or phrases to plete the sentence . (Please answer within 10 words) 79. How do physical activities help you when you are nervous or upset? (Please answer within 30 words)